*DMG NEW FF(kissa yeh pyar hai) part9 pg6

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Hello friends

I am very sorry for the blank topic I meant to have part1 of my ff but cause of problem due to my computer I was able to send part one. I am very sorry once again.

Here is part 1 hope u would like it. I would be starting it from where it ended. There wouldn't be much of arman and ridz sence in first 2 parts

Part 1

Chrig chrig !!!!! chrig kya howa'. Chrig plz kuch to kaho Arman deko''. Ritu shout

Arman holds chrig and shake him

Arman ' chrig kya howa r u ''.. look at ritu as see her very frighten and tense.

Arman then look at ridz and give her sign to take ritu away as too much tense is not good for her.

Arman ' ritu tum chalo ridz ka saat I well take care f chrig.

Ritu- no I am not going any where chrig get up plz look at me

Ar- riddhima ritu ko lajao''.

And ridz take ritu and arman cal wardboy and take chrig some tests.

Arman done all the test.

Arman ' sister lovely mujhe chrig ke test results bahut jalde chayha .plz

And come out of the room while chrig is still unconscious. Ritu comes there

Ritu ' arman ho chrig'

Arman ' don't worry ritu chrig is perfectly fine'. Mujhe lakta hai ka kamzori howa hai.

Ritu ' thank god he is fine '''' tears come out of her eyes'''' so to light the environment'''

Arman ' ritu it all your fault u don't give him proper food.

Ritu- Arman.!!!!!!!!!!

Arman ' I am joking

Nuser ' dr arman chrig ko hosh ayia hai.

Ritu rush in followed by arman ritu give chrig hug and cry

Chrig ' ritu I am fine it was just'''''

Ritu ' shut up chrig it was nothing for u but''''.. and cried main re to jaan nikle rahe thi'''

Chrig ' ritu'''

Arman make a sound to show his presences.

Arman- I be just right back

He was walking lost in how much chrig and ritu love eachother and his and ridz love is completely different. He was so lost that he didn't see and bump into some one and that was none other then riddhima.

Riddhima was about to fill down when arman holds her hand and bring her back and their chest hit one other. Ridz hair was flying and going all over armans face, arman just stare at her and did not more while ridz trying to move her hair from armans face and not realising that she is caring his face. Arman holds her hand and ridz looked up to see him, but ridz pager start ringing and they break apart

Ridz- thank u ''..or otherwise I would..

Arman- cut her off in between '''. It ok ''' and is about to leave'..

Ridz- arman r u going to collect chrig's report.

Arman ' yes y'''

Ridz- it here '''.. and hand it to him

Arman ' thank u ''. And again trys to leave

Ridz- arman '''he looked back at her'''. Arman ow Dr keerti want to see the file and both of us together.

Arman ' ok lets go'..

They both reach dr keerti's cabin

Aramn ' dr keerti can we come in'''..

Keerrti ' yes Dr's

Arman- dr keerti yeh hai chrig ki reports, he suddenly got headache and fainted so therefore I took some blood simple and here is the reports''.

Dr keerti sees the reports''

Ridz- dr keerti I have see the resukt I don't think it anything serious I think'''

Dr keerti ' dr ridhima it is serious'''

Ridz- kya dr keerti but'''

Arman- wat wrong dr keerti, what does the reports show.

Dr keerti ' chrig ko brain tumor hai''. Aur'

Arman and ridz both are shock and cant think of anything.

Arman ' dr keerti aur'''..

Someone ' kya!

Some one says.

Who is this person''' I will tell u in next part .

Hopefuly u guyz like it.

Plz do reply.

Thank u😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey,m d 1st one to comment....
nice part...👏
continue soon...

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Edited by coolvini4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi thank you

here is Part 2
Kya!!!!!!!!!!!
Arman, riddhima turn around and is shock to see chriagh standing in front of them.
Arman – chriagh who …….
Chriagh- arman how can this be possible I didn't do anything why me……….. tears roll down from his eyes
Armaan- chriagh dehko woh………. Take deep breath……..tumhe kuch nahi hoga…. Woh……….
Dr keerti- Dr armaan I don't think you should hide anything from him.
Chriagh – Dr keerti mujhe kya howa aur iske koi
Dr keerti – yes Mr Verma there is treatment for it but we need to do some test. Dr Armaan aap Mr Verma ka test karka mujhe dekayai plz
Armaan – yes dr keerti.
Dr keerti leave the room
Armaan – chriagh can we do the tests
Chriagh – armaan tell me the truth what are the chances of me surviving ……. Both eyes are numb.
Armaan – chriagh……….woh
Ridz – armaan ……. Holding his hand and give him a sign that ritu is here………
Ritu – chriagh kya howa is everything fine…………
Chriagh wipe his tears and smile…..
Chriagh – kuch nahi dr's said that everthing is fine……….
Nuser- sir everthing is ready we can do the tests now………
Ritu look confused
Ritu- what tests……chriagh if everthing is fine then why doing more tests……. Chriagh wat is it ……..
Ridz try to control the situation but fail as ritu did not listen
Chriagh - ritu it nothing these tests just small it just because I have gona quite weak so that why they are checking to see wat they can give me so I can be normal……..
Ritu – r u telling me the truth
Chriagh – hai aur nahi to main tumhse lie ……..
Ritu – nahi who I was worried………… and hug him
Chriagh – don't worry ……… a single tear rolls down and armaan put his and on him …….
Armaan – yes ritu u women cry in ever small thing , ……….ridz looked at him……… chriagh lets go
Chriagh – can I go now ritu………..
Ritu - ok..i will be waiting here…..
Armaan – riddhima tum ritu saat raho
Ridz nod her head
Armaan take chriagh with him and he does the tests.

After few hours armaan is with dr keerti and chriagh come in.
Chriagh- dr keerti kya hai report mi
Dr keerti – have sit mr verma……
Chriagh – nahi dr you tell me wat in the report
Armaan – chriagh report mi ya hai ki ………. Tum ko……….tum ko
Chriagh – kya armaan mujhe ko kya armaan
Dr keerti – mr verma you have to be strong in listening to wat we are going to say…….the reports shows that you have brain tumor which is the reason why you blank out.
Chriagh break down ………kya , dr wat is the treatment
Armaan – chriagh we can do surgery and after that you would be fine
Chriagh look up at armaan with shine of hope
Armaan – but ……….
Chriagh – but kya……. Armaan
Armaan- but there is a risk of you losing your memory
Chriagh- kya …………in shock….. isn't there any other way
Dr keerti- no mr verma there is no other way ……
Chriagh looked down – is I don't do the surgery how longer can I survive….
Dr keerti - maxi of 6 months
Look up and tears roll down his eyes
Chriagh with tears in his eyes……… 6 months ………6 months ………….in lower tone………. I will be able to see my baby and ritu………
Armaan is shock by wat he has heared …… chriagh hai tum kya ka raha hoon……… tum ……..
Chriagh – nahi armaan mujhe yeh surgery nahi karne hai……and start waking away.
Armaan – chriagh ………….sono ….chriagh
Dr keerti- dr armaan you plz try to make him understand and we have less time we have to do the operation as soon as it possible.
Armaan – yes d keerti……..and leaves.
Armaan walks down and goes to the fire exist and sit down on stairs………… and chriagh's words goes around his head………. And he cross his hand with eachother place it on his forehead…………
Someone put their hand on armaan's shoulder and he look up to find riddhima standing there.
Ridz- armaan……..and sit next to him……….armaan what has in chriaghs's report…
Armaan look up at her and then away – brain tumor………and he is ……..
Ridz- he is wat armaan.
Armaan- he is refusing from doing operation which means that he would not be able to live more the 6 months or less.
Ridz – wat looks all shock………. Ritu …….. armaan look up … I mean has he think about ritu and …………
Armaan- ritu ……….. ridz wat a luck she has as one happiness is on the way for her and one sorrow is right next to her in either way she is losing………. I am more worried of when she get to know about chriagh 's condition god know how she is gona…….
Ridz put her hand on his and look into his eyes…….. armaan chriagh is your friend talk to him and try to make him understand the satiation and how risky it would be for ritu his lost.
Armaan who put his hand on top of ridz….. I think you are right I will talk to him… they bith look the other way…..

Scene shift to chriagh who walk down and see ritu who is staying in a sofa in his room (in sanjevin) and fall in asleep……. He walked toward her and tears rolled down his eyes…..he talk to himself. Ritu mujhe maaf kardo main aapna vaada nahi neba pa woga……wat can i do when we want to live we cant and when we don't want to live we don't get the chance.
I love you ritu more than anything I can risk your life …….. and wipe his tears and say to himself we are going to leave today and go far so nothing happen to you……then look at ritu 's tommy ……… beta tum appne mummy kayal rak na mera ja ne ka bad………. And kiss her tommy……….
Armaan – chriagh ………. He look up to him ………..i want to talk to you come with me…………
Chraigh- kya hai armaan….. if you gona talk to me about the surgery , then I don't you are wising your time as I am not goning to change my mind
Armaan – chriagh why are you doing this……….. yes I understand there is risk but it not definite. And think about ritu what is she going to do ……. How is she
Chriagh – armaan it very easy for you to say, but I don't want to live a life where I would not remember my wife and child, I perfre death then that type of live…………
Armaan you wouldn't understand when ever you love someone then you would understand that thinking live without that person is not just ard but impossilbe. And I don't want to live unknown life.
Arman- you are telling me all this but you are not thinking how ritu would live without you when it impossible for her too. So plz do the operation and you never no nothing may happen to you. Because that is the only way which you can survive. Plz chriag try to understand ……… and put his hand on chriagh shoulder…..
Chraig – lekan armaan ……..
Sound of glass breaking come and both armaan and chraigh are shock…..

That it for today hope you like it
Plz leave your commands
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hey omg yaar lng prt nd emotional 2 oh god poor chirag yaar it ws so diff 2 lv wthout her lv oh god yaar.............nw wht gonna happn nd ridz tlkd wth hm abt ths..........nd he hd tlkd wth chirag nd nw he ws tllng 2 ar wch he ws suffrng befre..............he vry wll known hw its diff 2 lv wthout lv hmmmmmmmmmm nd omg yaar ritu ne to kahi oh god poor bth of thm...........
cont soooooooooon
luv yachu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww very emotional
great updte
continue soon
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wow sooooo good sweety
plz continue soon
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awwsome too gud yaar please continue it soon
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hi people thank you for your lovely commands
Part 3
Rituuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chriag shockly yelled.
And run toward ritu so does armaan. As ritu is on the floor.
Chriag – Ritu ….ritu …kya howa…..plz open your eyes……… armaan dehko….dr ….dr ……….. chriag shout out loud.
Armaan – chriag calm down ………. I will check her ………..
Chriag – liken armaan…….
Armaan – chriag ………. Come….. they take ritu to a room
After 15 min………… ritu jump and call out chriag………
Chriag – ritu main yaha hoon , I am here next to u
Ritu – chriag …..chriag .woh ……………tears roll down her eyes and hold chriag's face ………. Chriag tum ….tum operation karoga. Armaan operation tayare karro.
Chriag – nahi ritu , I am not going to the operation
Ritu – but why not chriag baby plz try to understand, armaan tell him
Chriag – nahi ritu, I don't want to live a life which has no meaning, if I don't even remember the most important person in my life. Nahi ritu
Ritu – chriag how can u be so selfish only think about yourself, why don't you think about me what am I gona do without u. plz chriag
Chriag – ritu plz try to understand I love very much but …………putting his hands on ritu's face .,tear roll down his tears.
Ritu holding his hand and look into his eyes- fine chriag but before anything happen to you I will kill myself ……..
Chriag's eyes wide open – ritu yeh tum kya kara hai hoo. Ritu plz don't say that
Ritu – chriag I cant live without you ………. And take his hand and place it on her head …….. chriag tumhe main re kasamh …………
Chriag – ritu tum yeh sab………..
Ritu – nahi chriag plz yeh operation karro.plz
Chriag single tear roll down his eyes and he close his eyes- ok ritu I will do the operation……. Ritu give him hug and both cry their hearts out. Armaan meanwhile staring at them.

Near the reception.
Armaan – doctor keerti chriag is ready to do operation
Dr keerti – that is good, we have to do the operation as soon as possible because the tumor is separating very quickly. Aur hai Dr atul will be assisting us in this operation.
Armaan – yes dr keerti.
Dr keerti – i will tell sister lovely to ready the operation equipment and will inform you u when it ready.
Armaan – ok………. And leave from there and goes to the locker room where all other inters were there.
Atul – armaan where were u I was looking for u………….have no reply so walk to armaan and put his hand on his shoulder. And armaan jump……. Kya howa armaan
Armaan- chriag's operation is today, oh yeh you are assisting it dr keerti said it.
Atul- oh ok….. but armaan isn't the operation to risky…….
Anjali – kiss ko kya howa hai
Muskaan – woh chriag ko brain tumor hai ………..he is armaan's friend
Armaan's pager rings ………… atul let go it from dr keerti
Dr keerti with chriag and ritu – Mr verma everything is ready shell we go. Armaan and atul arrive there.
Armaan- dr keerti we are here ……..goes and give chriag injection to put him to sleep but before that chriag holds armaan's hand …………… armaan is everthing be ok…….. armaan smile …………..yes it would be and inject him
Atul- don't worry chriag everything would be perfectly finebeacuse you so many people praying for you so don't worry…..they take chriag into operation theatre….
Ritu – armaan take care of chriag plz……folding her hands together.
Armaan holds her hand and nod his head and look over to ridz……….
Ridz- ritu sit down everything would be fine…………. And armaan leaves.
Ritu and ridz waiting outside the theatre room

After 3hours(hopefully)
They all come out…………..ritu run to armaan …………and look into his eyes.
Armaan put his hand on her shoulder …………. Ritu the operation is successful, chriag is unconscious right now and as soon as he is conscience the u can see him…….ok………. ritu smile and tear drop out of her eyes
Ritu – thank god …………….
Nuser comes running – dr keerti the patient is sinking……….dr
Armaan – wat…….. all run inside again………….
Ritu – kya howa armaan……. Soano……ridz try to come her down ……nahi riddhima …….woh ….and hold dr keerti's hand……dr keerti kya howa hai mera chriag ko………tell me
Dr keerti – I need to check but may interal bleeding….everything would be fine
Ritu – nahi …..nahi……… and walk backwards ………..she suddenly start having pain and hold her tommy……..
Dr keerti and ridz run to her …..ritu ritu hold your self.
Dr keerti – dr riddhima I think it time for, you take her , dr anjali you also help dr riddhiam…
Anjali – yes madam…………they take ritu whilr keerti went back to operation theatre
Ritu still in pain – riddhima chriag mera chriag ko kuch nahi hona chayia hai main
Ridz – don't worry ritu………….take deep breaths.

In the operation theatre
Atul – dr keerti the patient heart beat are very low …….armaan looks worried and get tense
Dr keerti – dr armaan give him shocks ………… but the it did not show any results… oh no the patient is sinking he is not responding to anything ……..
Armaan – no dr keerti nothing should happen to chraig and give him more shocks…
But in the middle keerti stop armaan …..dr armaan you r a dr you should not be behavouing like this……
Atul -dr keerti chriag is responing they all look at this heartbeat graph……..

Sence shift to ritu who is unconscious………. Anjali – wow she has given birth to baby girl ohhhh she is so cute……..
Ridz – hai di she is and I hope nothing happen to chriag aur………..

Sence again shift to chriag…….. dr keerti – his life is saved but he is in coma……. Dr armaan app…………. Armaan eyes are wet and walks off form there without saying anything ……
Atul- ha re armaan sono…………but no respond and just walked past. He walk up to terrace and chriag's words goes around his head and at the background dmg title track play in slow motion.

Ridz- atul chriag , how is he
Atul with very low voice – he is in coma…….and armaan
Ridz- armaan ko kya ……….in very tense tone…..
Atul looks surprisely ………y r u so worried about armaan …….
Ridz – no nothing where is he I need to tell him some thing ………and look down
Atul- I don't know but he was very upset………….and he just walk…..as soon as he look up ridz was not there……….. hare yeh ridz kaha chali gayi.

Ridz run up to the terrace and see armaan sitting down in one corner, so she walk up to him…….and put her hand no his shoulder.
Ridz- armaan ……..and sit beside him…………armaan turns around and hug her tightly………..which shock ridz but she also hugged him back and armaan let out his heart ………
Armaan- riddhima I couldn't save chriag , I don't know how ritu would react and it not good for her state.
Ridz break apart and hold armaan's face – nothing would happen to ritu and she ahs given birth to a cute baby girl…..this bring small smile on armaan's lip but quickly it wife and he stand up………..ridz wat about her how is she gna……..
Ridz- don't worry armaan god is still there don't worry let go to ritu…….. armaan nods his head and wipe away his tears and both walk down.

Ritu become conscience and look around and see her baby girl beside her and smile touching her check and thing to her self ……chriag you won it baby girl and suddenly she get up……..
Anjali- rituji app.it not good for you, you must rest……
Ritu – nahi dr anjali I want to meet chriag , I need to tell him that he has won and need to show him our baby ………….she pick up the baby and start walking
Anjali- ritu you can meet chriag now ..plz listen to me
Ritu – why icant meet whats wrong with him where is he his he fine tell me
Anjali remain quite no knowing what to say. Ritu – plz tell me how his he. Just then muskaan comes in –anjali atul is looking for you, and oh yeh you know the patient that had brain tumor …………. Anjali ttry to stop her but fail to ………..he is in coma………
Ritu – kya chirag coma ma hai ……….. muskaan looks shock……….and look at anjali – she is chriag wife ……
Ritu – where is chriag I want to meet him ……and keep on repeating samething in louder tone.
Anjali – ok mrs verma i will take you there …………..so she take ritu ………as they leave armaan and ridz reach there
Ridz- muskaan ritu kya hai
Muskaan – I didn't know she was chriag's wife so I told anjali about chriag and ritu find out that he is in coma….armaan holds his head
Armaan- muskaan wat have you done and runs to reach to ritu and followed by ridz and muskaan

Ritu who enters chriag's room and walk up to him with her baby…. And sit beside chriag and place her hand on his hand
Ritu – chriag you know you have won you wanted a girl, now your girl is here so open your eyes look at her take her in you arms . plz chriag you promised me that we will always stay together now you cant break your promise or I will never talk to you .
Tears run down her eyes like rain. And he shake his hand plz chriag get up..humari beti ka lyia plz open your eyes
Just then arman and other reach there as ridz was about to go get ritu out armaan stop her.
Ritu – chriag look I cant live without tumhe humari beti ki kasamh plz get open and he put her head down on his hand …………
Then we see chriag moving his hand and feet slowly and his eyes open slowly….

Ok guyz this is it for today.

Promo = there is fire in sanjeevin and very one is running but someone is missing.

Plz plz leave your command thank you.
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amazing part sweety
loved it laods
wow fire in sanjeevani tooooo goood
please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wow yaar to emotional prt yaar
realy yaar lvd it so mch
it ws superb yaar............ridz console hm.....
nd she gv birth 2 grl
nd fire in sanjeevani nd whoz mssng
wow cnt wait
cont sooooon
luv yachna 😛

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