AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: aravi
ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!! armaan suffered so much ya!!!!!!!!!!!! n ridzy feelinf so low n giulty n d guy never was aplayboy he was faking it!!!!!!!!!!!! man i wanna bout dis sameera now !!!!!!!!!haila!!!!!!!!!! curiosity at its peak!!!!!!!! cont soooonnnn......

luv

aravi

Hey Aravi

Thanks for leaving this comment

Ridz feeling guilty.........she feels that she was betraying her friend's trust.......the girl is in a dilemma again

U'll know soon about this Sameera in the next part which i'll try and update soon...

Glad u liked the part

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: patem031
hey, it was awesome
thanku for extra large prt
wow, thr lips brushed nd riidz wnted a kiss
eagerly waitin for flashback to continue
nice prt, continue soon😊

Thanks a lot and ya the part just got larger itself coz i had to fit the whole flashback in it though still a lot of it is left.......

Ya the situation was like that she was sure that he wud kiss her and unknowingly wanted it but later she felt guilty

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: Catwoman
Poor armaan has been through so much ....

I love ur Ridz... i think she's great and loved how she shapin up.

Continue soon

Love Kat

Thanks Kat

Ya Armaa has been thru a ruff time and you'll see more of it in the rest of the flashback....

Ya i have always wanted to write a character like Ridz and finally i did and i m proud of that character😳

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
omg that is soooo sad
cnt belive it pooor arman awww

really emotional part luvin it

ar having a bit of a moment there lol

really nice updte

continue sooon

luv niz x

Thanks a lot Niz

Am glad u liked both the emotional and the lil romantic part.......

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy
very very nice update,
the story is getting interesting,

awww, armaan loves his mom soo much,

but i didnt understand , how can he set his mom on fire, that part was confusing

Thanks a lot

Okay set his mom on fire here means setting her body on fire......the ritual that a son performs in hindu religion which is setting the body of their dead parents on fire

Hope u got it....

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: gari14
omggg...i couldn help commenting on this FF!!!....its so cool...esp yr last part...i completely loved it!!.....i loved the entire flasback....awww poor armaan...gone thru so much!!....waitin for yr next part.....do contd soon!!....

Thanks a lot for reading the FF and then leaving this comment'

its really encouraging to see new readers in your FF.........so thanks a lot

Flashback will continue in the next part....

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: yachna
hey taira seriously it ws vryyyy sad nd realy story is goi vryy intrestng awwwwww armaan goi through too mch yaar omg nd ridz lvd it he appreciate it akhir nikal hi dala wowwwwwwwww nd ar lvs his mom sooooooo mch he dnt wntd 2 believe tht she's dead nt alive awwwww poor him reay mindblowng yaar............jst lvng it d story line..............
cont soooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

Thanks a lot Yachna

I really wanted the emotions to reach out to you guys so am glad that you found the part everything i wanted it to be.......

and ya Ridz is falling dheere dheere..........lol

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: afreen_syed
amazin part
i just luved part 10

plz plz continue soon n pm me

thnx a ton 4 ur pm

luv

afreen

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: piya2025
Nicve part..Thanks 4d pm..
Do count soon..

Love

piya.

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr
it was awesome yaar
thanx for pm

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x
heyy taira

armaan,s moms death made me cry....pooor armaan, he's been living in his own world for a long time, buht his dad had to do that.

i hope ridhima soon gets to seee the real armaan,

and cud u plzzzz explain sameera's character, did she betray him? or something? i still dont get it? buh da next few parts might,,....

wow ridhima long lecture was like listenin to a mom,......

buh u knw dios is da first ff, i read dat shez been screwing at him without crying not dat at this moment shez meant to....

anywez thnx 4 da pm

nd sorry 4 da late comment

update soon

luv ya

ridz,

.x.

you r rite his dad had to do it but then at the end he couldn't take it anymore.......

i tried my best to describe all the emotions aptly and so am glad you could feel all the pain and i so didn't want to make anyone of you cry.......but that means you could feel all the emotions and about that am glad.........lol

You'll get to know everything about Sameera in the next part.....the flashback will continue

ya she did lecture him......she was exhausted tolerating his cold behaviour and so she erupted.....lol

ya in my FF she is very confident, independent and smart women and she is not into tears and all and know pretty well how to people in their rite place........the way she did with Vivek....

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