'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

Maan was rude yaar

Liked the way Geet used her mind

Geet's dream was fab

Vivaan was really shweet yaar

Lets c wat Maan do to patofy Geet

Update soon longer than this😉

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Muskan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#172

Excellent!!!update... Keep up the great work...

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ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#173

Great and superb update. Can't wait for the next part. Vivan is like a cupid for Maneet.😆

Continue soon.

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#174

Cuteeeee Vivaan !!

Now Maan has to manofy Geet .... great !!!

Awesome part !... keep it up !

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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#175

Ayee ayee......new entry......Vivaan......cute little devil......lolz......hope to see this devil playing a cupid to Maneet 😉........Haww.....he mistook the CD for a frisbee and threw it outside the window......poor Geet.......she had to face the brunt......and Maan fired her.......aww.....she cried........hope Maan apologizes to her......coz it wasn't her mistake......lolz.......this was again a fabulous update.......you really have a way with words.......love it! Do continue soon!

Edited by Starry_night - 15 years ago

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

oh...i love the dream sequence...absolutely mushy..

fantastic stuff...i adore vivaan...will we see him again?

Maan and Geet why so much distance..they should be friends at least..but hell may be..there is too much sarcasm between them.

well i loved it...
waiting for the next update..
you see we are like scavengers...ek tukda mila nahi ki doosre ke liye...mooh phad ke baithe hain..

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taskutbimuff

@taskutbimuff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

Great yaar:)well done loved the intro of the kid in the story how cute he his:-)thanks for the pm.

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#178

LURVED VIVAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The start was a bit of a shocky I was like, "Did I miss the last chapter or something"? But it was good. Geet comparing Maan to Voldemort. Hahahaha! By the way, she dreams of Voldemort and not Edward Cullen? Funny!

But good chappy, waiting for more!

Edited by kawaii hime - 15 years ago

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: kawaii hime
LURVED VIVAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The start was a bit of a shocky I was like, "Did I miss the last chapter or something"? But it was good. Geet comparing Maan to Voldemort. Hahahaha! By the way, she dreams of Voldemort and not Edward Cullen? Funny!

But good chappy, waiting for more!

She drools over Cullen and dreams of Voldemort.....Seems like she loves dangers na?