With every breath I take:NOTE PG38 - Page 14

i just read the 2 parts... it was great.. starting to get really interessting.. you write really well.. please please update soon.. cant wait to read more!

hey di

hehehee

dat was a cool prt 😉

cont super sooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Part 3 is posted

No pms as im busy and will update krazzy this weekend also

Love Kat 😳

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey Kat, part 2 was briliant, im absolutely loving this crazy Ridz, just cant wait to know what happens next

awesome update

Sania 😳

Awwww cheers Sania😳

Originally posted by: jhanvimooni

Wow Kat awesome parts..ammy starting to fall for ridzy..specially loved the music part..hehe nana making sumit the villan ,,looking forward for the next parts..

Cheers

Yeah i ....but Sumit not show up yet....in the 4th part LMAO😆

Originally posted by: shivgauri

😆 cute part!mother of all dirty look, and armaan thinkin of marrying 'coz she is loaded were damn funny!! 😆 😆 😆

Actually kuku u not seen the show and her dirty look is just wicked😆

The plan is failing or what?😕😆

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

OMG kat dis has 2 be da cutest part ever ( y do i get da feeling dere more 2 cum ... on dere way 2 Dona Paula ) !!!! jus luv dis whole concept where both r trying dere best 2 piss da other one off n get da other person 2 call off da wedding !!! wud luv 2 c wud dey wud do once dey fall ( madly) in luv wit each other n nana is supppse 2 be da mastermind ( in helping dem fall in luv ) ... OMG seriously wonder wat he will do next !!!! will b waiting for da next part .... really wanna knw wat will happen once dere car breaks down !!!!

I seriously dont think Nana has to do much....this to are like a bomb goin off😆

Originally posted by: meow23

d cutest prt of d ff.... n i'm sure der is more 2 cum on der 2 d paula n it better cum.... waitngg 4 der trip...
planng how 2 ditch each other der def gng 2 fall afterall dey hav d mastermind nana....
waitnggg 4 d nxt prt... update soonnn 😊 😊 😊

I think at this stage they are bein watched....😆

Originally posted by: jia..

heck u ought to name urself wonderwoman rather then catwoman!! 😆 😆 😆 becoz ur writing is just doing wonders!! how do u even get better then excellent i dunno??? 😆

"Women are women Rahul… I can handle them! But you're fathers phone calls? How do I handle them?" Armaan saw the messages at the desk…" 😆 😆 😆

Well with the start itself u had to shot a sixer?? I already know ur wonderful with dialogs, y do u prove it everytime i dunno?? gimme a break from finding new adjectives for u once atleast??? well u didnt this time so.....i am sitting with a dic again 😆

"Oh OK! I think I can handle kicking ninja by then,Yeah I thought I landed in Hong Kong movie!" 🤣
hongkong movie??? Honestly ur cracking me up?? wat next ?? Compare her with jackie chan or something?? 😆😆

"Man talk about the mother of all dirty looks..'"
😆 😆 😆 There u go.....temme one thing do u love penning his thoughts or something??? Becoz i love readingthem!! (If i make any sense at all to you) 😆 😆 😆

"Armaan are you crazy get her to fall in love with you she loaded…. No dude I gave my word and she crazy!! I would never what to marry that! Man you crazy she beautiful and a NUT JOB!" 🤣 🤣 🤣 Looks like someone's getting ideas huh????? Awesome Kat. Loving the way ur taking this!!

"Hmmm I don't think that shade of colour suits you!" OK there that evil stare and she wiping Anjali's lipstick mark off my cheek….Woah Armaan she smells good…and she holding my hand? Ok I feel like she going to eat me for dinner…" 🤣

Armaan for dinner??? didnt know he was so delicious😆😆(actually he is much more then that😆)!!! And she wiping off the lipstick?? Kudos Kat!! 👏

God nana and sumit??? Heck and Sumit the evil guy??? 😆 😆 Another brilliant stroke!! Loved the last musical bit too!! 😆

Kat am literally bowled over by ur wonderful update!! Its more then outstanding yar!!! Hats off to you. 👏 👏 👏
Will be waiting desperately for the trip!! 😳

Take care
Jia

Wonderwoman had a lame costume....hence i loved Catwoman as she has a dark side...😆....dont get me started

She not put the gloves away in the next update

Originally posted by: samijan

omg. way funny,!!!!!!!!!!!LOL! I couldn't stop laughin. well good. Continue soon!!!!!!🤣

Awww thank U😆

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey kat di 😊
amazing part di
loved it totally 😳
this part cracked me up 😆 omg it was so hillarious
esp armaan's that remark .... mother of all dirty looks 😆
i was just laughing completely 😆
n gosh that nana n "villian" sumit 😆 thats fun to read
update soon
👏

Awwww *blushing* thank u😳

Originally posted by: spln

hey kat!!!so r miss sunshine didnt think quite badly of him in honest opinions, well i guess there aint no reason why she should armaan's one of his kind....n three days....hmmm if we can trust someone to play magic in such a short time its u lady..... ridzy having a hard time bing a brat with him lolzzzzz can i replace???id do a good job, n i love hard metal too...i wasnt quite miss sunshine, but i think u can manage with minor changes.....it was such a hilarious update in parts of it....both of them working on getting dumped, n telling each other facts....n then how cicl can they get at dinner wow!!!first she breaks his leg yells at him n all that n then its a toast to dumping each other....not quite happening though they wish!!!


ps:before i forget, flat tye, sumit the mock evit guy...hahaha...did u mention armaan in ur fic did some boxing too?????sumit save ur skin man, this gona get rough!!!

OK NJ Mr American Armaan is all urs😆.... i can so see u head bangin together😳😆...i love the track toooo....dont get me started.... Sumits not made his entry yet!!

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was fun
continue soon 😊

Awww thank u😳

**Cheers guys*****

Love Kat😳

wow kat gr8 part... and reli long 2

okk, so more confusions coming up, but itz good 2 c RM attracted 2 each othr, so things wud clear b/w them and they can get married..soon 😆 😆

boy AR r so cute.. haha, 'bloody sho off'... looks like ridz DOES like him 😆 ... omg kissing 4 15 minz??? tht part sure cracked me up,,,lmao...


conitnue soon, nd pm me if u can 😃

Love,
Irsa

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey kat

like usual, this part was damn hilarious... u surely crack me up sometymz...lmao 😆

hong kong bit nd muski's ka GUSSA bit was reli funny... 😆 ... seriously whr do u get these ideas 4m???

heavy metal fan... well atleast thtz somin they kinda have in common,.,

woohooo go nana!!! 🥳 ,.,, he's trying 2 hook the 2 up... hope he succeeds... nd thrz some romance happening b/w the 2 😳

itz funny how armi thinks she's loaded.. boy he'll b surprised when he falls in love with her... 😆 😆

continue super sooonnn

Love,
Irsa

Cheers honey.....😳

Originally posted by: me and just me

Arey, part 2 is already up and i didn't know.. very bad!
But, i was actually very busy so sorry....SOO sorry for the late comment 😳

Anyway, this was awesome, 👏 👏 👏 loved it muski's gussa was funny 😆..

Lol i have not pmed.... as im too occupied with my work load

Cheers😳

Originally posted by: aravi

whoooooooooshhhhhhhhhhh! 😉 now dis was a perfect roller coaster ride 😉 😉 god ur one-liners r soooo k 😆 illing now i'm waiting for for da gaddi to breakdown lets in wat u cook up dis time !!! 😃 😃 n poor summit became a villain 😛 does he noe armi's a boxer poor bloke pity him so much n now update fast craving 4 more!!!!!!!!11

LOL u like the lines....heheh brit humour😆

Originally posted by: sweet=me

Heyyy!!! As usual this part was brilliant!!! Loved it!!! Loved the hilarious insights into their thoughts...omg nana!!! The eternal matchmaker!!! 😆 😆 😆 Let's see what'll happen when they're stranded half way to their destination....Hmmm...does Ridz already have a bf?? Well I just hope she falls for Armi soooooon....Gr8 part on the whole.... 👏
Love,
Ananya

Awwwww thank u😳

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

hey,i luvd dis part...it was toooooooo hilarious 😆 😆 😆

I wonder wat ll b dere rxn wen dey ll cum out 2 knw abt each other acting...lol.. 😆 😆 😆

continue soon...
plz pm me if poss... 😛

Awwww cheers no pm this time round im afaired😳

Originally posted by: princess4120

i just read the 2 parts... it was great.. starting to get really interessting.. you write really well.. please please update soon.. cant wait to read more! [/QUOTE

Awwww thank u😳

Awwww thank u😳

*** thank u guysss so for the delay on commented ....to much on at the moment in the office.....Cheers for the support *****

Love Kat

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

wow kat gr8 part... and reli long 2

okk, so more confusions coming up, but itz good 2 c RM attracted 2 each othr, so things wud clear b/w them and they can get married..soon 😆 😆

boy AR r so cute.. haha, 'bloody sho off'... looks like ridz DOES like him 😆 ... omg kissing 4 15 minz??? tht part sure cracked me up,,,lmao...


conitnue soon, nd pm me if u can 😃

Love,
Irsa

The kissing was her way i telling him off.... all thou im not sure who liked it more😆....she crackin me up!!

Love Kat

awesome par kat 👏 !
it was v. funny 😆
update soon 😳

LOVIN IT
wooooow was it gd n great way 4
ridz to gt even lool
woow must have been da longest kiss evr lol
n omg cudnt stp laughin nw rm turned into ar man
wot is da world in ur ff cumin too lol
luvin ur updts asusual
updte sooon

niz x

Woow what loong update.. 😃 keep it up!
it was very funny, too good!