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Index:

Chapter 1


Chapter 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fanaa-ishq-mein-marjawan/5279501/ff-1-a-love-to-kill?pn=3


Chapter 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fanaa-ishq-mein-marjawan/5279501/ff-1-a-love-to-kill?pn=5


Chapter 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fanaa-ishq-mein-marjawan/5279501/ff-1-a-love-to-kill?pn=6


Chapter 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fanaa-ishq-mein-marjawan/5279501/ff-1-a-love-to-kill?pn=7


Chapter 6


Inside a chic bar

A girl wearing a red dress enters, her face hidden by a masquerade mask and grazes the mic kept in the middle with her red, glossy luscious lips. Everyone sitting takes a sharp breath. Her sultry gaze lands on only ultra wealthy men who she can snare into the trap of her beauty and cunning. She starts crooning:

https://youtu.be/C805Nt0JPIY

The door of the bar opens and Ishan saunters in but doesn't order anything. The girl sings and dances with mic in her hand but when she comes near Ishaan, he tries to pull the mask off her face but the girl digs her sharp nails in his wrist.

The girl goes back to the center and removes her mask. It's Pakhi, though unrecognisable in this roop.

When the performance ends, a man slides a card in her hands and Pakhi pretends to be surprised when she's suddenly pulled in a corner by Ishaan.

"Tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki jab tak mera maksad poora nahi ho jata tumhe ye sab band karna hoga," Ishaan hissed.

"Aur tera kaam khatam hone ke baad Mallika ka kharcha kaun uthayega? Tera baap ya Tere baap ka baap?" Pakhi retorted.

"Baap me mat Jaa tu," Ishaan said, "Do paise ki aukaat hai teri."

"Theek hai," Pakhi or Mallika shrugged, "To dhoondh le nayi Pakhi us Agastya ke liye ya fir usse better h ki asli Pakhi ko hi sabke saamne le aa jise tune kaid kar rakha h."

Ishaan took deep breaths and said, "Sorry Mallika. Tum jaanti main use duniya ke saamne nahi laa sakta. Agastya ne akhiri baar 6 saal pehle use dekha tha. aur tumhari shakl usse bilkul alag h."

"Ek sorry ke ek lakh. Mallika na free me kucch leti h na free me kucch deti h."

"Paagal ho gayi ho kya? Itne paise?"

"To dhoondh le nayi Pakhi apne liye."

Then a message from bank comes on Mallika's mobile of 1 lakh rupees credited. Mallika smirked.

"Please Mallika," Ishaan said, "Agasthya aur uske parivaar ko barbaad karne ka sabse bada hathiyaar tum hi ho."

"Agasthya ki barbaadi to Tay h," Mallika thinks, "Magar uska Mohra main nahi tum banoge dear Ishaan!"

....

Mallika's phone rang. On seeing Agastya's name, Mallika made a bored face and said, "Hello Dholu."

Agasthya spoke in a worried voice, "Paakhi kahaan ho tum? Vo main...main..."

Mallika thinks to herself, "Chinta to hogi hi. Tera vo kaala ghoda mera peecha jo nahi kar paaya."

"Tumhe kyon chinta ho Rahi h meri Dholu? Tujhe to pata hai Friday ki har raat main slums me bacchon ko khilone baantne jaati hoon." Seeing a man leering at her and walking, Pakhi winks at him causing him to stumble.

"Kitni acchi ho tum Pakhi?" Agasthya dreamily said.

Pakhi yawned and said, "Chalo main phone rakhti hoon. bacche mujhe bula rahe hain."


Please let me know of your feedback.

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Sgayuiyer thumbnail
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow amazing start 👏

And a different story line 😳

Waiting for the upcoming chapters how story will unfold🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Wow amazing start 👏

And a different story line 😳

Waiting for the upcoming chapters how story will unfold🤗


Thanks a lot Gayu 💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Inside a chic bar

A girl wearing a red dress enters, her face hidden by a masquerade mask and grazes the mic kept in the middle with her red, glossy luscious lips. Everyone sitting takes a sharp breath. Her sultry gaze lands on only ultra wealthy men who she can snare into the trap of her beauty and cunning. She starts crooning:

https://youtu.be/C805Nt0JPIY

The door of the bar opens and Ishan saunters in but doesn't order anything. The girl sings and dances with mic in her hand but when she comes near Ishaan, he tries to pull the mask off her face but the girl digs her sharp nails in his wrist.

The girl goes back to the center and removes her mask. It's Pakhi, though unrecognisable in this roop.

When the performance ends, a man slides a card in her hands and Pakhi pretends to be surprised when she's suddenly pulled in a corner by Ishaan.

"Tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki jab tak mera maksad poora nahi ho jata tumhe ye sab band karna hoga," Ishaan hissed.

"Aur tera kaam khatam hone ke baad Mallika ka kharcha kaun uthayega? Tera baap ya Tere baap ka baap?" Pakhi retorted.

"Baap me mat Jaa tu," Ishaan said, "Do paise ki aukaat hai teri."

"Theek hai," Pakhi or Mallika shrugged, "To dhoondh le nayi Pakhi us Agastya ke liye ya fir usse better h ki asli Pakhi ko hi sabke saamne le aa jise tune kaid kar rakha h."

Ishaan took deep breaths and said, "Sorry Mallika. Tum jaanti main use duniya ke saamne nahi laa sakta. Agastya ne akhiri baar 6 saal pehle use dekha tha. aur tumhari shakl usse bilkul alag h."

"Ek sorry ke ek lakh. Mallika na free me kucch leti h na free me kucch deti h."

"Paagal ho gayi ho kya? Itne paise?"

"To dhoondh le nayi Pakhi apne liye."

Then a message from bank comes on Mallika's mobile of 1 lakh rupees credited. Mallika smirked.

"Please Mallika," Ishaan said, "Agasthya aur uske parivaar ko barbaad karne ka sabse bada hathiyaar tum hi ho."

"Agasthya ki barbaadi to Tay h," Mallika thinks, "Magar uska Mohra main nahi tum banoge dear Ishaan!"

....

Mallika's phone rang. On seeing Agastya's name, Mallika made a bored face and said, "Hello Dholu."

Agasthya spoke in a worried voice, "Paakhi kahaan ho tum? Vo main...main..."

Mallika thinks to herself, "Chinta to hogi hi. Tera vo kaala ghoda mera peecha jo nahi kar paaya."

"Tumhe kyon chinta ho Rahi h meri Dholu? Tujhe to pata hai Friday ki har raat main slums me bacchon ko khilone baantne jaati hoon." Seeing a man leering at her and walking, Pakhi winks at him causing him to stumble.

"Kitni acchi ho tum Pakhi?" Agasthya dreamily said.

Pakhi yawned and said, "Chalo main phone rakhti hoon. bacche mujhe bula rahe hain."


Please let me know of your feedback.


Awesome.Continue and conclude the same.Your FF just revived the memories of Ridzi being appointed as Kabir's Spy to bring the downfall of the Mafia Tycoon Vansh only to fall in love with the same man later on.

Loved the grey-shades of Pakhi.Let her be this mean and Sassy. As far as Agasthya goes let him be the same as portrayed in the series-obsessive with a ruthless mind..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Asli Pakhi ?

Does that mean Pakhi ka chehra change hone wala hai ?

The start was like a shock, It was so out of pakhi character, Then I understood the character change.

It's a interesting story, Do continue .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I think I like this one better than the actual episode 1 of the show...

good going...update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumz_d

Interesting

Do continue


Thank you :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: masked


Awesome.Continue and conclude the same.Your FF just revived the memories of Ridzi being appointed as Kabir's Spy to bring the downfall of the Mafia Tycoon Vansh only to fall in love with the same man later on.

Loved the grey-shades of Pakhi.Let her be this mean and Sassy. As far as Agasthya goes let him be the same as portrayed in the series-obsessive with a ruthless mind..


Thank you so much 💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Max789

Asli Pakhi ?

Does that mean Pakhi ka chehra change hone wala hai ?

The start was like a shock, It was so out of pakhi character, Then I understood the character change.

It's a interesting story, Do continue .


Thanks. She is a conwoman/imposter pretending to be Pakhi.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: urmita

I think I like this one better than the actual episode 1 of the show...

good going...update soon


Thanks a lot.

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