FANFIC-A LOVE STORY (UPDATED!!) pt4, pg3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys, so finally i am going to write a fanfic on maaneet!... i hope you will like it... plz feel free to comment on anything and if u want any changes i'll surely incorporate it.. plz be a little soft with me as this is my first fanfic ever so i dont know much abt it... the first chapter is going to be bit tiring.. promise to improve soon


A Love Story

Characters:

Geet

Maan

Dev

Naintara

Dadimaa

Pinky

Sasha

Tasha

Aadi

New characters will be introduced when needed' And yes, all the characters are the same as in the show, same behaviour and personalities.

Now, am going to take off from the episode where they spend the night together. My version will start from what happens the next to Geet and Maan.

Hope u guys like it!

Part 1

Aadi, pinky and the two office attitude females, tasha n sasha, unlock the boardroom door to find geet and maan sleeping together' While aadi and pinky are trying to wake them up tasha takes a pic of the two sleeping.

Geet and maan wake up to find all eyes upon them. Maan doesn't care much about the situation but when he's sending everyone away, geet too leaves with a complete red face.

Maan,"isse kya hua?? Yeh kuch bina bataye kyun chali gayi? Kya isse nahi pata ki aaj clients aa rahe hain blueprints dekhne??" and he gets back into his angry mood.

Geet is just leaving the office when somebody grabs her hand and pullls her backwards. Puzzled, she turns around to find that its none other than maan." Tum kahan jaane ki soch rahi ho? Tumhe kya apne kaam ka koi tension nahi hai? Clients aadhe ghante mein aane waale hain aur tum kahin nahi jaogi."says maan in his usual angry way but all the while he's holding her hand.

Geet-"par sir'. Main toh' kal raat.. sab ne dekha.. toh main.. ghar.. who"

Maan-"chup!! Bilkul chup!.. just because sab ne hume dekha toh tum embaress ho gayi aur muh chupake ghar jaana chahti ho? Acha tum batao.. kya kal raat hum dono ke beech aisa kuch hua tha ki hum logon ko jawab dein?"

Geet looks down and shakes her head to say no.

Maan-"TOH TUM ITNA DARR KYUN RAHI HO? Jab kuch hua nahi toh kyun ghar jaa rahi ho. Ab 5 min I want you to go your cabin and get the files and come to the boardroom. Samajh gayi??"

Geet nods and he leaves'

Geet thinks,"maan sir kitne alag hain.. par inhe kya pata ki log kaisi kaisi baatein kareinge.. par kuch hua bhi toh nahi kal.. hai babaji!! Yeh kya! Who toh 5min bolke gaye hain aur nain abhi tak yehin hoon!! Arrey hattoooooo"

In the mean time

Sasha-"ab dekhna miss hoshiarpur' main tumhari aur mk ki choti is baat ko kitna aage badati hoon.. tum apni muh dikhane kki layak nahi rahogi ab" and then she forwards the picture to everyone in the office. But what she doesn't know is that aadi over hears this plan of hers.

Now geet comes back and finds everyone looking at her and whispering to each other. Maan at this moment comes out of his cabin and says "geet udhar kya dekh rahi ho? Main tumhe boardroom main aane ko kaha tha"

Geet-" yesssss sir' abhi aayi"

And she hurries towards her cbin to take the files but while doing so her dupatta comes between her legs and she slips'. But fortunately maan catches her before she falls' and they just keep staring at each other, geet eyes say how awkward she's feeling but maan's eyes show his confusion regarding geet'"why do I feel so close to her? Why am I concerned about her? Her skin.. oh god it feels so warm and soft'.."

plz do comment and tell me if i shud continue... i really want to have ur feedback... i hope u liked it 😊


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pickachu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely ff.Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey, do update soon, tht ws an n amazin part, doesnt seem tht u r writing sch a stuff fr ist tym.
gr8 goin👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing part....👍🏼

do continue!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2

And she hurries towards her cbin to take the files but while doing so her dupatta comes between her legs and she slips…. But fortunately maan catches her before she falls… and they just keep staring at each other, geet eyes say how awkward she's feeling but maan's eyes show his confusion regarding geet…"why do I feel so close to her? Why am I concerned about her? Her skin.. oh god it feels so warm and soft….."

They both come back to reality and they separate.. Maan goes towards the boardroom while geet goes inside her cabin.

Aadi- "geet.. geet… who mujhe kuch kehna tha"

Geet- "ji sir, kahiye"

Aadi-" geet who sasha ne… sasha… ne… picture.. mms…"

Geet-" sir aap kehna kya chahte hain?"

Sasha at that moment calls aadi and he just goes out of the office without being able to tell get about the picture message. Geet is left puzzled in her cabin. Knowing that she's getting late for the meeting she hurries to the conference room with all the files.

At the meeting:

Geet is explaining the complete design while maan is just staring at her. He remembers the night before and keeps sking himself as to why he wants to be closer to her… and that thought about him and geet together was killing him from within. "why did I think like that?? Why??"….

Geet- "maan sir,… maan sir??"

Maan comes back into reality to find that the meting is over.

Client- "mr. khurana, aapki miss geet badi kamaal ki hain!.. itna badiya design aur who bhi budget ke andar!!.. I must tell you mr maan, miss geet ko kabhi jaane mat dena.. she is an asset to your company"

Maan- "haan.. main bhi nahi chahta ki who mujhse se dur chale jaye"

Everyone just stares at him as to what is he saying. Geet is shocked.

Maan-"mera matlab hai ki she is a good employee"

With that everyone leaves after saying their usual "see you soon".. geet is picking up the files and maan stands at the doorway looking at her.

Geet- " sir kal raat jo aapne mere liye kiya uske liye thank you par sir ab se please mujhse dur rahiye"

Maan-" kya? Geet tum yeh kya keh rahi ho? Tum kya abhi bhi logon ki baton se darr rahi ho? Jis geet ko main jaanta hoon who toh aisi nahi hai"

Geet-"sir aap jo chahe soch sakte hain.. par main chahti hoon ki hum dono ek dusre se thoda dur hi rahein"
maan- "really? Par ab humare client ne humein dinner par bulaya hai…tum nahi aaogi?"

Geet- "nahi sir… aap jao.. main aapke kahin nahi aane wali"

Maan- "fine. Toh raho tum yahan.. aur aaj ke baad mere paas mat aana koi bhi problem lekar."

Geet "as u say sir".. both are now equally irritated. Geet because maan is not getting the point that office mein baatein chal rahi hain and maan because geet is not trying to understand that she should stop listening to others and start focusing on her work.

At geet's cabin:

People had been commenting a lot and she's upset.. "sir ne kyun kiya mere saath aisa?"

Just then she hears a noise from maan room and rushes in there.

Maan, due to his frustration over geet, had thrown a vase and a piece had poked his hand and blood was pouring out.. he then feels a familiar touch and turns to find that its geet and she had ripped her dupatta and was cleaning the wound. "she's beautiful"… he just stares at her and then says..

Maan-"geet, tum chahti ho na ki main tumhare paas na rahoon? Main 2 din ke liye Mumbai jaa raha hoon.. clients ne bulaya hai.. tumhe bhi aane ko kaha that par am sure tum nahi aaogi.. par tumhare tickets mere paas hain..aur jab tak main Mumbai nahi jaata tab tak who mere paas hi honge"

Geet and maan have a cute eyelock session

Maan-" clients ke saath dinner 7 baje ko hai at hotel kingston aur Mumbai ki flight 11 baje ko. Tum aana chahti ho toh aao.. aaogi toh acha hoga.. logon ki baat mat suno geet, tum galat nahi ho toh darne ki koi baat nahi"
geet-"main kahin nahi aane wali."

Maan-"okay. Toh stay here and sabko jaake eke k karke samjhati rehna ki tum galat nahi ho. Mujhe nahi pata tha kit um itni kamzoor ho. Mere jaane ke baad I hope kit um kush rahogi. Bas itna kehna chahunga ki main sirf tumhara khyaal rakhna chahta tha… tickets mere paas hi hongi.. I hope ki jaldi se meri baat samajh kar mere paas aaogi"

To this geet looks surprised

Maan-"mera matlab aaj tum dinner ke liye aaogi"

And he slowly touches her hand then thanks her and leaves with a heavy heart. And geet is just left standing alone… not knowing what to do… should she not go to save her image or should she not care about others and listen to her heart and go with maan to show that she's not a cry baby and loves her job……. What to do???

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hope u guys like it..... do comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice part.Waiting for the next part.Plzzz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice...👏

update sooN!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so heres the prob.. the CVs have already planeed the dinner on geet and my FF is, too, going the same direction coincidently... so it'll tk some time before i update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice updates
Pm me wenevr u update
Maneet gng to Mumbai yipeeeeeeee

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