'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

Frequent Posters

Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

hey awesome story line... enjoyed reading it jus like i enjoy watching geet... oh my .... plz continue

Quote

Misfit007

@misfit007

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

hey Pallo,

amazing story. i've been laughing my head off eversince i've read it. u r a brilliant writer. pls let me know whe u update. i don't want to mis any part of this story..

-ashi

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

morlen

@morlen

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

it was very sweet plz cont soon cant wait for the next part

Quote

shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

nice twist with the proposal.. and Maan and Geet thinking about the 'vaada'... waiting for more..

Quote

Hiba

@Hiba282

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

i just read all the story from the beggining!!!! its so awesome 😊 i loved it!!! plzz update soon 😊
loved the last update the most!!! proposal quess 😆

Quote

Hiba

@Hiba282

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

i just read all the story from the beggining!!!! its so awesome 😊 i loved it!!! plzz update soon 😊
loved the last update the most!!! proposal queen 😆

Quote

TANYA

@TANYA 18

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

wow tht was reli gud. luvd da proporsal queen idea. jz brilliant 👏. n thnkz 4 da pm bout da update very sweet of u. 😃

Quote

rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Awesome Pallo ... horlicks scene was to good !!!

Proposal Queen ?????? What a gem !!!

Keep it up !!!!

Quote

sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Hmmm...a good update.

MaanEet are becoming friendly, something so cut out from the show that they seemed like some made up characters but thats just me! The mock propasal was real funny. Very cheesy but funny. At first it DID seem like manthan was after Geet but it didn't come off as much of a shock when his real love came in the picture.

The jhagra was just good. Horlicks part was real funny! ye bandi kitna PEETI hai! The gender part was even hilarious!

Overall a good update. waiting for more and the story to progess.