AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: Taira

Okay okay i got it...........

what i am trying to say is that when i read your comment the part formed in my mind itself and then once i started typing i was done within 20minutes while it takes me a long time to write the parts but wen i came online last nite i was really sleepy but still i was able to complete it coz of that 1 comment of yours.

And yes the characters will remain like that but the comments that you guys leave really help and i'll be more then happy to mould the story in a way that u guys enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it

awome gta work out more of the brain teasing comments i guess then...so we can get quick updates...lolzzz😃

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 17 years ago

#532

Just caught up ur both parts..& both r brilliant..Keep going..

Love

piya.

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#533

really a nice one⭐️ so sweet😊😉 really a brilliant😉😳 one plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"The ultimate measure of love is not when the both people like each other, its when 1 ignore & the other continue loving till the end of life....!"

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kash_lover

@kash_lover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#534

thats a really good part!!

update soon!!

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#535

wow amazing sweety

loved it soooooooooo much

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#536

i luved reading it it was soooo cute

pooor arman doh lool

i guesing priya 4gton bout arman

ooo clari sounds lke a good twist

ridz arch rival lol really nice updte as usual

updte soooon

luv niz x

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nyla

@nyla_193

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#537

aaawwwwwwwww that was such a cute part
poor armaan is missin his mum
loved this part it was soo sweet n i loved reading it
cont soon
thnx for the pm
👏

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#538

hey taira wowwwwwwwwww yaar 2prts grt yaar jst caught wthur 2 prts nd ow yaar it ws brilliant.........superb........amzng yaar ridz dnt wntd 2 go wth him bt she also came wowww yaar nd ridz didn't lkd it at all d way he ws ignorng her omg yaar nd ar ws soooooo jealous tht samay hd puttd his arm around her wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jst lvd tht yaar................seriously it ws soooooooooooooo gud ar dncng wth nothr grl nd priya whtevr she had tears she thought tht may b ehe lvs her bt nt ............nd ar ws cryng awwwwwwwwwwwwww nd ridz anger meltd wowww grt nd its his mom bdy awwwwwwwwwwwww tabhi itna i realy enjoyd myslf yaar i lvd..............
cont soooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna