AR FF'The painful side of love' [ENDED] - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

OMG didi

I realllly loved this part

Riddz and armaan NO more as a couple really sad

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

And this was such a long part wow

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make everything back to normal and poor armaan glass pieces going through his skin ouch

Toooooooooooo gooood loved it loads sweetie

Luv ya

Swanz

Edited by swansea - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
fantastic part reaalllyyy well written
doo continuee soon
👏
and thanks for the pm 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
I loved it! The way you decribed the emotions. I had tears in my eyes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: swansea

OMG didi

I realllly loved this part

Riddz and armaan NO more as a couple really sad

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

And this was such a long part wow

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make everything back to normal and poor armaan glass pieces going through his skin ouch

Toooooooooooo gooood loved it loads sweetie

Luv ya

Swanz

thanx a lot for ur priceless comment........they mean a lot to me......i really wanted u guys to feel the pain that Armaan is going through so i created that scene.......keep reading and commenting

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kunjika

I loved it! The way you decribed the emotions. I had tears in my eyes.

awwww..............dats really sweet thanx a lot.............m glad that i could convey his emotions because it was a really important part..........thanx again

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

wooooow dat updte was amazin already fallin in luv wiv ur ff its great very emotional poooor arman bt sooo eager to find out why ridz is sooo cold cnt wait really luvin ur ff its truly amazin sumin very differnt lkin da conept n rahul lool ber flirtin wiv er really nce wrk

updte soooon n thx 4 da pm

luv niz
xxx
👏 😉

hey...........thanx a lot for ur amzing comment and i will reveal the past but not before 2-3 more parts............so i guess you'll have to wait but I promise that when the past will be revealed your wait will be worth it

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

OMG,it was sooo sentimental...bt luvd it 😭 ...Wen ll armaan cum out 2 knw d truth???LL dey b lyk dis only...???????Cant c dem dis way...especially ridz who has oodles of pain in her....

plzzzzzzz continue soon.....
thanx 4 d pm.....

luv
*vini*

Thanx a lot...........i know you can't see them seperate and m working on ridds past and it has to be perfect so its taking some time but dn't worry i'll soon reveal a bit of it...........so keep reading and commenting........you lovely comments encourage me.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kvn1983

awwsome update very well expain emoyions its directly touch to heart i can say ur u perfect writer please update it soon and send me pm and thanks for the pm also.


"Dosti achchi ho toh rang laati hai,
Dosti gehri ho toh sabko bhaati hai,
Dosti naadaan ho toh toot jaati hai,
Par agar dosti apne jaisi ho....
.... Toh itihaas banaati hai ! "

u r most welcome for the PM.............and as for updating soon well my holidays are on soo the updates will all be on time.....thanks a lot for commenting..............i worked really hard on bringing out Armaan's emotions and right now its more about Riddhima but soon it will focus more on Armaan and then past too will come out........keep reading and commenting😊

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

hey the scences were perfect & very intence............ loved it yar.......... hoping wats ridz past......... do cont soon
do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

Thanx a lot..........u'll soon know about ridz past atleast a bit of it

Originally posted by: aynee

damn wonderful...i hope 2 read mre ov ur lovely wrk...
keep me updated...
thnxs soo much 4 the pm...
luv
aynee😊

Thanx a lot buddy.........ur comment made my day..........and i'll PM u wen i update

Originally posted by: meow23

rahul already planng 2 impress ridz..... datz gr888... u bought out armaan's emotions sooo well... i feel soo bad 4 him... waitng 4 d secret.... thnxxx 4 d pm... update supersooon... waitng 4 d nxt prt.. really luvd dis prt... it was mindblowing 😊 😊 😊

Thanx a lot............Rahul is awestruck by Riddhima's beauty so he is trying to get into her good books😉.........hes not bad but just a lil silly😆..........I tried to lighten the sitution through their convo so its good u liked it.😊.........thanx again

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Amazing...Im absoultely amazed!

Brilliant part! Do continue soon n thanx 4 ur PM hun!

Ur most welcome.........thanx a lot for reading the parts and commenting on them............ur comments encourage me ...............i'll PM u wen i update...........thanx😊

Edited by krati.mehra - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hey loved the part...and ya it was quite long..thxx...i love the way u portray
riddhima's character..its so different frm the actual serial..bt ya i am dying
for tht time whn she says everything to armaan..her whole past...i know the
story needs to develop before tht bt plss try and write tht part soon.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hey krati 😊
amazing ff yaar cool concept 👏 👏 👏
loved the way u portrayed emotions they were priceless
n ya its so sad that ridz has become a total emotionless person 😭 😭 😭
well reveal her truth fast
n ya plz pm me when u update next
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
really ur update is nice one thanks for the pm ridhima is confident i wish she can save the girl.
please update it soon and send me pm.

"Kissi ko itna mat chaho ,
ke tumhari chahat uske liye majboori ban jaye,
Par chaho kissi ko itna ,
Ke tumhari chahat uske liye jaroori ban jaye …"
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
wow!!
awesome ff..
full of emotions!!
wel..continue soon..
hope this rude ridhimaa turms into the sweet one soon...

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