AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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sweet_JAY_FAN

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Posted: 17 years ago

#511

oh loved part 8A plz cont soon and plz PM me again when u update

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Natasha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#512

Hmmmmm, jealousy?!.....loving the line of the story darlin!

Hehe, Armaan is already droolin, man he's gunna hafta wrk hard to get Ridz, hehe

-Natasha

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Avanti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#513

great part!! 👏 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 17 years ago

#514

ahah..! i loved that part..loved how armaan was all jealous!

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Mona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#515

hey nice update........poor armaan missing his mom on her birthday..........well continue soon.........i enjoyed reading it............thakc 4 the pm.........

[L]MONA

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#516

ooohhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 parts in a day!way to go gurl!!!!!!!!!!!!! but me totally luved d party but y armaan so rude may b just teasing ridzy!!!!!!!!!! n wow ridzy was purple wid envy i could see!!!!!!!!! me luving d track completely n armaan was crying!!!!!!!!! he was abit weird dis tym!!!!!!!! neways thnks a ton 4 D PM hun!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv
aravi

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 17 years ago

#517

i love how things are moving along in the story. i think the end where armaan is all depressed is really sudden nd unexpected..but it was still a gr8 part!

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pickytg

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Posted: 17 years ago

#518

tht was a quick update!! ..

it was much interestin..bt m a lil lost..terz too mny thinz happenin..hopefully ull wrap tem up together in yur nxt part..

although i liked d last bit d best..he walked out holdin d beer..n ovb i liked d part wer he felt d shudder 2 durin AR scene!!

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#519

hey hun....oki duno abt ayone else...it was my personal fav in ur fic, n in my opinion also ur best attempt so far at the most natural n coherently emotional part.....like not a line out there was redundant it was perfect....n i cant help but add that um delighjted u did what i was so hoping for....made armaan ignore her....she really needed it....even the best ppl on earth need lessons she had to get hers!!!great job....loved it!!!

ps:of course the addition of that lil twist in the rear end...him sentimentral abt his mum only adds to the spark....!!!!

Edited by spln - 17 years ago