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Chapter 11

" jhanvi?!" He says emotional

She smiles " why so surprise sagar, don't tell me you miss me that much" she says.

" h-how are you alive... I mean we thought you were dead"

Jhanvi laughs " I might as well be" she says before turning to the man in the mask. " what are we gonna do with him?"

" simple, we gonna let him"

" what?" This was not our plan" she says

" calm down, where just gonna let him go back, confess to killing you and transfer his father money into our account and then we leave."

Jhanvi says we can't just let him leave " your right, that's why I implanted a chip in his head" he says looking at sagar " you mention a word to anyone and BOOM! Your head will explode"

Sagar eyes widen, this made jhanvi smile " this is the best reaction I've gotten from you. I can't wait to see ganga face when you die" she says bitterly

" why?" He whispers " why would you do this, we gave you everything. Even I tried giving you the love you wanted. So why? Why do this"

She walk to him and bend down, then she grab his face heard. Not caring that her nails were digging his skin. " simple sagar, I was hurt. My heart became bitter when you kept choosing ganga over me. So You did this to me, not me and now you will suffer the same fate." She says shaking his face before letting go. She called some people and they came with bats, she told them to beat him until he bleeds, and they nod.

Sagar yells jhanvi name while she walk away. She smirks , before entering her car. The mask men got up as well and walk away, before he did he told sagar he will be back and for him to be alive. He could hear sagar scream from outside and he love it. " now I will move on to phase two of my plan"

Meanwhile, ganga was pacing around. She was worried just like madhvi. The police have search the license plate, but their was no match. She says their was a camera by the river, maybe they can access it. The police says its a very old camera, theirs no way it works. Palash told ganga he has to be at work before leaving, ganga nod. While walking out he made some calls and told them to replace that camera with a fake video of sagar. The person said OK before palash hang up.

" I won't let sagar free, he will rotten in jail. While ganga comes with me. Luckily I had erase the lisence plate of the system before they could search." He smirk just thinking about it.

While this was happening, he was unaware of someone listening. The person says so he was behind that, then he says I will deal with him after sagar is free.

The few hours that past felt like years to ganga. Why isn't this working. Why every lead I have disappear, she finished, she walk to the temple to pray and the priest asks her what's troubling her...she says the half of her soul is gone"

The priest told her nothing is ever gone, you just have to be patient and the answers you've been looking for will appear.in front of you. He finished, she was unaware of jhanvi passing by her with her face covered only showing her eyes. She says excuse me before going up the stairs, ganga turn to the voice, something was familiar about it. She thank the priest and ran after the voice, their she spotted her going up the stairs.
." HEY " she yells

Jhanvi turn to see ganga, worried, she quickly turn the other, but ganga block her. " excuse me, have we met " she asks

Jhanvi shook her head and told her to leave her. Ganga suspicious move away. And let her pass., she was sure she was someone she knows. She watch the girl get in the car, but stop when she saw the bracelet. " that bracelet, only jhanvi have that around the house" she says, before shaking her head. " could she be jhanvi? But if she is how is she alive?" She thought

She turn to leave, but something compelled her to turn back. Which she did, and boy was she surprise. The duppatt she had use to cover her face came off showing her face. The driver asks her where to and she told him. Ganga look at the car before running after it, jhanvi seeing her smirk before telling the driver he will get extra if he loose her. Ganga quickly called a taxi and followed the car, jhanvi cursed and told him to go faster. He told her he is, and she says his not.

She unbuckled her belt and move to the drive seat. The driver complained, but she held a gun to his head shutting him up. She took the wheel and drove, ganga seeing her passing cars told the driver to move fast, the driver says he will have to charge her and she says OK. Jhanvi seeing them gaining told the driver to take the wheel for a second and start shooting the car from the back.

The driver fall back, hearing the gun and told ganga he did not sign up for this. He stop the car and told her to leave, she said OK and paid him. Just then the cops arrive, they look at ganga and told her to come to the station with them. Once they reached , the inspector and judge asks her what she was thinking. Ganga says she was doing exactly what he told her... Which was to find sugar.

Palash frustrated says " that was dangerous ganga, you could have been injured or killed"

" yeah but I wasn't" she finished

The judge watch ganga while smiling, he says she is very determined. He told ganga he wants to speak to her and also the inspectors. Everyone curious wonder what's going on. When ganga reached the office they closed the door, " we checked the surveillance and this is what we saw" he says showing her the video of sagar and hash fighting. " no, that's not what happend. This is fake." She says

" it doesn't, the date is the same...ganga, the same time and date and place you told us" the inspector says

Ganga looks at them " I'm telling you he was kidnapped. He never faught yash. Someone changed the video, I'm telling you " she says

The judge listening to this told her, they will go to yash house and if his OK then they will have to investigate further. He looks out his door and saw palash hiding, he glares. " inspector please go and check, I need to speak to ganga"

" yes sir" he says

The judge told her who she was chasing and she said she saw someone that looks like jhanvi. She says she's positive its her. The judge was surprise, " are you sure ganga"

She nods, he told her they will check the video photage, once the inspector comes back. He also told her not to worry, they will find sagar. Ganga wipe her tears and thank him, he told her he believed her and that someone is doing all of this, he says its not just one person. They can't really trust anyone at this point.

Ganga was happy hearing this, she says she is sure jhanvi is behind this and also yash, but then she says jhanvi framed sagar and hash so maybe its not hash, maybe its someone else.

" who ever it is, we will have to figure it out. I will have to take back what I said in my office. It seems like this is a serious case that needs to be solve." He says

Ganga curious asks why he was helping her. He told her he live for justice and fight for justice . when he sees something unjust he will not sit quiet. Then says Besides you remind me of someone I use to know. Ganga says really, and he says yes, just then the inspector came in a hurry " what's going on inspector?"

The inspector looks away, then judge calls him again. He says yash is in the hospital " WHAT!!" They say

To be continued...
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Awesome update kanie !!!! seriouslyy awesome
hats off to u 👏
ur just making the audiences hook to ur story stick to it like a glue !!! 👏
OHH GODDD what a suspense !!
SUSPENSE AFTER SUSPENSE !!!! its so realistic and make the readers so very curious yaar
i'm literally dying for the next update 😳😳\
plz plzz update soooneerr verrryyy ssooonnn plzzz 😳😳 cant wait seriously !!
n omg janvi is still alive or is it someone else who wanted to take revenge of janvi so took janvi's form through plastic surgery?????? 😲😲
and who is that judge who is so very irked by palash n he is the only one who heard palash's truth by hiding behind him right????
whoever he is and whoever is the person which he is repeatedly reminded of becoz of gangaa i really cant wait for the suspense to disclose ❤️
and yes as usual i replied late coz of my studies obvio !!! but as we are becoming frnds so no sorry 😛😳
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Originally posted by: angelk1


What can I say ameesha, my city is not that pretty. Its a big area yes, but my city is small and we have a lot of people. Nothing special, but thanks for the comment and your wisdom at the end Lol, anyway I think we will be good friends in the future :)


Though its small it is pretty right? then what u can say? u have many things to describe!!!
dont be silly im sure maryland is pretty n u can describe many beautiful views !! 😳😳
and u think??? I'm damn sure we will become good friends in future may be best too !!! 😳😳❤️
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Originally posted by: Ammiey


Though its small it is pretty right? then what u can say? u have many things to describe!!!
dont be silly im sure maryland is pretty n u can describe many beautiful views !! 😳😳
and u think??? I'm damn sure we will become good friends in future may be best too !!! 😳😳❤️



That would be nice, I was wondering where u went Lol, your comments and the others help me a lot. Besides I like stories that hooks people, so I wanted it like that. It would have been to boring if jhanve was actually dead. So I made a twist, I will reveal everything soon, And their will be more twist later too.

Your right about the judge, his very suspicious right lol and let's not forget the guy in the mask that kidnaps sagar, who could it be. Anyway, Maryland is big I haven't really explore much of it, but the area I'm in is boring. One thing I like about it is you don't get a lot of natural disaster. Lastly, your trying to take your finals??
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Wow your updates just keep getting better and better 😊
Loving them :) plz keep updating. Awesome twists 👏
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Chapter 12

Yash mom was crying while holding his hand. She told them she knew sagar would do something to her son. Ganga looking at yash wrapped up in all bandages even his face. She wonder why this was happening. She believe yash is lying and his faking all of it. The inspector asks to speak to yash, but the mom says no, they have done enough.

Madhvi walk up to her and hug her, but she push her away. She told her she doesn't want to be hugged by the murderer mother , this hurt madhvi. NIRA told her not to say that and that this must be a misunderstanding because sagar wouldn't hurt or kill anyone.

" really then who could have done this to my son then" "please NIRA stop waisting our time trying to make excuse for sagar" yash father says

The judge told them all to calm down. He looks at ganga who was watching yash. Yash getting dizzy turn the other way. Their ganga sees something, she gasp getting everyone's attention. " ganga is everything alright?"

Ganga was about to say something, when yash, fell and His parents scream for the doctor. Yash continue to stare at ganga, reaching for her, but he soon lost consciousness. Ganga could hear yash mom cries and scream. The doctor says to take her out, but she refuses.

Meanwhile, jhanvi was angry. Not only did ganga found out about her, but sugar was injured a lot. " he won't be able to do much in this condition" she says

" I know that's why I send him to get treated. Once his able to talk I will get him" her partner says

Jhanvi bite her lip " still we need to watch him to make sure he doesn't say anything to anyone."

" don't worry I have someone whose watching him" the mask men says

Elsewhere, ganga and the judge went to the police station. She told them she needs to see the surveillance camera from earlier. The inspector told the head of the police to access it. Their they search for jhanvi. It wasn't long before they came to the part where her duppatt came of. " there, you see it. I told you she was alive" she says

The inspectors told the police to make a copy of it and post it as wanted person. He quickly left to print it out. Ganga looks at the judge " so does that mean sagar is free" she asks

" yes he is, now we need to capture who did this and kidnap sagar"

Ganga was extremely happy. The thought of sagar free made her heart leap. The judge told her he hasn't receive the divorce paper and it reached her house last week. ganga says maybe palash didn't get the paper. The judge in his head didn't think so, he thinks palash doesn't want to sign. He says if he doesn't then he will speak to him. Ganga told him she has to go to the hospital, she says something doesn't seem right.

The judge told her To go then.when she reached the hospital. She sat down, she wonder where sagar could be and who kidnapped him. She cried thinking of sagar, she wish he was with her. " ganga" she heard

She looks up to see no one, but she heard the voice again. She followed sagar voice until it led her to yash room. She was still in a daze, but she didn't care. " don't cry ganga, I will come back to you" he says whipping her tears. He turn and walk inside, ganga seeing this scream his name telling him to come back.

Yash hearing the scream move his hand. He kept having flashbacks since this afternoon. He wince when his head starts to pound loud in his ears. He could hear a nose in his head. Like a timer counting down. The sound was to much so he scream, ganga hearing the scream look to see yash holding his ears. She quickly call a doctor and they rush in.

Ganga wonders what's going on. The doctors examin yash and were shock. Ganga asks what's going on with him, and one of the nurse asks if she's related to him. She says yes, the doctor told them he has a bomb stuck in his head, close to his brain. Ganga gasp, she wondered how hash managed to get a bomb there. Just then she felt someone hand around her wrist. She look up and realize it was hash. He was holding on to her really hard. For some reason she kept thinking it was sagar, even earlier when she saw his eyes, all she could think of was sugar.

The doctors said they have to do a surgery to remove it, but it might damaged his brain or their might be a side affect.ganga heart hurt hearing the cry. The doctors took him to the emergency room, their they opperated on him. It wasn't long before yash family arrive. The doctor came out and explain everything. Yash mom starts crying once again, cursing them.

The next few day, yash was still asleep. Ganga made some visits. She keep telling him, she feels like he is sagar not yash. She hope he gets well soon so they can see if its really yash. She got up but stop when he says her name, she turn and rush to his side " sagar?!!" She says

When he didn't respond, she sadly got up and leave. More days pass and yash was starting to heal. When it was time for the bandage to be removed, everyone was holding their breath. Once it was completely gone ganga cried, she walk out and ran. She didn't know where but she just need sometime to think. She had been sure it was sagar that was wrapped up. She didn't know how it ended up being yash.

Meanwhile, sagar was once again tied up.jhanvi asks him if he had a good time with his family. He just stared at her, she asks him to speak and he told her where is his family.

" their safe"

Sagar looks at her " why am I tied up?"

Jhanvi laughs " are you stupid, we want you to give us your money. Besides didn't we tell you we were coming back for you." She says

" I don't remember that" he says

The mask men smirk " of course you wouldnt you were unconscious".

Sagar confuse wonder if this is a prank pull by his friends. " who are you people? And why exactly did you kidnap me?"

Jhanvi asks if he was joking, he cuts her off and says if they want money from him, he will give it. He says just let him go or his parents might get worried. Both jhanvi and her partner look at one another. Jhanvi says this is not good, if he lost his memory how will they move with their plan.

To be continued...
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this is AWESOME
love you dear
all hail angelk1
update rrreeeaaallyyy soon
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Chapter 13

Before I start, happy Ramadan to everyone. I hope you all are doing good this year.


Jhanvi told sagar not to play around or they will hurt him.sagar told them, he doesn't know who they are, and if they don't let him go his dad will not spare them. Jhanvi looks at her partner and he signal her to follow him. When they reached outside, the men remove his mask " what are we going to do now?" Jhanvi says

The men sighs " this has become a bigger problem for us. You promise once sagar was in jail I would get all your share of his money. And now this happens, how will he fit with our plan now"

Jhanvi told him to shut up, she says " you will get your money and sagar will punish. Let me think for a few minute" she say , her partner told her to hurry up because time was waisting. Jhanvi argued " how can I think with you talking"

Just then someone walk towards them, the person wasn't happy at all. " what is the hold up here. Why do I have to keep covering your tracks. First they found out your alive and then they had the lisence plate number for your car. You guys can't do anything right, so pathetic" he finished

Jhanvi told him their new dilama, and the men says its about time she stop hiding. They both scream, the men says " you will go out their, but not as jhanvi, but as her twin sister" they will not see it coming, by doing that sagar will admit he was the one to kill his wife, and he will be locked up."

Jhanvi look at her partner who smirk. He told them that's a brilliant idea, but we will need to make this into an A class acting. We need people that can vouch for her. The other guys agree. It wasn't long before they enter the warehouse, sagar was trying to get out. They all laugh seeing him. Jhanvi removes the duck tape and sagar asks what does she want and who exactly is she.

" my poor sagar you still haven't noticed. I am tanveer your wife's twin sister. The one you killed" she says shocking him

." what... Married?... Killed?... When" he asks

Jhanvi told him , its because of him her sister died. She told him she saw it happend, when he grab the knife and stab her.she says all she wants is justice for her sister. She told him, he had refuse to confess for his sin and also give her sister share to him. Sagar was overwhelmed, he couldn't remember any of this, every time he tried he gets pained. " and so you see sugar, I will only let you go if you agree to give me all of my sisters money and tell the officers the truth.

Meanwhile , ganga came in the house tierd. This jhanvi case was getting no where. She can't believe she was alive, I mean theirs no way its a look alike. While thinking she walk to her and palash room to change. She move to the desk to put her earring down when she notice a paper. Curious, she grabs it and look at it. " this is the divorce paper, why is it here" she asks

" because I haven't signed it" palash says coming inside.

" why haven't you?"

" because ganga I believe we can make it work. You don't need to separate from me because of that" he says walking towards her.

Ganga bit her lip " theirs no love from my end palash, my heart only belongs to sagar"

Palash knit his brow " you told my mother you love me at the hospital" he says

Ganga surprise asks how did he know that. And he told her it wasn't important. She says " I did tell your mom that, I wasn't lying. I love you like a friend. I don't want anything to happen to you, but I can't live in a lie. " she says

Getting angry grab her hand not to gently " you think my love is a lie...hmm... I love you since the moment I met you. I wouldn't lie about that. You could have easily rejected my offer to marry me, but you didn't... And now you want to divorce me" he says

Ganga wince, she told him he was hurting her, but he didn't care " listen palash, I only accepted because of sagar. If he make me promise to marry you then I would have still been a widow longing for his love." She finished

Palash hearing this was definetly upset " so you marry me because of him, you ruined my mother happyness because of your selfishness" he says letting her go

" pasha listen" she says

He shook his head " no, you listen. You ruined my life because of sagar , now see how I ruin yours today" he says grabbing the divorce paper and ripping it up. He told her he won't ever let her go. He said she will always stay by his side. He won't let her go to sagar that's a promise. Ganga told him not to do this, but he didn't listen. He cut his thumb making blood come out, then he walk near ganga. Ganga says no, but he grab her hand and puts the blood in the middle of her hair. He told her, this is a promise to her, he won't ever let her go. She will be his forever.

He finally let her go and walk out. Ganga sat on the floor crying. She really wish her dad was with her and sagar. But no one was their in the room, just her. She cried while falling on the floor. She wished things were different , and weren't complicated. She touch her hair to feel fresh blood, disgust she wiped it away trying to remove everything that remind her of what palash did.

Few hours later while ganga was asleep, she got a call from pulk. He told her to cone to their house quick. She had asksmed him why and he said one word sagar. Ganga heart race, she quickly got up and wiped her face, her heart start beating and of course ganga theme song played. She smile and ran to the door. She tried open it, but it was locked. She tried again , but nothing. She knocked calling for someone , but their were no response. Palash downstairs writing something, he told his mom who was serving him tea not to open the door. She look up the stairs worried.

Meanwhile the family look at sagar, they couldn't believe it. Dadi walk up to him and hug him. Soon followed by everything else. Pulk looks at the door, wondering where ganga was. He hope she get their soon.

To be continued...
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 14

Ganga sat in the dark alone, her had was down while crying. She wonder what sagar is doing and if he's thinking about her. She look up when she saw sagar room light coming on. Getting up she watches him through the window calling someone. Happy she raise her hand to call him, but stopped when she saw him closing the window.

She sadly look at the picture frame of the family, before going back to sit. Palash mom knocked on the door asking if she was alright, ganga runs to the door begging her to open the door, but every time she tried Palash would stop her.Palash mom mentally apologize before walking away.

The next day, ganga in the room heard police barging in their house. She could hear Palash mom yelling and the police searching until they reached her room. They unlocked the door and ganga got up. The inspector asks her why she was locked in. She hesitately says Palash, the inspecter. Told her not to worry now, since hes being arrested this ssurprise ganga. she asks why, and the inspecter told her that he tempered with evidence, and was working with cash and jhanvi to get sagar in jail.

Ganga surprise, walk down stairs with him. Their she saw Palash, handcuff, demanding to be free, angry she walk up to him and slap him, " you are despicable " she says " I can't believe you would plot against sagar"

Palash glares at her and chuckle " if you think, you will be with your lovely sagar you are wrong. You will never be with him now" he says,

" now?" " what do you mean by that Palash?" She asks worried, but the police push him and took him away. Ganga now outside, kept demanding he tell her, but he just smile and got in. Palash mom was on the other side crying, saying he will be free, she will find good lawyer for him. Palash told his mom not to waist her time, and for her to leave and find somewhere else to live. He told her he has a lot of money save up and to use it.

The car starts to leave, and ganga panicked asking him to tell her, what they did to sagar. She look at sagar house before running there, worried was clearly on her mind. She barge in to the house, but stop to see sagar in white, and the monks pouring water over him. They remove his watch and anything that had colors. Ganga could hear kanta dadi crying telling him to stop. But he ignored her, Pulk seeing ganga told her only she can stop him.

Ganga asks what's going on, and pulk told her everything after sagar came home. He told her, sagar got proof on jhanvi and hash and also Palash, it was a recorder. He gave it to the inspecters. And they arrested them earlier. Ganga smile hearing that, pulk says " but after words, he came to us telling us, why we didn't tell him his wife commited Suicide. We we're all confuse, he told us he want no one, but his wife jhanvi. He says she's his heart. And now he will respect her by removing colors from himself, he says that way he won't marry anyone, just like how dadi disgrace her, by not marrying because she was widow.

Ganga, shock told pulk that wasn't jhanvi, but her. Why is does he think it's jhanvi. Pulk told her he knows, he told her only she can stop him. Madhvi Second that, she beg her to stop sagar from ruining his life before it was to late, ganga told her not to worry, she will do it. Ganga walk up to sagar while he was praying. She calls him, making him open his eyes. " what are you doing? Why aare you hurting your family like this. cant you see they don't want this for you. Even I don't want you to live this way, you will be miserable." She finished

Sagar, stops the monk and got up. The family sigh with relief, he stops in front of ganga and stare at her " I sagar, will remove all colors from my life, to respect my dead wife. I won't betray her, I love her so much." He , says, he look over at his mom and dadi, he says "you guys made so much problem, over my wife because she was a widow, but how does it feel when the tables are turned"

His dad told him not to act like this,and stop this drama. Sagar told him, he will do what ever he wants with or without his concent. Matter fact he will announce it to the whole town so they will now know that the son of their greatest judge is now a widow. Ganga protested telling him to stop and listen to her, this made sagar upset, " why should I? And who are you anyway?" He asks

Surprise by the question, ganga told him he doesn't mean that. He just stares at her. " are you a friend of the family? Or jhanvi relative?" He says

Ganga heart was getting heavy " what are you saying sagar, it's me ganga, your ganga "

" I don't know you, or have I had a relation with you for you to say your mind." The family shock, stood their to surprise to speak, ganga fell on the floor while sagar turn to walk back to the chair. She watch as they pour water and chant some things, ganga says this is worse then us being separated. My heart is in pain because of you. Why do you keep testing our love ramji, she says why? That was the last thing she said before fainting.

Everyone scream for her, while sagar looks on.

Could this be ramji final test for the two lovers, will their love finally start fresh after all theyve been through. One shatter by the thought of not being known, while the other determand to make amand with his lover, without knowing who his lover is. what a mess this has become.

To be continued...

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