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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9

The whole family were happy sagar was home.madhvi cook all of sagar favorite food. Dadi couldnt help, but feed sagar. She had missed him so much, pulk thanks ganga for helping solve the mystery, even madhvi said a few complements. After everyone ate, sagar excuse himself. He walk to ganga door and knock. Palash opens " yes?"

" hey ... Palash is ganga home" he asks

" no shes not, is their something you want" he ask pretending to be nice

Sagar told him it was nothing and said goodbye. Palash called his name " sagar?"

" yes??"

" i would like it if you dont come around ganga, people will start to talk and they will make it harder for ganga" he says

Sagar staid quiet he was about to leave when he remeber something " why did you close the case, i thought we were friends?"

" i had no choice i was being threaten"

" was the the real reason" he asks

Palash staid quiet.sagar told him he really thought he was a rightous lawyer but now he has seen that even the smallest thing can make a men loose courage. He told palash if this was his way of kindly telling him to leave ganga then he wont do it because ganga will always be his past,present and future. He turn and walk away afterwards. Palash bold his fist in anger then he spoke on the phone.

Meanwhile ganga who was by the door, asks palash why he lied to sagar. He asks her how long she was their and she told him not to long. She put on her shoe and walk past him. Palash warn her not to go, but she left anyway. She followed sagar trail until she saw him sitting on the step, Watching the river. " sagar!" she says

He turn and watch as she sat next to him. They both look at the sunset before sagar asks her what she was doing here. She says she didnt get to see him after he was release, so shes happy to see him. Sagar looks at gangA, he realize how much pretty she became. To him it felt like forever his been alone with ganga. He wonder if things would have been like this. " do you ever wonder how thibgs would have been if my family had accepted you?"

Ganga nod " yes i have, but i still think fate would have found some way to separate us" she says, they both look at each other before ganga told sagar she signed the divorce paper.surprise sagar asks if palash knows and she said no. She said she was gonna tell him so he wont be surprise when the paper comes.

Sagar thinks no wonder his very edgy with him lately. He got up and dust himself than he lolks at ganga " just for today, pretend that we are together" he says

Ganga told sagar thats a weird request. But sagar told her he wants to live this fantasy just for today. " i dont know sagar. I'm still married to palash"

" please ganga, just make my dream come true for today" he plead, ganga looking at sagar couldnt help but accept. Sagar happy.. Hug her. He. Grab her hand and drag her to the mall " what are we doing sagar?"

Sagar told her to be quiet. They went to a wig store and he bought ganga a short black wig then he bought himself a mustache. They also went to a clothing store and a contact store. After they were done, they both laugh at their appearance " we look different" she says

" yeah... Now no one will nottice us" he sAys

He took ganga to a movie and their they watch fan. While watching the movie, they notice two couples making out. They were both embarrassed.after the movie ganga was completely red in the face. Sagar laugh before grabbing her hand. They left the movies and went out to eat, they enter a restaurant and the host told them today was couples day. If they compete they win free dinner. Ganga was about to refuse when sagar interrupt her. He told the men they will do it. And the men drag them to the spot.

" now that all the couples are here, lets begin" the men says

Ganga asks sagar what is the competition and he told her he doesnt know. The men told everyone the rules...he told them each couple has to stand on an ice while carrying their partner. Who ever gets of looses and will have to drink something nasty.

' sagar we dont have to do this" she says

Sagar smile " i want to make this a memorable day for both of us" ganga could only nod because she was touched. The instructer also told them they have to go up and down twenty times without droping their partner. Some couples removed themselves from the competition, only ten staid. One men said to his gf " this will be a peice of cake" while another look at his chuby wife " you will have to lift me" he says surprising her

Each couple line behind an ice, the men told them they have twenty minutes before he blow the whistle. Sagar lift ganga and stood on the ice. At first he wince, but he remeber he had to make this day memorable. Ganga asks if he was fine and he nods. He lift ganga again and with confidence went down.

To be continue...
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago
BubliBag thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
awesome update yaar
Finally some togetherness
palash becoming evil
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Good to see that sagar and gangaa are together and happy. Nice update:) hope we get to see fun episodes even in the show soon. Meanwhile plz keep updating:) these updates keep us going during saga separation and fights
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelk1




Lol so cool, I wanted to see that movie. But my sister told me the endibg , and I've never heard of that place where you live😳... Is it beautiful? Anyway, nice to meet you my real name is Kanie... Its hard to say lol and I'm glad you had fun on my birthday lol

yeah its kind of pretty city but not that beautiful !! 😛 Ooo so !!!!! your real name is Kanie !! its not that hard to pronounce 😆 nice to meet u too Kanie very much delighted
hehe yeah i really had fun much a lot on your b'day 😃😳😊 n how's your city say something about its prettiness 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Btw veryy veerryyy superbb outstanding update Kanie !!!! seriouslyy 👏👏👏
its soo very much appreciating
and this is what i love about your posts that your story line n writing skills seems so much realistic n connected to the real world that it seems another show is ongoing on your storyline and know what !! your storyline is much better than those CVs ...they should at least take some hints from your story seriouslyy i'm saying 😊
plzz updatee sooneerr and loved the saga part ...spending time with each other just simply loved it 😳 it was mesmerizing seeing their pure bond and relationship
JUST updatee sooneerr plzz i'll be eagerly waiting just as always 😳
and so sorry to reply late ...i was busy with studies so not got much time but i read your update only not got time to give a proper reply 😊 hope u understand 😳
btw in friendship no sorries n no thankyous only give the reason n we should be understandable and trust each other right? 😃
so i take my sorry back !!! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammiey

Btw veryy veerryyy superbb outstanding update Kanie !!!! seriouslyy 👏👏👏

its soo very much appreciating
and this is what i love about your posts that your story line n writing skills seems so much realistic n connected to the real world that it seems another show is ongoing on your storyline and know what !! your storyline is much better than those CVs ...they should at least take some hints from your story seriouslyy i'm saying 😊
plzz updatee sooneerr and loved the saga part ...spending time with each other just simply loved it 😳 it was mesmerizing seeing their pure bond and relationship
JUST updatee sooneerr plzz i'll be eagerly waiting just as always 😳
and so sorry to reply late ...i was busy with studies so not got much time but i read your update only not got time to give a proper reply 😊 hope u understand 😳
btw in friendship no sorries n no thankyous only give the reason n we should be understandable and trust each other right? 😃
so i take my sorry back !!! 😆



What can I say ameesha, my city is not that pretty. Its a big area yes, but my city is small and we have a lot of people. Nothing special, but thanks for the comment and your wisdom at the end Lol, anyway I think we will be good friends in the future :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks everyone for the comments, it means a lot that you all like my story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10

Its been 25minute and it was down to two couples. Ganga could feel sagar shaking. She told him to let her go, but he refuses saying he is doing this for them. Ganga looks at sagar foot ... She realize how red it was becoming " sagar please stop. Your hurting" she says

" ganga please, let me finish this" he says a little irritated, ganga told him she wants to get down, he refuses. She shook her body, making him loose balance. They both fell on the floor while looking at each other. " the winner is couple number five" the announcer says, he walk up to sagar and told him he has to drink something they made. Sagar to angry glares at ganga " why did you do that!!"

Ganga getting up says " I hate seeing you in pain, and even though you didn't admit it, I could tell you were getting weak" she says

Sagar hearing that walk away, ganga followed him while calling his name.they stop by the side walk and ganga touch his shoulder " sagar... Why are you so angry?"

" I wanted this to be a memorable time, for us. To prove how much I love you, but you ruined it" he says

Ganga smile " sagar, you don't have to proov e anything. Just by looking in your eyes I can tell how much you love me. All those things are silly games." She says before becoming shy , she puts his hand by her heart and told him to close his eyes " do you feel it, sagar. How fast my heart is beating" , sagar nod " that's because I'm with you, this heart will only beat for you. So please don't be mad at your ganga"

Sagar opens his eyes and pull her to him " I'm not mad ganga, I can never be mad at you. I should be the one to apologize for the way I acted. Its just I wanted you to remember this day because once we get back to reality, you will be ganga the married women and I will be sagar the murderer."

" don't say that sugar, you are no murdere. I will prove your innocence and yash will be put in jail. I just need him to confess that's all"

" I know you will do your best, you always do" he says making her blush. He leaned forward and kiss her forehead before letting her go " come let's go to your favorite place" he says


Elsewhere, palash was reading a letter he got. He was angry, so ganga wants to divorce me he thought I won't let that happen. He called the people from earlier and told them his wife was missing and to find her and bring her back. And if she happens to be with someone kidnap him. Once he was done , he fold the paper and put it in his pocket. He walk outside waiting, the court case is tomorrow, if sagar doesn't make it he will be locked up for good. Leaving ganga to me.

Meanwhile, ganga and sagar were walking in the water. The sky was dark, and it was less people. Ganga took her wig off and let her hair down. While sagar bend down to grab some water, " ganga" he says, she looks down only to be splash by water. Shock she asks if he was crazy and he told her he was, before doing it again. Ganga irritated grab some water and throw it. Sagar ran while laughing. Sagar ran around her and lift her up, ganga protested but he didn't listen. He dump her in the water and start to laugh.

Ganga got out soaking from head to toe. She was mad ... Yes, but when she heard sagar laugh she smile. Sagar stop laughing and look at ganga, he blush when he realize her outfit was becoming a see through. He turn and held his hand out to her " come ganga, let's go" he says, ganga grab his hand and they walk out of the water. While walking they were unaware of palash men heading towards them. They accidently bump into them and they apologized. Just when they were about to go up the stairs, the men stop and look at the picture before telling them to stop.

Sagar seeing this told ganga to run, they ran until ganga clothes became to much for her. The men's manage to catch up and they faught sagar. One of them grab ganga, preventing her from helping him. She scream when she saw sagar spit blood, sagar tried freeing himself. He looks at ganga trying to reach for her. One of them hit him with a stick, making him fall. " SAGAR!!" She screams, the gang pick him up and put him in there van. They quickly got in and left, ganga ran after them, but the car soon disappear.

Elsewhere palash got a phone call from his men. " sir we couldn't find them"

Palash got mad " how hard is it to find a girl with a men this late" he says

" we search everywhere, I think they might of left the city" he says, palash angry was about to say something when he saw ganga running. He ended his phone and asks ganga what happen, " sagar he... They kidnap him" she cried before running to sagar house. When she entered pulk asks her what happens and she explained everything. Dadi cried and once again blame ganga, she called ganga the black sheep and told her she will never let her grandson be with her...never, she says before walking to her room.

The next day ganga and family, walk in the judge room. They told the judge what happend to sagar, and the judge said they can't really stop the court case. Jhanvi lawyer says this is a trick to stop the case, they could have send him aboard. Ganga told him not to lie, she told them the van title and the judge told them to be quiet. He says he will give them 24hrs to find sagar. He will also involve the police, if sagar is not found by then than the case will be close and he will be known as a run away criminal.

Madhvi gasp, palash on the other hand was smiling in the inside. He thought even though his plan didn't work, things are going great for him. He told ganga not to worry they will find him before holding her shoulder. The judge look at him and asks who he was. Palash says " I'm her husband"

The judge nod and dismiss them, he frown thinking about ganga being married. Elsewhere, sagar was tied up, he wince in pain before looking around. Where am i , he thought, he tried moving but his hand was tied and so was his foot. " your finally awake" the men says sitting on the chair. Sagar look at him and asks who he was. The men smile under the mask. " you probably don't recognize me because of the mask, but I'm sure you recognize her" he points

He heard heels before the person face was shown " jhanvi!!" He says shock. " hello sagar did you miss me" she says smiling evil.

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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o freaking lord
that is a MINDBLOWING plot twist
Love you
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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O gawddd this os just amazing
What a mindblowing twist yo
i wonder if CVs get so e pice of mind from u
Luv ya

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