FANFIC-A LOVE STORY (UPDATED!!) pt4, pg3 - Page 2

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And he slowly touches her hand then thanks her and leaves with a heavy heart. And geet is just left standing alone… not knowing what to do… should she not go to save her image or should she not care about others and listen to her heart and go with maan to show that she's not a cry baby and loves her job……. What to do???

Part 3

Maan, in his usual favorite black pant and shirt, reaches the hotel first. He met by the clients there and is taken to his seat.

M-"Geet, please tum aa jao… am getting so lonely here.. kaash tum yahan hoti… tumhari baatein sunte sunte waqt cut jaata hai… come on geet… should I call her.. no no, I'll seem desperate… WAIT A MINUTE!!! Yeh main kya soch raha hun?? Main geet ke liye itna kyun dimag kha raha hun??? she just my secretary and nothing else…"

And our dear maan is back in his angry mode and is just standing in a corner looking like a greek god…

Suddenly someone crashes into him…. The familiar feeling… he looks towards the other person to find that its none other than geet. He is delighted at her presence… and they share this cute eye lock where we all go BY GOD!... anyways, maan toh maan hai…

In his usual angry tone, shouts at geet

M-"tum kya andhi ho? Dekh ke nahi chal sakti? Geet, tum na hali-phirti disaster ho!! Kya hoshiarpur mein bhi tum aise gir-girke chalti thi??"

To this geet is all upset, she thinks "hai babaji, yeh galat hai.. maine aisa bhi kya kar diya ki yeh mujhpe chillane lage?? Galti ho gayi toh aise sabke saamne shout karma zaroori toh nahi na…."

Seeing her embarrassed expression, maan cools down and says " toh tum aa gayi. Good"

G- " sir, haan main aa gayi hun.. aur main Mumbai jaane ke liye bhi tayaar hun.. par sir, yeh jo aap mujhpe sabke saamne chillate ho toh bura lagta hai"

Saying this she turns around and walks off to the nearby table.. while our maan is left staring at geet who dressed in red… her dupatta wildy flying about and her open hair just shining under the lights, gently swaying…. His hear is now beating wildly.. he is excited that geet is going to come with him.. he comes to his senses and goes and sits opposite geet.

M-" toh miss geet, tumne apna iraada badal diya… thanks for deciding to come…"

G-"haan sir" still in an irritated tone.

M-" main kush hun ki tum logon ki baaton ko itna importance nahi dene waali"

G-"ji" she's not at all looking at him

M-"naraaz ho mujhse?"

Geet nods her head.. she looks so cute n innocents just like a small kid.

M-"Sorry, ab main tumpe public mein nahi chillaunga… par kabhi kabhi akele mein toh chilla sakta hun na?"

To this geet couldn't stop he laughter and maan too joins her.. he stops laughing in the middle and keeps staring at geet laughing and admires her smile….

AND AGAIN… maan comes back to his senses and says

M-"toh geet, tum saare files leke aayi ho na? wahan jaake I don't want any problems. Aur I hope tume sab contractors ke names and details ki 3 copies bana li ho, the Mumbai clients want one… aur haan hum sirf 2 din ke liye jaa rahe hain I hope tum 3 suitcases nahi lekar aayi ho…"

Geet thinks to herself" array kamaal hai.. abhi toh has rahe the aura b kaam ki baat karne lage.. yeh na bilkul unpredictable hain… thodi der kaam ke ilawa kuch baat bh kar sakte.." and out loud she says " kitne boring insaan bilkul puraane hindi filmo ki tarah jahaan kuch palle hi nahi padta"

M-"tumne kuch kaha abhi???"

G-"nahi toh sir, bilkul bhi nahi… sir mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.. main kuch khana order karma chati hoon… sir aap kya thapad lenge??"

M-"WHAT??"

G-"mera matlab kya aap kuch thanda lenge??"

M-"main apne liye order karta hum tum apne liye kar lena"

G-"good idea sir… very true"

M-" GEET… tum kya ek minute ke lye chup nahi reh sakti?"

G-"sorry sir"

In the next part its going to a part describing maan n geet's conversation during dinner and their dance together… also dear readers MAAN IS GOING TO GEET THAT LOOKS BEAUTIFUL in a way that you can just melt..

Hope this part was good enough

array kamaal hai.. abhi toh has rahe the aura b kaam ki baat karne lage.. yeh na bilkul unpredictable hain😉[ab geet itneeeee arse me tumhe itna to pata chal jana caheye] thodi der kaam ke ilawa kuch baat bh kar sakte.." and out loud she says " kitne boring insaan bilkul puraane hindi filmo ki tarah jahaan kuch palle hi nahi padta"😆😆😆😆

M-"tumne kuch kaha abhi??? lagta he maan ko ENT ki zarorat he sunae kum deta he kya geet itni zor se to bolti he😆

G-"nahi toh sir, bilkul bhi nahi' sir mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.. main kuch khana order karma chati hoon 😊 sir aap kya thapad lenge??"🤣 are geet yeh kya tum maan se ese kese baat kar sakti ho

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It was quite funny Aap thapad lenge

Maan was missing Geet agar us waqt kuch aur mangta toh wo bhi mil jata

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Part 4


M- geet, main ne kaha ki chup ho jao toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki TUM WAITER KE SAAMNE BHI CHUP RAHOGI... woh tumhare liye poori raat nahi rukhne nahi wala..

G- sorry sir...

M- mere liye no. 34 please.. aur tum geet?

geet is all confused and does not know what to order.. seeing her confused look maan asks the waiter to get the same dish for her as well.

G- thank you sir

M-kyun?

G- aapne mere liye bhi order kar di..

M- hmmm...

geet looks around the entire restraunt and sees people chatting in low voices, eating with spoons n forks and makes a face

M-ab aisi shakal banake kyun bethi ho?

G- nahi sir.. woh mujhe yeh jagah bohot ajeeb lag rahi hai

M-kya matlab??

G- main samjhati hoon.. woh dekhiye wahan, uss couple ko, koi smile nahi, baatein nahi.. aise lagte hain ki dono divorce karna chahte hai aur unhe divorce tab milega jab inko yahan zabardasti bithakar khana khanaa pade... aur woh dekhiye uss lady ko.. hass aisi rahi hai jaise kisi jaan pooche uske hothon ko keech raha ho.. lagta hain mann hi mann uske dost ko rahi hai.. aur woh uncle... muh toh unka khul nahi raha par pata nahi inka plate khali kaise ho raha hai..

maan cannot help but smile at all this.. geet's innocence was getting to him.. he regains his composure and says,

M- Geet, isiliye tum middle class log dhaba mein jate ho.. yeh 5 star hotel hai.. yahan pe high society ke log aate hain, yahan kahi rules and regulations hote hain.. yahan tak ki, baithne ka bhi ek tareeka hota hai.. tum yeh sab nahi samjhogi

G- aur main samjhna bhi nahi chahti.. agar sab high society log hassna na bhi chahte toh mujhe bhi nahi rehna inke beech..

By this time the dinner arrives and maan and geet finish it together.. in between geet does some silly thing but maan helps her out...

Client- arey maan sir, glad you came and miss geet aapko ko dekh ke acha laga.. chalo ab aap dono ne khana khatam kar diya toh please head towards the dance floor.. mana mat karna please, i saw you two dancing before also and you were amazing⭐️

Like this maaneet are forced onto the dance floor despite repeated refusal by them.
Once there... something overcomes maan and he pulls geet forward... a soft music is playing in the background and maan is starting to enjoy the warmth of geet's body against his😳... a slow passionate dance for maan while our pagli geet is unaware of maan intense gaze on her. she is busy looking around and making fun of people in hushed tones😛...

G- woh dekho sir.....

and by this time maan is so enchanted by her that he completely loses his self control. he pulls her towards him.. extremely close and slowly moves his hand up her back.. with his other hand he touches her hair and puts some behind her ear and whispers into her ear
M- geet, aaj tum bohot khubsoorat lag rahi ho...😳

after saying this he comes face to face with her and just stares at geet😳... Geet on the other hand is SHOCKED!!😲... from the time he pulled her closer to him till the time he whispered into her ear, she was taken aback.. she had never known maan to behave like this.. he was this strict boss and an angry young man for her... her dusht danav now seemed different.. with shocked and surprised eyes she looked at him and slowly pushes herself away... seeing geet pulling away from him maan comes back to his senses and realizes what he had just done...
M- yeh maine kya kiya??? kyun kiya???😕


Small part... hope its okay.. my college will be starting soon... so i dint have much time... please comment😊

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