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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg dis was jus awesome..lol i cudnt stop myself form readin dis and wrting diz//truly u shud write more or make a fan fic.. u r really creative..👍🏼👏 i wish dis really happens in da show...lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing

plz do continue!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome👏👏Would love to read more😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this was really awesome, loved it!!!!😳 and either ending is good, though the second one is awesome😉!!! Dialogues were superb as well!!! Please continue if u can!!!
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hey it was awesome just luv it i m rinky i m new and wana make u my frnd so just reply me what's u r answer and continue writing like dis😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The 2nd conclusion I must say sounds very romantic 😳. Hope that happens!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was gr8,simply gr8😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for your appreciation Guys. It was really motivating.My assumptions for next part could be

Sorry for the typos i havent done a spell check
Maan starts the car and in between his car fails. Maan is now worried what to do,there is no signal in his phone to call home but Geet becomes more happy and start singing loudly. Maan then to control her, screams at her and says to shut up so that he can think Geet gets scared and sits calmly. Maan then thinks for few minutes and ask Geet to get down and walk. Geet very innocently ask " hum kahan jaa rahe hai sir" Maan says" paas hi mera farm house hai wahan jaa ke dadi ko phone kar ke doosri car mangwoonga"
Both Maan and Geet walk inside the farm house. Its all dark there, Maan calls for "Krishna,Krishna"(he is the caretaker). Krishna comes out running and say "Namaste sir".Maan ask "Ghar mein itna andhera kyun hai" krishna: "aadhi ghante pehle is current gaya hai sir" Maan "generator kyun nahi chal raha?" Krishna " wahi dekhne jaa raha tha par aapne bulaliya" Maan "jaldi dekho kya hua hai" "Ji sir".Krishna rushes out.All the time when this conversation was going on Geet was playing in one of the swings placed in the gardern. Maan looks for her and finds her there. he keeps looking at her. Geet for the first lives this day like the way she wanted to. all this time all the time she lived as her family said but it was first time she does that all she wanted to do from childhood. Maan dosent stops infact he wants her live these momments. he thinks its only under the effectt of alchohol that she can forget the whole world and live for herself. He smiles and after few minutes goes to her and say "geet andhar chalo". Geet " abhi nahi thodi deer aur" maan says "jidh mat karo tumhe thand lag jayegi, ab chalo andhar". he holds her hand and takes her inside she forcibly goes with him. Maan goes and looks for telephone but find it dead he shouts again "krishna". Krishna comes running and says there is some problem in the generator and he has had also spoken to electricity board and power is not expected till morning coz of the storm, even the phone is dead now. Maan says "abbkya hoga", he ask krishna to leave. Geet is sitting in one corner , He goes and try explaining her the situation but she dosent listen to a single word.He sees Geet shivering and gets up and go in the other room but geet holds his hands and says mujhe chodh kar mat jao ,muje andhere se dar lagta hai" Maan: Mein abhi aata hoon" but geet hold him more tight and says" Please mat jao". Maan says "thik hain tum bhi chalo". He takes her to his room opens his wardrobe and removes a pink kurta and gives it Geet and says" change karlo varna bimaar padh jaoogi". she takes it and open it .It a very long kurta which would come to her atleast 2 inches below the knee. maan tries walking out but she holds him again says "yahan kitna andhera hai" . Maan says "daro mat Geet mein bahar hi khadha hoon". he closes the door and leaves. Few seconds later Geet comes out and says meri dress ki dori nahi khul rahi plz help kar dijiye na. Maan is now scared and is abt to say something but geet stands facing her back in front him. Geet says" sir plz mujhe thand lag rahi hai" With shivering hands, he moves her wet hair to reveal her fair skin whichwas also wet He tries opening it but pulls his hands back( he is too scared) but then geet says" sir jaldi". he then touches her skin, his rough hands on her smooth skin aur ankhon mein sharam.(I would die to see tis onscreen :) ) .he somehow manages to open it and quickly turns away. geet then goes in the room to change. meanwhile maan removes his drenched shirt and is only in his black Vest, revealing his muscular body. He burns the bornfire, Geet comes out wearing his pink kurta which is way loose to her .Pink really looks good on her and her skin glows in the bornfire, her pretty legs are now seen. maan sees her top to bottom without blinking his eyelids. geet then walks towards him its only then he moves his eyes from her. she sits near the bornfire and hold her hands tight to her chest ,uncomfortness is seen in both of them . Geet then breaks the silence and says " sir mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai". maan " dekhte hai kitchen mein kutch hai kya". he walks in the kitchen followed by geet ,there he finds eggs Maan asks" Omelete khaogi?" . Like a kid and all smiles , she gives him a big nod , geet ask "aapko omelete banana aata hai kya" With all style, he breaks the egg, whips it and put it in the pan. Geet is shocked and impressed when its ready he serves her in the plate and says " Maan special omelete aapke liye mam." geet taste it and says "wow sir meine itna aacha omelete kabhi nahi khaya, kash aap mere pati hote toh roz breakfast aapse hi banvati" Maan is taken aback he sees her with all the love in his eyes for the first time geet says something with even mann couldnt say to himself. geet totaly unknown what she had said relishes her food. she is now done and walk towards the sink to keep the plate but in her kurta gets stuck in the chair. maan sees her and says" ek minute" and bends down to free it but instead see her beautiful legs before he starts imagining anything he quickly does his job and get up . he then takes her plate to the sink and starts cleaning but she snatches and say aap kyun meri jhooti plate clean karooge mein khud hi kar loongi" maan" tum jao sojayo geet bahut raat hogayi hai " but geet dosent listen. This time Maan has to scream at her jisse geet rooth jaati hai. Maan sees her and says sorry but she dosent listen. he forces her to come but she dosent listen.she runs away. maan runs behind her and forces her Geet now reaches the end of the wall, Maan cages her between his arms . they are hardly an inch away.They eyes are locked and start breathing heavily .Maan" mujhe pagal mat banao geet, meri baat mano". He then carry her in the hall and tucks her in the sofa where there is a little light . He gets up to walk away but she pulls him close. Geet then question her " sir aapko kabhi kissi se pyar nahi hooya?" maan is again taken aback, he is silent "boliye na sir".he dosent says a word,she then ask "aacha yeh boliye mein aapko kaise kagti hoon? "with a faint smile and pushing away the tresses from her face he says "tum bahut aachi ho "pakka" " haan geet" " phir kyun har koi mujhse nafrat karta hai darji,Brij veerji,Sasha mam aur aap?" " Kyun sir koi mujh se pyaar nahi karta ?" maan says "mein tumse nafrat nahi karta Geet", "toh kya aap mujh se pyaar karte hai?" maan dosent answers". Geet slowly falls asleep . maan is unable to think straight . He keeps thinking abt every momment abt her and says "yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai?" yeh kaisa sawaal poocha Geet nein after sometime even he dozes off.
In the morning Geet wakes up with a heavy head and sees her condition she is scared to death and starts crying. Maan comes in front of her. she is screaming on top of her voice and says "yeh maine kya kiya" maan tries consoling her and pulls her close and says "hamare beech kuch nahi hua. tum nein kuch galat nahi kiya aur ek baad yaad rakhna mein tumhare saath kabhi galat nahin hone doonga, mujh par itna vishwaas rakho". she is relieved and hugs him tight , maan dosent moes and inch.Few seconds later she realizes wht she is doing and move few steps back He gives her a cup of coffee and ask her to get ready and they would leave in half an hour . geet tries hard to think wht happened last night and she remembers few vague pictures, she remember how he tries to help her in the party and cooks food for her and is lost in his thought . Maan honks and she rushes to get ready and meets near the car . maan is giving instruction to krishna when he sees geet comming . He turns his back away and opens the car door for her but before sitting geet ask him " sir aap jaise dikhte ho waise ho nahi maan is shocked . Geet says "aap ne jitna mera dhyan rakha hai utna toh koi apna bhi nahi rakta. Kyun aap mere liye itna karte hai sir. aakhir kyun? " . Maan dosent says anything and orders her to sit in the car. Geet keeps waiting for the answers and thinking abt all the momments right from saving her from the goons in hoshiyarpur till yesterdays momments and Maan keeps thinking abt his closse momments of yesterday night. They reach geet home . Maan dosent say a single word , geet comes close to Maan , maan jolts but then she turns back to take her bunch of flowers from the backseat and walks away saying him Thank You..
Edited by veryberry01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow 😛
realy nice😍😍
very romantic 😍😍
loved it😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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2nd part is more romantic....
i wish it happens!!!!

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