*DMG NEW FF(kissa yeh pyar hai) part9 pg6 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello people so for the delay here is part 6

Part 6

Ridz – wat ….atul armaan is there help him……..

Atul – ridz control your self, don't be silly you can t go inside……..and anjali comes there and holds ridz

Ridz – di armaan is in there,……….tthere is break in each of her words……di help him plz………

Anjali – ridz don't worry the firebreak has find there way, everything is under control, and soon they will bring people who are stuck in there,….and it not only armaan ok now relaxe……….

Ridz – but di armaan came to safe me ………and he got stuck there.

Anjali look at her – don't worry he will be fine.

After 1 hour the fire is down , and many people are brought out. few people are injured and rest are fine.

Dr keerti – dr's each of you handle one case and dr subanker making books in the hospital near us for these patient until we fix something for them. Ridz come there looking for armaan.

Ridz – dr keerti have you seen armaan.

Dr keerti – wat would doctor armaan do here, the patient are here………and dr riddhima don't wise time do would I have told you

Ridz – dr keerti armaan was stuck inside…………tears drop from her eyes and went looking for armaan

Dr keeri – dr riddhimma listen ……………

Ridz looking around ….armaan ………armaan …….she look everywhere but there is no sign of armaan…………….armaan where are you…………as she was about to turn someons hand slide pass her;s she look back and see it was armaan .

Ridz – armaan ……and holds his hand armaan open your eyes armaan………then atul comes there.

Atul – ridz we need to check him up and he is bleeding and got some burnt………ward boys……and the scene shift to Tata hospital where all other patient were shift for short time including armaan.

Doctor comes out of armaan room. Ridz – doctor is armaan ok, y his he not coming in conscious it been so long…….

Doctor - dr riddhimma plz control………..you are a doctor you shouldn't react like this.

Ridz – but sir he……….. doctor- dr riddhimma we are trying we cant do anything until ka woh hosh me nahi hata…it dangerous …….hope you understand and pray for him to come to conscious as soon as possible. And the doctor leaves.

Ridz goes inside and sit beside armaan. Tears rolled down her check. And hold his left hand and place a kiss.

Ridz – armaan plz open your eyes, plz forgive me, armaan I am sorry armaan I have given you lost of pain I am very sorry. But you know why I keep distance and close her eyes take deep breath….. I was scared that you would leave me I was scared of losing you. Armaan open your eyes don't make my fear turn out t be true. Plz armaan …….I LOVE YOU ARMAAN. And cry her heart out and put her hand down ……….i love armaan …………

Riddhimma……….someone called ………..

Ok guyz I will leave it here take care.

Thank you plz leave you commands plz plz plz plz

123abc123 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
nce updte im finin dat was arman sayin her name or it cud b sum1 else bt great updte poooor ridz
great hw u explain der emotions
updte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
thank you very much sweet -niz for your lovely command.
the next part would be up by tomorrow.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
hey wow yaar it ws superb superb yaar realy ridz omg she lv hm sooooooo mch yaar bt whn she gonna confess cnt wait yaar
cont sooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
srrrrry fr late reply actuly net ws nt wrkng
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
really a nice one 😳👏😊so sweet of u please continue it soon
"Good relationships are like trees
They demand attention & care in the beginning
but once they blossoms
they provide U shade in all situations of life."
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
do continue fst.............. and pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz we n u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

Thank you so much every one sorry for the delay but here is

Part7

Riddhimma ………….

She look up and sees armaan looking at he

Armaan – riddhimma………in very low voice.

Ridz – armaan tum thik ho. Thank god tumhe hosh ayga.

Armaan – ridz I am fine

Ridz – tum bi na hut kardita ho. Agar tumhe kuch ho ja tha to main to. ..pause there

Armaan look into her eyes – ridz agar tumhe kuch ho ja ta to main marja tha. I cant think of live without you ridz……. Tear down his check and hers.

Ridz – armaan …holding his hand tightly ………… kyun karta ho mujhse itna pyar ………kyun ……..why I don't understand your love armaan kyun…..and cry her heart out.

Armaan – ridz if we knew the answer for why than there wouldn't be any problem…….all this is caused by why……and place ridz hand on his heart…as ridz stood up and sit beside him on the bed facing him…………….. riddhimma is dil ma sirf tum ho ……sirf tum aur humasha rahogi……….ridz bend down and place a kiss on his heart………….. I love you ridz

Ridz – I love you ……….i love you……………and hug him……….. still hugging him ………..i am sorry armaan I have givin you alots of pain na I am sorry. Place a kiss on his chest while he kiss her forehead

Armaan – jo hogay so hogay ,………..forget it ridz and…..holding her face and making eye contact with ridz…….but you are the only person that have givin me alots of happeness as well……………..

Ridz- I love you armaan

Armaan – love you toooooo

Excuse me…………ridz turn around and see the doctor……..

Ridz – yes doctor

Doctor- well how are you feeling mr malik.

Armaan – much better dctor.

Doctor – that's good, but I need to do some test to check everything is fine due to why you have remain unconscious for so long.

Armaan – ok

The doctor done the test…..ok mr malik everything is fine……….let me help get up.

Armaan – it ok doctor I can get up myself…….and try to get up but fall down….

Ridz – armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!

Sorry for short update.

Hope you like it.

Take care. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz leave your comments

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
amazing part sweety
loved it loadsss
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
hey yaar itne tme baad kyu update kiya bt it ws vryyyyy gud yaar lvd it nw thy confessd wow i am sooooooooo happpppppppy yaar..........
tooooooo goooooooooood jst lvd it.........
cont soooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
aw dat was sooo sweet
luved dis updte
really nce
updte sooon

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