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@ChulbuliRao

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: muskanp
Both the ending are cute!!!!
Offcourse the second one is more xrated options!!! 😉

yup i always look forward to dadi's views...she ios lovely...and of course farm house drunk geet...behosh maan...aur kya chahiye x ratedness ke liye..lolz😆

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TANYA

@TANYA 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

wow tht was sooo awesumn. u hv 2 carry on :-). xx

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Wat an effort!!!! Lovely!!! Enjoyed every bit of it!!!
Plz continue!!!!

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

sorry for late comment but just read your ff and its really nice👏👏👏
EPI 1
"main itna bhi rookha nahi hoon"😉😉😉 we know it maan
then geet ka maan ko jealous karne k liye dance karna😆 maan ka geet ko rescue karna 😳
Geet worse condition and maan and geet dilogues chodho mujhe" and she tries to moves herself but he holds her tight again and says" chup chap mere saath dance karo, client ke saamne tamasha mat banao" she is angry and says" Dusht Danav chodh mujhe mein tere saath dance nahi karrongi"he is shocked to hear Dusht Danav 🤣
bichari woh toh gayi jisse se aap shaddi karooge "😆

last k dono ideas super cool the😊
in EPI 2
inta andhera kyo he bhai😆😆😆😆😆
maan is really sweet
He sees Geet shivering and gets up and go in the other room but geet holds his hands and says mujhe chodh kar mat jao ,muje andhere se dar lagta hai" Maan: Mein abhi aata hoon" but geet hold him more tight and says" Please mat jao". Maan says "thik hain tum bhi chalo"😳😳😳 too cute
Geet comes out and says meri dress ki dori nahi khul rahi plz help kar dijiye na. Maan is now scared and is abt to say something but geet stands facing her back in front him. Geet says" sir plz mujhe thand lag rahi hai"😳

conti soon

😳😳😳😳
😆

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

d update is fantabulous, i wud die to watch it happening on screen😳

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

wow dear--u wrote it out beautifully!! do continue! m loving it!!

i love the bit where he gives her pink carnation and whispers in her ears" main itna bhi rukha nahi hoon"😍

awwwie<3 i soo wish that happens!

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maneetworld

@maneetworld

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Great job!!! I loved it. I want see jealous maan next week...

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@ShellJA

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

excellent job. only comment is that you shouldn't drink while pregnant it harms the baby.

But I am sure in this story Geet is not pregnant.

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Sonia

@Bobbi.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Very mesmerizing!

Loved your thoughts! I was totally imagining each phrase you wrote.

Do write more.

Amazing amazing amazing.

Wow.

I truly hope this happens in tomorrow's episode.

*****Sasha/Tasha weren't mentioned in your fictional episode. I loved that bit too.

Very nice indeed.

Lovee xx

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Durga1191

@Durga1191

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

awwwwwwwwww that was rea;lly nice ... i would really wish they would have this on screen 😳

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