.::R U The One?::.(KaSh)Part:3 pg6

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Kareena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sacred shrine
i m so xcited abt whn they wl get 2knw each other's truth...plz dnt mk 2much of a delay...it gets boring...aftr 2 or 3 epis gt th secret out..i m sorry if i m nt allowd 2gv suggestions...nice starting newaz...i m w8ing whn the prince charming wd propose hs love n get her away from her stupid family 2 thier dreamwrld...sounds lyk cinderella bt i luv fairy tales n so ur ff...plz pm the next tym u upd8...

thx 4 coment
will try 2 not 2 drag it 4 2 long!

@ coolvini4u
thx 4 da coment
um happy dat yr xcited...lol...
will cnt soon

Edited by ***Krinz_dmg*** - 17 years ago

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

first :-of al ur FF is just fantastic i loved it the way u have wrot it

second :- u kinda stole my idea girl ha ha ha ha i was going to start some thing like this but u got it gud

third:- i think u r trying to make it like the movis cindrela story or some thing but that was one of my fave movie so gud agine

forth:- plz plz cont soon n ya PM me when u updat

fifth:- i m sorry if any of my coment hurt u

luv

Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

amazign part sweety

a bit like cinderalla story

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Kareena

@***Krinz_dmg***

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

.::Part 2 ::.
They both said looking up only to find each other.Argh!! not him again thought riddhima."cant you see where your going"said riddhima."ME!! your the one who bumped into me.. n here i waz hoping that i would bump into sum preety lady but"
cuting him of in anger she said"KEEP YOUR COMENTS TO YOUR SELF"
"n u keep your sugestions to your self"
both of them gave eachother a cold stare and went their own separate ways.
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**At night 9:30**
Riddhima waz doing her shift while reading a book.
She waz murmering some facts to her self when she waz interupted by Padz short for Padma.
(Padma is a family friend of riddhima.She knew her father very well and luved rythima a lot.she treated her az her own daughter.)
"Ridzi wat r u doing"
"working y?"
puting her hand on her shoulder she said
P:but beta its too late u should be going now
riddhima sighed and said
R:um not suppose 2 be home today........some of mothers friends are there for a visit n she does not want me there.
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Arman Rahul and a bunch of other people came in.making the whole nice quite and peaceful enviroment noisy.Riddhima sighed looking at them.
Sow off's.just coz their hanging out with him they think their so poppuler.she looked at her two sisters
walking around Arman.Following him.God knows What they find in him.
interupting her thoughts padma asked her to go and serve them.
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Faking a smile Riddhima walked towards them.
Maya and Simran saw her coming.She was wearing a light pink t-shirt which said Dino girl and a knee length skirt with her hair out loose.
R:Wat would you like?
she asked them politley
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After serving them she waz trying to read her book but they wer just too loud.Finally when she cudnt control her anger she walked up 2 them n said
R:could you plz be a lil quite!
simran rolled her eyes
S:get lost ridzie!
but as always they jst ignored her.They knew Maya n simran wer her sisters n they told them that they dont need to listen to her.
she sighed n walked off
S:so Arman you going to the Halloween party this saturday?
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Riddhima who was sarving a customer nearby heard simran
HUH! can you make it any more bay that you want to go out with him.like he's gona say yes
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hmmmm this seems like the perfect timing to ask her out.Thought Arman
A:ammm...um not sure simran...he he
there that would give her a hint
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HA!! rejected how embarasing.riddhima smiled
buzz!buzz!
she felt something vibrate.It waz her cell.
her jaws fell open
OMG!!!
he asked me out
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Arman got up
A:see u later guyz gota go
he waz smiling loking at his phone.riddhima waz still standing there with a blank expresion on her face looking at her pohone.
**************To be cont**************