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ok so this my 2nd FF for this forum ... my first one is "FF: Geet and Maan's Love story" i really wanted to start this one ...

in this FF i will continue from that days episode.

So I will continue from today's episode (7th july 2010)

Geet: G
Maan: M
Sasha: S
Tasha: T
Adi: A
Pinky: P

So it starts with Geet with Maans rumal

G: nahi mein ab nahi roungi

G leaves the conference room and comes downstairs...she is about to go towards her office when Sasha starts taunting her.

S: so G kaisi rahi meeting with MK oh sorry with Mr. Chopra
G: please ma'am aap ...
S: G tumhe yeh project mila hain isiliye tum mujhse itne confidence ke saath bol rahi ho . But mein tumhe ek baat bata doo iss office mein... mein zyada important thi, hoon aur agge bhi rahhongi, samjhi.
G: dekhiye mujhe iss se koi pharak nahi padta ki kaun important hain aur kaun nahi,
S: lekin mujhe jan na hain, ki is office mein MK kise zyada important mante hain. Miss. Hoshiyarpur ya mein.
S: kal ke din MK jisse sabse zyada kaam ke liye bulayenge woh sabse se zyada important hoga, bolo mazoor hain.
G: manzoor hain lekin meri bhi ek shart hain ... agar mein yeh challenge jeet jati hoon toh kal ke baad iss office mein koi nahi kahe ga ke mere aur sir ke beech mein kuch hain. Manzoor hain ?
S: manzoor hain


G heads to her office. P comes there...

P: G tune yeh kya kar diya. S se challenge ... tujhe pata nahi hain G, S yeh challenge jitne ke liye kuch bhi karegi.
G: mujhe pata hain lekin agar mujhe apne pairo par khada rahne hain toh yeh challenge jitna hoga.

Then G remembers that she told M to stay away and that she wont come to the lunch with him.

G: hai rabba meine toh sir ko bata diya ke woh mujhse dur rahe.... 😭ab mein kya karu...

M comes to her office...

M: G tumhe lunch pe aana hoga .... mein kuch bhi nahi sunna chahta samjhi tum....
G: ji sir
M: kya 😕... abhi toh tumne mujhe itna sab sunaya ke tum mere saath lunch par nahi jaogi aur ab sirf "ji sir"... tum bimar ho kya 😆
G: nahi sir woh meine socha ke ...project hain toh...
M: thik hain ... 2 ghante mein ______ restaurant main pohoch jana. (i didnt know what to put for the name of the restaurant)
G: ji sir

M leaves ...

G: (to P) ab mein dekhti hoon S kaise yeh challenge kaise jit ti hain.

M comes to the restaurant ... the clients come and ask where G is and just then G enters wearing a stunning pink salwar kameez..and M just keeps on staring with those puppy dog eyes (Mahi plays in the background). G comes towards everyone. Mr.Chopra complements her and tells her that she is looking very beautiful. M looks really hurt when Mr.chopra complements her.
They discuss all the plans and all that. The clients leave,G is also about to go but M stops her....

M: ruko G .. mein drop kar deta hoon
G: nahi sir ...waise bhi iss waqt mujhe taxi mil sakti hain, aisa nahi hain ki raat ho gayee hain aur mujhe koi taxi nahi milegi .... have a gud day sir.
M: lekin G
G: sir aapne meri bohot madat ki hain , uss ke liye thankyou...

G leaves the place as fast as possible..leaving M there alone

The next day S and G both enter the office at the same time and give each other evil looks 😆
M comes and goes to his office.

on the other hand in a room A, P, S, T, G and some other ppl are there.

A: ok so abhi se shuru hoti hain S and G mein yeh competition. Yeh ek score board hain jise main aur T handle karenge ...hum iss par record karenge ke MK kise sabse zyada office me bulate hain kam ke liye.

S and G shake hand and then begins their challenge.
the whole part will be a comedic scene .....
One gets called inside then the other one gets angry ... and the whole in and out part
Both try their hardest to get M to call them for work ...

later during lunch time M is going to some place in the office when he sees the score board.... no one is near the board or in the room

M: yeh sab kya hain

Just then A comes and is shocked to see him there...

A: si...rr aaa...aapp yaa...ah..hhaa
M: A yeh kya hain
A: wooo...hhhh ssssirrrr S aur G eeeekkk ggggaaaammmmmmeee kkkkhhheee..lll rrrrrrrraaaaahhhhheee hain
M: acha kaunsa?
A: 😕..uuuuummmmm wwwwooooohhhh ...haaaahhahahaha...😆.....
M: A kaunsa game
A: (is like looking around trying to find what to say) ssssiiirrr
M: A tum mujhse jhoot bilkul nahi kehna warna tumhare liye accha nahi hoga

A (gets scared and tells him everything)

A: ..... aur agar G loose hoti hain toh pura staff usse ap dono ke bare main bol kar usse pareshan kar denge...

M leaves from there.. and is walking but then stops midway and thinks about G. He remembers what she said to him yesterday about how a girl gets blamed for everything and everyone always points at the girl. Then he imagines G with tears in her eyes...

there are only 10 min left till the end of the day and S is winning by 1 point.

everyone is getting ready to leave and S is standing outside G's office giving this evil smile.
M looks at G from his office and sees that she is worried.

M: (calls G on the phone) G andar aao
G: ji sir

G goes inside, S follows her but doesnt go inside and is trying to listen to what they are saying...

M: G yeh uss project ki files hain tum inhe study karlo aur mujhe kal bata na tumhe kya lagta hain ...
G: (gives this really cute smile to him) ji sir

G comes out and tells S that M gave her another work to do .... S gets angry

G: ab hum dono ka score tied ho gaya hain ....aur office ka time khatam hone mein sirf 3 min bache hain...

S and G are both worried. Both of them are pacing
M comes out of his office and sees almost everyone there

M: yeh kya ho raha hain
A: kuuuuucccccchhhhh nahi sir
M: hmmm.... ....(looks at everyone angrily) G
G: ji sir
M: (gives her a file) iss file ki copies mujhe kal ke meeting ke liye chahiye.
G: (smiles) yes sir
M: iss mein has ne ki kya baat hain
G; kuch nahi sir

M goes back into his office. G looks at S and smiles. S gets angry and leaves from there. P and A hug G and congratulate her.

A goes to M in his office

M: A tum ... kya hua
A: thank you sir ...aapne G ko jita ya
M: What are u talking about? meine G ko kaam diya hain jisse usse complete karna hain samjhe ... meine kissi ki bhi help nahi ki hain .....
A: ok sir, main chalta hoon
M: A yeh baat kisi ko bhi mat bata na ki mujhe iss challenge ke bare mein pata tha...
A: yeeeessss sir

A leaves ... M smiles seeing G happy .... 😳




ok so far this is enough ... Let me know what u guys think


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kinno thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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continue soon. I hope what your wrote comes true.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really good work, truly amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiii its a really great work
loved it
i wish we could see these scenes in the show!!
continue when u can
n this is ur 2nd ff right?
can u give me the link of "geet n maan's love story"
sounds nice so would love 2 read it
hope u dont mind!!
see yaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey lovely work dear
wish this could happen
but it was lovely
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx for liking it

and here is a link to my other FF

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1427453

😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome! This made me smile!! totally loved it, and the BEST part no churailtara or DEV!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i just hope that ur version happens in the show 2. amazing work btw.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Haaye i really wished ki aisa kuch hota serial mein but its ok
Liked ur update
Add me to ur pm list😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok So i shall continue from today's episode (8th july 2010)

SO it starts off with M thinking what to do and how to ask G to come to Mr.Chopra's restaurant opening.

M: ab G ko kaise manau... woh mere saath kahi bhi nahi jayegi...

M keeps on thinking about what to do.... when he gets an idea.

On the other hand G with A and P ; and S with T are standing opposite of each other.

A: so ab score hain S 2 points and G 1 point..
S: dont worry G tum aaj harne wali ho..
G: woh toh waqt hi bataye ga

G in her office is sitting while P and A are pacing back and forth, when the phone rings... G quickly picks it up.

M: G mere office mein aao
G: ji sir

G smiles and heads towards M's office ... on the way there she gives an ishara to S that she go the 2nd point...
G enters M's office

M: G yeh lo aur isse padh lo aur phir mujhe batao ki kya karna chahiye
G: ok sir .... ummm abhi padhoon sir
M: (looks up with that ..are u stupid look) nahi kal padhoon
G: kal kab sir 😆
M:(gets angry) G mujhe sach mein shaq hone laga hain ki tum dimag mein ek dimag hain ya nahi
G: ummm mein padhti hoon sir

G reads it and thinks if she goes then ppl will talk but if she does'nt go then she will end up loosing the competition and then ppl will still talk ....

G: ummm sir mein soch kar aap ko batati hoon
M: hmm... thik hain lekin jaldi karo mere paas pura din nahi hain tumhara response sunne ke liye.

G leaves and goes to her office with the letter. A and P also read the letter.

P: G tujhe jana chahiye
G: lekin agar mein gayi toh log baat karenge
A: lekin agar tum nahi gayi toh .....sir ghussa honge aur tum yeh challenge har jaogi .... phir pura staff baat karega
G: haye ... babaji mein kya karoon
P: G tujhe jana chahiye, waise bhi tu kaha akele DD ke saath hogi. Waha toh bohot sare log honge
G: (nods) haa, yeh bhi sahi hain ... thik hain .... lekin ek problem hain
A: G ab kya problem hain
G: sir woh mein kya pehnoo... pechli bar jo hua woh toh phir se nahi hona chahiye
A: ha ... ab mein kya bataoon ... mujhe bhi toh nahi pata
P: tu DD se pooch le na .. woh bata denge
G: DD se ....😕... ok..... aur ek problem hain .... dinner
A: yeh problem nahi hain G
G: nahi sir woh ... mujhe woh choori kate se khana khana nahi aata
P: dont worry G tujhe mein sikh doongi ... tu sirf DD se pooch le kya pehna hain
G: thik hain mein pooch kar aati hoon
A and P: best of luck

G is going towards M's office when she sees him walking... she goes towards him

G: sir
M: kya hain
G: woh main aapke saath Mr.Chopra ke restaurant opening mein chaloongi
M:hmmm thik hain
M starts walking again
G: sir...
M: ab kya hain (still walking)
G: woh mujhe aap ki help chahiye thi ... woh aapne jo kaha tha
M: help chahiye thi, kyun .. tum hi ne toh kaha tha ke mujhse door raho ... tum sara kaam khood kar sakti ho ... toh karo ...aur mujhe shanti se jeene doh
M walks away and goes in his office
G: hmn

G starts walking back angrily when she bumps into the vase ... she doesnt let it fall
M comes back to check what the noise was ...and sees G all angry

G: (putting the flowers back in the vase) jaise woh rukhe hain waise yehphool bhi rukhe hain

G sees M and gets scared.... M walks towards her in anger ...G takes a few steps back but then stops when he gets close

M: tumne kuch kaha
G: (scared) woh sirr... mujhe aap ki help chahiye thi
M: (anygrily) kya
G: (looking down) woh sir mein opening ke liye kya pehnoo.... joh pehle hua woh hona nahi chahiye ... issi liye
M: (his eyes go all soft and his expression changes from angry young man to a kind man) ummmm well tumhe jo pehna hain pehno lekin color code black hain ...
G: ok

M starts to walk away but stops and turns around

M: aur haan mein tumhe thik 6:30 baje lene aa jaoonga tumhare ghar
G: (smiles) ok sir
M: aur ek baat... agar tumhe aaj ghar jaldi jana hain toh ja sakti ho
G: ok sir

Now the scene moves to G in her office with A and P

A: ab hume tumhe transform karna hoga aaj ke dinner ke liye ...toh lets go humhe bohot kaam hain
P: lekin S's challenge ka kya
G: han...uska kya
A: hmmm.... dekho opening 7 baje hain toh MK aaj jaldi office se niklenge toh challenge wahi par khatam ho jayega right ....
G: haan
A: toh tab tak mein aur P tumhe training denge aur tum apna kaam bhi kar sako gi
P: haan aur mein tere kiye parlor mein booking kar loongi ...aur dress hum baad mein le lenge... thik hain
G: yeh sab ho jayega na
A: of course ho jayega... dont worry G

The whole day goes by.
A and P are giving G instructions on how to use a fork and knife😆🤣 ... they are like training her
Then while this is going on.... G gets called to M's office and then S ... this keeps going on .....
The whole scene is G and S coming in and out of MK's office...... and then A and P forcing G to learn everything properly.....

The day comes to a closure ... MK leaves the office .... S and G come face to face

A: ok so score toh tie hain
T: kya? ab
G: ab ...ab kuch nahi iss se sirf yeh sabit hota hain ke iss office hum dono important hain sur kuch nahi
S: lekin yeh tie toh break karna hoga .. right G ...warna staff tumhare aur MK ke bare mein baat karenge
T: S .... oh silly me ... Ma'am kyun na hum yeh tie kal break kare .... kyunki MK toh office mein toh nahi hain
S: hmm tum sahi keh rahi ho T.... toh G kal dekhenge ki kaun inportant hain ...
G: (confidently) ok

G , A and P leave ..
The three musketeers come to a shop where they give G to try on a few dresses and then finalize an Anarkali dress


Then they take her to a parlor where they give her curls on the lower part of her hair keeping the rest strait ( i hope u guys understand) .... the makeup is very simple but very elegant.

Now the scene moves to M's house where he is getting ready picks our an awesome suit


M reaches G's house in his black car .... M rings the bell and P opens the door....
G comes from slowly comes from the back .... her eyes are shown first and then she is slowly shown 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ( I hope u guys imagine better than i can write the description) ...



Well thats enough for now ....lets see what happens in the next episodes
Let me know how it was guys ...thanx 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃





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