~Bedtime FF: ~HeartBeat~ *complete pg1* - Page 8

ahh, u updated 😕😕

great updte arman married

Ok finally here now with my bak-bak as i call it!!😆 Firstly loved the prompt and fast update here. Now thats something thats gets me smiling....your parts....

Gosh Kat outstanding will be an understatement here. It was way beyond that woman!!! How on earth do u write with sheer brilliance each time i fail to understand.

Loved the start......KKHH song....Ahhh my fav SRK flick...mind u love the rest too. Ok am getting side tracked with SRK now....😆 getting back...Ridz felt her heart stir listening to the song was something so touching. Their first movie together??? Seriously loved the way u put that there....

Why was it since she had seen him a week ago the gentle reminders of them where like appearing out of no where and this was there first bollywood movie they watch together and remembering herself crying at the same scene …she remember crying and him gentle placing his arm around her as she sunk into the warmth of his entire body as she silently took in the movie

Awesome too less for it!! They don't make films like this anymore…! Ahhhh so true....let me go bak on track...uff SRK getting making me loose focus.....😆

OMG Shanky with Alzheimer???😕 Ok and Anjali has left?? Gosh the entire way in which u described her life....moved me. Poor girl!! The way u added so many new dimensions to the story so effortlessly was outstanding!! Her helping Atul and anjali leaving earlier.....gosh breathless already prasing you.😳 Ahh so Ridz the boss?? Loving this......😳

Haha Nana and lovely???

Riddhima closed her eyes and composed herself… Lovely as much as she loved them both but the constantly interfered and want her to be dating and according to Lovely her clock we ticking and there was no sound of pitter patter of children's feet… and her eggs would just expire and allsorts… just face it Lovely want her reproducing and manufacturing babies and that to quick…

Lmaooooo wat lines!!!🤣 ahhh seriously ur brain.........😆 ur a genius!!

Ok loved the brief convo between the two!!Ahh Ridz is so sarcy now!! But that woman?? She cant be his wife???😕 Gosh Kat made me way too desperate now!!

Simply fantabulous update!!! Trust u to dish out one outstanding update after another.😳 Will be waiting.....😳

love
Jia

excellent start! omg riddhima thinks he is married i hpe dis misunderstndin gets clesred out sn! plz pm me whenevr u update! cntd sn!

hey kat di

OMG! kat di !!! another bedtime FF YAY!!!!!!

Part 2 is up!!

Originally posted by: muzic_chick247

OMG! kat di !!! another bedtime FF YAY!!!!!!

(dont tell nyone but im just 16 *sssshhhhh*) lol.... but honestly.. how do u do it? a new plot...new everythin...??? where do u get these ideas from????????????????? and i soooo totally cant to se wat happens... and hey you put my fav old movie in. KKHH (love tht movie!!!) and yea they dont make movies liek dat any more!! lol!!! gosh im DYING to no wat happens!!!!!! sooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update fast!!! pretty please!!!!

love vini

*Edit**

I had guessed it right that the girl was Ritu right???😆 pat on my back for it....😆

ahh kat another brilliant one??How did u manage it woman?? Haw u got Helena there?? Kat honestly that was the most adorable thing i ever read !!

ok felt really bad reading his past i mean.....dad no moree and mom with cancer?? poor guy he has suffered so much....loved that Mrs warwick's character....Kat seriously the way u hav penned the whole FB is simply outstanding.👏 u r simply the best....

he drove Disha around manhattan??? gosh can this guy get any more adorable?☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Coming to my favourite bit....Kat r u going a bit too high on bolly guys??😆

OMG Salman been fighting with SRK'. I can't believe there mothers not said anything?' Riddhima looked at her confused

'Bi there not related?' Riddhima said paying at the counter.

'What do you know? I mean Aamir, Salman and SRK '.KHAN are brothers why would they say King khans' its all in the family and everyone related..'

OMG all the three khans??🤣 tut tut u r trying to divert my attention from armaan huh? not possible....😆😆😆 ☺️😉

Ok the wedding scene was one of its kind....gosh maya is adorable...Kat wer on earth do u even think to cook up such brilliant characters?? She a repleca of ridz?? And the whole beer -kitchen scene....😆😆😆 pair of clowns??? Lmao awesome awesome awesome is all i can say....😳⭐️

ok Ridz having maya now for two weeks? i meam Bi offered huh? so u brought Akshay kumar too?????? hmm Kat wats going on?😆😆😆

ok cuming to last bit well me shocked.....shanky the villan?😡 i mean agreed vivek was wrong choice but Armaan too.....gosh....Kat am dying to know wat u hav to store now....seriously way too eager now...actually desperate.😆

Loved the mention of dior here...noticed u always include a usually wonderful fragrance in ur fics.😳

i guess my bashan has cum to close now....😆😆 u can heave a sigh of relief.😆😆

desperately waiting...

love

Jia😳

OMG kat....whats with shanx man....he never approving guys for his daughters...wanted them to stay spinisters or wat????n aawww armaan left her cause of that...he a sweetheart.....well u will make her know in ur good time so i just have to wait....n i love maya!!!so um guessing maya loves ammy too n babysitting her together will be bringing some sparks perhaps!!!!

btw....for the first time i guessed a cliff right...it was ritu!!!

awsome update waiting for the next tom 😃