.::R U The One?::.(KaSh)Part:3 pg6

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Heyyyyyy Guyz!!!
I'm Kareena,I'll be starting a FF,This is my first FF so plz bear with me and my mistakes.Its going to be on my fav jodi**KaSh** aka Arman and Rythima.So here i go,i wont give you a character sketch you'll get to no them as the story goes on
.::Intro::.
It was 11:30 pm at night.A girl in a light blue gown waz sitting on her bed with her laptop in her hand.
Princess1234:do u think we'v seen eachother in East High??
yeah n when u find out how i luk lyk u'll be lyk oh wat a behehn ji.
AB:yeah probably but we wont no who we r.....
Princess1234:hmmm
AB:why dont we meet up sum where
Princess1234:No.....not now.i want us to be a mystery for each other
AB:but we no each other so well.....
"Rythiiiiiiiiiiiiiiima"
oh great now what does she want.
Princess1234:sorry Ab i'v got to go something urgent came up bye.
And with that she went ofline."coming Maya just give me a minute"She shouted.

*Knock*Knock*
"COME IN"she shouted angrily.oh great here goez the moaning
"why wer u late i called u 2mins ago n u came after 3!"
"I waz busy"
"doing what and dont talk to me like that this is my house got that n just to refresh your memory if u wana live here then u follow my rules"
My house! huh used to be mine till that witch kertki my so called mum married my dad"i'm sorry maya it wont happen again "
"beter not! now get me a glass of water and did u get my clothes ready for tomorow?"WAT!!! she called me all the way from tha atic jst so i could bring her a glass of water!!ARRRGGGG!!!"wat r u waiting for hurry and get it i need to go back to my beauty sleep"beauti sleep huh!
Rythima goes to the kitchen and brings her a glass of water.Ahhhh i'm so tired beter go to bed if i dont want to be late for my first day at east high!.I cant believe i still have to work at Dino's.Evrybody's gona call me DINO GIRL.But what can i do i need the money for uni.
she picks up a picture of a man with a litel girl next to him.I miss u soooo much dad.
rythima's dad died in a car accident.After that her step mum kertki took over.because her dad never named the property in anyones name legally all the property belonged to kertki.
I still remember she used to be so nice to me when dad waz here after that she and her two evil daughters Maya and simran showed their true colours.Making me do all the work while all they do is boss me around.
well beter go to sleep if i ever want to go to colage on time.good night dad luv u MWAH!.she kissed the picture and fell asleep.

*Next morning*
Rythima woke up early in the morning about 6:00.She freshened up and wore black skiny geans and a light pink kurti with pink flat shoes.She went to the kitchen made break fast for evryone.
"RYTHIMA!!!!!!!!!!!"
she quickly grabed their breakfast and went in their rooms and gave it to them.Like alwayz they would tell her she waz late,and start shouting at her.She pressed their clothes and got evrything ready for them.



Thx 4 reading
Plzzzzz leave yr coments n wether i should cont it or not......
Tc
Krinz.....
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
& ; ;nbs p;
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Afreen22 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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intro sounds interesting...poor riddhima..i feel sad for her...plzz continue soon and do pm me 😃 😃 😃
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nice intro....OMG,ridz is living such a dreadery lyf...feel sorry 4 d poor gal...continue soon...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg. u gotta continue soon. loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice i didnt read all of it ill read all of it an comment agian
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwww poor ridz
reminds me off cinderella
cnt wait 2 read mre
updte soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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intersrtin! dis is lke the movie cinderlaa!

btw i m sorry, no offence but dis is how u spell *RIDDHIMA*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing sweety
plzzzzzzzzzzz pm me the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww!poor ridz...i feel sorry 4her...bt hopefully her prince is gonna fix enrything right...nd tht 2 very soon...w8ing 4ur next upd8
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read ur fick...
sounds interesting...
poor ridz... hope she finds her prince charming soon who would get her out of all this
continue soon

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