A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: *mittu*

cho chweet. Dadi is so naughty. Maan on the floor. I want to see that too. Are you sure dadi can't give me a copy of that picture?



Hey! 🤗

Well..after reading the latest article..of Maaneet moving in...well..I think We can get to see some of those things,if you know what i mean.. 😆 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ RInky- thanks darling!!
i will try for it to be longer..somehow i feel itna long hoyega toh drag lagega..

@Maaneet_fan- Thanks a lot!!

@ anufa- thanks a lot!!

@deejagi- thanks a lot for liking it! will update soon

@ soumya- finally u read it!! glad u liked it!! i think yeh scene reality hone waala hai... [:D/]

@ Tia- I'm so sorry 🤗 could you imagine him falling off bed though?

@ desigurl- I know!! i bet he loves it!

@Sumi- glad you liked it! thanks!

@ Ann- thanks! pehla pehla pyaar..pehli pehli kiss..the first blush of love!

@ afsha- thanks hun! i will try to update a longer part

@amrita- 🤗 aww thanks!! will update soon!!

@ mayuri- thanks darling!! will update soon!! will give more dadi scnes..how abt Adi-pinky?

@sweet cherry- thanks!! i will try darling!

@neha- thanks!

@pritha- hey! glad you liked it :) I thought i wrote lunch..dinner pe toh..okay,not giving it away..but great idea! will keep in mind

@ geet- glad u liked darling!!

@juliel-thanks! 🤗

@ 1kaarzoo- yeah..khurana on the floor 🤣

@ sweet_gurl- thanks!! i will update soon!!


Thanks everyone for reading and liking it!!

love you all lots!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys!

Okay, so the Cv's seem to have planned something too cool for us what with these two moving in together..let's keep our fingers crossed!!

Maan went to the office and got the file where Geet said he would find it. He had a few things to attend to as well so sat down in his office and worked. After an hour or so, he got Mr Chopra's call who wanted to meet him to discuss some stuff about the housing project so he said okay.
during the meeting, Maan and Chopra talked and had lunch together and by the time Maan left, it was 6 pm.

He reached home, went to Dadi and said hi. Went to Geet's room and loosening his tie a bit, said

Maan- Geet. I'm back.
Geet- toh? kushiyaan manau?
MAan- ohkay..what happened to you?
Geet- Aapne lunch toh kar liya hoga?
Maan- yes..woh Mr Chopra ke saath hi.
Geet- okay. Fine. So, go to your room..you must be tired.

Maan went to his room and relaxed

Geet felt like crying
Geet(to herself)- Dekha,...it doesn't matter to him. You don't matter to him. If you did, he wouldn't have forgotten about lunch. It doesn't matter to him that you haven't had anything because you were actually stupid enough to wait for him. You were wrong Geet. He doesn't care even a bit- neither for you, nor the baby.
Feeling dizzy, she leaned against a wall, with her hand on her head..feeling feverish, she decided that she would be normal with him

By dinner time, Geet was feeling awful but she had decided she won't say anything to MAan( he wouldn't care anyways..all he cares about is his work and Mr Chopra)
At the dinner table, Maan came looking fresh and Dadi too.
Geet came late, and sat down next to Dadi.

Geet- how was your meeting?
Maan- hmm..it was good. There were a few points he mentioned and he asked for your approval before I said yes..

Sarcastically he added- looks like we will need your sign of approval for everything from now on.

Geet felt really hurt at what he said but Maan was tired and didn't pay attention- all he could think of was sleep. So she didn't say anything, as she was angry beyond words.

Dadi- Geet..Phir aapne kuchh khaya lunch mein?
Geet- umm..Dadi, I...
Maan- Kya? Geet...
Geet fumbled- I, yes, I had my lunch.

She didn't meet Maan's eyes when she said it, and he realised she was lying.

He decided not to make it an issue before Dadi so as to worry her, and just kept eating.
After dinner, he looked up at Geet finally and thought she looked tired

Maan- Are you okay? you look tired?
Dadi- Haan Maan..I am tired. I will go to sleep early today
MAan- Dadi..Good night.
Dadi- Good night kids... sweet dreams

and with a wink,she left the two alone

Maan- Geet..I'm waiting.
Geet- I'm fine.
Maan- Geet..

He got up and went upto her, saw how flushed her face was, how bright her eyes, and how she was shivering.
He touched her forehead and felt that it was burning

Maan- Geet..you have high fever
Geet- nahi Maan..it's just slight temperature..Will go away by the morning.It's okay. I'm fine.
Maan- GEET..YOu're burning. come, let's take you to the doctor
Geet got up and immediately felt a wave of dizziness. She grabbed hold of Maan's arms to support herself and then said

Geet- Maan, please. It's okay. I can take care of myself. I will go call my doc and ask her what medicine to take. You are tired anyways

Maan- ARE you MAD?? Shut up and let's go.

Geet refused to go and MAan, well..he picked her up and took her to her room.

Geet- Maan, what are you doing? let go of me?!
Maan- Geet..you are mad if you think I was about to let you climb those stairs yourself. You are feeling dizzy, just close your eyes for some time. please.

Geet thought it seemed like a very good idea, so she closed her eyes and slept.

Maan meanwhile, took out her cellphone and called her gyna

dr- hello Mrs Khurana. May I help you?
Maan- Hello doctor. This is Maan, Maan Khurana. Actually my wife had really high fever and I wasn't sure what medicine to give her or bring her to you..?

Dr- Don't worry Mr khurana. I will tell you the name and you give her 1 tablet right now and ask her to sleep. She will be okay by the morning- she felt dizzy too,right?

Maan- yes. Dizzy, and has very high fever

The doctor smiled at hearing THE Maan Khurana(who she had heard so much of) filled with anxiety over a sweet girl like Geet. Realizing that he's in love, she told him smilingly what med to give his wife and calmed him down

But Maan was far from being calm. He cursed himself for having lunch while Geet was waiting for him and then...forgetting about it completely.

He looked at her tenderly, so worried sick about her. Then he put his hnd on her forehead, into her hair. He caressed her warm cheek and whispered into her ear

Maan- Geet...uth jaao..please have the medicine

Geet- I...

Maan- shhh..

He made her have it and then gently pushed her into the warm bed again.

he took off his shoes and his tie, his waistcoat and his shirt; went downstairs and got some white napkins and cool water; ice and hot milk; some chocolates and strawberries and kept them on the table beside Geet. He sat down beside her, and tried to bring the temperature down.

It was 4 am and Maan was very tired.

he thought

Maan- her fever is so like her. ek dum Stubborn..not even a slight change. What do I do?
Geet shuddered and whimpered in her sleep
Geet- I'm so cold...
Maan( to himself)- AC is off..and still she's shivering. what do I do.
Geet tossed from left to right...she felt soo cold...and like she was falling...screamed again for Maan..

Maan was right there, he slipped into bed, next to her and placed his arms aorund her..

Maan- Shhh...I'm here..I'm here...I will never let you go..Shh..it's okay..sleep now

Geet calmed down and slept again

Geet woke up feeling slightly better and unable to move..owing to the iron hands that surrounded her..not binding..but protecting.

Sorry for the short update but Geet just strtd

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oooh!

Who knew the great MSK was so caring, considerate and romantic? Staying awake till 4 a.m. for his sweet wife!

Loved it, Geet. Enjoyed it.

Do update soon.

P.S: I did imagine Maan falling off the bed in the previous update. 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update...it's okay...atleast we got an update.....and dont forget to pm me.....now can't wait for the next part....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!! 😛
Read ur whole ff today and totally love it 👍🏼😃
Update soon!! 😊



Edited by shaz94 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 4 updating dis time u didn't send PM not fair keep itup but don't 4get 2 send PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you dear for another update. After todays episode and your update I want a Maan for my own where can I get one? He is just too perfect. I am crossing my fingers and hoping cv's wont butcher this character like every other male ones in television industry.

Great work darling. Keep them coming. I eagerly wait for your next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg i love da update
awwww he cares so much bout her
cant wait for da nxt part
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update.loved it totally.
maan is taking good care of geet.......
continue soon.

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