Unconditional love; SaGa FF chapter 15

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Summary: after finding janvi almost killing herself, sagar decides to accept gangas request, leading to gangas decision to marry palash. But things are not always what it seems and destiny will once again play a cruel trick on the once lovers.


Index

Chapter 1; page 2
Chapter 2; on page 2
Chapter 3; on page 2
Chapter 4; on page 2
Chapter 5; on page 3
Chapter 6; on page 4
Chapter 7; on page 5
Chapter 8; on page 6
Chapter 9; pn page 7
Chapter 10; on page 8
Chapter 11; on page 9
Chapter 13; on page 10
Chapter 14; on page 10
Chapter 15; on page 10
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Prologue

Sagar had thought about this many times in his head. This is the right thing to do, ganga won't have to suffer anymore. He watch as everyone turn their heads when ganga walks in to sit down. He stood up seeing ganga in such a beautiful sari. To him ganga will always be the one to make his heart beat. Just when she was about to pass him, they had an eye lock. Their was so much emotion their, but it was quickly gone when ganga focus on palash.

He quickly compose himself. Yes that's right, I'm happy for her. If ganga is happy I am too. He sat down and jhanvi smiling whispers something to him. " don't they look so good together" she says, sagar simply smile and nod. His whole family came to the event, they were happy for her and hope for the best. It wasn't long before they both said yes and they went around seven time. During the seventh round both ganga and sagar felt like their soul shattering, their once connection was gone.

Now as a new women and wife, ganga is no longer sagars, she is palash. Ganga as well felt it, the connection gone. A tear roll down her eyes while her new mother in law hug her. She looks at sagar to see his back turn and walking away. Her soul cried for him, to turn around and smile , but nothing. Jhanvi seeing this, follows her husband. She was happy now ganga will stay out of her way for good. She knew gangs won't be so cheap as to have an affair. She smile before making some plans.

NIRA smile at gangs and told her he is very happy to see her happy. He told her, they had got on the wrong foot, but today he would like to apologize and say you have made me very proud. Ganga with tears smile. She thank him for everything and took his blessing. Madhvi was at the back talking to kanta dadi. They were both relieve to see that finally, gangs will stay away from sagar. Madhvi says now they won't have to worry about anything, and that she's happy that things will go right for both of them.

Kanta dadi was still worry.she doesn't think so, she thinks gangs is unstoppable, she will come back to sagar. Madhvi ressures her that she won't. She told dadi to come with her, but she refuse. Madhvi walk to where NIRA was and smile at ganga. She congrats her and told palash to watch over her. He agrees, he told madhvi ganga is a free spirit, he can try, but she will always do what she wants because he likes her that way.

Madhvi smiles, ganga just stare at her before finally decide to take her blessing. Everything went well, two souls broken, one tries to heal itself with another while the other shatters into nothing. Both were unaware of ganesha statue behind sagar, watching not only him, but ganga as well.

What does this mean to our two lovers, seems like a new beginning will start for them and maybe love?, who knows. Until next time, goodbye :)


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wow... awesome prologue... do continue soon pls... 😊
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Originally posted by: Mifra_14

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wow... awesome prologue... do continue soon pls... 😊


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Chapter 1

Sagar was having trouble, fixing his tie. When ganga showed up laughing. " your much older now, and you still can't tie your tie" she teased. Sagar blushed out of embarrassment, he told ganga he prefer when she comes and dress him. She playfully smacks him and told him to come down stairs. He watch as she leaves before fixing his hair.

He walks downstairs to see, his family all seating down. Enjoying their food. NIRA told him to hurry up or he'll be late " OK OK I'm coming" he says , he search for ganga and saw her bringing his suit case. " I'm sure you will win today's case", sagar smile, but that soon turn to a frown when he saw jhanvi coming. In his mind he wonder if he hallucinated ganga.

He put on a fake smile before thanking her, than he ate. Jhanvi was about to feed him when he quickly got up " I have to leave now, I want to look over the files for the case" NIRA laughs he told him to go than. Once he left madhvi told jhanvi to start doing house work. Jhanvi frown, she told them she's tired after making breakfast. She needs to rest, this did not sit well with madhvi. She told her to go ahead than.

Kanta scuff " that girl she's as lazy as a panda. Shes the dil in this house, but she's acting like a spoil child"

" she just needs to rest, I'm sure she will be the perfect daughter in law"

Outside, sagar waits for the car to come. While waiting he saw palash and ganga coming outside. He could hear their conversation. " you sure you want me to leave, I can stay with you" he says worried

" no, I don't want you to skip on work. Besides its just a flu I'm not dying" she says

He sigh " your right, I'm just worried you might collapse again"

His mom seeing him worried came to him " look at you both being lovey dovey, if you keep this up, I will have a grandchild very soon." When she said this both couple became tense. Sugar hearing this look away, his fist was shaking but he quickly got over it. Jhanvi seeing sagar outside came to him. She asks if everything was alright. Sagar told her she should be inside helping his mom. She told him, his mom is doing fine, besides dadi is with her.

Sagar frown " you can't expect them to do your work for you" he says

Jhanvi frown " my work? My work is to be a good wife to you. Not become a maid for your parents" she says rolling her eyes

Hearing this sagar raised his voice, grabbing ganga attention. " my parents love you, and their getting old. Its not their job to take care of us, you should already know this."

" what about me, who will take care of me?" She says
" jhanvi I'm not going to have this with you" he says seeing his car stopping. He look at her one last time, before looking at ganga. He got in and told the driver to go. When he left jhanvi, bit her lip out of anger, she look to see ganga and palash watching them.

She turn and walk inside. Palash looks at ganga " I wonder what that was about" he says, ganga wonders the same, palash says his good bye and drove away. His mom drags her to the house to rest, but she refuse saying she wants to help her. She smiles and pressures her everything is fine.

Giving up, ganga goes upstairs. When she reached her bed room she tried to sleep, but the sun light was to bright. She walk to the window to close the shade when she saw yash climbing jhanvi window. " what is he doing their?" She mumbles

She watch as yash injects khanvi with something. Gasping ganga duck when she saw them looking around. What is yash doing? Is jhanvi sick? Could that be the reason he inject her? If she was why didn't she tell sagar or the family?... Maybe she's not sick, so than what was it he injected in her? She thought

To be continued...

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Chapter 2

Ganga couldn't sleep with all the question she had in her head. She tried calling sagar, but he didn't answer. So she waited for him. As night fall sagar came home, when she saw him lock his car she called him. " sagar!!" She says

Turning to face her, sugar became worried " what's wrong gangs? Did something happened" he says, ganga bit her lip " sagar... I think theirs something wrong with jhanvi"

" what!?... Did something happen to her"

" no but I think she's sick" she says

Sagar worried left gangs and walk in the house. He ask his mom where jhanvi and she said upstairs. Running upstairs, urgently he opened the door to see her perfectly fine. Combing her hair, sagar sigh with relief. He ignored her confuse look and put his hand on her forehead " what's going on!!?"

" kuchh bhee to nahin" , he turned around confused, wondering why ganga thought she was sick. Jhanvi look at the text from yash. It says asks sagar for more money. Frustrated she close her phone. " sagar?"

"Hmm"

" I want to buy something, but I don't have anymore money" she says

" I told you since were married now, what's mine is yours" he says making her happy.

The following day jhanvi started hallunicating again. She started seeing ganga and madhvi taunting her.

" you will never be like our ganga" madhvi says

Gangs smile " all this belongs to me, it won't be long before I take it back from you" she says before coming closer and whisper in her ears " and sagar too" she smirk.

Jhanvi shook her head screaming no, she search for anything on the floor and found her heel. She aimed the back of the shoe towards them saying she will kill her before she takes her sugar. Ganga laughs in her face " you can't hurt a fly" she says, madhvi as well taunts her " ganga is not weak unlike you, she will always be honest and couragou s unlike you. That's why she match sagar" she says

Jhanvi had enough scream and throw her shoe , which hit the wall. " I..I..won't let you gget my husband" she says pointing fingers " y-you stay away from him, you hear me" while talking to herself she ignored the knocks it wasn't long before madhvi walk in. She was surprise to see such a mess. She asks if she was alright and was about to touch her shoulder when she slapped it away from touching her.

Shock madhvi asks jhanvi why she did that. Jhanvi ignores her and step out " jhanvi??... Answer me" she says coming down the stairs when they reached the bottom she stopped " you are so annoying, I said leave me. I know you and ganga are playing me and mocking me" she says

Madhvi whispers ganga name in confusion. " I blame you for this, my suffering" she says

" JHANVI!!"" NIRA says shouting " enough, what has gotten into you" he says jhanvi frown before laughing. She walk to the kitchen ignoring the two. Dadi sitting on the couch was trying to reach something, but her back was in pain. When she saw jhanvi passing by she calls her name asking her to bring ointment for her. Jhanvi told her no one is her maid, she needs to get it herself. " what??" Dadi says speechless

The next few days were the same without sagar knowing. Jhanvi would inject herself with drug and would continue to insult the family. One day when her drug finished, she calls yash. Yash taunts her , calling her a drug addict. He gave her new injection, making her feel dizzy. While walking in the house the family refuse to speak to her.

She ignores them and walk to her room. Well more like stumbling. When she open her room, she saw sagar and ganga hugging " what is this, get away from my husband" she screams

" enough jhanvi, ganga is my wife now. You will get the divorce paper tomorrow." He says jhanvi shook her head

" no, I won't let her have you. I won't" she says grabbing a neard knives. She ran towards ganga, and stab her. But was surprise to see sagar bleeding instead. Shock she called his name, shouting. " look what you have done. You murderer" ganga says

Jhanvi backs up" no...it wasn't meant for him. You did this" she accused. Gang a laughs and told her she wasn't the one holding the knives. She told her, it won't be long before the police comes and arrest her for good. " you will rotten in jail for ever" she says

She watch as ganga grab the knife and stab herself " now me and sagar will be together in heaven" she says, Jhanvi refuse to let it happen . She walk to their body and grab the knife than she cut her wrist. Laying besides sagar she starts to cry " I won't let her have him, I won't" she whispers before closing her eyes.

Yash came in to give jhanvi more drugs, when he saw her dead. Panicking he left the suicide note next to her and leave.this was how sagar found her. On the floor, eyes close and dead. " JHANVI!!" He screams running to her. He pull her closer to him, calling her over and over, but she didn't wake up. Sagar cried like a new born baby. " why?" He says rocking her body " how did this happens?"

He didn't care that blood was on his shirt and hands, he was just upset. He look around and found a letter, but the knife was holding it. He unconsciously grab the knife and remove it from the letter, than he reads it. Tears fell from his eyes until it was all dry. Madhvi hearing sagar cries came in the room and saw blood " what happen sugar, are you hurt? Who did this?" She says sagar says nothing he was frozen in place.
.madhvi calls NIRA who than calls an ambulance. The whole town became curious when the police arrive.

Palash coming from work wonders what happen. When he enters he sees ganga putting the food on the table. His mom asks him why they were so many polices outside. He says they came from sagar house, this surprise ganga. She mumbles sagar name and quickly made herself out, ignoring palash call. Her heart was hurting, and pounding very hard. She prays nothing bad happend to sugar.

While searching in the crowd she heard someone says a family member died. This increases her worry, " Sagar!!" She screams she pushed her way out of the crowd and was about to step inside, when the police asks if she was family. She sadly stops, NIRA seeing her says she is. He told her to go to sagar, he needs her now. She nod, running up the stairs ganga recall their childhood. It all ended when she walks in his room.

There, sagar was sitting down frozen. He looks out of it, ganga calls his name, but he didn't budge. It wasn't until the third time that he turn to face her. He sadly looks at her, before shaking. Ganga fell on her knees and hug him. " ganga, its all my fault" he says " I did this to her, I should have treated her better. Now look...look what has happens" he says " she was my friend, someone special. She should be here instead of me, because I am the worse."

Ganga shook her head " no your not" she says

" don't try to defend me ganga, I ruin both of your lives... Especially jhanvi. I'm the worse husband in the world, this is my punishment" he says whimping " ganga...why can't the tear fall...hmm...I tried to make it fall so many times, but it won't." He chuckles " I guess they hate me as well" he says

" sssh sagar, no one hates you. I'm here and so is your family, if these tears won't fall then give ganga your pain. I will moan and cry in your place" she says looking at him now with tears. Sagar told her to spare him, he doesn't deserve her pity, but ganga refuse. She told him, he will always have her attention, he can think of it as pity, but she doesn't care.

He held her tight embracing the warmth she was giving him. Both heart beats in the darkest of the night. Neither say a word, only the sound of whimping was heard. They let it out until their body became weak and their eye lid becomes heavy. That's how NIRA saw them, but he says nothing and walk away.

To be continued...

The next few chapters will deal with the case and sagar as a widow. How different it would be compare to ganga. I honestly don't know much about Indian culture, but I will try to do something about him being a male widow.




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Chapter 3

After the little ceremony, sagar stood their watching the pot full of dust. It wasn't long before sahil came and told him it was time to let it go. They all were ready to go when the police came, confuse NIRA asks them what he can do for them. The head of the police hits his stick on his hand while looking at them " I am here to arrest sugar" he says

" what...why?" Madhvi says

The officer walk towards sagar " turns out your son prints were on the evidence we found and also the letter confirmed it was him" he finished

Nira told them how can that be, when jhanvi committed the suicide. The officer shook his head, " baste on what we gathered, this was no suicide. Their were to much blood on the floor to be suicide. And the victim, look like she was stabbed twice. " so you just assumed it was my son" he says

" his finger prints were on the knife"

Sagar still confuse asks what letter. The officer took out the letter and read it. Sagar was shock " this is not the letter jhanvi wrote to me, the letter I have it" he says

" show us than", sagar told then to follow him, their he search for the letter but he couldn't find it. " I was sure it was in this room" he says unaware of yash hiding in his closet.

" you have no proof to defend yourself. Sagar, you are under arrest for murdering your wife jhanvi and buying her drugs" he says

" NO!!" Madhvi scream

The police handcuffs sagar and drag him outside. The family followed him, ganga calling sagar name, telling him that she will prove him innocent. While the car leaves ganga runs after it. Sagar turn and look at gangs crying, this brought back memories of their childhood, when he was leaving over seas. " GANGA!" He screams, when she fell. She looks up, her heart aching. She tried to stand up and run after him, but palash held her back. She looks at him and he shook his head " we will get sagar back, don't you worry" he says sadly

She looks at the road one last time before sadly nodding. Dadi was on the floor crying so was madhvi. NIRA on the other hand was making calls, after hanging up he told everyone that he will take sagar case. He told them he won't spare who tried to ruin them. Palash came in with ganga. He told them he will take the case. Madhvi told him they can't let him do that, because they don't want to burden him.

Palash denies it " don't worry, sagar is my friend. Besides gangs will help me too since she knows sagar more." He says

NIRA thought about it, before agreeing.

It was the day of the hearing. Everyone was nervous. They brought sagar in and walk to the front, ganga heart beats when she made eye contact with him. To her it felt like years, she ressure herself and focus. Jhanvi dad lawyer read the case before starting to speak. " your owner, jhanvi was a smart girl, trying to become a lawyer, she never did drugs or hang with any bad influence, until she met sagar.

Sagar neglected her so much that she went into depression. This leading to drugs as her comfort" he says now showing her medical result after they look through her record. NIRA and sagar sadly look guilty. " that's not all your honor, baste on our record of money transfer, we can infer that sagar was aware of jhanvi doing drugs. Why else did he continue to let her buy it, after knowing what it does"

" OBJECTION!!" Sagar says standing up

The judge told him to be quiet. Sagar bold his fist in anger, but he quickly calm down when he looks at gangs. " anyway, I would like to bring my first witness to the stand. Mr sahil" he says surprising them. Pulk asks why he was doing this " we are friends, yes, but I can't overlooked the fact that jhanvi was my sister" he says to them before walking to the stand and sit down.

" sahil, explain to us how was sagar like over seas? Did he behave any other way" he says

Sahil looks at sagar before speaking " sagar was very in love with jhanvi and he would also have crazy parties with only close friends. Nothing really has change about him" he says

" you say he was in love with jhanvi, am I correct"

" yes" he says

" what changed? You just told us that nothing has changed about sagar, but than you say he was in love with jhanvi. So wouldn't that means something did change about sugar" he says making sahil hesitate.

Sahil looks at sagar who was looking sternly at the lawyer. He sigh " his heart changed" he says

" elaborate for us"

" when we came back, and he met ganga something changed. He was very upset and sad half of the time"

The lawyer nod " and why is that" he says

" I don't really know" he says

" that will be all your honor" he says

It wasn't long before palash came to the stand " your honor I would like to question sahil once more" he says the judge gave him permission " sahil, you said sagar changed after meeting ganga, so tell me how did your sister react to seeing gangs? Did she behave in some kind of way" he says

Sahil remember jhanvi getting frustrated and weird when he told her she should come with him. He nod his head " yes, my sister was jealous of their relationship. She thought ganga might take sagar away from her" he says

Madhvi glares at ganga, but soon paid attention. " did she do anything out of anger or jealousy" he says

Sail thought about it " I don't really know. She usually smiles around the family" he says

Palash looks at the judge " see your owner I've had a client who would smile all the time, hiding how she feels behind that smile. What if that's exactly what jhanvi did. What if that's why the family weren't aware of her depression or the fact that she was using drugs." He says

Jhanvi dad yells " what are you implying... That my daughter has a personality disorder" he says

" no, these are just what ifs " he looks at the Judge before saying " I believe that instead of confronting her problems, she decides to take the easier way out to release her stress.. Drugs" " who do we know is convicted of selling drugs.. . non other than jhanvi father" he says shocking the jurry

Whispers could be heard all around, the judge told them to shush. He said they will take a break and come back. Palash sat down and whipped his forehead. Ganga told him he did well, so did NIRA. Madhvi walk towards sagar and touch his shoulder " we will get you out. Don't worry"

Sagar loom at her before hugging her. Dadi came soon after and hug him. It wasn't long before the next hearing start. This time jhanvi lawyer was on the case " I would like to call up kanta dadi" he says

" he can't do that" pulk says looking at his dad

" unfortunately he can" he whispers

Dadi surprise got up and walk to the bench. She prayed before looking at the lawyer " dadi, can I call you that" he says

" go ahead"

" alright, like sahil said earlier, jhanvi was jealous of ganga. Was their any implication that would have made her think that way" he says

" ganga... She was a free spirit. She does what ever she please, her and sagar were childhood friend s. They have this special bond" she finished

" special bond? Like what?"

Madhvi froze so did sagar and ganga. NIRA on the other hand looked confuse. " they are considered soulmate" she finished

" how can one be soulmate. I've heard of people getting married interlock their soul with their partner, but what could have made sagar and ganga" he says turning to her " soulmates"

Dadi staid quiet " unless, they were married. I mean baste on what I gathered about gangA she was a child widow. At such a young age.so its not common for her to start having feelings for someone. Am I right" he says making the crowd start to whisper

" objection your honer" palash says

" where are you taking this" the judge said

" all I'm saying is what if jhanvi found out about the love ganga has for her bf and she felt threaten by it. After all dadi said they had a special bond, that could only means they were already married and that it was one sided from ganga part"

Ganga refuse to put her head down. When she heard people mumble things like " how can a widow marry for the second time at a young age? And she is a disgrace. Sagar looks at ganga he wish he could comfort her, but he could only watch as palash held her hand and caressing it.

Palash let her hand go and stood up " dadi, was sagar marriage forced or did they both concent to it?"

" they both came in hand in hand, and sagar says he went and married her legally"

" without the family concent?"

"Yes"

" and why is that?" He asks making her tense

" we...we were to worked up by the fact that he married ganga. He wanted to show us how much pain he was in so he married ganga."

" by doing that , I believe janvi became even more jealous. And felt threaten. Why, because she will always be sagar second choice. This your honor is another dark truth that led to her depression. Usually when someone get like this, they lashout or do something to remove the pain. Jhanvi father is to smart to let his daughter involve in his drug business, that means someone else must have gave it to her. Someone she can trust to get her more, someone that can easily sneak in and sneak out without getting caught. Maybe a family member" he says

" objection your honor" the lawyer says

Yash in his seat nervously gulp. He thinks palash is very smart. He needs to think smart, he quickly text the lawyer before acting like nothing was wrong. The lawyer decides to speak " is it true that because of ganga the family was split?"

" yes" madhvi says

" splitting family and trying to steal another women men. I would think that ganga was trying to seduce and remove jhanvi from sugar life." He says

" objection" palash says

The lawyer ignored him " continue please"

" I found a video of ganga with a men. They were about to get intimate, could that guy be sagar. We never did confirm who the men was. Let's say jhanvi finds out and did more drugs , ganga convince sagar kill jhanvi so they can be together. That's why he killed her and made it seen like it was an Accident." He finished

" this theory is ridiculous your honor" NIRA says

" is it mr. Chaturvedi" he says

The judge told them the hearring will continue in two weeks, before leaving. The officers took sagar back to the cell ignoring madhvi cry.

Later on NIRA was furious " what is the meaning of this, ganga and sagar were already married" he says " how did that happens" , madhvi told him to calm down before explaining the incident. After explaining NIRA was overwhelmed with emotion. He told them he would like to be alone. They protested at first, but they soon gave in.

NIRA in his room, cried. He felt guilty for not understanding ganga even today. He should have known that ganga wouldn't act a certain way unless, it involves his son. He looks at the ganesh statue and pray. He prayed for forgiveness and for separating them. He prayed that they will find each other again, to live a happy life. He felt touched that ganga loved his son so much that she tied her fate with his to save his life. He was really greatful, but frown when he remember the words he said to her.

He realize how selfish he had been and how right ganga was about him. "None of this would have happend if I had just listen. I'm so sorry ganga" he says

While this was happening, ganga was in the house thinking. Trying to piece things together. What palash said at the court got to her. A family member supplying jhanvi with drugs, suddenly she remember seeing yash that night while investigating. Hoe they chase after him in the crime scene. Than she remember yash entering jhanvi window and injecting her. " it all made sense" she whispers

" what does?" Palash says on his computer

"Yash, he supplied jhanvi with drugs."

" can you testify that in court?"

" yes, but we also need another proof. If we can get his phone and the real letter that has jhanvi blood. We can win this case"

" tomorrow, maybe I can get a warrant to search his house"

" how will you do that, your not a cop"

Palash told her not to worry, he will find a way and if they can't. They will just do it the ganga way. This confuse ganga, but she soon smile understanding.

To be continue...

Hopefully the next chapter will close the case and we can move on with widow sugar. I'm not good at this kind of stuff so I apoligize. And I really want to know about what you think, so please review, thank you, and until next time...bye.


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