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Part 15

"This is absolutely insane'I refuse to do this room!!" Armaan yelled the millionth time as Kripa gave him a glare.

Armaan: Stop giving me that look! What in the world is wrong with you??? Just look at this!!

Both Angad and Kavya agreed with Armaan this time. When they had met up earlier they had decided to do Kripa's room first thinking that it wouldn't be so bad but when they walked into her room it was a whole other story. No her room wasn't messy in fact it was pretty clean'but the reason being'she had unpacked only two bags to find a dress for the party. The rest of the bags were still there. Yes the rest of the BAGS! The woman had 4 other unpacked bags!

Armaan: What in god's name did you bring back with you? And wait a minute how did they let you bring all these bags on the plane?

Kripa: Umm'I got them shipped here.

Kavya gave her a I-don't-believe-you look. While Angad just couldn't digest the fact that she had 6 bags! SIX! And no they weren't small bags'they were huge suitcases!

Anjali: huh....I would have thought you two would know her better...I mean...she IS your sister after all.....how does this even surprise you guys?

Riddhima: yeah I mean...According to how much stuff she owned....she hasn't brought much....trust us on that one we shared a house with this one for years.

Armaan: Well she was fine before going to London.

He gave a look to Riddhima as he said this only to receive a dirty look from her. Then he turned to Kavya and shook his head.

Armaan: See I told you sending her to London was a bad idea! But no one ever listens to me!

Kripa glared at them shutting them up. Then she turned back to the boys. "You think this is bad? wait until you see Armaan's room."

Angad: why? what's in Armaan's room?

Armaan: nothing...she doesn't know what she's talking about....lets go start working on Her highness's huge suitcases or else we'll never get to my room and I already wasted yesterday doing all this cleaning stuff....I don't want to waste tomorrow on this....

Armaan went and opened the smallest of the four bags (so typical.) and groaned loudly seeing its content.

"No no no Kripa! You already have ENOUGHHH stuffed animals. I mean...look around your room sister....where are you going to keep these new fellas now?" He complained.

While he continued muttering about Kripa's girly stuffed animal-fetish, Kavya walked up to another bag and opened it. His worst nightmare. Shoes. Loads and loads of them.

Kripa: oh...bhai...careful with those....those are my most cherished pairs.

Kavya: these?? Its equivalent of junk!

He hooked his finger through a strap of a shoe and lifted it up, raising an eyebrow.

Anjali: That piece of junk you're holding, my friend, cost 200 dollars.

Kavya: 200 dollars for a pair of shoes??? are you crazy kripa...

Kripa: hey...I got those when they were on sale....I got 50% off on those. Its limited version of --

Armaan: okay...we don't want to know...can we get on with the cleaning.......Angad.....stop standing there and smiling like a monkey....man up and open up a bag would you?

Angad rolled his eyes and picked up another bag. He froze when he heard metal clinging together inside.

"okay....tell me she doesn't have weapons in this...." he said making kripa roll her eyes along with Riddhima and Anjali

"seriously bhai........some company" Riddhima gave a look to Armaan "has really messed around with your sense of humor."

Angad: then what's in here?

Kripa: open it up and you'll see, Mr. smarty.

Angad carefully laid the bag on its side and opened the locks. The first thing he found was a picture frame, the size of the bag which had a picture of Kripa, Riddhima and Anjali. Just like yesterday, Anjali and Riddhima tackled him out of the way when they saw the picture.

Anjali: awww...you brought these with Kripsie?

"kripsie?" all three guys said at the same time and looked at an embarrassed Kripa.

For the next few minutes, the guys just watched on as the girls pulled out each photo frame and recalled the occasion that went along with it.

Feeling someone's constant stare, Kripa looked up to see all three boys staring at them. She pulled out a picture and held it out in front of Angad.

Kripa: this is what we meant by Riddhima's wardrobe in London.

Angad looked at the picture and back and Riddhima....back and forth. back and forth. then Kavya stood up, putting his hands on his hip.

Kavya: why are you dressed like that Kripa?

Kripa: bhai...its a tank top...and shorts....chill would you?

Armaan: no tank-tops...only turtlenecks.

Angad: I agree.

Anjali: really now bhai....we don't say anything when you roam around in nothing but a pair of shorts at home....at least we have CLOTHES on.

Riddhima: yes....would you like us to follow YOUR style sense?

"NO!!" all three yelled at the same time.

"Great. then deal with this." Kripa said taking the picture back. Then Anjali pulled out a picture of them three and Phil. Phil was lying on the couch on his stomach while all three girls sat on his back.

Riddhima: aww...remember this??? Philly was so hyper that day!!

Kripa: yeahhh and the cake batter fight afterwards!! what a day!!

obviously at the mention of Phil, all three guys were all over the picture. Armaan laughed out loud confusing the girls.

Kripa: what?

Armaan: oh man...he's crushed by you three...pfft....some guy...he doesn't look too manly....is he gay?

Anjali and Riddhima looked at kripa who just smiled and nodded. The next thing Armaan knew...he was being tickled and pushed around by three girls while Kavya and Angad just sat on the floor laughing. After Armaan was pushed onto the bed, all three girls climbed up and sat on him. Angad and Kavya took out their phones and took pictures right away.

Angad: yeah...dude.......you dont look so manly right now either....

"is he gay?" Kavya imitated Armaan.

"okay that's IT!" Armaan said before he rolled over. Kripa and Anjali fell off of him on the bed but he rolled completely off the bed, taking Riddhima with. He quickly put his hand under her head so she wouldn't get hurt and then both fell on the floor with a thud. Armaan on top of Riddhima, definitely a sight to see.

He half expected her to yell and scream but she was...........wait a minute....was she blushing??!! A second later, he realized that she wasn't blushing...her face was ref because of anger. She pushed him off of herself and glared at him.

Riddhima: how dare you touch me?!

Armaan: excuse ME!! You were the one sitting on me...you touched me first...that....that was just...revenge touch!

Riddhima rolled her eyes and got back to work and so did Armaan. From that point till the room was clean, they all worked quietly. Each one had their own thoughts going on, obviously. Anjali and Kavya were busy stealing glances and thinking of how great the other was while Angad and Kripa were having a similar interaction. Angad was looking at her....sneaking in winks when she looked at him and thought how cute and adorable she was while she was coming up with all the reasons she should hate Angad Khanna for. Riddhima was sneaking in a glare or two every now and then in Armaan's direction while he was making up the perfect prank in his brain......for Riddhima....and of course...thinking about food.

Armaan was about to run off to the kitchen but as usual, Kripa knew the tricks he normally had up his sleeve. She dragged him back towards his room where everyone was headed. As they stood there, everyone looked at him, confusing him even more.

Armaan: okay....I understand that I'm hot and all but seriously....the fact that my brother, my sister, and another man...by the way that's you Angad.....staring at me is a little creepy.

Angad: oh I'm staring at you alright....but not because you're.....I'm air quoting....HOT...but because I, along with everyone else is waiting for you to make the announcement about your room. You know......any bags full of photo frames like Kripa or particular lists like Riddhima

Kripa: or a whole bunch of junk under your bed like Angad.

Kripa glared back at him. Armaan put his hands on his hip and tilted his head sideways.

Armaan: well....I am Armaan Sharma after all....no secrets you know. Everything you need to know is out in the open.

Saying so, He flung open the door. The next second...Armaan heard a mixture of groans and "Oh my god" from the awaiting crowd. Kripa hit her palm on her forehead while Kavya dramatically fell backwards feigning fainting. Angad stared with his mouth wide open. Anjali had her eyes covered and was peeking from between her fingers as if that would make his room any better. His room was spectacular..........spectacularly MESSY. Clothes everywhere. Books and papers everywhere. Sports gear. Cologne bottles. Hair gel bottles. Shoes. His closet was empty...of course it was empty...everything was out in the open.

Riddhima: Yeap...everything is out in the open alright.

Kripa: You are sick!!!!! I can't believe you are my brother! This is disgusting! I am not doing this'.no no Nooo!!!

She started to walk away only to be pulled back by Armaan and then pushed into the room. The rest followed her in as she kept on rambling on and on while Armaan imitated her behind her back.

"Don't think I don't know that you're imitating me behind my back Armaan." Kripa growled as she put away Armaan's shoes.

Armaan was startled for a second....he actually looked at the back of her head to make sure she hadn't developed eyes there! Even yesterday when he was in the bathroom she had known what he was doing. He had to investigate this..but for now he had to start cleaning his room..keeping in mind to check on Kripa later.

Kavya followed Armaan's gaze and knew exactly what he was thinking. "yeah.....she grew up with us, you know......she knows all about you and your moronic activities.

Armaan: really now...I didn't know you'd still say this after me and Kripa nearly gave you a heart attack a few years ago.......remember....the fridge trick?

Kripa burst out into laughter along with Armaan. The brother and sister walked up to each other and gave each other a high five. The Khanna kids just stood and stared at the three.

Angad: wait....what trick?

Kripa: it was more like a prank.....

Anjali: Ooohh....I wanna know all about it.

Armaan: so..haha....we hahahahahha...kind of you know......HA HA HA HA HA.

Riddhima rolled her eyes. "either finish laughing first...or tell us the story and laugh later......eesh....i don't understand a word you're saying."

Kripa: okay so basically.....mom and dad weren't home....Armaan and I were getting bored so we came up with the prank....first we emptied out the fridge and put everything away in the cupboard and then I yelled for Kavya saying that I put his slice of cake in the fridge and then Armaan yelled right after me saying that whoever got it out of the fridge first gets it and then he shoved himself in the fridge and closed the door....I was recording for behind the door of the pantry....Kavya came running...opened the door and screamed!

Armaan: the most girly scream I've ever heard in my life.....and he looked like he was about to cry!!

Everyone started laughing again when Armaan imitated the scream and the expression on Kavya's face. Kavya pouted and sat on the bed annoyed. Seeing him Armaan told all of them to shut up and not to make fun of his brother and then went to Kavya and sat down next to him. He looked at Kavya, gave him a hug and screamed really loudly in his ear imitating Kavya's scream again. This time making Kavya laugh as well. And again they all got back to work.

Kripa: Armaan..who is Simran? And why do you have her bracelet?

Armaan looked at Kripa who had a bracelet in her hand. He quickly grabbed the bracelet from her and put it in his pocket.

Armaan: OH um no one. Just this girl.

Kripa: Which girl? OMGGG ARMAAN SHARMA ARE YOU IN LOVEEE?????

Armaan looked at her as if she was crazy! And this time it was Kavya and Angad's turn to laugh. Obviously Kripa had no idea about Armaan and his various girlfriends.

Angad: Yeah Armaan..why don't you tell your sister about Simran?

Armaan: She is no one. Just a girl'from school. You know'a friend'um'yeah'.what Kripa'don't listen to Angad you know how stupid he is.

Kripa gave Armaan a knowing look indicating she totally agreed with him while Angad gave him a-meet-me-later-and-I-kill-you look. He then looked at Kripa and just gave her an embarrassed smile while she smirked and got back to work. After working for about four hours finally Armaan's room was spotless. It was finally clean like never before.

Kripa: If this room becomes anything less then what it is right now'I will personally come and murder you in your sleep Armaan Monkey Sharma!

She gave him a threatening look and walked out of the room while he just smiled at her not reacting. After all he knew how she would react when she saw Kavya's room. But all his hopes came crashing down as they all got to Kavya's room. The room was pretty decent'not that bad'just a couple clothes here and there and a couple books around'other then that everything seemed ok. Anjali gave Kavya a smile while he just sighed at how beautiful she was.

anjali: wow....finally a decent room.....

Kripa: wait a minute.....not falling for this again....

kripa walked to the side of the bed and looked under to find.....................................................absolutely nothing!! She was so happy she ran to kavya and gave him a hug.

Kripa: oh bhai..thank you thank you thank you!!

Anjali: yeapp....just a few things...Kripa....fold the blanket properly and I'll put these books away and we'll be done.

Kripa: yeap...oh by the way...bhai keeps his books in the closet.

uh oh. Kavya turned around to look at Anjali who was about to open his closet. "um DONT --" before he could finish, Anjali opened the closet and became the victim of a junk avalanche. There was so much stuff in there, that she was actually knocked onto the floor and buried in everything that fell from in there. everything was quiet for a few seconds as everyone turned to glare at Kavya. everyone except Armaan. He was staring at Anjali, sitting surrounded by Kavya's clothes, socks, books, sport gear... underwears even! He grabbed his stomach, sat on the floor and burst out into a huge wave of laughter. He was literally Rolling on the floor laughing...

Kripa looked at him disgustedly then back at Kavya. "I WANT A REFUND ON THAT HUG BHAI!" she said annoyed.

Armaan continued laughing as if he were on laughing gas.

"SHUT UP ARMAAN!" Screamed the other five

Anjali sat up and started throwing anything and everything she could get in her hand at Kavya. While the other 4 minus Armaan who was still on the floor laughing just moved to the side and let her do what she was doing. He deserved every bit of it. Finally when she was done she got up and went to Armaan and smacked him on his head to make him shut up

Armaan: but I--

His words came short as Kripa smacked him in the back of his head, just like Anjali had. seeing him get smacked twice, Kavya and Angad started laughing. In turn, they were both smacked on the head by Riddhima at the same time. Anjali then turned to Kavya.

Anjali: YOU'THIS'SO'OMG!!

Kripa: What she means to say is'you are cleaning this room by yourself'I QUIT!!

Armaan: Me too!

Kripa: Actually no'make Armaan clean it too.

Angad: HAHAH! Perfect! Alright Armaan get to it!

Anjali: Bhai'just for that obnoxious comment'you are cleaning too.

Riddhima: Perfect'this will teach you three to be a little clean! You PIGS!

She eyed Armaan as she said the last bit and got a sock thrown at her by him. But the girls had made their decision. There was no way they were going to clean this. Not possible! After a lot of arguing and blackmailing the guys finally agreed to clean the rooms themselves. The girls went downstairs as the boys started cleaning. After a couple hours they were finally done. The girls inspected the room and gave their nod. Finally all the cleaning was complete. Now they could relax. Everyone went back downstairs and relaxed while Armaan went to the kitchen to get food. Kripa was about to follow him but she stopped when she heard the door bell and went to get that instead. She smiled as she saw the person. She recognized him from the party and how he had flirted with her. She knew exactly why he had that shocked expression on his face.

Kripa: Hi Abhi

Abhi: Um'hi'.what are you doing here? Don't tell me another one of Armaan's flings? You refused to be my friend last night and now you re here'that's not very nice.

Abhi put a hand on his heart pretending to be hurt while Kripa chuckled.

Kripa: Armaan's flings? Abhi you and I are gonna be best friends and we are gonna start by you telling me all about his "flings"

Abhi: Oh with pleasure'but why are you here again?

Kripa: Well this is my house'I am Armaan and Kavya's sister.

Abhi: WHAT?!?!

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Okie guys'the Character of Abhi is going to be Played by the one and only Vivian Dsena (so cute) The only reason that we decided to make Abhi a character is because of one and only JOT (Angel-Jot.) And thank you to Kriya and Natasha for helping me out deciding about Abhi as well! Love you guyssssss......hershi

Once again please press the "LIKE" button and comment that way we know our work is being appreciated!!! Thanks for all the lovely comments...We will get to them soon =)


Edited by Hershy_Katie - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: asma_227

Lovely part.The cleaning session was fun.
I would really appreciate if u would show more AR scenes as they are my favourite.
Angad-Kripa's scene was nice.
Plz update soon.
U guys rock!!


aww thank you so much!! definitely trying to get more AR scenes...but it has to be equal since there are 3 couples...but i shall try =) U rock for readingggg...hahah thanksss <3333

Originally posted by: kriyaarsh

yayyy u updated!!!! :)

great part yaar :)

-EDITED-

Ok, so. Here is that longgggggggggggggggggggg comment. hehe :) So basically, I sent the part to myself through my email, and then I put it onto my iPod and then read it in the car on the way to a theme park. Thats how addicted you have made me.

haha ok to the part

OMGGGG angad and kripa....FALLING IN LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :)
armaan and riddhima....still not much yaar.
kavya and anjali...I LOVE KAVYA <3
hahaha
ok so this part made me laugh so much that my parents thought i was going crazy in the car.
this is what you have made me guys!! -.-

Love,
Kriya <33

UPDATE SOONNNN!! :)


thank u lovee <33
LMAo!! awww....loyal reader <33 hahah omg theme park? in the winter? its open??? all theme parks close here in like september/october ish...but awesome!!
Im falling in love with angad too <333 actually i already was..lmao!!! and i love kavya too hahaha...and with AR...they wont be in "love" just yet...as u can tell lmao! love you <333

Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

i wil get bak to u after i read ur entire parts. but i'm scared of getting addicted. 😛


haha i will be waiting =) oooo i hope i get u addicted ;) lmao!

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

Who knew cleaning can be this fun? Well im sure it wasnt great for them, but i surely enjoyed reading the part :)

Im just loving all these couples...the way theyre all smitten by each other and itll just take some time to realize it ;)
and armaans such a cutie pie...playing games in the bathroom and lovedd the AR scene in riddhimas rooom...ahaha riddhima is surely something...so particular LOL
and awww kavyas adorable too...hes soo lattu over anjali alreadyy ;) and the fire seems to be burning from both sides haha
and Angaddd awwwwwwwww....i loved how all his mess was under the bed and kripa is the one who found it ;)..and nice AK scenes...especially the one in the end ;) could totally imagine it :D
AWESOMEE PART!
LOVEDDDD ITTT :D
and also, i liked the sibs scenes as well..how angad and armaan warning each other to stay away from their sisters...and then kripa noticing anjali and riddhima staring at her brother and then, herself staring at angads PERFECT face haha
Theres so much to say but i guess ill shut up here
and will be waiting for the next partt EAGERLY :D
and pleaseeeeee give us some more sibs scenes and cute romantic love scene and also, LOTS OF MASTI...
can you also give some angad and riddhima scenes regarding the clothes riddhima wore back in london haha..LOL
okiee thats all
Keep it up YOU TWO :D
Love yah!
and pleeaseeeee UPDATE SOONER this time :D


omgggggg hershi loves long comments...u made hershi so happyyyy!!!!! lmao oki im done...noww to ur comment...thank u for readingg first of all...i really appreciate it! yesss....kavya and anjali are pretty into eachother lol....AR still have time...a lot of time i think lmao...and with AK...well..angad is a flirt...and kripa hates his flirting...so lets see how that works out..LOL...siblings scenes?? suree...i love writing sibling scenes lol...thanks again for reading...ur awesome!!!

Originally posted by: 26javey26

awesome update
love it


thank you <3

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was sooooooo awesomeeeeeee

thanks soo muchhh!!!

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it
they are all so cute
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm


thank u for reading =) next part is up =) will continue soon! thanks again!

Originally posted by: sindukur

Great part again. I just love your writing. Thanks for the PM. Continue soon


aww thank u so much!! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey another great part.. continue soon

Thanks for the pm..

Plzzzzz Pm when u update..


thank u so much!! will def. pm u =)

Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

It was a funny chap. I kinda told you how i thought of each part while we were talking so...*shrugs*


But i'm still mad at you for making Kripa and Armaan siblings. I mean seriously? W*F? HOW?
WHY?
But anyways..the Kavya and Anjali scenes were cute but the AK scenes were wayyy cuter.
The ending was chooo sweet. Lubb MY Angad. <3 MY Armaan as well btw.

But ya'know what? I think Armaan is a bit crazy which is why i love him. Ya'know..he's like the type of guy you expect to start singing random songs out of nowhere.

Phil...who is he? And once again..NO ABHI? HOW COULD YOU????
*tears*

Well...the Sharma house cleaning sounds like fun. Haha...Angad is smart btw. He stuffed everything under his bed to impress Kripa? HAHA. So sweet.

11 pages and yet the update seemed so tiny. =( I love this FF so much.

Lovely job done Hershi. LUBB the update.
Can't wait 4 the next one.

-Jot.


lol yes haha...thanks for that! and thanks for readingggg!!! and lmaoo...abhi is in the next part...thanks to u..and only for u =) im glad u liked itttt!!! armaan is a bit crazy??? hes totally crazyy!!! just like me...and YOU!! hahahah!!! U mean MY ANGAD? yeah i know...hes absolutely adorableeee =D small??? girl u kuhhhraaaazzzzyyyyy....thanks again..im glad ur addicted bahahah!!! LOVE YOU JOTTTYyy <3

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

the cleaning session was fun 2 read cant wait 2 read what the 6 of them get up 2 in the sharma house.


aww thank u so mcuh =) im glad u liked it!!


thank you <3
Edited by Hershy_Katie - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: natashu

Ooo Armaan...lazy bum!😆

AK scene's were just downright cute! =D
...He thought he had her impressed UNTIL she saw everything under the bed. LMAO.
coming back to Armaan...poor guy got yelled at by Riddhima one too many times!😆
She can be a bit annoying huh? But I love Armaan either way😃 <3
& Kavya is funny - "yeah, what she said" LOL!
Anjali wasn't as loud as I thought she would be here...she actually forgave Angad =P
The whole housecleaning had me loving all of the couples =D
Great job done once again!
I want MOREEE soon.
=]



more is up woman!! lol...and thanks for ur adorable comment!! u rock! LOL i think everyone who is nit picky is annoying LMAO! i love armaan too hahah! thanks again for reading!! love yahhhhh!!!


thanksss!!

Originally posted by: Naina2127

awesome update....loved the kripa angad part at the end ^_^


aww thanks so much! glad u liked it! keep reading =)

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Who knew cleaning can be this fun? Lol howlarious FF u guys have here

it's super cute

lekha here brand new reader.

Love u guys and keep it coming.


righttt??? who knew?? lmao!!! thanks so much!! i love brand new readers...im hershi =) nice to meet u!!! keep readinggggg and we shall keep it coming =)


thanks for readingg!! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: xMamz2ellee

Great part! Loved it . Please update soon 😃


thank u so much! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

hey di another awesome part

enjoyed reading it.

loved ak interaction

and hahah all the things were under his bed i actually thought that his room was the most neat of them all.

and lolz armaan got the jewllery box....good one.

Kripa: Of course it was spotless aunty. Armaan was very hungry!...hahahaahha

can't wait for more.

continue asap.


thank u love! im glad u likedit =) hope ur exams are went well baz! thanks for readinggg....next part is up! =)

Originally posted by: arshbest

heyy

nice and biggg one!!!!and pill oh my god

ammy was hilariouss😆

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi⭐️


aww thank u so much! glad u liked it sakshi =) keep readinggg!!!

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

This was absolutely adorable! dont ask me why...


thank you!! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

i loved dis part!!!

full of masti n fun.....
waitin 4 d sharma house cleaning....
cont soon n do pm me


thank u very much! im glad u liked it =) keep readinggg!! will definitely keep pming u!

Originally posted by: sanjana25

wow
loved the part..
contd soon
just caught up with ur parts!


aww thank u so much! im glad u liked it =) next par tis up!! keep readingggg!
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Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

awesome update.....👏

loved every bit of it...❤️

all 6 are really monkeys....they fight like idiots....😆

loved the bonding.....👍🏼

and this phill is making the boys jealous...😆

loved angad and kripa in the end.....😍❤️

continue soon....😊


thank u love! im glad u liked ittt!!! and yeppp phill is making the boys jealous haha! wait to read more!! keep readinggg...thanks again!

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

hey
i m khushi
new to ur ff
i read ur ff in one go
and maannn, i have to say, it's fantabulous
loved reading it.
especially the cleaning up parts.
and the girls are crazy... more than guys....
last part was fantastic....
and the thing i like the most is that u have used all my fav coup in here
it's gud how u all write the parts together.
i don't know who are the ones who write this together, but i have to say, u did a very good job.....
nd hope i get to read more bepanah soon enough....
take care friends.
ud soon....


and pls add me to u pm list.thanxz!!!!

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hey khushiii!!! thank u so muchhh!!! i love new readers haha..i believe ur sister is reading this too =) hope u enjoy it and keep readinggg....take caree!!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

AHHHAHAHAHHAHA....good work!

loved the part :)


awww thanks so much!! keep readingg =)

Originally posted by: spvd

res6
lovely part.....................
cont soon dears....................
Happy New Year...................
i need PM


happy new yearr!!! glad u liked it =) thanks so much! keep reading =)

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Hey I am new to your FF
And I must say really awesome FF...loved it :)
Its just fantastic...Eagerly waiting for the next part..
plz ud soon :)

ps. can you please PM when you update. thank you :)


aww thank u so much!!! welcome to the fanfic...im glad u liked it =) ur sister is khushi rite? next part is up and im sure ur ead it already too lol! will definitely pm u =) thanks again! keep reading!

QUOTE=MS-meghasharma]thanx for pm dear
a verry happy new year to u and ur family.
superb part
i was laughing like anything...fab work

thank u so much hun! im glad u liked it =) and a veryy happy new year to u as well =) thanks agian! keep readingg!

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear How R U so cold yaar but ur ff is really a mind blowing one Happy New Year plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha

hi nidha! how are u? i know rite its freezing here in NJ too! but thanks for reading...and i still love ur little icons..they are adorable lol...thanks again...keep reading!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Can I laugh first?

😆😆
I LOVED every bit of this update!!😃
Armaan is just jokes...food & girls define him. LMAO.
...revenge touch? LOL!
That was a good one.😆
I knew Kavya would have something other than nothing under the bed. HAHA
Poor Anjali though...everything comes crashing down on the poor girl!
& Kripa asking for a hug refund, I tell you, that was too funny! ROFL.
Now I can't wait to see how Abhi's character shapes up!😳
I thank you Jot, for the inclusion of this character😉😆
Ooo Vivian <3
Update the next part ASAP! =D
Edited by natashu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG HERSHI this is amazing!!! I loved this part
and it made SO MUCH more sense because I read THE WHOLE ff today haahha :)

But really it was amazing, I loved how KA and AK are falling in love-ish and AR are still just...there. hahah I loved the way Angad's character is portrayed and omg Kavya is like totally the perfect one for Anjali, hes totally like a girl...well...besides the closet part. and you know what? i totally think that you need to update sooner because you made me wait so much for it haha. :) BUTTT it was great that you picked Vivian to be Abhi ahhah not Amit LOL :)

And you are welcome <3

Love,
Kriya <33
Edited by kriyaarsh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG you guys just keep getting BETTER AND BETTER!

and even without your pm, i just had a feeling you guys had updated. And here i am :)
Btw love the new entry, vivian is just adorable, and i can totally imagine him as Abhi :)
Okiee so now with the part, it was just amazing.
Lovedd the prank armaan and kripa played on kavya and i loved how the guys were so shocked about what their sisters dressed like in London, so like them loll. and hahaha the phil part was jokes...poor armaan! but, i enjoyed the part that followed...AR on top of each other....but lovee between them...IS JUST WAYY TO FAR AWAY...i dont even seem friendship haha...since armaan has ALOT OF FLINGS?!..loll butt cannt wait for their lovestory to get rolllingg..
Angad and Kripa....im glad that they stare at each other and stuff now ;) i cant totally see something there...and love how they taunt each other with dirty looks...hehe..and same goes for Anjali and Kavya...
Cleaning the sharma sibs rooms was good...glad its done now :)
So what awaits now? Them getting back to school?..loll
canttt waitttttttt forr thattt!
Theres lots too say about this part...but nothings really coming to my mind so ill end it off here...BUT JUST WANNA SAY...KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!
and also, a request...definetely show some more bickers and lovely scenes between the Sibs...i wanna see some Khanna sibiling fun...oh and also, dont forget our couples....something needs to start there ;)...and also...some jealousyy would be nice...id love it if the girls went gaga over abhi and then, the bros would have to step in LOOLL
Continuee sooon!
Will be eagerly waiting..
devu
Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
the cleaning session was intresting,i really liked the prank armaan and kripa played on kavya.The chemistry between all the couples was amazingly described.cant wait 2read the next part.

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