*DMG NEW FF(kissa yeh pyar hai) part9 pg6 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

really sweet part!!! i bet it was Atul who came foward to save angie

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone

Here is part 9

Everyone turn around and the person was none other than atul.

Anjali – atul ……. And say to her self …….what his he doing, why , atul…..

Atul – I am sorry dr keerti to tell you this so late but what ever happened that day was my fault. I am sorry I forgot to turn the burnsen burner off and whem chemicals fall on it that how the room catch fire I am sorry.

Dr keerti- dr atul do u think sorry is enough u know in that incident some one could have die and lot of ups and down could have happen and u….

Anjali- dr keerti woh atul…….. before she could finish atul cut her off………..dr keerti I will accept anything you say.

Dr keerti – dr atul you are suspended for 2 week and before joining back you have give viva test. And before that I don't want to see you in hospital. U may leave now..

Without saying anything he went out but before leaveing he looked at anjali and then leave.

Dr keerti – you all get back to your duties. And she leaves. Anjali run to catch up with atul but she was late as atul already left.

Days go pass the condition in sanjeevani get better all patient get shift back to sanjeevani. Ridz is looking after arman and he is also improving. Anjali all quit and doing her work but also thinking about atul.

1 week later.

Dr keert – dr arman how you are feeling now

Arman – I am feeling very good dr keerti.

Dr keerti - that good, so you will be discharged today, and you can go home as you will be off and have rest. And you will be joining back tomorrow. Ok

Arman- ok dr keerti.

Dr keerti – ok see you tomorrow…and she started to leave but turns and look at dr riddhimma ………. Dr riddhimma I think you should go with dr arman to drop him home in case if he need any help ok.

Ridz – ok dr keerti …a smile appear in both ridz and armaan's face. Dr keerti leave that room….. ridz also try to leave but armaan hold her hand back.

Armaan – where are you going didn't you hear what dr keerti say

Ridz look into armaan's eyes - what did she say

Armaan – she said ..getting more closer to ridz ……….she said that you have to stay with me so where arr you going madam.

Ridz losing armaan grip – mr armaan malik we cant walk t her house na so I am going to call for a cab.

Armaan – ohhhhhhh is that what you are going to do I though…..giving a naught smile ……….

Ridz – what did you though armaan ……..giving him a look.

Armaan – I will tell you on the way so sweetheart get the cab I am dieing to go out of here . and give a flying kiss and goes out of the room.

Ridz – armaan …………you……..

In the locker room……… only anjali is there.

Ridz come in – hi di……….but no respond ……….so she goes to anjali and again call out .di …… and place her hand on anjali's shoulder………

Anjali come out of her thoughts.

Anjali – hi ridz when did u come and what is wrong,

Ridz – I should be asking this from u…..what is wrong with u di nowadays you are always like this u don't talk to any one y.

Anjali – It not like that I am tired. Any way let go home.

Ridz – no di dr keerti has told me to drop armaan home so I will drop hi and then come you go

Anjali – r u sure

Ridz – yep

Anjali – ok take care by.

Anjali went and sit in her car and drive off , on her way all atuls words goes around her head. So she stop the car – what am I doing why is atul in my mind, is this guilt or …….no no ….i have to meet him and say sorry……….. so she turn the car go toward atuls house.

Meanwhile ridz and arman reach armaan's house. Ridz bering armaan to his bedroom and make him sit on the bed.#

Ridz – now you rest I will be going home. She turns to go but armaan again holds her hand.

Armaan – plz stay for a bit more…….

Ridz – armaan go to sleep u have to get up early tomorrow.

Armaan – plz riddhimma plz ……..making innocent face …plz

Ridz – armaan tum nahi sodroga

Armaan – nahi. Never and smile ………

Ridz- leave my hand armaan ……and try to free her self but armaan pull her toward him with power tht she end up on him. They look into eachothers eyes and got lost in them. Armaan slowly move his hand and place it on her face while the other hand is caring her back. Armaan give a gentle kiss on ridz forehead and slowly move down to her eyes and toward her lip. Ridz who completely melted in his arms put her hand around armaan's neck, and there face come closer and closer and their lip meet with each other.

Scene shift to atul, he is in his house loaded with books.

Atul – ho god where should I start I don't know, and ……….before he could say any thing the door rings. He goes to open the door and see anjali.

Anjali – hi atul how are you.

Atul in low tone – hi how come you r here.

Anjali – y I shouldn't have come here?

Atul –no I didn't mean that, come in.

Anjali came inside and see the condition of the room – atul what is all this

Atul – woh I was preparing for viva….come sit here

Anjali – mmm……atul I have came to say sorry. I am very sorry atul bcoz of me you.

Atul cut her off – it ok anjali…..until I am there I will not allow any problem come near bcoz…. But he pause, and look down.

Anjali look at atul – atul you really like me na……

Atul – look up haan but that my problem anjali you don't worry. And he look away

Anjali had this sad face and …ok atul I should be going now it getting late.

Atul – ok can I drop u to your car. plz

As they reach to the door the lights went off and heavy rain starts.

Anjali – atul what happened to the light atul…. Atul!!!!!!!!!

Atul – anjali don't worry I am here. Hold my hand came . I think the lights are gone due to the rain…….

Anjali – atul what should we do now ……how long does it take for the lights……..

Atul – don't worry anjali……I wil do something u wait here…….

Anjali holds atul's hand tighter – no atul don't leave me u know I don't like darknesss

Atul – anjali I will never leave and place his other hand on her cheek…….and spare at her eyes…….. it look like time has stop for them….but thunder break them apart

Atul –anjali come here let me find candle…….where this the cupboard …oh here, just a minute anjali light will come now….hold this …….giving the candle to her. He take the lighter out and light the candle……… a smile appear on her face.

Anjali – thank u atul

Atul – it ok anjali…….. anjali I was thinking u should stay here until the rain stop it very heavy

Anajli – look at him ..i think u are right ……..and look around you were preparing for viva na come let me help u

A big smile appear on atul's face and follow anjali – anjali u want coffee

Anjali – yep

And they chat with eachother and also done practise for viva while tumse he play in the background (from jab we meet)

Scene shift back to AR

Ridz and armaan was very close to eachother as they can hear eachother heart beats.

The noise of thunder break them apart as ridz comes to her sense and get up and move way from armaan.

Ridz – armaan I think I should be leaving now…..not facing him.

Armaan got up and come close to her again – ridz don't leave this minutes incomplete ridz and hold her by her waist and place his chin on her neck

Ridz – melting in his arms armaan plz …….

Armaan place a kiss on her neck and move her hair to a side and place another kiss on her hear. And whisper on her ear – I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMMA on hearing this ridz turn around and hug him tightly – I love you too

Armaan holds her even tighter and kiss her on her shoulder and work his way up. By having then same reply back form ridz. He left hr up nd walk toward the bed and put her down. He come closer to her s ridz close her eyes ………. And the scene faded away.

Ok guyz this is it for now. Take care and plzzzzzzzzzz reply back plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
hey zohul wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar aftr sooo mch long time u hv update dsch a romantic prt yaar so it wwwws atul hw mch he lvs her tht he cn do nythng fr her nd ar ridz omg yaar d prtws soooooooooooooooo romantic yaar i hope it doesn't create ny pro ahead bt it ws fantastic yaar i jst lvd it nd atul cares fr her soooooo mch awwwwwwwwwwww chooooooo cute yaar nw i cnt wait wht gonna happn b/w thm
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
amazing part sweeetie
i loved it sooooo much
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon
nice to seee all the romance
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Thank u guyz. the next part will be up be tuesday.


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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
okkk thnks waitng fr tues.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
u all wasting ur time, just watch it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: zohul

u all wasting ur time, just watch it



what do u mean by that?

and plz cont soon!
i just read ur whole FF and its really good!!👏
plz do continue! :)

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