What could happen in next episode: 2 part updated

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Hi Mannet Fans!!
I am silent member of this forum and read all the post regularly.....I am must say I am loving all of them...I hardly find time to browse but now the first thing i do when i open my PC is view this Forum...IT JUST ROCKS....

Like all you guys out i am a huge fan of Mannet. I just love the lead actors...specially Maan .HE IS IRRESISTIBLE. The Chemistry of Geet and Maan is out of the world.
After watching yesterdays episode i was thinking what could happen next. Below is what i imagined.

Maan keeps thinking why Geet effects him so much. He is still not able to understand his own behaviour.Dev chats with him but leaves later coz he thinks its best to leave Bro alone. Maan has mixed feelings he is angry coz for the first time in his life someone is giving attitude to him and upset coz he was really looking foward for the dinner. Meanwhile his phone rings again and this time he takes the call. Geet gets nervous on listening to his voice and she just blabbers"Sir mein aadhi ghate baad, hotel ke samne aapka wait karoongi kyun ki main jaanti hoon yeh business dinner hamari company ke liye kitna impt ha. Aap ho na ho par mein proffessional hoon" and bangs the phone.Maan is shocked that this new girl is teaching him proffessionalism.
Geet rushes to get ready and removes a dress to wear. Pinky sees this and says "party mein yeh pehn kar jaoogi, kya tum bhool gayi tum dhak dhak ke saath jaa raho ho?" she then removes a pretty white dress from the wardrobe and gives it her, geet smiles and gets ready.Before leaving Pinky advices her to be extra careful and to mess up things again. She has to be nice to everyone specially to the clients.

Geet reaches hotels and prays "Babaji aaj koi galti na ho please, aaj sir mujh se gussa na ho" and remembers pinkys words to be extra careful.Maan waits for Geet in the hotel lobby and is angry that she is late again (her first mistake)She steps into the hotel and sees Maan. Maan is mesmerized seeing her .Geet looks absolutely stunning and Maan forgets his anger he is not able to move his eyes from her. For the first time he has a small smile on his face. He continue starring at her and this makes Geet nervous.She Calls him "Sir?" he dosent responds ,she calls him again "Sir?" he comes out of that mode and gets his angry look again and say "Tum late ho"
Geet: "Sorry sir par taxi nahi mile, Chaliye jaldi Mr Chopra wait kar rahe honge". She moves foward but Maan calls her , she turns back and then Maan gives her a bunch of pink carnations. Geet is shocked and taken aback her mouth is wide open only then Maan comes close to her ear pushes her hair back and whispers in her ear "main itna bhi rookha nahi hoon" gives her a devilish smile and goes into the hall.Geet is shocked and couldnt moves. Maan turns back and sees she isnt behind her. He goes back to her give her his hand and ask her to hold it. she does watever he says and then walks with him in the party . Mr Chopra meets them at the door and greets them ,Geet is now back to her senses and as Pinky said she wants to be nice to the client. Maan then moves in the party and all the time he is holding her hand , she gets uncomfortable and as soon as she find a chance pushes herself far from him. This makes Maan very angry and he leaves her alone and goes to the bar to have a drink. Geet is very angry and says" sir kya samjhte hai ki woh mujhe akela chodh denge toh main dar jaoongi nahi Mr Maan Singh Khurana aaj mein batati hoon ki Geet Handa kya hai". Couple of guys who finds Geet alone come to her and ask her for dance , Maan who is sitting far away notices this Geet takes this as a chance gives Maan a stern look and goes to the floor with one of the guy.

Maan is very angry now or rather i say jealous like hell he cant see anyother guy keeping his hand on Geet's waist . Mr chopra comes to Maan and says "Geet is such a good dancer". this makes Maan all the more angry and he drinks the whole glass of champangne. There the guy who was dancing with Geet offers her a drink which has alcohol mixed in it ( i assume he already instructed the waiter). She drinks it aur phir usse chakkar aane lagte hai but she manages. Maan see this and rushes to rescue her like always before the strangers try to take advantage of her and hold her close. Maan holds her tight with her back crushing into his chest. Maan gives an angry look to that guy but very politely says that he would like to dance with her. Geet is not in her senses and keeps smiling , the guy leaves then Maan turns Geet to face her ,he is very angry but all his anger vanishes when he sees her smiling. He is again lost in her eyes and both of them start swaying to the music. Geet conditions gets worse she starts talking to him she says" arey DD tum par main to uske saath dance kar rahi thi, chodho mujhe" and she tries to moves herself but he holds her tight again and says" chup chap mere saath dance karo, client ke saamne tamasha mat banao" she is angry and says" Dusht Danav chodh mujhe mein tere saath dance nahi karrongi"he is shocked to hear Dusht Danav but gives her smile looking at innocense on her face(he actually likes the way she scolds him). Maan dosent want anyone to see Geet in this condition so he slowly slips away from the party with Geet . He somehow manages to get geet to the car but then it starts raining , geet gets excited and runs in the open area Maan tries to stop her but she pushes him away, she laughs jumps and dances in the rain and Maan stands far and enjoy seeing her. She looks very beautiful, completely drenched in her white dress I rather say she looks very hot Mann feel like going close to her but then shakes his head away trying to stop his imagination . Geet after playing happily in the rain comes to Maan and says " Aap kyun hamesha itne khadoos rehte ho? kyun itna gussa karte ho"? then she comes close to him and says "aap jab muskarate ho toh bahut aache lagte ho" Maan blushes listening to this compliment. Geet ask him to come and enjoy the rain but maan say" mujhe barish nahi pasand" geet says" aap ko baarish nahi pasand, aap ko phool nahi pasad toh kya pasad hai aapko ? bichari woh toh gayi jisse se aap shaddi karooge " Maan is shocked but then she pulls Maan in the rain intially Maan gets hesitant and angry but then later starts enjoying. Geet slips and she is abt to fall Maan holds her, he then ask her to walk to the car but then she is not able to walk so he carries her n his arms and make her sit. Geet is al the time time singing and smiling.

Maan is very happy seeing Geet so happy for the first time he keeps looking at her all the time he has a smile on the face.They reach home but by that time Geet is already sleep.He carries her again and rings the bell.pinky opens the door and says"Geet kitni dear hogayi" but instead sees DD carrying Geet in his arms and Geet holding him by his neck. Pinky is shocked. Maan ask her where is Geet's room and pinky with her mouth wide open points in that direction.Maan leaves her there.

Although i have one more conclusion for this the second one could be.

Maan starts the car and in between his car fails. Maan is now worried what to do,there is no signal in his phone to call home but Geet becomes more happy and start singing loudly. Maan then to control her, screams at her and says to shut up so that he can think Geet gets scared and sits calmly. Maan then thinks for few minutes and ask Geet to get down and walk. Geet very innocently ask " hum kahan jaa rahe hai sir" Maan says" paas hi mera farm house hai wahan jaa ke dadi ko phone kar ke doosri car mangwoonga"

i have to think to write if they are stuck in this wonderful situation.Its the first time that i wrote something. Would really appreciate some comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Both the ending are cute!!!!
Offcourse the second one is more xrated options!!! 😉
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oyeee tum bhi continue karo!!! as i told another ff writer.....

this is AWESOME!! Continue soon......thanks for sharing😉
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gud wrk man................... keep gng..................
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so good! keep going...i especially love the part where he brings her the flowers and says i'm not that rukhai! so chweet!!

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This is sooo good!!
Do continue!!
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This is REALLY good! 👏 Maan + Jealous = HOT 😳
Please continue... 😃
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OMG .... this is tooooooooo cute and a great story ... i hope we get to see this on screen .... awesome plz do continue
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yaaR this is so gud....its just superb....plz do continue...its just too gud to read...continue....
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definately the 2nd ending, great stuff

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