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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tes_v1


Ah Jen!

So atleast you noticed Maan's car! Nobody else di! Shock therapy working, more shocks coming.😉 Yeah, Geet did kiss Maan!

Btw, the other FF is updated too!

You know me. It's the details that makes a character and I'm a biggie on lil details. But seriously, the car is a nice choice and suits Maan to the core. I think I know where you picked the choice from - a series of books I'm being forced to read and amazingly enjoying? Unless you have a love for the car yourself, of course.
Read the other one and left my comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenifer.



You know me. It's the details that makes a character and I'm a biggie on lil details. But seriously, the car is a nice choice and suits Maan to the core. I think I know where you picked the choice from - a series of books I'm being forced to read and amazingly enjoying? Unless you have a love for the car yourself, of course.


Read the other one and left my comments.



Well, you're absolutely right about the tiny details making a charachter. As to the car, well, I love the car and also came across it in a book but it's not from the series you're talking about. In fact, now that you mention, I'm forced to go through all the cars I came across in that series but can't place them all. You see, Weird Unlimited and all. Forgetful memory....


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Posted: 15 years ago

I just caught up with your ff and I must it is just amazing!

I especially love the way you write.
Just like a real author!
Please do pm me the next time you update. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tes_v1


Hey!

I really appreciate the efforts you take to comment! 🤗

Dev doesn't believe in wasting time and so he gets to work real fast! 😉 A lotta stunning surprises coming your way. Jealousy is sure gonna work for Maan!

btw, can I know ur name?

Keep reading and commenting! Love ur comments!

Thanks Tia..🤗..
I'm Vinitha but Vini is fiine..😊
Coming to your FF, I love how Maan is so affected by this! Can't believe the reaction took place so fast, first day itself he's jealous..god knows how he's gonna survive that two long weeks..😆...Loving Dev so much here! 😆 The way Geet planted a kiss on his cheeks...😳 Aww lovely...Maan must have been dumbstrucked...
Dev sure know his plans well..Loved that perfume bit..smart move..and now two weeks leave..? 😆...
Maan in his workout session...Nice..😆
Keep them coming in! Totally loving the way your FF is unfolding..;D
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Posted: 15 years ago
would love to follow this one...
add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hii dear
amazing updt
omg can imagine maan's face
abt reaction of geet dev marriage
n the kiss..
im loving dev in this ff..lol
now maan is really angry n jealous..lol
cont soon
love yaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Durga A.

I just caught up with your ff and I must it is just amazing!


I especially love the way you write.

Just like a real author!

Please do pm me the next time you update. 😊



Thanks Durga! These comments really mean a lot to me. Will surely PM you!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07


Thanks Tia..🤗..
I'm Vinitha but Vini is fiine..😊
Coming to your FF, I love how Maan is so affected by this! Can't believe the reaction took place so fast, first day itself he's jealous..god knows how he's gonna survive that two long weeks..😆...Loving Dev so much here! 😆The way Geet planted a kiss on his cheeks...😳Aww lovely...Maan must have been dumbstrucked.
Dev sure know his plans well..Loved that perfume bit..smart move..and now two weeks leave..? 😆...

Maan in his workout session...Nice..😆
Keep them coming in! Totally loving the way your FF is unfolding..;D



Thanks Vini! 🤗

Happy to know that you're enjoying the story. Dev has a lotta experience which is gonna be helpful in getting Maaneet together. 😉 Two weeks widout Geet are gonna be pure hell for Maan!


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amritsar007

would love to follow this one...
add me to ur PM list...



Thanks dear! Sure will!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hii dear

amazing updt

omg can imagine maan's face

abt reaction of geet dev marriage

n the kiss..

im loving dev in this ff..lol

now maan is really angry n jealous..lol

cont soon

love yaaa



Thanks Monu! More fun stuff coming ahead! 😊

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