Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11

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aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

fab part...
just loved it....
continue soon

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swapna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Hilarious part again. You are an awesome writer keep up the good work. Continue soon

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natashu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Comment edited! =]

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37780841

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Monal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

Reserved...will be back...sry my plate is really full with the mid-terms going on

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Hershy Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: natashu
Can I laugh first?
😆😆

I LOVED every bit of this update!!😃
Armaan is just jokes...food & girls define him. LMAO.

...revenge touch? LOL!
That was a good one.😆

I knew Kavya would have something other than nothing under the bed. HAHA
Poor Anjali though...everything comes crashing down on the poor girl!

& Kripa asking for a hug refund, I tell you, that was too funny! ROFL.

Now I can't wait to see how Abhi's character shapes up!😳
I thank you Jot, for the inclusion of this character😉😆

Ooo Vivian <3

Update the next part ASAP! =D

lmao yes u may laugh first haha...thank u so much for reading..and helping me with the whole abhi stuff!!! thank u to jotty as well haha!! glad u liked it...love yaaaa!!!!!! im working on the next part...lmao it should be up soon......hopefullyy...lmao!!! <333

Originally posted by: kriyaarsh
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OMG HERSHI this is amazing!!! I loved this part
and it made SO MUCH more sense because I read THE WHOLE ff today haahha :)

But really it was amazing, I loved how KA and AK are falling in love-ish and AR are still just...there. hahah I loved the way Angad's character is portrayed and omg Kavya is like totally the perfect one for Anjali, hes totally like a girl...well...besides the closet part. and you know what? i totally think that you need to update sooner because you made me wait so much for it haha. :) BUTTT it was great that you picked Vivian to be Abhi ahhah not Amit LOL :)

And you are welcome <3

Love,
Kriya <33

I LOVE YOU KRIYA!!! thanks with all the helppp...and LMFAOo this is why u read stuff from the beginning and not the middle hahaha...img lad u liked itt =) lmfao..and u know exactly why i cant update soon..and i went to the doctor today....hate docs!..but im definitely gonna try =) and yess lol...vivian all the way...i didnt want amit as abhi for obvious reasons and also what if i decide to bring prithvi in u kno lol..so yeah!! thanks again loveeee...keep reading!

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG
OMG you guys just keep getting BETTER AND BETTER!
and even without your pm, i just had a feeling you guys had updated. And here i am :)
Btw love the new entry, vivian is just adorable, and i can totally imagine him as Abhi :)

Okiee so now with the part, it was just amazing.
Lovedd the prank armaan and kripa played on kavya and i loved how the guys were so shocked about what their sisters dressed like in London, so like them loll. and hahaha the phil part was jokes...poor armaan! but, i enjoyed the part that followed...AR on top of each other....but lovee between them...IS JUST WAYY TO FAR AWAY...i dont even seem friendship haha...since armaan has ALOT OF FLINGS?!..loll butt cannt wait for their lovestory to get rolllingg..

Angad and Kripa....im glad that they stare at each other and stuff now ;) i cant totally see something there...and love how they taunt each other with dirty looks...hehe..and same goes for Anjali and Kavya...

Cleaning the sharma sibs rooms was good...glad its done now :)
So what awaits now? Them getting back to school?..loll
canttt waitttttttt forr thattt!

Theres lots too say about this part...but nothings really coming to my mind so ill end it off here...BUT JUST WANNA SAY...KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!
and also, a request...definetely show some more bickers and lovely scenes between the Sibs...i wanna see some Khanna sibiling fun...oh and also, dont forget our couples....something needs to start there ;)...and also...some jealousyy would be nice...id love it if the girls went gaga over abhi and then, the bros would have to step in LOOLL

Continuee sooon!
Will be eagerly waiting..

devu

aww thanks hun!! thats what i call a loyal reader lolll knows an update will be up even before a PM hahah im glad u like it =) you readers are the reason why we do so well =) keep on reading....and keep on commenting...i love ur comments...tehy are so sweet and definitely motivates me to write better =) so dont stop!! and keep reading =)

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
awesome part
the cleaning session was intresting,i really liked the prank armaan and kripa played on kavya.The chemistry between all the couples was amazingly described.cant wait 2read the next part.

thank u so much!! im glad u liked it =) keep on readinggg for more funnn!! =D

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BABY-GIRL7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

plz do continue,,,love this ff :D

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

awesome update

loved it

loved when AR fell on the floor

abhi is going to tell kripa about armaan's flings

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Araina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

fabulous update again😛
the whole ud was hilarious and very cute.
they finally find a decent room! NOT!!!😭😭

the line i especially like the best is when kripa says, 'I WANT A REFUND ON MY HUG'😆😆

also when ridz says would u want us to follow your style sense and how the 3 boys answer NO! at the same time. 🥱😆😆

it was also hilarious when the boys found out that philly was gay!😛
the scenes bet armaan and ridz was very nice. he saved her from bumping her head on the ground! so nice....😳😳

and also i really like abhi's character. nice. u r using vivian! 😃 since u r giving the pic of person who plays abhi i m guessing he'll be playing some kind of imp. role...😕😕

yes. my sis is reading it too. but how'd u know she's my sis??? 😲😲😲
nyways, take care. and will be waiting till u find time to ud next. all the best ekta and smileyface (sorry. i don't know ur name) 😭
u both r the best ff writers
love you
👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
👏👏👏

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago