AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09 - Page 49

really an awwsome⭐️ one so sweet vivek part is so nice😆 yaar its superb😉😆 and armaan invited priya😕😲😊 why i cant wait😳 plz update it i want to😊😉 know whats armaans plan😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Wafa ke sheesh mahal main saja liya main ne,
Woh ek dil jise patthar bana liya main ne,
Yeh soch kar ke na ho taak main khushi koi,
Ghamon ki ouat main khud ko chupa liya main ne,
Kabhi na khatm kiya main ne roshni ka muhaaz,
Agar chiraagh bujha, dil jala liya main ne,
Kamal yeh hai ke jo dushman pe chalana tha,
Woh teer apne kaleje pe kha liya main ne,
Woh jiski adaawat main ek pyaar bhi tha,
Us aadmi ko gale se lagaa liya main ne!"

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi me 1st to respond on this part....

What were u thinking of , when writing this part???? u portrayed him gay, thats what I call a sweet revenge...too good, believe me, neither me nor any of the others reading this FF would have thought that you will bring on the revenge like this...

really nice, now am waitng for Arman's turn, although I hope she ain't this harsh on him..she knows..priya is at fault as well....waiting for next part

thanks for the pm

take care

Originally posted by: afreen_syed

part 7 was minnnddddblowwinnggg👏👏👏

thnx a ton 4 ur pm

just luved it

its gr8 n do continue soon

losz of luv

afreen

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

GOSH............i loved it totally.................dude the girl got guts to do something like that............awesome.......

Poor Vivek........his reaction just cracked me up..........lol.............and what is up with Armaan? Why did he invite Priya and to where..........hey do update super duper soon

Originally posted by: yachna

hey taira wht u hv don yaar it ws simply outstandng yaar i ws laughn glke a hell seriously jst tooooooooooooooooo gud wht type of brain she hs wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cnt believe it tht vivek uski to achi khasi band baja di ridz na wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww tooooooo gud brilliant nd whn ar readed headlines fst he ws shockd bt thn he ws also laughg wowwwwwwwwwwwwww nw he respect her mre wowwwwwwwwwww nd rahul,priya nd muski god thy wre sooooooo mchl aughng nd ridz thnkng vivek ka to kaam tamab bt wht abt ar she ws nt sure his fault or nt nd priya he invitd her omg yaar cnt wait fr d nxt prt......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........................cont sooooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

Originally posted by: saira_1

awesome part taira👏

i cnt believe what ridhima did to vivek😲😆

i hope armaan's punishment is gonna be less severe😕😆

plz update soon😳

Originally posted by: na2339

Taira sweety I just read parts 4 all the way to 7 and OMG Ridz ki dimaag ko choro, tumhari dimaag kya chalti hai!

Vivek will never have a girlfriend again let alone get anywhere close to getting married! unless he dont mind marrying Sam ;) lmao girl I was in splits reading the last part

But what is she going to do to Armaan, its not really his fault, Priya was the one who kind of took advantage of him in when he was vulnerable and out of senses, if the same had happened but the roles reversed then who would she side with? Armaan or Priya?

But whats he playing at now? He wants to know everything about Priya... why so he can make her realise she was only lusting after him and not really in love with him?

hmm interesting part and I love the twists and turns 😃

Great work

Lubna 😳

Originally posted by: kash_lover

wow,that's too funny!!

really well written!!
now,what will ridz do to armaan??!!
waiting......
update soon!!

Originally posted by: nyla_193

haha lmao part 7 was sooo funny
plzzzzzzzz pm me wen u cont
👏

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x

Heyy taira...

OMG....this is da most hilarious part of any ff i have ever read....

serious first time i've read about vivek being gay....

lol poor him buh he deserved it....ahhha he though he was goonna **** ridhima carter...lol....

i still cant stop laughing at wat she dont to him....

but i hope she make da right decision about armaan thou...

i wonder wat priyas talking about thou?

....plzzzz update sooon

this part was definetly worth read for sure

cant w8 4 da next part....

thnx sooooo much 4 da pm....glad i didnt miss out on this part....

luv ya

ridz,

.x.