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Posted: 19 years ago
well let's end da suspense now!

Resturant:

Dk pulls out disha's chair for her and they sit down. It's a candle lit dinner for both couples.

Dk sits down and sees someone!

Dk: Disha, look, that looks just like Anju!

Disha: CAN't be. why would she be here at this romantic resturant when she is going out with her friend.

DK: YEah you are right. I mean she would ask me first before going out with a guy, right?

Disha: Dk, you are so protective. now lets enjoy our dinner.

Both couples enjoy his dinner. Disha is just staring into Dk's choclately brown eyes while Dk is doing the same.

Coincedently, both couples finish at the same time.

As they are both headed towarf the door, Dk and Adi bump into each other.

Anjali is in ADi's arm at the same time.

Adi: I am sorry sir.

Dk: No problem! ANJALI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Uh..bhayyia..meet my firend adi.

Dk: Oh hi. Since when did friends go out on romantic dinners and have their arm around one another.

A: Ever since now?

Disha: Dk! leave her alone, now! Anjali, enjoy your date.

Dk: Why are you shouting at me? you should be shouting at her...she's the one romancing before getting married.


Disha: And what did you do with girls before marriage? their puja?

Dk: uh..i give up!

They all go home and Adi drops Anjali home.

A: I am sorry about bhayyia.

Adi: Oh no problem! I feel much better about having a jiju. 😆

A: I know, he can be wacko sometimes.

Adi: Sometimes

A: 😆 😆 😆

Adi: Bye sweetheart.

A: Bye.

They kiss and hug.

ANjai walks in and Dk fires on her.

Dk: What were you doing with him?

Disha is standing behind him and making really funny actions.

DK: Stop laughing...i am asking you something..what were you doing with that man?

Angali: I was...having dinner? 😕

DK: that i can see! but why?

A: BEcause i was...hungry? 😕

Dk: you could have eaten at home.

A:but what's so wrong about having dinner with him?

Dk:Because he's a guy.

A: You are a guy! i have dinner with you everyday and you dun't say anything then.

Dk can't take it anymore and breaks into laughter.

Dk: Do you love him?

A: Him?

Dk: No, his brother!

A: Oh..i love him a lot and he loves me.

Dk: Okay...well plz tell me when you go out with a guy so i dun't have a heartattack.

Disha: Please! I am tired! can we all get some sleep?

They all go to sleep and Anju goes to sleep dreaming about Adi and he does the same.


I ended the suspense. I am going to end this fanfiction soon so if anyone else wants to continue plz pm me. i will be starting a new one soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
😭 nooooooooo dnt end this 1... 😭

gr8 part tho 👏

😭
Kajal741 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
i am not ending this one today but will soon. Don't worry! i have another fanfic which i want to start soon. 😃 i am sure like that one. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
if it as good as this...then i wont like it...i will love it 😳 ........

👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was a lovely part...pls cont soon. will be looking forward to reading ur new fan fic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!! looking forward to the new one!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i was laughing! it was cute and funny!!!!!


hey i will cont if u want!!! i already have 6..but i think i can do it!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Time to continue. Hope you enjoy this one as much as you enjoyed the others.

New Day: (means new problems)

Disha and Dk are on the terrance sleeping.

Disha: DK, get up! come on.

Dk: or else?

Disha: YOu know what? wait right here and i will be right back.

She runs downstairs and gets a glass of water.

She goes back up to the terrance and pours it on him.

Dk jumps in fright and lands on the floor.

DK: is this some way to wake up your husband?

Disha: Yes it is.

Dk starts to chase her. They run around the whole house until Disha hears Nandani cry.

She picks her up.

SHe still hollers on until Dk calms her down.

Disha: Papa ki chamchi (got dialogue from guli, hope u didn't mind.)

Dk: What did you say?

Disha: Daddy's little girl.

Dk: so? what's the problem with that?

Disha: because i dun't like sharing you with anybody.

Shop:

Adi: I love you.

A: So?

Adi: what do you mean by so? i love you! can't you say it back>

A: love is supposed to be understood, not said. I love you so much that i can't put it in words.

Adi: Well, i want to introduce you to my parents.

A: Really? i can't wait to meet them. when are we going?

Adi: In an hour. Already talked to your boss.

A: HOw do you know my boss?

Adi: she's my cousin.

A: Oh! no wonder she doesn't mind you dropping by everyday.

Adi: Yeah well be ready i am coming back in an hour.

A: Where are you going?

Adi: To buy a duhla wear. Go to get ready, right?

A: What? we're getting married?

Adi: oh yeah forgot to tell you.

He falls on his knees and pulls out a rose from his pocket.

Adi: Will you marry me?

A: Yess!!!!!

She opens up the rose and in the middle is a diamond ring.

Adi:Good! Because i already rented the mandap. Now all that is waiting is your dear brother's approval.

In a hour:

Anjali calls up DK telling him she's going to be late.

Dk: What?

A: What now, bhayyia?

Dk: HE asked you to marry him?

A: So what's wrong?

Dk: You're too young.

A: THen you want me to get married when i am 50.

Dk: i am just worried about you.

A: Bhayyia, you have the weridest reactions. Instead of being happy, you are worried.

Dk: WEll have good time.

Segail HOuse:

Disha: Will you plz leave Anju alone?

DK: No. she's too young.

Disha: Dk, you have to let go.

Dk: You have too stop spoiling her.

Disha: I am serious. I want her to be happy and on no accounts are you to go and spy on Adi and Anjali when they go on dates.

Dk: YEs, boss.

Adi's HOuse:

Adi: Meet my parents. (maya and vijay)

A: Namaste.

M: Jitero, beti (bless you, daughter.)

Adi: she is going to be your bahu.

V: Then all i have to say is i can't wait till you get married.

Anjali touches their feet and they bless her. Vijay takes a liking to her and treats her like a daughter already.


Will con't later.

Will Dk approve of this rishtaa? (he'll probably freak!)
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol..thts wht elder brothers do .... reminded me of my cuzins who do tht all the time...luv it..pls continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 nice!! and dont worry about taking my line!!!!!

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