A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 57

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Posted: 15 years ago
this was so damn good yaar ..............oh ma god i am readign it again
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg....so romantic soooooooo cute geet.a
love this update ...so far best update 👏👏👏👏...
best of luck for ur quiz ...jaldi se update kerna plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys!!

I need to rush cuz I have a week to complete more than 5 novels...teachers, I tell you..uff..

So, here I am..writing about apne darlings romancing..

Anyways, I will shut up now and let Maan and Geet talk with their love

Maan woke up and looked tenderly at his wife, tucked in like a kid next to him. She was so soft and fragile..and yet..there was her unbreakable spirit that made him love her..He would go crazy counting the reasons he loved her..and so he wouldn't even try.

He decided, later had finally come..For Geet last night...for Maan the morning..

Maan(thought)- I wanted to see her face..before I...To feel the warmth of her gaze on mine..to see those eyes widen with surprise and then glaze over with pleasure.

He caressed her face slowly, tenderly and she shivered sub-consciously...suddenly, her eyes opened wide with shock.

Geet-M-M-aan..
Maan cupped her face and whispered to her lips

MAan- Good morning Mrs Khurana
Geet- hmm..

Her lips trembling at the sight of his glorious face, Geet really wanted him to stop the slow torture he was making her undergo. Just as she decided she won't stand it anymore, he bent and slowly, keeping eye-contact..touched his lips to hers..

Geet was lost...wanting to close her eyes, and yet, that gaze of his...so warm...scalding her. she was burning, felt she was a firecracker ready to burst anytime...Her lips tingling, suddenly had a life of their own, which is why when Maan broke the kiss...Geet dragged him by his hair back to herself and slowly kissed him..

No pair of lips were better suited to meet hers, no pair of hands deserved to roam uninhibited in her locks, no eyes had the right to gaze at her like he did.

He opened his eyes, completely lost in her...he opened his eyes, and allowed Geet for the first time to see a glimpse of himself- the raw desire in him for her, the tenderness that made him slow down time and again

Geet broke away, and they just stared at each other..

He traced her face with his fingers...going below her jaw, towards her neck, where he found a sensitive spot..Geet closed her eyes in pleasure while Maan looked at her- happy and unable to resist.
Her eyes widened as the fingers were replaced by his soft lips..she entangled her hands in his hair..to egg him on, but it seemed like he had all the time in the world..
He slowed down ...again and Geet thought he would make her go crazy with desire...

Maan had kept an extremely tight leash on his own desires, not allowing Geet to see much of it...God knew what might happen if he showed her the full intensity of what he felt for her...

HE broke away the kiss and still surrounded by her soft embrace, he merely placed his head near her neck..breathing heavily

Geet- Maan...
Maan-Geet...
Geet- aap...
MAan- shh...Kuchh mat bolo..
He gently kissed her..her ear, then trailed small kisses all along her jawline, then her cheeks, then those eyes, her forehead and then turned his hot gaze on her swollen lips

He kissed her..barely in control . Moving in harmony, their lips and tongues had a rhythm both were quick learners of..and followed it- he led sometimes, and she led at other times...but they gave expression to their unsaid feelings in those moments- he to his unbridled and unconditional love for her, and her to her innocent, and yet passionate love for her.

She could barely keep her emotions in check, felt as if her heart would burst...Barely hearing anything but her own heartbeat, she gave herself to the sensation of being touched by him.

Each touch was a shock, a tingle, each moan gave him double pleasure and heightened his desire. He wanted to stop...but continue forever, he wanted to give her time..he needed to slow...and so he did.

He broke away and looked into his eyes...

Geet looked into his eyes and got lost..

Reached for him again, but he took her hands in his gently and held them in between the two of them and said

MAan- Geet...You're beautiful.

Geet- So are you..i mean..

Maan- ahem..Geet..don't be scared of me. I will never hurt you- I promise not to..We can take it as slow as you want.

Geet heard him and it brought tears to her eyes

Geet- Maan..Maine aapko kabhi bhi nahi pehchaana...You always care about me more than you care about yourself..Who will care about you?

Maan- I was hoping you would...

Geet- Of course I will Maan. I want to. You're special to me MAan..You're becoming the second most important presence in my life.

Emotions felt freely now, and tears fell without inhibition from those lovely eyes.

MAan kissed her tears away, literally- something he had always wanted to do and then..kissed her forehead.

He took her in his arms and they just held each other for sometime...listening without saying anything, feeling each others' love and yet not sure of each other completely.

Barriers were breaking that day in Maan's bedroom

Geet- oww..
MAan- kya hua?
Geet- Arre babu, no, we haven't forgotten you- how can we?

MAan watched Geet talk to the baby and suddenly put his had on her lap..and talked to the baby- his baby

Maan- haanji! Chhote MAan..Aap mummy ko yaad dilaate hain ki papa se door rahein?

Baby nudges

MAan- Achha..toh aapko is baat ka darr hai ki mummy aur papa aapse baat nahi karenge..

Baby doesn't nudge..

MAan- hmm..Thik hai..toh whenever you feel ignored..waise toh we love you so much we can never do that- but still..feel free to kick okay?

Geet- haan haan..kyun nahi...Mujhe toh jaise kuchh feel hi nahi hota na..

maan- Dekha..aapki mummy poore din complain karti rehti hain..

Baby nudges again... and MAan pats her abdomen and gets up

Maan- Geet..Have you thought of names?
Geet- nope..Have you..

Maan- I do have some..ladka hoga toh Abhimaan.

Geet- aur ladki huo toh Abhimaani? C'mon MAan...Uff...
MAan- Ladki hui toh MEhek..

Geet- hmm..MEhek is good..but aur sochiye..
Ab get up and go to office..

MAan- tum nahi aa rahi..?

Geet- hmm..Nah..I think I will stay home with Vicky

Maan(a little jealous)- hmm..Fine.

Kisses her forehead again and goes.. leaving Geet smiling


Okay that's it..I hope you guys liked it!!

Love
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Posted: 15 years ago
like it?
loved it
ur great as usual
waiting for more
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice romantic update
Liked that they let their emotions take over them
Baby part was sho shweet Abhimaan n Abhimaani😆😆😆
Maan was jealous of his bro😆😆 Paka Maan is loosing himself😆😆
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
geeeeeeeet kya likhti ho tum .... i am reading it all wenever i get time ,again and again,awesome work dear keep going,woooooooooooooooooooooooooooow im a big fan of ur fiction... i want ur autograph.... 😳 😛 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey!!
awweeesoome part!! 😃 that was totally nice😊 lol
cant wait for more now
do continue soon

Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
actually feeling the tickle inside..... awesome bed room scene geet..... 👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Geet Wat man.......wid these kinda posts do you expect us to comeback earth and reply , well now am on break to reply yo....iam gone crazy..i donn think i will be able to speak for dayz atleast..

i become speechless ...Its all visible infront of me..u drove me insane....iam proud to be said that Geet's follower....Love you....................Keep writing such a fantastic stories...its just adorable......Kudos!i dont find words falling shorttttttttttttttt...great was just supurb...tats all and am back to My X..rated thoughts waiting for next updates..
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am addicted. you write well. keep the updates coming.

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