With every breath I take:NOTE PG38 - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Kat just caught up with the update, absolutely both couples in this, so Rahul and Muskaan are on the way?? seems like their meeting hit off to a good start, now i cant wait to see what happens with AR, waiting for your next

awesome update as usual, dont expect anything less!!

Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Kat,

wah wah wah wah nice one..two people @ Airport and the other two all over the place..heheh OMG Kiss N SLAP and KISS as a PAYBACK wow no wonder Ammy wud wanna be a sucker for such punishments..wow now they have to spend a nite in one room..lets c what that nite has in store for them..

Cheers
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: saira_1

awesome par kat 👏 !
it was v. funny 😆
update soon 😳

Awwww thank u😳

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

LOVIN IT
wooooow was it gd n great way 4
ridz to gt even lool
woow must have been da longest kiss evr lol
n omg cudnt stp laughin nw rm turned into ar man
wot is da world in ur ff cumin too lol
luvin ur updts asusual
updte sooon

niz x

Yeah by the end of the FF know one is going to know who is who?😕😆

Originally posted by: me and just me

Woow what loong update.. 😃 keep it up!
it was very funny, too good!

LOL i was making up for lost time.... heheh cheers😳

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey Kat just caught up with the update, absolutely both couples in this, so Rahul and Muskaan are on the way?? seems like their meeting hit off to a good start, now i cant wait to see what happens with AR, waiting for your next

awesome update as usual, dont expect anything less!!

Sania

awwwww thank u.....😳..U make me *blush* reading the last part

Originally posted by: jhanvimooni

Hey Kat,

wah wah wah wah nice one..two people @ Airport and the other two all over the place..heheh OMG Kiss N SLAP and KISS as a PAYBACK wow no wonder Ammy wud wanna be a sucker for such punishments..wow now they have to spend a nite in one room..lets c what that nite has in store for them..

Cheers

LOL he totally smitten.... and think Rahul an idiot lol😆....Plus he like the rough stuff LMAO

Love Kat😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Kat,
didn't know, you had updated, & what an update???I read it 3 times already....its that good
what a story???? 2 couples with names interchanged & fallen for each other...I am loving each & every word of this FF...
The chudidar was simply great with that song, it fitted it all...the car stopped working..now who could have done that? 😉 ....then who would carry the bags...the jungle episode was lovely, the waterfall & the surroundings you described were simply mind blowing, even in the most distrubing heat of Dubai, I can imagine your surroundings 😆 😆 😆
The kiss was just awesome, of course Arman is a sucker for such punishment 😉
Sharing the same room, was not enough & that you are making them the same bed...OMG kat, I am seriously falling in love with you....oops!!! with your FF....
thanks
take care
love
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Posted: 17 years ago
Now that was one mindblowing update and i have to say Jeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz too as it was long one...nothing pleases me more... 😆

Ahhh so i can see the real Armaan smitten now!!
😆

".i mean wow she looking so beautiful and she smiling…. OK ALERT DUDE Danger!! Yeah right she tipping the bell boy 500 ruppees? …..Jeez? "
🤣 🤣 Alert??? Lmao u seem to be full on here....great start!!

"Stop it Honey! Or I'm putting you over my knee and spanking you!" Ok she stopped now and looking like she can murder me…. Man I can just picture me spanking her… Stop grinning!! IDIOT!!"🤣

Seriously Kat trust me making my stomach hurt more then Krazzy for u now!! spanking....Awesome ...loving this more then ever...

Ahhh the car did stop... 😆 And then kiss??? 😆 and hang on...25 MINS??????????????????????? 🤣 setting some record are we???


"Now we are even!" she said pushing him away with his eyes still closed……..HUH" Oooo Even??

Ok loved the lagoon scene and snake one too... 😳 And the truck ride??? 😆 😆

"No PappaJi he the driver! We broke down!" NOW HANG ON A MINUTE!!" 🤣 Made my guy a driver??? Poor thing...

Ahh and we see a veru civil and comfortable meeting at the airport?? Heck do they even know the heck they created in their imposter's lives?? 😆 😆 😆 and now Armaan-Ridz here?? OMG ... 😆

next dhaba scene was great one again...and leather jacket... 😆 😆 and now one room??? Lol and both claim that they dont turn on each other?? Lmao we will see .......😆

great update Kat... 👏 absolutely delightful!!

krazzy for u??? 😡 ❓ Wat to do am a bit greedy wen it cums to u.😆

Love
Jia😳

PS: Great choice of songs as usual!!😳
Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyyy
jus read ur ff....nice...i like the concept...
rellli welll written...if u dnt mind...cud u plz pm me once u update...thank uuu
keeep up the amazing wrk...doo update sooon...
luvss aashna
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww! u silly bitch! (gurl! u koe wat i mean here..haha i alwals call by fav girsl by tht! 😉 )

tht was sooo gud!!

**beating...stopped!** i wonder..like always hw u cum up such hay wire ideaz..i mean really..A money shiner n R a beauty beast...R d cnt handle hm stud n M our dear spoil brat..woaahhh!!!

lol ive tld u tis bfr..i luv d mind piecez..uff!

ter funny chem iz awesom..tey kissed n were still straight after dt!!LMAO!!

RlM r gelin well n AR cnt get ter mindz stable...ooooh!!wanna koe wat happenz in dt ugly hotel room!! ROTL!!

awesome!!! 👏 sooooo wicked!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhhh n i had 2 say tis...i dunno hw i 4gt!!!

d spankin part was d BEST~!!!! i cud sooooo imagine him doin tht!!! ahahahaahahha!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
rahul...armaan armaan...rahul muskaan...ridhima ridhima,,,muskaan who's who man im sooo confused haha it'll be even funnier when all 4 come face to face with this confusion 😆 😆 😆 haha amazingggg the papaji was funny and haha the spanking part hehe, awesome work kat!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Kat! I just caught up on all three parts and I have to tell you that your an amazing writer..This FF has a very interesting storyline! I remember watching an indian movie with this concept..It's really neat! Continue soon!

Anita

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