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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hi Taira...

First of all i need to ask u something really important...🤓 Is Riddhima OK...??? i mean is she breathing fine???😔 NO dont get confused... i was asking this just coz, she gave a LONG & i mean REALLY-REALLY LONG lecture to Armaan in one breath...😲 Wow what was Dat???😃

When i was reading it, i felt almost breathless... 😆 It seems she needed some urgent explaination... 😛 She is falling for him... 😳

But what i loved the most, was the FLASHBACK portion...🤗 as i felt in d very first part when Armaan was watching at her mother's pic in his room, He not only love her mother, now i m convinced, he actually WORSHIP her... & i mean he still do so, even after more than 8 years of her demise... It was extremely touching...😳 i had tears in my eyes as i read his reaction on his mother's death... He needed a something like a BIG blow, to come out of his emotional closet & i think his father did what was needed... 😕

But i m really eager to read the next part... wanna know what happened next... what happened after that rash drive & what went wrong with Sameera, is she actually loved him... 😕🤔

Please update faster...

Love

- Sheetal

hehehe......you'll know whether she is fine or not in the next part....

i am really glad that you liked the flashback portion because it took me a long time to write that and also to get the emotions right........ya you'll know more about his love for his mother in the next part.....

the next part will be posted within 10 minutes

Keep reading

Thanks

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: Jodubai
Hi Taira
Thanks for the pm, I just read both part 9-10 now, (cos of my weekend)

It was fab!!!!! you are a wonderful writer

The emotions just kept flowing from your words.....it started with Arman trying to blab at the party, but clever Ridz took him off that mess.....then the night was sweet, she has fallen for him....cos why would she bother dragging him away from all the humilation, that he might have had to face....

In the morning, again, cute of Arman to put her on the bed & feel bad for holding her hand that tight....

Her lecture, was awesome, that too in 1 breath, just shows how much his behaviour effects her, wheather he is a playboy or sweet or anything, whatever he does bothers her...her main problem, is him ignoring her..

then, his reply to lecture, OMG that was toooooo good...their lips brushed...awwwhhhhh......she wanted him to kiss her, but he just left her, wanting for more....Bad boy!!

The Flashback was heart touching, the way Arman kept his mom alive even after her death, was just so emotional.....I wonder what that Sameera chic did......

do continue soon...

take care

Thanks a lot

Am so happy that you could feel all the emotions in it

you'll know about Sameera in the coming part

and lets see if Riddhima had fallen from him or not

His behavious effects her like hell an you'll see more of that effect in the next part.

Keep reading

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#663

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me 1st!!! even before you could pm......

The Flashback was great, some people don't believe in what you wrote, about his mom saving him from accident but I do believe, he loved his mom so much, that even his mom couldn't leave him, & had to become his strength & be with him all the time, really loved that bit.

this part was good, atleast now that Samera chic's image is clear, thank god she betrayed him, so now there are no chances of her coming back in his life

no wonder the poor boy has turned into a casonova.....the only person he loved & trusted after his dad, betrayed him. OMG he got so angry at Sameera & would have done wrong, had his mom not stopped him...so thats where his image for women is formed....

I hope Ridz gets to see this side of Arman soon....he is so loving....am falling for this Arman....poor Ridz, thinking that Arman belongs to Priya, so wants to think about Samay, but ends up thinkinng about Arman, now thats a great FF, please get them face to face soon...

Keep writing

Edited by Jodubai - 17 years ago

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123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#664

awwwwwww pooor armi man

dat was amazing really sensitive part

luved it really nice updte

yaaay arman admits his in luv lool pooor ridz

tryin so ahrd to get him outa her head lool

luvin it it was perfectt

updte sooon

luv niz x

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zara

@zara.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#665

amazing update taira!!👏 luved da way u described his past n his relationship wid sameera..

hope ridz realises her feelings soon..

do continue soon n thanx for da pm!

xoxo

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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#666

hey taira yaar ur prt hs brought tears in my eys yaar it ws soooo touchng prt yaar d way u expressd mothr nd son relation this understandng ,lv,it ws jst toooooooooooooooooooo gud yaar realy vryyyyyyyyyyy gud fantastic...............realy appreciate it nd thts why he bcm tht bcz os sameera nw i understnd shews soooo selfish armaan hurt soooooo mch tht he omg yaar acha hua his mothr fce cm infrnt of hm nd he also cried sooooo mch tht pain he suffrd awwwwwwwwwww nd he lvs ridz omg yaar finally.............nd ridzwowwwwwwwwwwww she wsi maginning him bt 2 disrtrct herslf imaginning samay nd thn again it ws fnny wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jst cnt wait fr d nxt prt
conntttttttttt soooooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm bt wll somdy she relizd abt armaan god ths grl sooooo mch confusd.........
luv yachna

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

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Posted: 17 years ago

#667

awesome update Taira, ur writing style just keeps getting better, really loved the way you shown what happened in the flashback with Sameera, and how attached Armaan is with his mum

cant wait to know what he plans to do for Ridz now since he has confessed he falling for her

and Ridz just confused

thanks for the PM

Sania