Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11 - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part again. I just love your writing. Thanks for the PM. Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey another great part.. continue soon

Thanks for the pm..

Plzzzzz Pm when u update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a funny chap. I kinda told you how i thought of each part while we were talking so...*shrugs*

But i'm still mad at you for making Kripa and Armaan siblings. I mean seriously? W*F? HOW?
WHY?
But anyways..the Kavya and Anjali scenes were cute but the AK scenes were wayyy cuter.
The ending was chooo sweet. Lubb MY Angad. <3 MY Armaan as well btw.

But ya'know what? I think Armaan is a bit crazy which is why i love him. Ya'know..he's like the type of guy you expect to start singing random songs out of nowhere.

Phil...who is he? And once again..NO ABHI? HOW COULD YOU????
*tears*

Well...the Sharma house cleaning sounds like fun. Haha...Angad is smart btw. He stuffed everything under his bed to impress Kripa? HAHA. So sweet.

11 pages and yet the update seemed so tiny. =( I love this FF so much.

Lovely job done Hershi. LUBB the update.
Can't wait 4 the next one.

-Jot.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part
the cleaning session was fun 2 read cant wait 2 read what the 6 of them get up 2 in the sharma house.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ooo Armaan...lazy bum!šŸ˜†

AK scene's were just downright cute! =D
...He thought he had her impressed UNTIL she saw everything under the bed. LMAO.
coming back to Armaan...poor guy got yelled at by Riddhima one too many times!šŸ˜†
She can be a bit annoying huh? But I love Armaan either way😃 <3
& Kavya is funny - "yeah, what she said" LOL!
Anjali wasn't as loud as I thought she would be here...she actually forgave Angad =P
The whole housecleaning had me loving all of the couples =D
Great job done once again!
I want MOREEE soon.
=]
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update....loved the kripa angad part at the end ^_^
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Posted: 14 years ago
Who knew cleaning can be this fun? Lol howlarious FF u guys have here

it's super cute

lekha here brand new reader.

Love u guys and keep it coming.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part! Loved it . Please update soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey di another awesome part

enjoyed reading it.

loved ak interaction

and hahah all the things were under his bed i actually thought that his room was the most neat of them all.

and lolz armaan got the jewllery box....good one.

Kripa: Of course it was spotless aunty. Armaan was very hungry!...hahahaahha

can't wait for more.

continue asap.

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Posted: 14 years ago

heyy

nice and biggg one!!!!and pill oh my god

ammy was hilarioussšŸ˜†

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshiā­ļø

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