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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#541

nice update.romantic also.loved it.
geet missing maan .......
continue soon.

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bahane

@bahane

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#542

dear geet.a
thank you so mush 👏👏👏
it was so romantic ☺️😍but suddenly 😲😆😆
waiting for next part
best of luck

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#543

geeeet..

lovely update...!!!!! 😛 ..... it was so cute...geet cant help but go and sleep in his bed...!!! 😳

hey u have to give us a warning before writing such sizzling updates u know so that we can keep things ready in case laptops catch fire or we get heart attacks...😉 ....!!!!!

great going girl...!!! 👏

soumya

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#544

wow...just loved it

hi geet

really lovely update

waiting for ur heart & brain..conv,,,

love

muskan

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#545

fantastic update.. maneet scene was cute n beautiful.. do continue soon..

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#546

how r u dear

maan's dilogue is too good

MAan- oh god..When will I get used to how she looks when she's sleeping. It's so rare to see her quiet. Quiet in both ways- not talking through her mouth or eyes...

geet is also tooooooooo good
Geet felt his presence even in the depths of her sleep.

She traced his face with her hands gently so as to not wake him up, cupped his face and moved closer to him.

She whispered to herself more than him..
Geet- Maan Singh Khurana..what are you doing to me? why do you make me feel like this? Like I can't even breathe a second without you. don't look so innocent sleeping there..

She moved closer, and then kissed his eye-lids, then his nose-tip and then touched her fingers to his lips.

He suddenly moved to turn on his side and put his arms around Geet. He smiled.

Geet(in sleep)- Oie ullu de pathe...Haath hatao nahi toh taange todh dungi...Punjaaban hoon main...Khabar daar!!

MAan- meri Punjaaban...She's wearing my boxers..❤️

mAan- Geet...UTHO!!
MAan- Is it ' later'?

Geet( blushing)- MAan...

LOwers his eyes...

Maan tilts her face up to him and asks again..

Maan- Is it 'later'?

Geet- MAan..what it is right now is Late..We should sleep..

MAan- Geet..Don't test my patience.

Geet- I'm not testing anything Maan..Mujhe sona hai..

He moves closer to her...aur close and kisses her forehead..her eyes snap open..

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#547

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 sizzling...... very sizzling......

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#548

mindblowing.... this part just amazing... i read it more than once... write sooooon pls pls pls

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Hopeless Romantique

@Ek.Romantique

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#549

Dayumm!!! u r such a good writer. can't wait till u update. i just came across ur FF and have been staying up late 2 catch up....really good.

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#550

hey

that was toooooooooooo good 😃!!!!!!! i mean, seriously, really really really good lol
and i like the way geet always ends up in maan's room lol
and wow, so later did come, and it was awesome!! 😃 hehe
cant wait for the next part now
do continue soon

Maheen xx

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