*DMG NEW FF(kissa yeh pyar hai) part9 pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you for your lovely command. the next part would be up shortly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
hello people thank you. here is the next part hope you would like it.

Part 4

Ritu – chriag !!!!!! chriag………… a huge smile appear on her face… chriag……..place her hand on his head………
Armaan come there………….ritu- armaan look chriag has open his eyes………armaan nod his head and look at chriag.
Chriag open his eyes and slowly move his hand………..ritu……he called out.
Ritu – hai chriag I am here…….holding his hand……ridz take the baby from ritu…….and ritu hug chriag………
Chriag – ritu ……….holding her tightly …………….I love you
Ritu – I love you too, aur you know tumhare beti tumhare bahut interzar karay hai…..and smiled……
Chriag's eyes lighten ………. Really ritu ……..and she nod her head………..chriag sit up abit and ridz give the baby into chriag arms.
Chriag – my girl …….and give are a kiss………….thank you ritu for beautiful gift.
Ritu – thanks to you without you nothing has meaning…….and they look at each other…..
Chriag – I told you it was a girl …………give a naught look to ritu and she hit him on his shoulder…….. she is our Roshni ………..both hug…………
Ridz – ritu we should leave chriag to rest……….and nurse come and takes roshni with her.
Chriag – nahi riddhima ritu ko yaha ruko janna do plz……..
Armaan – yes sure …………and armaan and riddz leave the room.

Ridz and armaan are walking and they got on the lift ……noone is on the lift expect them two….there is long silence………
Ridz - armaan ritu and chriag ka beach ma bahut pyar bagwan kare un ki pyar ko kissei ki nazar na lage.
Arman – look at ridz , pyar to sab karta hai but kuch log beach mai chor data hai.
Ridz look up into his eyes….. armaan…………and she understood wat he was referring to.
Lift stop at floor 3…ridz- armaan I have meet anjali di here………and try to leave but armaan holds her hand and pull her back in the lift door closes.
Armaan- ridz I was not finishedu
Ridz- armaan tum hai kya………….as he stop the lift.
Armaan – I want to ask you something riddhima, kya ma itna bura hai ka tum mujhse inti door janna chati hoon.
Ridz – armaan tum yeh kya kara hai hoon mujhe samaj main nahi arra hai.
Armaan move closer to ridz.
Armaan – ridz you know what I am trying to say, ridz where did our love go, just because of small thing why did all this happen………..looking into her eyes and both eyes are moisture. Ridz tum mujhse inti door kissa gaya, kya tumhe mera pyar par koi barosa nahi ta. Didn't you truth me
Ridz – armaan it not……..but we cant be one
Armaan hold her shoulder with both his hand – then what is it ridz, kyat um mujhse pyar nahi karti. ……and press ridz against the lift wall.
Ridz – armaan this is wat's the difference between us two
, we are completely different so how can we be together, there is not even one day that we don't fight
Armaan loss his graft and slowly take his hands of f her, and look at ridz + give a smile of saying is this much you know me ridz.
Armaan – you remember all the times we fight but not time lovely love time we have spend,………….and take a deep breath …………ridz you never understood me have always loved you, but you never……………
Ridz – armaan you are not understanding me ………
Armaan lift up his to say……….. bus ridz now I have understood everything ……and start the lift again ………………
Ridz – liken armaan …..holding his hand …………….but armaan pull his hand off her…………… ridz u think due to the fight we are not good for each , but you havn't think that behind all those fight there was love………single tear drop down his eyes…... if you would have told me once you don't like fighting then I wouldn't have even bother you ………….wiping his tears away………… ridz you don't know wat love is but until I am alive I will love you …………….putting ridz hand up and placing it in his heart ……………only you live here ridz and will always………..the lift door open and armaan leave…….. while ridz stare at him until he disappear and the lift door shutted again. Ridz cry her heart out and all round her armaans voice went around her head………..

In the pat lab anjali and atul was there
Atul – wat her u doing her anjali……..
Anjali – why are you asking…………. Atul – just like that , anyway you are looking very nice today , anjali not looking wat she is doing she drop methanol (which is very flammable) near Bunsen burner, and the lab catch fire.
Anjali – atul ….atul ..aag ………….. atul – don't worry anjali I am here, and the fire alarm went off, everyone in he hospital running out.
Dr keerti – every one go out from fire exist ……… dr subanker comes there …..kerrti everyone is going you came out let go I have called firebreak, they will be here soon.
Atul and anjali also goes out
Armaan – chriag ritu let get out there is fire I n sanjeevin hurry.
Ritu- lekan roshni kaha hai.
Muskaan – she is here let go quickly.
Armaan holding ritu's hand let go they went out.
Dr keerti – oh thank god everyone is out dr anjali you take all the child patient and get there register so we know everyone is here or not …….she give otherdr other things to do.
Armaan notice that ridz his not there – ridz kya hai …. And look around and she is no where to been seen. ……….. where is she , and then the argument that they had click on his mind…………. And his face froze.

Ok guyz this is it for today
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
OMG
ridhima????????????????????? i hope she's ok
please continue sooon sweety
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please continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!!! i read your ff fr the first time !!! yaar kya likhti ho tum !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome please get armaan and riddhima together!! and please pm when updated!!
luv,chingi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
thank you very much

Part 5
Armaan – ridz kya hai……….dr keerti have you seen ridz
Dr keerti – no dr armaan wat the matter……….
Armaan – I been looking for her but she is no where to be seen…….i will look for her…….anjali …………anjali………ridz ko kyi deka hai….
Anjali - nahi armaan, …………atul comes there ………..i saw ridz an 30mins go going to the terrace an not after that ………………….then we see armaan running form there………..armaan sono to …………….wats wrong with him…………
As armaan is about to go inside subanker hold his armaan – armaan are you mad y are you going inside it dangerous …………
Armaan – ridz is inside ………I need to go she is somewhere near terrace ……….
Subanker- wat that where the fire is, I can let you go , and you never know ridz may not be there at all. She might……………..
Armaan – she is……and leaves from there and went inside…………

Armaan goes toward terrace pass from each corner shout out ridz name but no respond ……the fire is building up…………

Outside the firebreak has reach and start dealing with the fire…………everyone move back…….

Armaan still looking for ridz…….. as armaan pass the second stair before the stairs for terrace he hears someone voice …………as he move forward he see ridz a smile appear in his smile of relive but soon it faded away. And ridz………who is unknown of the condition in hospital as she is lost in armaans words and though and crying………..
Armaan – ridz ..moving forward and on hearing his voice she quickly got up and wipe her tears and ready to leave.
Ridz- armaan I was just leaveing……… but armaan hold her hand …….
Armaan – where are you going …………….. ridz look confuse ……….
Ridz – y are you asking me…………..this changes armaan's mood and in louder tone
Armaan –ridz the hospital is in fire for past half an hour and you don't know it.
Ridz who is shock in hearing this …….wat hospital is in fire ……..but
Armaan – ridz where were you lost that you didn't even know what was going on
Can you hink if something happens to then wat would I do………..he stopped there as ridz look deep into his eyes…………
Ridz – why did you come here …………. Armaan looked at here and think …you know ridz and again you ask…………
Armaan- I think we should go before more fire builds up…………..and hold ridz hand leave to get outside. There is fire everywhere..ridz hold armaan hand + arm very tightly , …..armaan I am scared……..how we gona get out of here it ……….impossible armaan ……
Armaan – don't worry I am here with you nothing will happen to you ……….
One of the pillar fall and result in armaan and ridz apart from each other……….
Armaan – ridz……..watch out…….
Ridz – armaan ……….try to come forward ………
Armaan – no ridz stay there I will come ……….dont worry……..and he jump over the burning pillar………get near ridz………..ridz hug him………..
Ridz – armaan ……….and cry…………..why is this happening …
Armaan –shhhhhh let go………they run toward he exist area but there the fire was very high……….. armaan – we cant go from here and see the window ……and look at ridz ….we have to jump from that window ok and run to there ………….
Ridz looks down – I cant jump from here and move back ………..
Armaan – ridz it not time to argue hurry why r you going backward …….ridz and see another pilaar about to fall on ridz and he run and push ridz near the window and the pilar fall on him on his legs………
Ridz – armaan wat have you down and try to move the
Armaan – no ridz go from here the fire ….dont think about me I will be fine go and pushing her ………..
Ridz – no armaan I am not leaving you …………why are yu like this why did you save me ………..tears roll down her eyes ……………meanwhile armaan is trying to push her outside as he see atul and others standing there and he knew that they will hold ridz…………………… ridz still. Crying kyun armaan
Armaan because I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMA………I LOVE YOU…….and then he push her out …………
Ridz – armaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fall on the ground
Atul – ridz you ok armaan ……..
Ridz – he is inside ……and trying to go inside ..leave me …armaan ……….he is stuck there let me go.
Atul – you can go the fire is out of control…………
Ridz – wat……………….

Promo – ridz sitting near armaan …I am sorry armaan I have given you lost of pain I am very sorry. But you know why I keep distance but I was scared that you would leave me …………I really love you.

I will stop here other in next part take care till then.
PLZ LEAVE YOUR COMMANDS .
THANK YOU.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
OMG sweety
that was such an amazing part
please continue as soon as u can
and please PM me tooo
❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey omg yaar sry fr nt replyng lst 2 prts as i ws nt at hme nd aftr readng jst 1 wrd yaar fabulous yaar realy yaar omg armaan said it all pain in his voice nd all emotions omg yaar it ws dammmmmmmmmm gud yaar............jst lvd it nd ridz omg yaar why she ws doi ths.......armaan omg yaar he ws injurd nd she ws lost in his thoughts nd cnt fnd nythng wht ws happng nd poor armaan lke he ws gonna mad fr ridz nd omg yaar badly cryng bth wre lvd tht yaar nd he said i lv u nd she wow preacap wow yaar i hope nw she wll confessd 2 armaan wow cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg 😭 😭 😭 just caught up with your FF! this part was soo sadd 😭 😭 omg..hopefully nothing serious happened to Armaan! can you plz PM me when you continue?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg such an intense part woooow
serisouly amazing luved da way
u conveyed armi feelings really nce updte
continue sooon

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