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Posted: 19 years ago
😊 I just started reading today and it is awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry for the long time in between of writing.

Segial House:

New Day:

Angali comes down all ready in a nice yellow saree. She is ready to go to work.

DK: Arre..angali where are you going?

A: Uhh..bhayia i get bored at home so i decided to work.

Dk:What? well i guess it's okay if your bhabi says yes.

A: OH bhabi..she said yes a long time ago.

Dk: how come all the women in the family know everything before the men?

Angali looks like aarti form sindoor just to remind you.

Dk goes in his room.

Dk: um...disha

Disha: what? hurry up...i have a lot of work to do.

Dk: I love you!

Disha: a monkey could have told me that much!

Dk has a file in his hand.

Disha grabs it and throws it anywhere.

Disha: now say you love me.

Dk: how many times do you want me to say it? i never heard you say it.

Disha: i

Dk: go on

Disha: love

Dk: i'm waiting

Disha: you!

Dk: but i am sorry. i love some more than you.

Disha: what?

DK: yeah it's true.

DIsha: who? you have to be joking!

Dk: no i am not. i love...

Disha: who, tell me

Dk: Nandani more!

Aroah makes an entry!

Ar: what about me?

Dk: i will always love you the most no matter what!

Ar: REallY?

DK: yeah, now go on and play.

Disha: here take this

She hands him a big box of junk!

Dk: What's this for?

Disha:to clean

DK: me?

He looks all around him to make sure she is talking to him.

Disha: yeah you, now get to work

Dk: great, one day i get off and i have to work

Disha: well you could...

Dk: could what?

Disha: hug me forever and not let go

Dk: no! u keep on saying to let go

Disha: i promise i won't. i really want to hug someone today.

DK: Aucha? well in that case i will have to obey your orders and hugs her.

They both fall on the bed and lay their for a little while.

Suhas: Disha???

Ajuba: What happened?

Suhas: i haven't seen her the whole day.

Dk: Apaki beti ander hai.

Suhas: What has she been doing?

DK: sleeping with nandani.

Ajuba: her health is okay right?

Dk: Ajuba all u need to worry about is you right now.

TImes flies by and ANgali comes home eventually.

A: Guess wht?

Dk: What now?

Disha: Dk!

A: i got a job and have been working their ever since they hired me today.

DK: wow that's wonderful.

Disha: hold on. i will go bring sweets.

Dk: Angali

A: ji. bhayia

Dk: your dear nephew has been bugging me the whole day about you!

They all have a nice and peaceful day!

Will right first thing tomorrow! this is a promise. it was hard the last few days since i was really busy with my school work. hope you enjoyed this.
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely...pls don't make us wait too long for the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
weclome back
that was a nice part. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
welcome back!!
great part!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Time to post more.


Segial HOuse:

The two love birds are sleeping and haven't waked up yet.

Disha: Come on it's time to get up

Dk: NO! it's time to sleep.

THey are all cuddled up and he has his arms around disha.

Disha: let go or i'll scream

Dk: Fine but first you have to do what i tell you to.

Disha: Fine...now tell me.

DK: um...i want you kiss me and scream that you love me.

Disha: Fine.

SHe kisses him on his forehead.

Disha:I LOVE YOU! 😊 now let go of me.

Dk: WHy?

Disha: Because you said you would.

Dk: I never guarenteed it.

HE lays on top of her and starts to kiss her neck. SHe can't control herself and they have the best morning of thier life.

Shop:

A: How can I help you?

Guy: I am looking for a suit to wear at my sis's wedding.

A: Follow me and I will show you some to your liking.

Guy folllows her and loves her sense of stlye.

Anjali is walking back and is about to trip but the guy catches her at the last moment.

A: THanks so much.

Guy: No problem. My name is Adi.

A: OH. mine is angali.

Adi: nice name.

From that day on he came to the shop under some pretxt or the other and Angali never complained.

A Week Later:

Disha is in the kitchen while Dk is playing with Aroah in the backyard.

Aroah: Papa i am tired now.

Dk: ok go take a nap and i will wake you up in a little while.

MEanwhile he goes to play with Nandani.

Dk:(to his pyari daughter) You know i love you so much.

He goes on and Nandani replies in her baby language.

Anjali comes home from the shop and is daydreaming.

Suhas: Beti, where are you lost?

A: No where maa.

Suhas: YOu know i was thinking about your marriage.

A: What? But i don't want to get married now.

Suhas: Why not?

A: Umm..because there are so many things to do before marriage.

She goes into her room and suddenly remembers Adi. For the rest of the evening she thinks about him.

Next Day: Afternoon

Disha gets a call from DK.

Dk: hey sweetheart.

Disha: hi

Dk: GET ready because we aare going out for dinner today.

Disha: Okay. But on one condition.

Dk:Anything for you, jaan

DISha: You have to come home early today.

Shop:

Adi: hey.

A: i am not talking to you. what made you so late today?

Adi: I am sorry.

He holds his ears and does a sad puppy face.

Anjali turns around and hugs him really tight.

Adi: I love you, Anju.

A: I do too.

Adi: how about dinner tonight?

A: I have to ask my bhayia.

Adi: okay...i hope this bhayia of yours says yes.

A: Well i have to still tell him i am in love.

Adi:What have you told him? You might as well tell him when i come to your house with the baraat.

A: Umm..nothing. And first of all, i am going to tell him..just not today!

Adi: well i gtg so i will see you tonight with any luck. and if you don't tell your bhayia, then i will.

A:okay i will. Bye, Adi.


Segial HOuse:

Disha is getting all ready when Aroah comes behind her and puts his hands over disha's eyes.

Aroah: Guess who this is?

Disha: Aroah!

Aroah:how did you know?

Disha: I am your mother and i can feel your presenses.

Dk: Don't worry, beta. I am still trying to find out how these women work but...

Disha: DK!

Anjali is all ready in a beautiful purple and blue sari.

Dk: Hey! where are you all ready to go to?

A: Bhayia, i want to ask you if i could go to dinner with my friend.

Disha: Sure! have a great time.

DK: Disha! she was asking me.

Disha: ANd your point is! i said yes and that's final.

DK: Yes, boss. Now can we go.

Disha: Yeah. Aroah, promise me that you will behave.

Dk: DIsha, relax! He's my son and he'll behave.

Disha: THen i definiatey won't relax!

They leave for the restaurant while Adi and Anjali are already there.

Consquently, Adi, Anjali, Dk, and DIsha are at one resturant and are sitting right behind one another.


LEt's see what happens next. 😆




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Posted: 19 years ago
that was good...continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice!! please conts!! dont leave us in suspense!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a excllent part kajal 👏 👏 👏
it was also funny
please write soon!!!!! because cannot bear the suspense! because your story is nice!
i wonder who will see first anjali or dk and disha!
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Posted: 19 years ago
oooh...interesting ...will dk n disha find out??? pls continue soon.

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