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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳lashy - your commentator is back πŸ˜†πŸ˜³

What i loved :

    the way you have described the scenes between pari, sakshi and veer - so beautiful, emotional πŸ‘and bought me to 😭😭
    Pari gently strokes her son's neatly combed hair, backwards. Shuddering at how feverish he was, the tearful mother abruptly retracts her hand in anxiety. it must be so difficult for pari to see her son injured and how helpless she must be feeling 😭😭
    "Don't worry...there is hope that his injuries would heal, in spite of their severity... he is young and fit... he seems to be responding to my medication..." i knew veer will survive,😊 recover quickly and than he can go and beat agni to a pulp πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
    i can feel sakshi and pari's happiness when they see veer opening his eyes.πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
    it must have been so painful for pari to witness her son in pain especially when the vaidhya placed a twig in veers mouth and veer holds her hand for comfort. 😭😭😭 such a lovely mother and son bond but veer does realise it yet. 😊
    Pari pleads with her daughter "How could I leave him Sakshi... he needs me..." this made me go 😭 , pari must be in so much pain at seeing all this but she is staying strong to comfort her son. even sakshi cannot see veer in pain. 😭
    Realizing her mother's turmoil; the heavy hearted Sakshi quickly closes Pari's ears, as the miserable sounds of Veer's muffled screams of pain reverberate through the humble hut that distressing mid-noon. i can so imagine this scene and believe me it made me go 😭 can you imagine the pain veer must be in and worse how sakshi and pari would feel hearing him in pain 😭
    how siya basantlata ki tarah jhum rahi hai, πŸ˜† and especially in pink colour with jhumkas . if only dharam could see her now he would faint. 😍 siya is so adorable, sweet and lovely
    "Yes... ma has prayed to the Lord, hoping I would change my mind...her ego is hurt and she still feels insulted... she is very upset that her relations with her long standing friend have all gone sour..." after a brief pause; Siya again resumes her sport around her bed, as she confesses "I hope that she will eventually come around... that day in the prayer chamber, ma and pitaji have had a glimpse of what Rajkumar Harsh could be capable of... what more can I do... I have no other go, but to wait patiently and wish that she would eventually understand me... " aww siya is so understanding, she realises how her mum must be feeling. she makes me want to go and hug her πŸ€—
    the queen has improsined her in her room and siya is still happy and nanda guess that she is up to something . πŸ€—πŸ€— so sweet πŸ˜†
    Siya stops in her tracks, nods her head in the negative and then mischievously winks at her friends. i knew she must be up to something πŸ˜†, i like the mischievos siya πŸ€—πŸ€—
    yey she send a message to dharam and nanda is in shock as to how siya did. πŸ˜† i think it was dharam's love that was calling her 😳
    Daksha sighs and interrupts them "Oh! You replied to the scroll from Rajkumar Veer! Everyone is confident the message was not from him... but, no one cares about how anxious I still feel...and I shall continue to do so, till I see a proper reply from Aryanagar!" she pauses to request her friend "Siya, could I read the scroll again?" yeh daksha bhi na, 🀣🀣🀣 still thinks it is from veer, even after she has memorised every word. I bet she wont rest till veer himself says it that dharam loves siya but he wrote the message dharam was dictating to him 🀣🀣 veer better run because if daksha gets hold off him she is going to give him an earful for signing his name and causing her grief 🀣🀣 My advice to veer would be to run when he sees daksha 🀣🀣
    love siya's answer to daksha that she knows it is from dharam 😊
    both nanda and daksha wanting to know what siya wrote in the letter πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and siya's response "I don't know Nanda... I don't know if all that would happen...and if so, when!" 😭😭she is worried as to what is going to happen to her and dharam
    daksha trying to distract siya πŸ‘ and saying imagine the first time they would meet πŸ˜†. nanda's replies πŸ˜†πŸ˜ on a lot of blushing and smiling will happen. siya is listening to all the advice that is being given to her πŸ˜†
    Well the first time I meet Rajkumar Dharam ...we would try to catch up on everything... the war... Rajkumar Harsh...our families..." when i read this i was like 🀣but at the same time i wanted to go and hug siya. πŸ€—πŸ€—she is so sweet πŸ€—πŸ€—
    Slapping her forehead, Daksha inquires with an irked frown "You would be meeting him after so many trials and tribulations...and you would discuss about the war and Rajkumar Harsh with him?" 🀣🀣🀣 daksha's reaction, and me just waiting for what advice she will give siya
    "Siya...you both would spend a long time talking not about others...but, about yourselves...you both would be unintentionally staring into each other's eyes... he might even slowly take your hand in his..." unwittingly beginning to imagine the scenes; Siya and Nanda become silently excited, while Daksha continues "Imagine... you both sit and chat for hours on a beautiful green valley ... the prince's horse remains tied to a tree... no one else around in that lush panoramic surrounding... at the end of all this ...Rajkumar Dharam would protectively put his hand around his nervous princess to assure her that everything would work out well...imagine the first time his fingers touch you..." daksha puri gurumata ho gayi hai love ke bare main 🀣🀣🀣 but i love the way she says that they would sit and chat in a beautiful green valley and dharam trying to reassure siya. that scene would look so beautiful ❀️😍😍
  • Daksha ends her illusions with a loud sigh "Only Lord knows when I would have such an opportunity with Rajkumar Veer?" when i read this i was 🀣🀣🀣 laughing hysterically, here i was thinking she was giving advice to veer and when all the time she was thinking about her and veer . this daksha is one dangerous girl as well 🀣🀣

will be back with more comments 😳

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
I don't hv much patience to read or write ffs but I sometimes read ur fic.I must say kya imagination hai aapka? πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!! πŸ˜ƒ Lasshhyyy didi tat was such an osum part!!! πŸ‘ Firstlyyy a *bigg sooriiee* frm me....i didnt replyy in ur previous part!... 😭

But..m here now!... πŸ˜ƒ

So Jai mama is still the same old bad boy.haha! I love this.Agni the same old idiot...

Shera bought Veer to Pari n Sakshi,not bad of the gurl..πŸ˜†Aww! i loved the way Pari n Sakshi are taking care f Veer,Reallyy So sweet. The scene where Sakshi tells Pari to go out as she wont be able to stand her son's pain,to that Pari replies 'My son needs me' Aww.Well expressed emootions! 😳

Sia,so evryone knows!..I lovv the way Nanda n DAsha are always around her.Hopefullyy Dahram n She meets each other soon!... πŸ˜ƒ

So Shera is still my Idol DAkoo... aww! Wayy to go myyy Gurl! πŸ˜† Go collect the gifftt.... aww! me too cant wait to see it...Taats like myyyy DAkoo Gurl....U rokkk!
haha...Veer's too shokked to utter a word even...πŸ˜†

Lovv uu looaaddzz and looadzzz πŸ€—πŸ€—
Keep up ur writn!... 😳

Lovvv n lukkk
DAkoo Minzy πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

@ reena

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how everyone is offering their compliments to dharam on the victory and how bravely he fought πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ how proud arvyavardan feels when he sees his son 😊

Yes some mileage to Dharam here....

dharam worried about his brother veer 😭😭

for a difference its not the othe way around... we are so used to seeing veer always worrying about D...

the way commander lies that it was not jai and agni's plan to do this but a separate plan by Gadhwar 😑 I guess he has not choice or he will be killed by agni and jai yup😊

i like here how arvyavardan is admitting that he is very proud of dharam πŸ‘and not to discuss personal matters in front of everyone. I hope he does investigate further as the war maybe over but that does not stop agni and jai making more devious plans again and again 😑 yup but jai and agni are both very intelligent so lets see what happens...

"Welcome Agni... welcome... where were you so long... while we were dharam looks like he wants to kill agni now when he asks this questionπŸ˜†....the liar 😑😑 he fainted straight away just after one hit and he is saying that he fought the revolutionaries by himself. I feel like saying to him first learn to stop fainting, then learn how to hold a sword πŸ˜†πŸ˜† that is so typical agniπŸ˜†

@ hiri

thank you so much for your comments.. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

@ minoo

long time minooo.... πŸ€—

I loved its light-hearted gaiety 😊 i think the future episodes for a while would be lightearted... 😳

The devious Agni and Jai...... how do they always wrigggle out of all troubles 😑 ..... they are intelligent bad boys...

Prince Dharam puffing up with pride over his well deserved victory......... Minnie very proud of his victory too 😳 ... If only Sia was able to see him then....... all joyous, brave, proud, masculine and victorious 😍 .She is a part of the victory too....... with the timely help she provided. 😳 oooo i loved your comments here minoo ... so true of a princess and her warrior.. 😍😍😍 me dreaming of this like Siya... πŸ˜†

Pari must be such a proud mum....... two brave, stubborn children 😳 ....... each one is a star. Pari must be so happy to have her child at such close proximity, when he needs her the most. awwww true true... both brave and stubborn.. πŸ˜› must have gone on their father...

Hope Veer recovers soon and is able to celebrate the victory with his family.😊 Poor boy is braving so much pain..... 😭 😭😭😭 he is brave remember... he will...

Veer and his almond milk just cracked me up....... it was so very familiar....... my lil one can differentiate choco milk and plain milk even in deep sleep. πŸ˜† omg so cute.... πŸ˜†

Sia and friends enjoying an idylic banter...... it was so cozy and chirpy..... though its last part was kind of disturbing.... Sia would not be allowed to talk to her friends too? 😲 cos her mom would think she was using their ideas/help to communicate with Dharam na.. or that they are not helping her forget him... 😊

I loved Dhruv's entry dialog and his perfect explaination of freedom.....😊 yup he is an amazing person... i wish there was a strong personality like him in the serial... i think that is what this serial lacks.. a strong personality like him.. all that the serial tries to make look strong end up falling flat on the face...

And off course trust my Shradz to save the desert for the last...... Ananya and her wits......... I do hope she is gifted a nice pink dress later on. πŸ˜‰After all she deserves it. πŸ˜ƒ *giggle*

thank you for your comments minoo... πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

@ subha

I don't hv much patience to read or write ffs but I sometimes read ur fic.I must say kya imagination hai aapka? πŸ‘ awwww thank you... 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very cute lashy! liked all the scenes very much....esp the one with veer with his mother and sister though he doesn't know it. And I also like Dhruv the wise owl and his thoughts on the matter seem to be your opinion of the revolutionaries in the actual show 😊

i also liked how agni and jaivardhan got themselves out of the mess....it would be anti-climactic n boring if they turned out to be stupid as they are frequently shown in the show.
I also liked the fact that in your fic, it was Dharam who got all the limelight and most of the plaudits, since he was at the forefront in the main war between the two kingdoms while Veer was relegated somewhat to the background, embroiled in the war with the rebel shramiks.
While, I don't like only one to get all the praise for the work of two, in the show, t is only Veer who steals all the glory while Dharam just scrambles about..so this is somewhat a bit of an equalizer. 😊

Shera is naughtee. keep her like that πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lashy, 😊 some more comments.

what can i say except that your script is so beautiful, magnetic that i cannot help myself from reading it again and again, dreaming about it 😍😍😍 and commenting on.πŸ‘

What i loved :

    siya's shock when she starts to think about dharam touching her hand πŸ˜† in green valley. she is so sweet πŸ€—
    Daksha smiles casually "You girls are too nave... Siya, have you imagined how you would feel when Rajkumar Dharam... would hold you maybe h...h...hug you for the first time ...before bidding you a farewell and galloping off on his horse..." i love daksha's reply, she is talking like she is an expert gurumata at love 🀣🀣🀣 bechari siya is so shocked πŸ˜†, i can just imagine siya's shock. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
    Daksha bends backward to whisper something into Nanda's ears, while Siya strives to hear a few syllables of their hushed secret "Rajkumar Dharam... first...k... k ... kiss... Siya...reaction...will be..." Just as Nanda is about to shriek in excitement at Daksha's romantic revelations, the princess comprehends what they were discussing about and becomes shocked. 🀣🀣 daksha is too funny, me like her 🀣. veer should just stay away from daksha 🀣 awww siya is embarrased and shocked at the same time. πŸ˜† such lovely scenes πŸ‘πŸ‘
    i love the friendship between siya, daksha and nanda and how they start hitting each other playfully with pillows😊
    "Daksha... Nanda... actually I don't even have much hope that I would be able to see him now... if ma comes to know that in spite of all her warnings, I have sent him a message, it could mean the end of any further communication with anyone outside or inside the palace for me... even with the two of you..." awww siya dont lose hope 😭😭, i am sure you will see dharam again, if he does not come quickly we can get daksha to go and kidnap himπŸ˜† lets hope she does kidnap veer as well πŸ˜†
    the happiness pari feels that she will be able to look after her son and spend time with him 😊
    the sadness pari must be feeling😭 now that sakshi has told the soldiers about veer 😭
    veer mumbling in his sleep about dharam 😭 and i love the scene how pari brushes his hair to comfort him πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘. aww she nearly slipped out the words that she is his mother. 😊
    I am here to protect you from all evil eyes...once you wake up, you can get back to your usual mischief with Dharam..." this is the best dialogue πŸ‘ such lovely motherly love to protect her son. πŸ‘ pari is so right about him getting back to his mischief. πŸ˜†
    dhruv enters and i like how he calls veer his brother -in-law πŸ˜† and the minute he sees pari he says rajkumar veer . He is so sweet that he came to see if they are okay even if it is not safe for him to do so and he gave money to vaidhya for the medicines he got. 😊
    lool veer wants almond milk, kyaa adha hai rajkumar ki πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. i can just imagine pari and sakshi running to make milk for him. i swear he is always making women run around him πŸ˜†
    Veer complains with his eyes still shut "No... this does not taste the same..."Frowning in surprise at her brother's dissatisfaction; she smiles at her moved mother and then turns to the amused Dhruv, who shrugs his shoulders in response. Quickly making up an excuse for the lack of the affluent almond milk, she whispers "Veer... the cooks forgot to stock up on any almonds... so we have run out of almonds at the palace..." i was laughing aloud when i read this, such a spoilt rajkumar 🀣🀣🀣 . dhruv is like kya addha hai veer ki 🀣 love sakshi's reply that they have run out of almonds πŸ‘πŸ‘
    veer opening his eyes and finding out where he is and sakshi telling him all that had happened, war being won πŸ‘ and how his family has been informed about his whereabouts
    pari smiling softly at her son and feeling bad 😭that they dont have much to offer and feeds him the porridge. i am sure that veer is more happy about the love he has got from pari and sakshi than the food😊.
    In spite of being unable to recollect anything that had happened to him for the past three days; he realizes the powerful sense of attachment he felt towards this family, every time he seemed to meet them. awww he feels the family bond but does not understand why yet 😊
    veer realising all the dangers they must have gone through to save him and once he sees the shrine he remembers the bamboo idol pari gave to his mother 😊
    i like dhruv and his way of thinking that he is not supporting anyone but just wants equal rights for shramiks and Aryavrats πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    dhruv worried about the orphanage and veer promising him that he will not let anything happen to the children or orphanage πŸ‘
    i always love shera's entry πŸ˜†πŸ‘ and the minute veer looks at her he remembers all misunderstandings she has created and wants to strangle her 🀣🀣🀣. And that little troublemaker 🀣 knows the havoc she has caused and bows at veer and he looks away. its like waving a red flag to a bull🀣🀣 and giggles as she knows that veer cant do anything to her at the moment 🀣. i love how everyone else around them is puzzled by their behaviours
    shera grinning at the way sakshi introduces her πŸ˜† and her talking about the man who saved veer will get a reward, little does sakshi know that it is shera who saved veer 😊
    "Collect the reward? Sakshi didi... no one knows that it was indeed a man who saved Rajkumar Veer... I have an idea why don't you and me just go along to the palace and collect the reward from the Maharaj... I have a feeling that we deserve it...I shall probably buy myself a nice pink dress" i love this line πŸ‘ of shera and i agree she should go and get the reward to buy a pink dress. πŸ˜†. veer needs to understand that one should not destroy a pink dress. πŸ˜†
  • Veer's irritated face, the prankish girl persists with a silent wink "Why, what do you say Rajkumar?" me love shera, she is having great fun at making veer angry and then winks at him. 🀣🀣🀣 . loool she is asking for veers on buying a pink dress with the reward money, when all he wants to do is to stangle you. 🀣🀣.

me so looking forward to the next part. 😊 You have written all the scenes brilliantly πŸ€—πŸ€—

thank you and lots of love from meπŸ€—πŸ€—

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Harshu

My God long time ke baad... where have you been? πŸ˜›

very cute lashy! liked all the scenes very much....esp the one with veer with his mother and sister though he doesn't know it. And I also like Dhruv the wise owl and his thoughts on the matter seem to be your opinion of the revolutionaries in the actual show 😊 thank you so much for all your comments 😳

i also liked how agni and jaivardhan got themselves out of the mess....it would be anti-climactic n boring if they turned out to be stupid as they are frequently shown in the show. πŸ˜† true
I also liked the fact that in your fic, it was Dharam who got all the limelight and most of the plaudits, since he was at the forefront in the main war between the two kingdoms while Veer was relegated somewhat to the background, embroiled in the war with the rebel shramiks. hmmm here actually both played an equal role.. its true that Dharam got the limelight because of being at the border but all the nobles and subjects do realize veer's contribution at sending back the soldiers on time.. and if it were not for him.. his home.. and the remaining members in his family would have all been destroyed... 😊

Shera is naughtee. keep her like that πŸ˜‰ she can never be anything other than naughty...πŸ˜›

@ minzzy
*bigg sooriiee* frm me....i didnt replyy in ur previous part!... 😭

😭

So Jai mama is still the same old bad boy.haha! I love this.Agni the same old idiot...

Agni not so much an idiot... πŸ˜† he is pretty clever here.....

Shera bought Veer to Pari n Sakshi,not bad of the gurl..πŸ˜†Aww! i loved the way Pari n Sakshi are taking care f Veer,Reallyy So sweet. The scene where Sakshi tells Pari to go out as she wont be able to stand her son's pain,to that Pari replies 'My son needs me' Aww.Well expressed emootions! 😳 awwwww thankoooo

Sia,so evryone knows!..I lovv the way Nanda n DAsha are always around her.Hopefullyy Dahram n She meets each other soon!... πŸ˜ƒ hopefully... the much awaited meeting between Siya and Dharam should happen once things get sorted at Aryanagar...

So Shera is still my Idol DAkoo... aww! Wayy to go myyy Gurl! πŸ˜† Go collect the gifftt.... aww! me too cant wait to see it...Taats like myyyy DAkoo Gurl....U rokkk! she is a tribal girl who works as a spy for Agni dear... woh dakoo nahin hai... πŸ˜†
haha...Veer's too shokked to utter a word even...πŸ˜†

Lovv uu looaaddzz and looadzzz πŸ€—πŸ€— miss you so much around the forum.. πŸ€—πŸ€—
@ reena

it must be so difficult for pari to see her son injured and how helpless she must be feeling 😭😭 yes...

i knew veer will survive,😊 recover quickly and than he can go and beat agni to a pulp πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hee hee agni to a pulp? have you done that to anyone lately reens?

it must have been so painful for pari to witness her son in pain especially when the vaidhya placed a twig in veers mouth and veer holds her hand for comfort. 😭😭😭 such a lovely mother and son bond but veer does realise it yet. 😊 this made me go 😭 , pari must be in so much pain at seeing all this but she is staying strong to comfort her son. even sakshi cannot see veer in pain. 😭 can so imagine this scene and believe me it made me go 😭 can you imagine the pain veer must be in and worse how sakshi and pari would feel hearing him in pain 😭 yes all those things were indeed emotional and i am happy that i was successful at bringing them out properly i guess...

how siya basantlata ki tarah jhum rahi hai, πŸ˜† and especially in pink colour with jhumkas . if only dharam could see her now he would faint. 😍 siya is so adorable, sweet and lovely wowwwwwwwwwww if only dharam could see her like that 😍😍😍

siya is so understanding, she realises how her mum must be feeling. she makes me want to go and hug her πŸ€—πŸ€— the queen has improsined her in her room and siya is still happy and nanda guess that she is up to something . πŸ€—πŸ€— so sweet πŸ˜† Well the first time I meet Rajkumar Dharam ...we would try to catch up on everything... the war... Rajkumar Harsh...our families..." when i read this i was like 🀣but at the same time i wanted to go and hug siya. πŸ€—πŸ€—she is so sweet πŸ€—πŸ€—she is a sweet darling.... 😍

i like the mischievos siya πŸ€—πŸ€— yey she send a message to dharam and nanda is in shock as to how siya did. πŸ˜† i think it was dharam's love that was calling her 😳 yes she managed to... so many important things have happened in the meanwhile.. so she had to inform him...

daksha trying to distract siya πŸ‘ and saying imagine the first time they would meet πŸ˜†. nanda's replies πŸ˜†πŸ˜ on a lot of blushing and smiling will happen. daksha puri gurumata ho gayi hai love ke bare main 🀣🀣🀣 but i love the way she says that they would sit and chat in a beautiful green valley and dharam trying to reassure siya. that scene would look so beautiful ❀️😍😍 yes true... dreaming is everyone's birthright... πŸ˜†

dhruv enters and i like how he calls veer his brother -in-law πŸ˜† and the minute he sees pari he says rajkumar veer . He is so sweet that he came to see if they are okay even if it is not safe for him to do so and he gave money to vaidhya for the medicines he got. 😊 yes he is an amazing guy ... thank you for all your comments about the Pari-Sakshi-Veer-Dhruv scenes.. *hug*

all your comments that made me go 🀣🀣🀣

yeh daksha still thinks it is from veer, even after she has memorised every word. I bet she wont rest till veer himself says it that dharam loves siya but he wrote the message dharam was dictating to him 🀣🀣 veer better run because if daksha gets hold off him she is going to give him an earful for signing his name and causing her grief 🀣🀣

Daksha was giving advice to Siya when all the time she was thinking about her and veer . this daksha is one dangerous girl. daksha is too funny, me like her 🀣. veer should just stay away from daksha 🀣 awww siya is embarrased and shocked at the same time. πŸ˜† such lovely scenes πŸ‘πŸ‘

awww siya dont lose hope 😭😭, i am sure you will see dharam again, if he does not come quickly we can get daksha to go and kidnap himπŸ˜† lets hope she does kidnap veer as well πŸ˜† (omg this line was so funny)lool veer wants almond milk, kyaa adha hai rajkumar ki πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. i can just imagine pari and sakshi running to make milk for him. i swear he is always making women run around him. i always love shera's entry πŸ˜†πŸ‘ and the minute veer looks at her he remembers all misunderstandings she has created and wants to strangle her 🀣🀣🀣. And that little troublemaker 🀣 knows the havoc she has caused and bows at veer and he looks away. its like waving a red flag to a bull🀣🀣 and giggles as she knows that veer cant do anything to her at the moment 🀣.

me love shera, she is having great fun at making veer angry and then winks at him. 🀣🀣🀣veer needs to understand that one should not destroy a pink dress. . loool she is asking for veers on buying a pink dress with the reward money, when all he wants to do is to stangle you. 🀣🀣.

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Originally posted by: lashy

@ minzzy

Agni not so much an idiot... πŸ˜† he is pretty clever here.....yess dii.....πŸ˜† Agni is neww one with brains...


Shera bought Veer to Pari n Sakshi,not bad of the gurl..πŸ˜†Aww! i loved the way Pari n Sakshi are taking care f Veer,Reallyy So sweet. The scene where Sakshi tells Pari to go out as she wont be able to stand her son's pain,to that Pari replies 'My son needs me' Aww.Well expressed emootions! 😳 awwwww thankoooo
awwww! welcome jii.....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

Sia,so evryone knows!..I lovv the way Nanda n DAsha are always around her.Hopefullyy Dahram n She meets each other soon!... πŸ˜ƒ hopefully... the much awaited meeting between Siya and Dharam should happen once things get sorted at Aryanagar... awww!!! cant wait for the great style in which u will put up the EVENT!!.....😍

So Shera is still my Idol DAkoo... aww! Wayy to go myyy Gurl! πŸ˜† Go collect the gifftt.... aww! me too cant wait to see it...Taats like myyyy DAkoo Gurl....U rokkk! she is a tribal girl who works as a spy for Agni dear... woh dakoo nahin hai... πŸ˜†see..see....for me even Gypsies are Dakoo.....πŸ˜† btween Shera is no less than an EEvilesss DAkoo....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
haha...Veer's too shokked to utter a word even...πŸ˜†

Lovv uu looaaddzz and looadzzz πŸ€—πŸ€— miss you so much around the forum.. πŸ€—πŸ€—Misss yyuu too Lashhyyy didi... πŸ€—πŸ€—Once again.....Ur Writin is Fantabulous!!.....I lovv it shooooo mucchhhh!!.....β˜ΊοΈπŸ€—


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ kiran

Wooww in few words u have nicely described dharams feeling of pride, if in the serial also dharam was given to do something similar, he wld never think of quitting. Yup 😭 and i like that name you have given JV-AG resident villains πŸ˜†.......................mine masterstrokeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

U have really bought fought a mothers pain and a sis helplessness in this lashy, very well written. U can literally feel paris pain at watching her son struggle with life😊 awwww thank you so much Kiran... it is pretty disheartening to watch your own in pain...........................guess it isπŸ˜†

So the next meeting is going to be taking place at Gomathitirth temple and not at some gurukul😳 oooo my clever lil mango πŸ˜† and tum abhi tak gurukul ki baat nahin chodi... woh ab bade ho gaye hain kiran.. ..........................acha bade hogayeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†to phir thode bade wale scenes likh do u know what i meanπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Haila yeah kab hua, this siya is a real chupa rustam, at so much turmoil going around her, she has still managed to send one more messageπŸ˜† Pyar .... brought about hints of bravery, maturity and capability too in her... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†see no wonder i want to fall in love fastπŸ˜†have to make someone read u-know-who abt all these virtues u gain after u fall in loveπŸ˜†

This dakshas loyalties are shifting I think, she is more impressed with the scroll then with veer or maybe she is imagining veer writing something like this to her. Dream on girl😑 Kiran and red face... a rarity i must say πŸ˜†..........................yes me such a loving type of girl but this daksha i just cant standπŸ˜†

Omg siya for all her mischief is still very innocent and this brings out that very nicely lashy. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Innocent? this scene actually reminded me of our convos with you-know-who...................................yes it does πŸ˜†

But I did not like daksha thinking abt her having any meetings with veer, why don't u send daksha to chatrapur mahal to harsh with some work from maharani. This daksha is bit too much for innocent veer, just send her somewhere far off quicklyπŸ˜†πŸ˜† too much for innocent Veer? πŸ˜† what makes you think Veer is so innocent? .........................infront of daksha veer is very much innocentπŸ˜†

God its so weird to hear saakshi talking so much sense and behaving so sensibly, we are so used to her being irritatingπŸ˜†πŸ˜† This sakshi is not DV sakshi... only the name is same... she is sensible sister.. πŸ˜†not a whining... &^*&"$*&$..................πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†bhimu baby ko yeah baat achi nahin lagegi lashyπŸ˜†

But veer is still true to his form, in his nightmares he only worries and is concerned abt dharam and his safety.πŸ˜†πŸ˜† awww par yahaan par seriously they went on war... πŸ˜† so I'm guessing its something worry-worthy... imagine worrying everytime he opened his eyes just cos D is not in front of them.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†even if now the scene warrents veer thinking and caring for dharam it still puts me offπŸ˜†

omggggggggggggggg my handsome dhruv is back and immediately puts his foot in his mouthπŸ˜†πŸ˜† I fall more and more in love with Dhruv, his views his plans are all so very practical and brave, even without fighting any battles he emerges as a hero.😳

Ye kyaa kiran dont make Veer jealous...😲..........................usko time kahan hai dharam ke eleawa kisi ke bare mein sochne ke liyeπŸ˜†

Veer wants almond milk……………..yeah bhi na πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† haan woh uska favourite morning drink hai...πŸ˜› hmmm now i wonder if you would be able to drink badam doodh with a straight face anymore... πŸ€”......................u guessed right soon my whole menu will go πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

This shera also cant seem to keep herself away from veer, ab mein kya karoon ek taraf daksha ek taraf yeah shera, mera number kab aayegaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† pagli ananya to tum hi ho na... bhool gayee kyaa? .....................oh yeah i completely forgot abt this πŸ˜†πŸ˜†ab she acts so smart and confidence jab ki mein itni bholi bhali hoon ki i cant see any similartiesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Poor everyone these two communicating in there own languageπŸ˜†πŸ˜† yes... πŸ˜†

MY God this is too much I was rolling on the floor………………….she wants to buy a nice pink dress like someone we know lashy,(who who who i didnt guess...who?πŸ˜›) πŸ˜†πŸ˜†β€¦β€¦β€¦β€¦β€¦β€¦β€¦β€¦but how cld u do this I so want to know veers reply to this………………..ufffffffff how abt a small pm telling me what his reply is going to be πŸ˜†πŸ˜† arre tumhe apne Veer ka reply kyaa hoga.. ye bhi nahin pataa kyaa.. πŸ˜†..............nahin mujhe nahin pataπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
lashy, missing ur samyukta... its been almost a month.....pls update soon... i am waiting desp for reading sia's letter n dharam's reaction
Edited by lakshmim_84 - 17 years ago

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