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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#111

OMG di u had me in splits!!!!!!!!! 😆 gosh da girl got such guts ya! 😉 she kicked him dat to thrice poor guy!!!!!! 😆

n den da masterstroke 😉 dey living in da same penthouse !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳

n armaan feel sad 4 him 😭 😭 but i think ridzy might help him find his mum n sister actually just a wild guess!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
neways di story is progressing so well just cant wait for more !!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 n dat song unwritten was so apt for situation !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

luv aravi 😳

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#112

Awww cheers guys...

I will update sooon

Love Kat 😳

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nuts123

@nuts123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Catwoman
^^^ i still have not watch Jab we Met!! 😆 i was think of Raven from the disney show as she was doin the karate moves and i was craking up!!...that where i got the idea from! 😳

Love Kat 😳

hehe lol... gotta love Raven!! 😉😆...

i saw tht epi also YAY!!...lmao😆😆

Love,
Irsa

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#114

Part 2 posted

Sorry no pms as im very busy at the moment

Love Kat

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#115

hey Kat, part 2 was briliant, im absolutely loving this crazy Ridz, just cant wait to know what happens next

awesome update

Sania 😳

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jhanvimooni

@jhanvimooni

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#116

Wow Kat awesome parts..ammy starting to fall for ridzy..specially loved the music part..hehe nana making sumit the villan ,,looking forward for the next parts..

Cheers

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#117

😆 cute part!mother of all dirty look, and armaan thinkin of marrying 'coz she is loaded were damn funny!! 😆 😆 😆

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missing Vmars

@missing Vmars

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#118

OMG kat dis has 2 be da cutest part ever ( y do i get da feeling dere more 2 cum ... on dere way 2 Dona Paula ) !!!! jus luv dis whole concept where both r trying dere best 2 piss da other one off n get da other person 2 call off da wedding !!! wud luv 2 c wud dey wud do once dey fall ( madly) in luv wit each other n nana is supppse 2 be da mastermind ( in helping dem fall in luv ) ... OMG seriously wonder wat he will do next !!!! will b waiting for da next part .... really wanna knw wat will happen once dere car breaks down !!!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#119

d cutest prt of d ff.... n i'm sure der is more 2 cum on der 2 d paula n it better cum.... waitngg 4 der trip...
planng how 2 ditch each other der def gng 2 fall afterall dey hav d mastermind nana....
waitnggg 4 d nxt prt... update soonnn 😊 😊 😊

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#120

heck u ought to name urself wonderwoman rather then catwoman!! 😆 😆 😆 becoz ur writing is just doing wonders!! how do u even get better then excellent i dunno??? 😆

"Women are women Rahul… I can handle them! But you're fathers phone calls? How do I handle them?" Armaan saw the messages at the desk…" 😆 😆 😆

Well with the start itself u had to shot a sixer?? I already know ur wonderful with dialogs, y do u prove it everytime i dunno?? gimme a break from finding new adjectives for u once atleast??? well u didnt this time so.....i am sitting with a dic again 😆

"Oh OK! I think I can handle kicking ninja by then,Yeah I thought I landed in Hong Kong movie!" 🤣
hongkong movie??? Honestly ur cracking me up?? wat next ?? Compare her with jackie chan or something?? 😆😆

"Man talk about the mother of all dirty looks..'"
😆 😆 😆 There u go.....temme one thing do u love penning his thoughts or something??? Becoz i love readingthem!! (If i make any sense at all to you) 😆 😆 😆

"Armaan are you crazy get her to fall in love with you she loaded…. No dude I gave my word and she crazy!! I would never what to marry that! Man you crazy she beautiful and a NUT JOB!" 🤣 🤣 🤣 Looks like someone's getting ideas huh????? Awesome Kat. Loving the way ur taking this!!

"Hmmm I don't think that shade of colour suits you!" OK there that evil stare and she wiping Anjali's lipstick mark off my cheek….Woah Armaan she smells good…and she holding my hand? Ok I feel like she going to eat me for dinner…" 🤣

Armaan for dinner??? didnt know he was so delicious😆😆(actually he is much more then that😆)!!! And she wiping off the lipstick?? Kudos Kat!! 👏

God nana and sumit??? Heck and Sumit the evil guy??? 😆 😆 Another brilliant stroke!! Loved the last musical bit too!! 😆

Kat am literally bowled over by ur wonderful update!! Its more then outstanding yar!!! Hats off to you. 👏 👏 👏
Will be waiting desperately for the trip!! 😳

Take care
Jia

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago