AR FF'The painful side of love' [ENDED]

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sweety

@friendly girl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

👏 👏 👏 woww very nice part liked it
doo continue soonnn....

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

please update it

Dosti ki kalam se pahla-paigham aapke naam,
Zindagi ki akhari shaam aapke naam.
ess safar me humsafar hai humdono,
ess dosti ko nibhana hai aapka kaam.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

hey jsu catched up wiv part 2 wooow a very difernt ridhima cnt wait 2 read mre of dis ff it defo gona b an emtoional ff n cnt wait 2 read mre updte sooon plzz

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123abc123

@123abc123

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

wooooow dat updte was amazin already fallin in luv wiv ur ff its great very emotional poooor arman bt sooo eager to find out why ridz is sooo cold cnt wait really luvin ur ff its truly amazin sumin very differnt lkin da conept n rahul lool ber flirtin wiv er really nce wrk

updte soooon n thx 4 da pm

luv niz
xxx
👏 😉

Edited by sweet-niz - 17 years ago

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

OMG,it was sooo sentimental...bt luvd it 😭 ...Wen ll armaan cum out 2 knw d truth???LL dey b lyk dis only...???????Cant c dem dis way...especially ridz who has oodles of pain in her....

plzzzzzzz continue soon.....
thanx 4 d pm.....

luv
*vini*

Edited by coolvini4u - 17 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

awwsome update very well expain emoyions its directly touch to heart i can say ur u perfect writer please update it soon and send me pm and thanks for the pm also.

"Dosti achchi ho toh rang laati hai,
Dosti gehri ho toh sabko bhaati hai,
Dosti naadaan ho toh toot jaati hai,
Par agar dosti apne jaisi ho....
.... Toh itihaas banaati hai ! "

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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sana

@cool@sify.com

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

hey the scences were perfect & very intence............ loved it yar.......... hoping wats ridz past......... do cont soon
do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

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ayesha

@aynee

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

damn wonderful...i hope 2 read mre ov ur lovely wrk...
keep me updated...
thnxs soo much 4 the pm...
luv
aynee😊

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

rahul already planng 2 impress ridz..... datz gr888... u bought out armaan's emotions sooo well... i feel soo bad 4 him... waitng 4 d secret.... thnxxx 4 d pm... update supersooon... waitng 4 d nxt prt.. really luvd dis prt... it was mindblowing 😊 😊 😊