FF#1: A love to kill - Page 2

Wow!!!

What a start! You nailed it!

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Originally posted by: Susmitasumi96

Wow!!!

What a start! You nailed it!

❤❤❤

Thank you so much.

The beginning of the story is interesting. I like grey shaded female characters. 😊 I have only one question. Mallika looks different from Pakhi. Then why does Agastya believe she is Pakhi?

Originally posted by: Shirsha90

The beginning of the story is interesting. I like grey shaded female characters. 😊 I have only one question. Mallika looks different from Pakhi. Then why does Agastya believe she is Pakhi?

Hi Shirsha. I've tried to explain in the second chapter :)

Please let me know of your feedback:

Chapter 2

"Ishaan ab to bata do tumne Paakhi ko kahaan kaid rakha h?" Mallika said tracing Ishaan's cheek with her index finger.

"Tumhe kaafi interest hai Paakhi ke baare me jaanne ke liye?" Ishan didn't answer her question.

"Bas curiosity thi," Mallika said, "Ajeeb baat hai jis Paakhi ke peeche Agasthya itna paagal hai vo dikhti kaisi hai use ye tak nahi pata?"

Ishaan sighed, "Chatroom par mile the dono. Asli naam tak nahi pata tha ek doosre ka me. Magar virtual pehchaano ke saath hi pyaar ho gaya. Trust buildup hone ke baad naam to reveal kiye magar without surnames. Magar dono nahi jaante the ki dono dikhte kaise hain. In fact they were both quite proud of the fact ki unka pyaar chehre ki sundarta ka mohtaaj nahi h."

"Paakhi aur Agasthya ka pyaar," Mallika felt her throat tightening.

Flashback:

It was a rare summer night five years ago when Mallika was sleeping in cramped quarters. She was woken by repeated ringing of her basic Nokia phone.

"Mehek Didi? Vo bhi itni raat ko?" Mallika muttered.

She picked up the phone, "Hello. Mehek Didi?"

"I'm sorry Minnie," a sobbing voice said from other side, "Teri behen tujhe us narak se nahi nikaal paayi."

"Didi. shaant ho jaao. Kya hua?" Mallika was getting more and more stressed.

"Vo Agasthya," Mehek said, "Papa ne kitna manaa kiya tha magar fir bhi maine zid karke usse shaadi kar li. Papa ko heart attack nahi aaya tha. Unki maut ke peeche Agasthya ka haath tha. Usne mujhse shaadi sirf Papa ki property hathiyaane ke liye ki thi. Vo to kisi Paakhi ko pyaar karta h- aisa pyaar jiski na koi had hai na koi daayra. Usi ke laayak banne ke liye usne mere saath ye jhoothi shaadi ka khel khela tha."

"Didi tum chinta mat karo," Mallika tried to think calmly, "Ham log police ke paas jayenge."

"Ab kucch nahi ho sakta pagli," Mehek bitterly laughed, "Sahi kehti thi buaji. Manhoos hoon main. Pehle ham dono ke mummy papa ko khaa gayi aur ab apne Papa ko bhi jinhone koi khoon ka rishtaa na hone ke baad bhi mujhe itna pyaar diya. Saari zindagi main apni chhoti behen ko dhoondhti rahi aur tu mujhe mili bhi to kis haal m...ab to main is laayak bhi nahi rahi ki tujhe is daldal se nikaal lo."

"Didi, kahaan ho tum?" Mallika started opening the door though she was still in her night suit and slippers, "Batao mujhe. Main abhi vahaan pahunchti hoon."

"Ab bahut der ho gayi h," Mehek wistfully said, "Agasthya ne mujhe is ghar aur uski zindagi dono se nikal jaane ke liye kaha h. Theek hai. Ab main kisi ko aur pareshaan nahi karoongi. Tu apna dhyaan rakhna Minnie."

And the sound of her sister's body falling down five floors still haunted Mallika day and night.

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A woman is tied with ropes with her eyes covered with a cloth. She's struggling to free herself of the ropes...no she's writing something on her arms in the form of rope marks. The name "Agasthya" is written on her bloodied arms and a smile plays on her lips.

"Chahe duniyaa jitna zor laga le, magar duniya ki koi taakat mujhe Agasthya ko haasil karne se nahi rok sakti. Hogi tumhari dushmani Agasthya se...magar meri mohabbat aur junoon ke saamne ek ret ke zarre ki tarah chhoti h tumhari nafrat." Then she croons- Ishq PE marjaavan, tu jo kahe vo karjaavan.

I would appreciate your feedback please

Wow!

Absolutely mind blowing👏

Who is obsessed actually? 😆

The second chapter is also interesting.

ok so in your story pakhi is the obsessed one?

hmm interesting...

Mystery, Mystery and mystery!

Wow!!!!🤯