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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#1311

Awesome!!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

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kiran naryani

@kirannaryani

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#1312

it was really so cute plz keep updating like this really your tooooo gud

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1313

omg .......geets has bcum really so bold ........ 🤣 i loved it .....sorry even i cudnt count the no of kisses as i wz lost in ur story ..............this wz a lovely part ..............
thnk you nd love you

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sravani899

@sravani899

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1314

oh my god soumya

will come back soon for commenting dear

oh dear soumya

jappiz and puppiz dear to u

i thought geet and pinky will make a team and tease maan

but ye le pinky and maan i mean jeeju and saali teamed up and teasing geet oh my god agar ye dono ise hi rahege to paata nahi maan kaha se kaha jayega

i am sure maan mahaan love guru no no mahaan romance guru banjayega ha ha ha ha

geet control dear arre yaar pata hai jub munda maan jaisa ho to control karna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai he he he

chalo geet shuru karti hai aur maan anjaam deta hai wah kya jodi hai yaa romance ne bana di jodi

and made for each other

arre maan dumbo har baar geet hi pehle kadam lege kya tum bhi kuch karo yaar

loved the lines

1. "Maan singh khurana ko kisi bhi kaam adhura chodne ki aadat nahi hai geet!"

2. "geet" he said kissing the tear away

3. "Haan haan "saali ji" mera matlab hai pinky ji, main use pehle chala jaunga aur jaate jaate fuse bhi fix karke jaunga."

4. when he asks abt is she bothered abt her past

5. when he says ur past and pregnant is not bothering me and also saying ur mine and

6. he is ready to accept her with pregnancy so cute of maan only he can say and do it loved it soumya

7. and saying her he thought that she is not ready for this

8. and asking her are u ready for this omg

9. and maintaining gap between them when he is sleeping next to her omg omg

these are very point which shows the character of a person

soumya ur brave as u maintained the dignity of the character in that huge flow of romance which makes me love u even more dear i apperciate it dear

really nice and wonderful work dear

words feel short to praise u dear really

i dont say dil jeet liya as u had done that already all i can say is dil pura ka pura baar di aap ne

love u alot soumya

chalo tuesday pura kaali hai hamara maan kya kuch treat ki planning to ki nahi aap ne ha

ha ha ha love u soumya

sravs

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1315

U knw wat u didnt pmed me for 7 updates n u say im ur importanat reader
Go im naraz frm u n katti
I wnt talk to u

But will read ur FF here is reply on every part

Part 39
It was fab
Liked it Maan ko bas Geet hi yaad thi aur kuch nahi😆😆😆
Liked their sweet convo on phone
Maan actually spoke to NT sweetly shocking man😲
I jus wish Nt n Dev's plan dnt work

Part 40
Geet was caring for Maan but Maan was busy completeing work jaldi
That was for her only
Liked the way he made Dev work it was fab😆😆😆
Samira got good back answers frm Maan
Loved this Maan a lotttttttttttttttttt

Part 41
Maan was awesum in taking his revenge
I wuld jus love if all ppl in the world take revenge lik him
His chat wit Dadima was sweet😳
Liked the way Geet irritated him she was januable here😆😳

Part 42
Maan n Geet spoke till 3 baap re Geet really speaks a lot😆😆😆
Liked the way Maan wanted to suprise Geet but he was only suprised after looking at his office
Loved the way he bashed Sasha
Geet is thinking she is imaging Maan
Hop Geet dnt do som odd thg thking he is his imagination

Part 43
It was nice part
Maan was in bad mood
Liked the way Geet suprised him by giving him peck in his cheek
Maan shuld atleast be lil polite wit her
He jus shakes the hell out of her
He agn forgot she is pregnant
Geet is faltu ka getting jealosu yaar

Part 44
Quite romantic
Loved the way Maan came to make her mood happy
Maan jus knew the way to shut Geet
Pinky helped Maan fab now paka Maan wnt shout at her so much
Geet was imagineing a lot of thgs yaar

Part 45
Nice update
Maan n Geet were getting close
Liked the way Maan cares for Geet
Pinky was fab here jus love her

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#1316

*cumz bk to consciousness*

soummya!!

OMG OMG OMG!!!

*hyper-ventilating*

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

😍😍😍😍

TOOOO MUCH!! ufff--this is toooo hawt to handle!!

i cant take it-

*drinks 8 glasses of water*........*rushes to toilet* 😆😆

ahhhh!!

OMG soumya---tumahre dimag main kya kya chalta hai!!😆😆😆😆😆

tumne sab ko peechay chor diya!!😆

ufffff----this waz the bestt besssttter besstessstt part of ur ff!!

OMG ! it cudnt get any better!!

though i read it 3-4 times already--i too lost count of how many times they kissed!!👏

pehlay ker nahi rahey thay--abh ker rahain toh rukh nah rahey!!😆😆

ufff--this waz tooo too toooo gud!!!

i never imagined kay bth maaneet is hath tak romantic hosakhtay hai!!

hoshiyarpur express toh too much nikli!! kya boldness hai yaar--main toh wahee behosh hojaon!!😆

*hyper-ventilating*

soumya yaar---i love u bolnay sey pehlay..shaadi sey pehlay--itnaaaaaaaaaaaaa kuch kerliya toh baad main kya hoga!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

hayee----i sooo hafta go bk to the hosptial!😆

i loveddd pinky sooo much today---shez such a sweetheart!! awwie<3 callin maan jiju already!😳

shez adorable!! loved her convo wid maan!! sooo cutee!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

buh maaneet ney toh tooo much kerdiya!!

btw confession kab hai inka???😉😉😉😉

lmao itna kuch kernay kay baad confession ki toh zarrorat he nahi hai!!🤣

ok my fav dialgoues!! actually i loved each and every dialogue--it became hard to choose--laykin i will choose

1: emotional wala:

Par maan main pregnant.."

Maan put his finger on her lips and said, "Geet mujhe koi farak nahi padta". He then traced the outline of her lips with his finger.

Geet eyes filled up again. Maan looked at her and said, "geet, please! If there is anything I cannot stand these days, it is seeing you cry". 😍😍😍😍😍 how ultra sweet and romantic of him!! hez soo possessive abt her---buh still her preggy issue doesnt matter a bit to him!😍 kahan miltay hai aisay aadmi😍😍😍

2: romantic wala: "main kyun jalungi? She said turning to face him. "Kya kisi ko bhi itni himmat hai ki woh maan singh khurana ko is tarah kiss kar sake?" and brushed her lips faintly against his. yay geet he hai ya kisi aur ki rooh geet main aagai hai!!😲⭐️⭐️ shabash larki!! lagey rahi!!!😆
Maan looked at her surprised- she had done it again. She then unbuttoned the first 1 or 2 buttons of his shirt and kissed his bare chest. She winked at him and turned back to lie on the pillow when maan rolled over close to her. 😍😍😍😍 *hyper-ventilating* oye hoyee!!! lmao it luks as if shez catchin pace wid maan in romanticism!!😆😆

"geet bahut ho gaya", he said placing his hand under head and lifting it a little. He then touched his lips to hers for sometime. Geet closed her eyes. Her hands went over his back and she pulled him close to her.

😍😍😍😍😍 ufffffff----'lagta hai main sach main pagal hojaongi' 😆

FRENCH-KISSED!!!😲😲😲😲😲 maan beta shaadi kay baad kay liyay kuch toh chorr doh!!😆😆😆 😆tab kya aik he cheez kerogay!! *highly highly x--rated thoughts* (thanx to soumya)😆

3: funny wala: "How does she look?"

"ahhh, let me think, she has two eyes, one nose, 2 hands and 2 legs. Yeah, in short she is like any other human-being!" and laughed even louder.

lmao!!! plain sentence yet its filled wid laughter!!👏👏👏👏 tooooo gud!! amazing amazing amazing dialogues!!👏

soumya i dint noe ur x-ratedness cud go soooooooo wild!!😲😉

acha hai!! keep me surprising like this!!😉😆

ok--u noe wat--i wont comment much---cuz this part waz soo amazing--that i can go non-stop praising abt each and every bit and dialogue!!

OK i think i made this postt tooo long---hope i dint kill u wid boredom!!

buh i cudnt help myself--this part waz ultra-fab!!

i dont haf enough words to praise u!!

love u trillionssss!! muaz muaz muaz!

Edited by uzmakhan - 15 years ago

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1317

Hey di hmmm good to see Maan Singh Khurana turning into a romantic 😆 If it cant happen in the show then we can enjoy reading it What geet did was really daring😳 Plz continue soon Eagerly waiting for next update
Nidhi

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#1318

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu
Abs in love with the story!!!! i can't wait to read more!...

please continue soon! :)

hi,

thank you so much...!!!! glad u liked it...!!! 😛

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#1319

awww that was good

geet is so naughty wit maan

love da update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#1320

@rinky : thanks honey... even i'm dying to see the romantic side of MSK in the serial and it is just not happening... so had to potray him that way in my FF

@radhika : thanks radhika

@juliel : thanks honey....

@kiran : thanks kiran...glad u liked it...!!!!

@anu_luv maan : hahahahahahahahah i understand...!!!! 😆

@prithvisanyo : thanks honey

@nidhi : thanks dear...!!!

@sweet cherry: thanks dear...!!!!

Soumya

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