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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

hey falak!!
So i just caught up with your fan fic and so far so good.
I'm loving it..especially there thoughts lol...haha there pretty much arguing with them selves😆
Hehe I liked your fan fic it has humor and romance...i'm loving it.
If its not too much for you will you please pm me when you update your next part?

~Mira

I know they do that alot 😆.......thanx for reading my FF reli appreciate it......awwwww thank youuu sooooo much for liking it......ofcourse it's not tooo much i willl PM you the next part definetly....😃😉

Originally posted by: ArmaansGirl

OMG! OMG! OMG! WOW! ur an amazingly fabulous brilliant ryter! i luv both of ur FF's! dey r soo gud! n dis 1 is soo cute n funni! n lol dem arguing wid demselves in dere mynds is soo cute n funni! luv armaan n rahul's relationshp n muskaan n ridzi r vry cute! luv it! cont soon!

tc xx
sadiya <3

awww thanx sadiya...seriously ur making me blush you guyss......thank youuu hun i will be uipdating that one in a bit sooo just check because i might not have time to PM everyone.....😃😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

lyked it????

what the hell???
LOVED IT
lol!
absolutely brilliant
cont soon
luv sonia

awww thanks sonia....that's really sweet 😳.....i will cont sooon and thanx fir the comments😃😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz plzz upd8 soon yaar~ im dying 2 read mre!
falak298 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey alll happy friendships day......for yesterday sorri its late but.....

Thank You being my friends i love you all.....

😃😃😃

You are alll very sweet kind funny and very very nice people......😉😉 ....

Here is the next part thanx for reading my FF....😃😉

Armaan and riddhima talked alll day...about work..lessons...uni...they laughed..they joked..they smiled....on the otherhand Rahul and muskaan hing out with each other everyday...him flirting with her..her telling him to stop...once his gaze went to another muskaan's head went into her book...Rahul loved annoying her..tickling her...she was his very good friend..he loved being around her...armaan and riddhima always told each other evrything it was like they knew each other for years...he loved to just stand there and listen to her...and she loved to stare at him when he always explained her...about her work when she didn't understand....They were freinds good freinds alll of them....they were reli close to each other......

It had been three months now....november...one month before christmas.....it was a cold sunday night…armaan sat on his bed…..thinking about riddhima…he smiled…..he opened one of his books and started to read…….he got bored and picked his pillow up….he took a deep breath….and sighed…..he imagined riddhima sat next to him…

A: agar tum aa gayi ho then I feel depressed……

She hugged him and armaan hugged her…..priya walked past looking at her son…..hugging his pillow…she looked confused….she went in his room and saw that he was murmuring to himself….she got a bit scared now…

P: armaan…

No reply

P: armaan….

Still no reply

P: MANU!

Armaan jumped his pillow fell on the floor…and he stood in front of his mom….

A: mom…….aaise kissi ko darate hain?

P: pichle 10minute se khadi hoon…...aur tu notice bhi nahi karra…kya ho gaya hai tujhe……

A: kuch nahi who neend aari thi….bas..aaise hi

P: armaan tu mujhse jhoot nahi bole sakta..you know na ke mein tere aur rahul ke jhoot pakad leti hoon….

A: mom seriosuly kuch nahi

She got angry….

P: theek hai!.....mein jaari hoon..tu soja…aur light abhie off nahi ki na thapad padein ge…..

Priya…was about to walk out when armaan sighed again….

A: mom…mom……acha theek hain bethein….

He closed the door and sat his mum down on the bed…..

P: kya baat hai?

A: mom..meri aik new best friend hai…

P: aur…..

A: uska naam hai riddhima riddhima gupta….woh meri bohot achi dost hai..she's sooo understanding…she loves to play pranks like me…she gets along with me sooo welll….woh meri har class mein hai…she's sooo sweet kind caring and nice……

P: riddhima gupta…..?...

A: haan kyun?

P: nahi bas aaise…..aur tu ye sochra tha

A: haan

P: haan?....aur mujhe tune pareshaan kar diya……tha…ab sou ja

A: theek hai good night

P: good night…..

Ejaz and Priya were in their bedroom…she took his suit and put it in a hanger and in the cupboard….

E: kya hua?

P:huh?

E: pareshaan lag rahi ho kya hua?

P: kuch nahi mein……bas aaise hi

E: batao na…..

P: hum…kissi riddhima gupta ko jaante hain

E: tum bhool kaise gayi…shashank ki beti riddhima..ridzy…..

P: oh haan….humare purane rishte daar

E: haan who actually I think abhie tak india mein hai….

P: acha…..haan ab yaad aayi..armaan usse kya bulata tha?

Ejaz started to laugh….

E: basket bulata tha aur kuch kehne ko hi nahi aata tha usse..

They both laughed

E: why did you want to know?

P: bas aaise hi…..

E: oh god mera college ka dost don't know where he is now

Monday morning

Armaan, Ejaz and Priya sat on the dining table to have breakfast....Armaan looked around.....

A: dad rahul kahaan hai?

E: woh subha subha chala gaya tha...kissi professor se milna tha.....

armaan thinks to himself....acha bachu ye professor..koi love guru hai huh.....muskaan se milne gaya hoga pagual..idiot...ab mein kya karoon..vaise mujhe kya farak hota...woh jo karre uski marzi uski life...oh well meine apna subha ka show miss nahi karna mein jaake dekhta hoon ye rahul ki gadi kitni taiz jaari hai...

A: mom dad mein jaara hoon...by the way dad..aap kaam pe jaare hain ya nahi...

E: nahi kyun?

A: can i take your car?

E: theek hai lekin..agar mera koi emergency case ho tou?

A: doosri gadi hai na.....

E: ok fine but you know the rules......agar meri gadi....

A: ko kuch hua tou meri bike seedha junk yard pe jaye gi...ya..ya...i know the drill...

E: good boy.....

A: ok byee then mom......and dad....

armaan went and ejaz looked at his wife...he was going to say something but she stopped him

P: woh kuch nahi karre ga woh bada ho gaya hai he knows....

E: but still

P: no nothihng ab khana khalein......

E: fine...but stillll

armaan reached to the uni and saw rahul string at muskaan....she noticed him but then again she knew how to tease him......armaan came to rahul.....

A: are you gonna keep straing at her or are you even gonna talk to her?

Rahul jumped......

Ra: you gave me a heart attack.......

A: i hope i put some sense in that brain......

Ra: well i do talk to her alll the time mostly spend some time with her but then when she stands there i just i don't know...she's looking sooo beautiful today.....

A: please meri bhai..me and riddhima are best friends agar usse pata chal gaya na..ke tu....

Ra: no nothing like tthat bhai...we're just friends....

A; wel we're just friends..she's going....

Ra: what

he turned to her and she was......

A; go and get her......

Ra: shall i?

A: go

Ra: er

A: GO!

Ra: ok byeee.......

Rahul ran up to her....

Ra: muskaaan.......

M: oh hi rahul...how are you?

Ra: i'm fine how are you?

no you're not you're gorgeous

phirse shuru ho gayi shut up

M: i'm good

no you're not you're beautiful

isn;t she just...hey...shut up

Ra: so how's life?

M: it's good.......actually it's boring....

Ra: wow even me with me in your life your life is boring how can this be muskaan...

muskaan started to laugh....she playfull hit him on his arm...

M: you're such a flirt...

Ra: only when you're around muskaan...

he got her arm and put it around his....

M: Rahul stop it na....

Ra: we're friends na...so we can do this as friends.......or maybe you want more...

M: rahul

she laughed and they walked ot their lecture together....

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armaan couldn't see the both of them on top of the rush....

forget it he must be doing fine........

Armaan turned around and bumped into someone....he closed his eyes..and then smiled.....

A: riddhima do you always like to bump into me..i mean is it some kind of specialty.....? he oopened his eyes

Riddhima slapped him slightly…..

R: armaan…you're such an idiot lift me up now….

Armaan lifted her up…..

R: by the way why did you come late today?

A: I'm not late….

R: yes you are we were supposed to meet in the cafeteria…

A: oh sorry I forgot….

R: forget it…..

She put her arm in his and they walked…..to their lecture

A: I'm really sorry

R: no it's fine…..so did you finish alll the work…

A: yeah I did

R: what about that project coming?

A: ofcourse you're my partner

R: definetly….but armaan it's for six weeks…..and we need to get to each others house…how will that be possible?

A: don't worry we'll figure something out…..

R: yes Mr Plan man

She started to laugh and he smiled….

Hope you guys liked....thanks for reading....

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Posted: 17 years ago
so ridz is his bachpan ka frnd.... gr888 prt.. waitngg wen dey land up in each others hse..
superb n mindblowing prt
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

so ridz is his bachpan ka frnd.... gr888 prt.. waitngg wen dey land up in each others hse..
superb n mindblowing prt

Yeah but they don't know that😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!! loved the part. continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
its awesome mind blowing superb plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey falak! I just read your last part....it was tooooooooo good!
Hehe wow armaan was talking too himself or rather an imaginary ridzy and he got caught lolz
Oohhh so our Mr. supercool does know our ridzy from before...he just doesnt remember...aww and he called her basket...love it when he calls her that.
And look like rahul has completely gone head over heels for muski.
Okay so i pretty much can't wait till the next part. Your such a good writer.
Thanks sooooooooo much for pming me!


Edited by Gotta_luv_KYPH - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww!!! ridzy is his bachpan ki dost.. how cute!! awesome part!! thanks for the pm and continue soon!

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