FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 133

Originally posted by: -afsha-

U knw wat u didnt pmed me for 7 updates n u say im ur importanat reader
Go im naraz frm u n katti
I wnt talk to u

But will read ur FF here is reply on every part

Part 39
It was fab
Liked it Maan ko bas Geet hi yaad thi aur kuch nahi😆😆😆
Liked their sweet convo on phone
Maan actually spoke to NT sweetly shocking man😲
I jus wish Nt n Dev's plan dnt work

Part 40
Geet was caring for Maan but Maan was busy completeing work jaldi
That was for her only
Liked the way he made Dev work it was fab😆😆😆
Samira got good back answers frm Maan
Loved this Maan a lotttttttttttttttttt

Part 41
Maan was awesum in taking his revenge
I wuld jus love if all ppl in the world take revenge lik him
His chat wit Dadima was sweet😳
Liked the way Geet irritated him she was januable here😆😳

Part 42
Maan n Geet spoke till 3 baap re Geet really speaks a lot😆😆😆
Liked the way Maan wanted to suprise Geet but he was only suprised after looking at his office
Loved the way he bashed Sasha
Geet is thinking she is imaging Maan
Hop Geet dnt do som odd thg thking he is his imagination

Part 43
It was nice part
Maan was in bad mood
Liked the way Geet suprised him by giving him peck in his cheek
Maan shuld atleast be lil polite wit her
He jus shakes the hell out of her
He agn forgot she is pregnant
Geet is faltu ka getting jealosu yaar

Part 44
Quite romantic
Loved the way Maan came to make her mood happy
Maan jus knew the way to shut Geet
Pinky helped Maan fab now paka Maan wnt shout at her so much
Geet was imagineing a lot of thgs yaar

Part 45
Nice update
Maan n Geet were getting close
Liked the way Maan cares for Geet
Pinky was fab here jus love her

omg omg omg afsha, i swear i've been sending you the PM's every single time. not even once did i miss you..but the system seems to be screwing up things for me.... i 'm so sorry honey...!!!!! 😭

please darling, is baar ke liye baat kar le... next time i'll PM you separately ...!!! 😳

and thanks sweety for reading all the last 7 updates and commenting...awwww..... this is for you....
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ab tuo maan jao.....!!!! 😛........

coming to your comments,

part 39 : Nt's and dev's plan failing big time since daadi knows....!!! yes, maan is hit with geet fever... 😆

part 40: yep, dint u like dev's entry to the reception???? yes, dev is planning on giving up khurana empire cos he'll have to work so hard....

part 41: glad u like it.... dont ever cross maan honey..!!! u may not like it...😉

part 42: yes sasha finally caught red handed... and can u believe it , geet not blamed....

part 43: she keeps forgetting it herself, so why get surprised when maan forgets it???

part 44: glad u liked it..!!! people actually fainted after reading this... and u are all fine and also commented on the next post.....👏

part 45: u like pinky haan??? cool.....!!!! and yes maneet are taking their relationship to higher levels and getting closer and stronger...!!!!

Sorry once again about the PM's... it will not happen again...!!!

Soumya

soumya dear i updated the post check it

mai to gayi...

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

*cumz bk to consciousness*

soummya!!

OMG OMG OMG!!!

*hyper-ventilating*

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

😍

😍

😍

TOOOO MUCH!! ufff--this is toooo hawt to handle!!

i cant take it-

*drinks 8 glasses of water*........*rushes to toilet* 😆😆

ahhhh!!

OMG soumya---tumahre dimag main kya kya chalta hai!!😆

tumne sab ko peechay chor diya!!😆

ufffff----this waz the bestt besssttter besstessstt part of ur ff!!

OMG ! it cudnt get any better!!

though i read it 3-4 times already--i too lost count of how many times they kissed!!👏

pehlay ker nahi rahey thay--abh ker rahain toh rukh nah rahey!!😆😆

ufff--this waz tooo too toooo gud!!!

i never imagined kay bth maaneet is hath tak romantic hosakhtay hai!!

hoshiyarpur express toh too much nikli!! kya boldness hai yaar--main toh wahee behosh hojaon!!😆

*hyper-ventilating*

soumya yaar---i love u bolnay sey pehlay..shaadi sey pehlay--itnaaaaaaaaaaaaa kuch kerliya toh baad main kya hoga!! 😍

hayee----i sooo hafta go bk to the hosptial!😆

i loveddd pinky sooo much today---shez such a sweetheart!! awwie<3 callin maan jiju already!😳

shez adorable!! loved her convo wid maan!! sooo cutee!!⭐️

buh maaneet ney toh tooo much kerdiya!!

btw confession kab hai inka???😉

lmao itna kuch kernay kay baad confession ki toh zarrorat he nahi hai!!🤣

ok my fav dialgoues!! actually i loved each and every dialogue--it became hard to choose--laykin i will choose

1: emotional wala:

Par maan main pregnant.."

Maan put his finger on her lips and said, "Geet mujhe koi farak nahi padta". He then traced the outline of her lips with his finger.

Geet eyes filled up again. Maan looked at her and said, "geet, please! If there is anything I cannot stand these days, it is seeing you cry". 😍 how ultra sweet and romantic of him!! hez soo possessive abt her---buh still her preggy issue doesnt matter a bit to him!😍 kahan miltay hai aisay aadmi😍😍😍

2: romantic wala: "main kyun jalungi? She said turning to face him. "Kya kisi ko bhi itni himmat hai ki woh maan singh khurana ko is tarah kiss kar sake?" and brushed her lips faintly against his. yay geet he hai ya kisi aur ki rooh geet main aagai hai!!😲⭐️⭐️ shabash larki!! lagey rahi!!!😆
Maan looked at her surprised- she had done it again. She then unbuttoned the first 1 or 2 buttons of his shirt and kissed his bare chest. She winked at him and turned back to lie on the pillow when maan rolled over close to her. 😍 *hyper-ventilating* oye hoyee!!! lmao it luks as if shez catchin pace wid maan in romanticism!!😆😆

"geet bahut ho gaya", he said placing his hand under head and lifting it a little. He then touched his lips to hers for sometime. Geet closed her eyes. Her hands went over his back and she pulled him close to her.

😍 ufffffff----'lagta hai main sach main pagal hojaongi' 😆

FRENCH-KISSED!!!😲 maan beta shaadi kay baad kay liyay kuch toh chorr doh!!😆😆😆 😆tab kya aik he cheez kerogay!! *highly highly x--rated thoughts* (thanx to soumya)😆

3: funny wala: "How does she look?"

"ahhh, let me think, she has two eyes, one nose, 2 hands and 2 legs. Yeah, in short she is like any other human-being!" and laughed even louder.

lmao!!! plain sentence yet its filled wid laughter!!👏 tooooo gud!! amazing amazing amazing dialogues!!👏

soumya i dint noe ur x-ratedness cud go soooooooo wild!!😲😉

acha hai!! keep me surprising like this!!😉😆

ok--u noe wat--i wont comment much---cuz this part waz soo amazing--that i can go non-stop praising abt each and every bit and dialogue!!

OK i think i made this postt tooo long---hope i dint kill u wid boredom!!

buh i cudnt help myself--this part waz ultra-fab!!

i dont haf enough words to praise u!!

love u trillionssss!! muaz muaz muaz!

uzmaaaaaaa meri jaaaaaan,

sorry i could not comment on your last post but loved it.... completely adorable post...!!!!! see i kept my promise. tumhe XXXXX rated ness chahiye thi na, maine 2 updates mein kuch zyaaada hi X-ness dhaaal diya...... ab khush????

i 'll start with your last post and then come comment on the present one....!!!!

u regained consciousness after 12 hours??? hayeeee tumhare ghar wale pareshaan ho gaye honge... kahi talwar lekhe mere peeche peeche na aa jaaye.... mere paas tuo maan bhi nahi hai bachaaane..... 😆😆😆

i'm telling you, start doing yoga... it will help you relax even if your screen catches fire..!!!😉.....

maan aur uskay raging harmones!! lmao!! itnay saalo sey rokh ker rakha tha---abh bechara control nahi ker paa raha🤣 LMAO reading this....!!! bechara.... sameera ne bhi chod diya aur geet sawal kar kar ke pareshaan karti hai..... u and me suit him better , dont we???? 😆

wow, u had lot of fav dialogues, haan???? thats good....!!!!! 😃....... i'm glad u liked so many of them... and i loved reading all ur comments to each one of them.,..!!!

Soumyaaaaaaa!!! p44 was jus hot ... maan was challenging geet!! n p45 was jus awsum yaar ... geet tried to make a smart move but maan knew what it was 😆 aur pinky ko "saali" haii is dis da same msk we all know??? looooveeddd da upd so much! 😉

Originally posted by: pickle6586

omg omg omg afsha, i swear i've been sending you the PM's every single time. not even once did i miss you..but the system seems to be screwing up things for me.... i 'm so sorry honey...!!!!! 😭

please darling, is baar ke liye baat kar le... next time i'll PM you separately ...!!! 😳

and thanks sweety for reading all the last 7 updates and commenting...awwww..... this is for you....
🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

ab tuo maan jao.....!!!! 😛........

coming to your comments,

part 39 : Nt's and dev's plan failing big time since daadi knows....!!! yes, maan is hit with geet fever... 😆

part 40: yep, dint u like dev's entry to the reception???? yes, dev is planning on giving up khurana empire cos he'll have to work so hard....

part 41: glad u like it.... dont ever cross maan honey..!!! u may not like it...😉

part 42: yes sasha finally caught red handed... and can u believe it , geet not blamed....

part 43: she keeps forgetting it herself, so why get surprised when maan forgets it???

part 44: glad u liked it..!!! people actually fainted after reading this... and u are all fine and also commented on the next post.....👏

part 45: u like pinky haan??? cool.....!!!! and yes maneet are taking their relationship to higher levels and getting closer and stronger...!!!!

Sorry once again about the PM's... it will not happen again...!!!

Soumya

Ok forgave u this time

Originally posted by: sravani899

oh my god soumya

will come back soon for commenting dear

oh dear soumya

jappiz and puppiz dear to u

i thought geet and pinky will make a team and tease maan

but ye le pinky and maan i mean jeeju and saali teamed up and teasing geet oh my god agar ye dono ise hi rahege to paata nahi maan kaha se kaha jayega

i am sure maan mahaan love guru no no mahaan romance guru banjayega ha ha ha ha

geet control dear arre yaar pata hai jub munda maan jaisa ho to control karna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai he he he

chalo geet shuru karti hai aur maan anjaam deta hai wah kya jodi hai yaa romance ne bana di jodi

and made for each other

arre maan dumbo har baar geet hi pehle kadam lege kya tum bhi kuch karo yaar

loved the lines

1. "Maan singh khurana ko kisi bhi kaam adhura chodne ki aadat nahi hai geet!"

2. "geet" he said kissing the tear away

3. "Haan haan "saali ji" mera matlab hai pinky ji, main use pehle chala jaunga aur jaate jaate fuse bhi fix karke jaunga."

4. when he asks abt is she bothered abt her past

5. when he says ur past and pregnant is not bothering me and also saying ur mine and

6. he is ready to accept her with pregnancy so cute of maan only he can say and do it loved it soumya

7. and saying her he thought that she is not ready for this

8. and asking her are u ready for this omg

9. and maintaining gap between them when he is sleeping next to her omg omg

these are very point which shows the character of a person

soumya ur brave as u maintained the dignity of the character in that huge flow of romance which makes me love u even more dear i apperciate it dear

really nice and wonderful work dear

words feel short to praise u dear really

i dont say dil jeet liya as u had done that already all i can say is dil pura ka pura baar di aap ne

love u alot soumya

chalo tuesday pura kaali hai hamara maan kya kuch treat ki planning to ki nahi aap ne ha

ha ha ha love u soumya

sravs

sravs,

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hayeeeeee.......... i won your heart long timr back and i filled it completely today.... omg omg omg............ kya keh diya????? 😉

thanks u so much girl ... i loved how u highlighted the important aspects of the update. though it was a romantic one, u did find the essence of every word they spoke... that's cool... shows u've read it very closely... .!!!!!

and hey, i love this line, "romance ne naba di jodi" geet shuru karti hai tuo maan anjaam deta hi...hayeee..... yes, so true......!!! they complete each other and complement each other...dont they????
now coming to the lines u loved:

honey , here's point 10: maan says he's committed and he will not fall for people like andy...!!!!

anyways, i loved the point you highlighted in 9... so true, shows his charcater. he knows how to handle her and where to draw the line , even though he is crazily in love with her. he respects her decisions and choices and that it very important for the future track...!!!!

thanks i felt so good, when i read these lines,

ur brave as u maintained the dignity of the character in that huge flow of romance which makes me love u even more dear i apperciate it dear,...

thank you so much sravs, i feel so honored.... and proud...!!!!!! love ya for this...!!!!!

and thank you so much.. really loved your post....!!!!! lovely....👏

love you so much sweetheart...!!!

Soumya

You're too much soumya...you want us to count the number of kisses??? paagal ho aur hum sabko bhi paagal karadoge😆😆😆
😆

Like what I promised…this is the longest comment I have ever written…

Thanks a heap, di!
I know all your readers have pestered you a lot for updates but we've got no one but you to blame for this…You just leave us captivated to your updates .Your updates are always fab….

But this one was extraordinary…This is the most romantic update, that has not gone overboard and disgusted readers, that I have ever read from the 20 Geet Fan-Fics I read…It was simply Heaven on Earth…..I dunno from where I should start…..

Starting off anyways…

"Now that's like my girl", he remarked when she finally fell silent.
"I'm not your girl", said geet annoyed.
"Okay, you've said enough! If that's the case, I'll make you mine, tonight". made me hyperventilate…I was speechless and clueless about what was going on in ur mind….


Geet thought to herself, "geet seedhi ungli se ghee nahi nikalti, ungli thedi karo" and starts walking towards him. Maan understood her move, walked at the pace of a snail. I really didn't understand this part….

"Maan singh khurana ko kisi bhi kaam adhura chodne ki aadat nahi hai geet!" he said smirking. I can totally imagine his background music…

Maan spoke again, "itni shauk hai tumhe kiss karne ki geet? I will not disappoint you. Come let's finish what you've left incomplete!" he said giving her a wicked grin and a very intense look.
Geet looked at him pleadingly, "Maan please. Main mazak kar rahi thi. Please mujhe jaane dijiye. I'm ready to answer all your questions". Omg..intense moment…having goosebumps till now…Naughty Maan…noo...Naughty DI….


The entire conversation between the about to be jeeja-saali(maan-pinky) was totally cute and surprising … I mean those words coming out of our Angry Young Man, Maan's mouth….I loved Geet's reactions in between of their conversation…She was too cute…

He looked at geet who had her mouth still open. "geet!" he yelled.She came back to her senses and said, "yeh sapna tha kya?" Lolz…ROFL!!!!!!!!Seriously I LOVE YOU!!!!!

She turned to go to the bathroom and maan noticed the strings of her blouse.
"ek minute, he said walking to her. "You wanted to see how your blouse looks with all the strings tied right?" and started tying the strings of her blouse.
She turned and hugged him, kissing him on his chin, in a very low voice said, "maan".
Maan continued to tie the strings and said, "Bolo".
Geet loved it everytime he said "bolo" with so much care and love in his voice. That one word was enough to make her go bonkers.
She did not know what to say so she just stood still in his arms.
"lo, ho gaya!" he said tying the very last one. Geet moved a little and looked at herself in the mirror, smiling. More wonderful Maneet scenes…I don't think it will be decent to express any more of my view about this X-rated scene


She was upset, "bye nahi bola, aur chala gaya?"
"aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?" asked maan holding geet from behind and kissing her neck. "I went to fix the fuse." Geet turned towards him and put her hands around his neck, "maan kya yeh sahi hai?" "kya, fuse fix karna? Geet, electricity ke bina tum kya karoge?" he asked her teasingly.
"Maan main fuse ki baat nahi kar rahi thi. Main aapke aur mere bare mein baath kar rahi thi. We're getting too close, aren't we?"
"Do you regret it?" he asked looking into her eyes as though searching for an answer there.
"No!" she said immediately. She did not have to think to answer this. She felt very safe in his arms and very special when he was around. So cute ,another X-rated scene..Di ,kitne kisses karaogi!!!!!!!!


"geet, please! If there is anything I cannot stand these days, it is seeing you cry". So nice of Maan …This simple dialogue touched my heart….Hai!!!Kash hamri zindagi mein bhi koi aisa hota….

She wanted to ask him about Andy but hesitated. She finally decided to ask him, "maan, woh andy Anderson.." and maan cut her, "kaun woh phirang?" he said laughing.
"Maan! Badi khushi ho rahi hai aapko us angrez ki naam sunte hue".
"Geet, what do you want to know?" "How does she look?"
"ahhh, let me think, she has two eyes, one nose, 2 hands and 2 legs. Yeah, in short she is like any other human-being!" and laughed even louder.
Geet was furious. She pulled away her hand from his and was about to get up when maan pulled her back and turned towards her….LOLZ Jealous Geet!!! Love how she questions him like a wife..

"main kyun jalungi? She said turning to face him. "Kya kisi ko bhi itni himmat hai ki woh maan singh khurana ko is tarah kiss kar sake?" and brushed her lips faintly against his.
Maan looked at her surprised- she had done it again. She then unbuttoned the first 1 or 2 buttons of his shirt and kissed his bare chest. She winked at him and turned back to lie on the pillow when maan rolled over close to her.
"geet bahut ho gaya", he said placing his hand under head and lifting it a little. He then touched his lips to hers for sometime. Geet closed her eyes. Her hands went over his back and she pulled him close to her.
Maan moved his lips away a little, "geet, are you ready for this?"
Geet looked at him blankly. She was not sure. He rolled back to put his head on the pillow again and geet asked him, "Why did you stop?"
He touched her lips once again and said, "I do not want you to do something that might leave you with even a tiny little scope of guilt. You were not ready for it and I'm not going to force you into it". Di…this is too much…too many kisses in one update…hum kaise handle karenge…and did I just imagine what happened here or it really occurred…

Yes,you have really lost count of the amount of kisses they had….They literally kissed in every sentence,okay I have exaggerated but still….The hug was great though….


I simply loved the ENTIRE update..In short,ur update was ,is and will always be the benchmark for X-ratedness.
Your update was X-ratedness personified….

Please continue your story soon and continue giving wonderful updates like this….Thanks a lot…..I really mean it….THANKS A LOT!

BTW,I actually wrote this one paper first so that I can give you a long comment….

All I want to do right now is give YOU a big hug….
I really can't express my feelings
You have left me speechless(Look at the irony….I have written so much)

Thanks anyways…Can I expect an update tmr?

I am in a great shock but at least now I can sleep in peace that I have read the update. Good Night, Sleep tight, Dream Right!!!!!





All that I felt while reading the update and writing this comment....

kya baat hai soumya di?
mere comment ko reply hi nahi kiya
u didn't like it?
boo hoo
i took ur words so seriously and wrote this long ESSAY fro you and you!!!
Now i know how you feel when people dont comment to your update
but please reply