With every breath I take:NOTE PG38 - Page 13

omg. way funny,!!!!!!!!!!!LOL! I couldn't stop laughin. well good. Continue soon!!!!!!🤣

hey kat di 😊
amazing part di
loved it totally 😳
this part cracked me up 😆 omg it was so hillarious
esp armaan's that remark .... mother of all dirty looks 😆
i was just laughing completely 😆
n gosh that nana n "villian" sumit 😆 thats fun to read
update soon
👏

hey kat!!!so r miss sunshine didnt think quite badly of him in honest opinions, well i guess there aint no reason why she should armaan's one of his kind....n three days....hmmm if we can trust someone to play magic in such a short time its u lady..... ridzy having a hard time bing a brat with him lolzzzzz can i replace???id do a good job, n i love hard metal too...i wasnt quite miss sunshine, but i think u can manage with minor changes.....it was such a hilarious update in parts of it....both of them working on getting dumped, n telling each other facts....n then how cicl can they get at dinner wow!!!first she breaks his leg yells at him n all that n then its a toast to dumping each other....not quite happening though they wish!!!


ps:before i forget, flat tye, sumit the mock evit guy...hahaha...did u mention armaan in ur fic did some boxing too?????sumit save ur skin man, this gona get rough!!!

It was fun
continue soon 😊

hey kat

like usual, this part was damn hilarious... u surely crack me up sometymz...lmao 😆

hong kong bit nd muski's ka GUSSA bit was reli funny... 😆 ... seriously whr do u get these ideas 4m???

heavy metal fan... well atleast thtz somin they kinda have in common,.,

woohooo go nana!!! 🥳 ,.,, he's trying 2 hook the 2 up... hope he succeeds... nd thrz some romance happening b/w the 2 😳

itz funny how armi thinks she's loaded.. boy he'll b surprised when he falls in love with her... 😆 😆

continue super sooonnn

Love,
Irsa

Arey, part 2 is already up and i didn't know.. very bad!
But, i was actually very busy so sorry....SOO sorry for the late comment 😳

Anyway, this was awesome, 👏 👏 👏 loved it muski's gussa was funny 😆..

Heyyy!!! As usual this part was brilliant!!! Loved it!!! Loved the hilarious insights into their thoughts...omg nana!!! The eternal matchmaker!!! 😆 😆 😆 Let's see what'll happen when they're stranded half way to their destination....Hmmm...does Ridz already have a bf?? Well I just hope she falls for Armi soooooon....Gr8 part on the whole.... 👏
Love,
Ananya

hey,i luvd dis part...it was toooooooo hilarious 😆 😆 😆

I wonder wat ll b dere rxn wen dey ll cum out 2 knw abt each other acting...lol.. 😆 😆 😆

continue soon...
plz pm me if poss... 😛

awwwww u guys are so sweet

I have been busy with the family and stuff!! but will be updating soon

Love Kat