Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago
congrates to myself i became a senior member.... 👏👏
thnk u guys.......its all because of u😆😃😃
chalo aaj ek to kaam to hui...😕
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nupur_sarkar

congrates to myself i became a senior member.... 👏👏

thnk u guys.......its all because of u😆😃😃
chalo aaj ek to kaam to hui...😕



And Wow....I just became an IF Dazzler today....more than 3000 posts!!👏👏👏👏 What a coincidence!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh i think i am so conservative with my posts i shall forever remain...a senior member..makes you feel like you are over the hill and all...

btw congrats to both of you.
Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oye...abs...ab hum ek jaisa sochne bhi lage hain..
tumhein aur mujhe..dono ko tamatar hi dikhe?



Hmm, sahi keh rahi ho!😆

Khurana boys ko bas NRI gals pasand aayi!

Dadi maa aaj kal India ki Indian girls toh NRI girls se kaheen zyada aage hain!!!! Dadi ne toh Maan ki vaat laga di saying she knows why he's trying to rush the wedding! Maan must have been so red!!😆
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



you are welcome...

aaj itna sab ulta hua..hai..hope ye ek cheez to theek ho..tum log mujhe maaroge to nahi na..

lekin kya karoon...my fingers just keep on typing...and i dont even know where these thoughts are coming from...

btw..Abs..yaar tum to badi literal ho...ek writer..ko..figurative kalam bhi nahi uthane deti ho...😛



Sachi mein main literal hoon? Main tumhe pareshaan toh nahin kar rahi na? Sorry 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nupur_sarkar

dont worry...woh duo bro's hain na.....



Mujhse bhi jitna hoga, main maddad karoongi (even though buddhiya calls me a firangi just cuz I grew in Canada!). Maan needs to enlighten Dadi on how I never had any bfs (until Maan came in the picture, and kept pursuing me at work in front of colleagues!😆).
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



arre hum sab alag alag tension mein hai.. mujhe...apne script ki..aur tum logon ko...apne apne character..ki..

ka tolee hai...



Bilkul sahi kaha tumne! Mujhe toh dadi Canadian Canadian keh kar tension de rahi hai!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Chapter 26
Maan and Vicky walked into the breakfast room to find Daadi waiting for them. It was a family tradition that they eat breakfast together whenever they were in India. So eight am saw both the brothers together in the room. They looked a bit weary after their late night but perked up when they saw Daadi smiling. So Dadi's a morning person! Mera toh subah subah kisi se bhi baat karne ka mann nahin hota, brain's still sleeping then!!!
Savitri Devi said, Aao! Beta! Kab aaye tum log? This morning? Kitna kaam karte ho dono. Bahut kaam hai kya?Haan, Dadimaa mere ghar par Maan ko kaafi tha... Aur heiraani ki baat, Vicky ko Nargis ke yahaan itna kaam ki raat ke 1 am wapas Khurana House aaye thei Devar ji!
Both of them look at each other and wonder what is happening. The breakfast room was located on the east side of the mansion so the sun's rays come straight in and brightens the room. This was the best room in the house because of the light and air that flowed in here especially in the morning. This was next to the mandir where both brothers had gone and paid their respects and now in the customary tradition, went and touched Daadi's feet. Kya sanskaar hain! Koi bhi keh sakta hai ki Maan wohin duffer hai jisne zabardasti mujhe Paris mein K*ss karne ki koshih kar raha tha? It was believed that every day must begin with first god's blessings and next the elder's. Vicky used to touch maan's feet as well but when they started the company together, Maan had stopped Vicky and asked him to give a hug in the morning to congeal their partnership. They were now equal.As long as the respect factor is there, that's what counts 😛
Daadi said Jeete raho! Baitho breakfast karte hain. She then rings the small bell on the table that brings in the breakfast. It was always a scrumptious affair. Daadi maintained that she wanted to know that her grandson at least ate one meal in front of her and that had to be a huge one. Yeh lo, main toh breakfast bhaagte bhaagta karti hoon. A muffin on the go! Waise generally skip hi karti hoon! Lagta hai ab yeh aadat badalni hogi!
Once the breakfast came, all of them started to eat, Daadi with knowledge that now she had both of them in front of her and boys were worried how they were going to broach the subject of Vicky and Nargis. In spite of discussing everything last night oh well this morning, they were at their wits end facing daadi.
Daadi ne unki mushkil aasaan kardi. After, finishing her juice and bowl of fruit, Daadi said Maan mujhe aapse itni laparwahi ki umeed nahi thi! Oh uh! Exclaimed Maan in his head and Vicky gave knowing smirk and shrug Bhai to gaya! Abhi itni khushi ho rahi hai, tumhari vaat bhi lagegi bacchu!
Maan said Ji Daadi? Mein samjha nahi? Daadi said. Tumne na Abolee ke gharwalon se meri baat karwayi aur shaadi ke announcement kar di. Apne khandan mein kuch riwayatein hain. Aap ne, unka bilkul khyal nahi rakkha? Mein society mein kya kahoongi, ki ek Canadian le aaya hai mera pota jo Indian origin ki hai bas. Hamein to pehle aapne jhatka diya tha French larki se, ab Canadian, aapko koi Indian nahi mili hamari bahu banana ke liye. Hay, Dadimaa aapke poton se zyada hindustani hoon main. Maana mera janam Canada mein hua. Maine apni zyada zindagi wohin beetaayi, par iska yeh matlab nahin ki mujhe apne sankaar, dharm, rasamon rivaaz nahin maloom. Agar eisa hota toh shayad main kabhi India aati hi nahin!
Maan dropped his head and Vicky was wishing that the breakfast room should open up and he go six feet under. How were they going to raise the subject of Nargis now. Haan, tabhi bahut khush ho rahe thei. Ab aayi baat samajh mein....
Maan on the other hand was thinking Daadi ko Chloe ke bare mein kya pata hai? He looked at Vicky kahin isne to chugli nahi ki thi. He shot daggers with his eyes at Vicky. Vicky not understanding gave a questioning frown in return.Dadi ko sab pata hai. Dadi Sherlock Holmes ki fan hain kya?😆
Daadi then said, Kya aapas mein ishaare kar rahein aap dono.? And both of them shifted uncomfortably in their chairs, breakfast forgotten. Maan mujhe Dadi ke saamne kabhi ishaara nahin karna. Tumhari Dadi buddhi zaroor huyi hain, par satthiya nahin gayi! Please unke saamne mujhe mat embarress karna!
Maan then replied, nahi Daadiji! Its not like that. Abolee ke father se meine baat ki hain. They knew about me and our family as Abolee works for us but aap theek keh rahi hain. Mujhe jyaada dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha. Mein unse aapki aaj sham ko baat karwata hoon. Abhi to wahan der ho gayee hai. Looking at his watch. Poor Maan, Dadi ne diya ek karara punch!
Beta! Mein samjhti hoon, Aap utawale kyon ho rahe ho; with a twinkle in her eyes 😲 Maan I repeat, don't ever do any ishaare to me in front of Dadi. I don't want to turn red like a tomato, par aapko hamari baat karwani chahiye. Larki ke mata pita kya sochenge? Ki larke ke ghar wale interested hi nahi hai is shaadi mein. Hamein bahu ko dhoom dhaam se lana hai. Aap unke aane ki tayaari kar dijiye. Aaj raat unse baat karke, unko yahan jald se jald bulana hai. Waise Dadi is right. Papa waise samjhe ki Dadi ki tabeeyat kaafi kharaab hai, isliye Maan ne baat nahin karaayi!
Maan says softly Ji Dadiji! Ek aur baat thi agar aap ijaazat dein to kahoon. He looks at Vicky and he gives a slight shake of his head, ke nahin abhi nahin'she is not in a good mood. Mera Maan, he's so respectful to everyone. Bas thoda gusse mein caveman jaisa act karta hai. It's ok, I'll manage! 😆😉
Phir kya ishaare chal rahe hain aap dono mein. Vicky do you have something to say. Aap waise bhi aaj kal ghar kam aur bahar jyaada rehte hain. Vicky colors, and bows his head, nahin Daadima! I who! I mean Bhai saab. Waah, kya bonding! Vicky jaa kar Vir ji ki maddad lo!
Kya kehna chahte ho Vicky, theek se kaho.
Daadima, mujhe ek larki pasand hai, he says with his eyes to the floor.
Kya? Aap ko bhi pyaar ho gaya. Yeh kamaal kaise hua bhala? She smiles. She knew Vicky had always told her mein kabhi shaadi nahi karoonga daadima, meine aapke saath hi rehoonga..aap hi meri sab kuch ho mein aapse shaadi karunga. This he had told her when he was all of seven and didn't know how to tie his pajamas well. the shaadi part had become a joke between them. She still teased him sometime when he was seen with some girlfriend of his. Girls always seem to be around him and he always had girls but she could make out that he was never serious about them. This was way too interesting. Dadimaa, aapke yeh do namune jaise poton ko pyaar ne jhuka diya hai!
Kya ab tum mujhe chor doge? She always had a jovial relation with Vicky. He was the playful one. Maan always knew how to behave and was very upright in his manners and demeanor. He always called her Daadiji and Vicky was the one who had given her so many names that she could laugh all day thinking about them. She carried an extra soft spot for this boy who had lost the sparkle for a few years after the incident and it had taken lot of care and understanding from her to bring it back. She knew he was a prankster and decided to play one on him now. Afterall, Mr. Chaalu ki Dadi hain. Mr. Chaalu ke chaalu genes kahaan se aaye, usko bhi DNA map ho gaya ab!
Nahi Daadima, mein aapko chorunga nahi? Mein aapko kaise chor sakta hoon, looking up, he was relieved to see daadima change her mood. In spite of the playfulness in their relationship, he was so scared of her that he hid behind the jokes he played with her. He knew she loved him but whenever he made mistakes he was always scared to go to her and tell and had asked Maan to help out. Just like today. He didn't have the audacity to go and tell daadima about Nargis. He was scared. He looked at maan then and asked him to pitch in with his eyes.Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya?
Woh mein, use US mein mila tha. Daadima then said. Kya? Ek aur phirang? Tum dono bhaiyon ko koi achchi seedi saadhi Indian larkiyan nahi mili. Aaj kal India ki Indian girls bhi NRI girls se kaafi kaafi advanced hain! Anyway ab batao uske baare mein.
Who daadiji, Maan butted in, Uska naam nargis sheikh hai. She is our corporate lawyer. Aapne shayad use office ke party mein last year dekha ho. Savitri was taken aback. Nargis, she didn't not recall meeting any one.
Achcha, to aapko pata hai kaun hai ko hamare Vicky ko bha gayee hai. Aap dono uski perwi ke liye aaye ho.Bechare Maan, Vir ji hone ki duty kar rahe hain, aur Vicky ko bachane ki puri koshish!
Daadiji, Achchi larki hai. She is very hard working and takes care of our legal issues expertly. She is half Indian and half American. Her father is from Hyderabad but settled in US since 45 years, where he went to study and married an American lady. Nargis is a very tall lady for an Indian. Daadi then remembered a very well groomed lady who didn't look Indian but was wearing salwar kameez at the party last year. She remembered her for two things, the dress and the height. She had even applauded on her thoughts of blending in with the Indian culture. The girl in question had been going to say something when someone had interrupted and she never got the chance to talk to her further.
She was a beautiful girl. Vicky ke liye theek rahegi, par pehle Vicky ko thora sabak sikhana hai, she thought and got up from her chair and went to the window. Chaalu Dadi! 🤣
She said. Vicky, kya uske parents ko pata hai woh ek hindu larke se pyar karti hain. Vicky looks at Maan and say with his eyes jaayeena'help pls'when Daadima says, Vicky! Meine aapse kuch poocha..maan jawab nahi denge. Dadi's right to be concerned on this. And ouch she is to the point, and Maan can't interfere!
Ji woh, nahi daadima! Woh baat karne waali hai, par mein aapse pehle baat karna chahta tha. Uh! She will talk to them today.Yeh couple sachi mein Vrush, sa kuch reverse gear mein karte hain!
To aap kya chahtein hain Vicky hi mein haan keh doon? Hamarein ghar mien ek muslim larki aayegi aur apni khandan ki baat hogi society mein aur mujhe logon ki baatein sunni padegi aur aap chahte hain ki mein haan kar doon? Well, sticky situation, but these rumors slowly go away, and if you don't pay attention, they'll die out!
Vicky again looks at Maan pleadingly. But when Maan shakes his head and nods at him to give the answer Vicky decides to try his tricks with Daadima. Maan's answer-"Vicky be a man and face the challenge, cuz agar maine aur kuch kaha toh bas meri hi shaamat hogi!" 😆
He goes to her and hugs her from behind putting his head on her shoulder, mama goose! One of the petnames he had given his daadima, please aap ek baar usse mil lo na phir aap jo kahengi mein who karoonga, promise. Jhoothe!
Achcha, baby goose, aaj mama goose yaad aayee hai, Matlabi she says and twitches his ears and turns to face him, Jab kuch chahiye to phuslata hai, teri daadima ko, warna, kya kar rahi hai daadi woh bhi pata nahi. She got you there buddy!
Arre Daadi, its not like that, you are my love forever, ye to woh Nargis peeche padi thi to meine socha ki, ab shaadi kar hi leta hoon usse and winks. Nargis, sun rahi hai na, kaisa dal-badlu hai! 😆
Badmash, daadi se jhooth bhi bolne laga hai'she laughs and says..ja usse lunch pe lekar aa aur haan Maan aap bhi Abolee ko lekar aao. Aaj hum sab is Vicky ka phaisla karenge. Abs hurry, make that carrot halwa for Dadi with lots of mewa!
With that she goes out of the breakfast room, patting a hand on both grandsons cheeks. They both heave a sigh of relief on hearing this and give a high five to each other and say together, baal baal bach gaye! Ek movie banani chahiye titled Dadi 420 starring Savitri Devi Khurana!

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Posted: 15 years ago
guys phir se mujhe congrates karo..6th time phir maine jeet li....(my fav ice-cream worked😛😛)
and pls pray 4 me ki aaj uss mr whatever😡😡 ki saath sahi salamat perform karlu..(haath to tor diya..kahi per na tut jaye😆😆)
or uski looks se distract na ho jau...😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nupur_sarkar

guys phir se mujhe congrates karo..6th time phir maine jeet li....(my fav ice-cream worked😛😛)

and pls pray 4 me ki aaj uss mr whatever😡😡 ki saath sahi salamat perform karlu..(haath to tor diya..kahi per na tut jaye😆😆)
or uski looks se distract na ho jau...😆😆



Congrats Champion!!!! 😊

Don't worry...You'll perform fine!!!!

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