FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 78

OMG Girl wat have u done??? How on earth do u even think of such stuff i dont understand. Its so very natural, spontaneous and trust me u hav the makings of a great writer really!! I mean just look at this part!! Left me completely speechless, dazed, just everything!! 😳

Ok was about to quote but realized that i feel like just cmmenting and praising u on every line so its better i drop the idea or else comment longer then two updates!! 😆😆😆

Nyways just loved Chris-Armaan relationship!! Its like u just seem to add so many more volumes and dimensions to it!! If u get wat i mean. 😆

Ofcourse i adored the way u made shanky accept everything. No melodrama and all. That was brilliant. and then........Armaan-shanky convo!! Seriously NJ i have no words left now!! i mean just reading the whole thing left me in ur awe!! Such a masterpicec. omg!!! anything more then outstanding?? 👏

And then the plane scene!!! First was that lock scene and now this game?? Gosh girl how on earth do u just write such stuff so naturally and adorably???? thats wat they call true talent they say i guess!! The game, then the convo abt the diary. I can just go on!! And specially like wen he pulls her close and takes a promise never to say that he will dump her!! *sigh* feeling frustated at finding no other praise good enough or. 😕

So Armaan had taken time?? Loved the justification too!! Giving time to elders!!😆 😆

really dunno wat more to say except that ur a genius woman. 👏
waiting for moree.
Jia

um sooooooo totally trying out this cloud game for passtime nxt um on a
flight n hai agar armaan's wid me...oye hoye!!!!!!!!
luv ya for writing this amazing update.. it broke all records!!!

hey NJ...firstly a big apology 4 not commenting from last 2 pts...couldnt read them as the last week was damm bad...either i was at col, office or sleeping after a long day...gosh really sorry 4 late commenting...k enough of my stupid talks coming 2 ur part...i really dont think i need 2 say the way u had written last few pts n the way the story is progressing is really a WONDERFUL job done by u

i really liked ridz breaking the car gosh hats really a gr8 thing...i loved her idea n all...coming 2 armi-shashank scene man u rock...shashank's thoughts from his pt of view...coming 2 he flight scene gosh hat was gr8888888888...from where u get these gr8 ideas u must now share with us...it was brilliant...the best was armi blushing omg hehe that must be cute naa

really man ur updates were gr8...reading 3 pts 2gether was a royal treat 4 me...thanks 4 the wonderful treat

hey NJ, part 28 was totally amazing!!

i loved the conversation between Shashank and Armaan, and the way he explained how he did not want his daughter to make a decision so hastily and then regret it afterwards - loved the way you portrayed that whole scene!

the scene between father and son - Armaan in his dilemma, and how deeply he was thinking about what Shashank said - just shows how much he cares for Ridz

aww they are on their way back - the cloud game was hilarious - and omg Armaan blushing lol that was so cute

looking forward to the next update whenever that will be

cheers for the PM, and thank you again for another mindblowing part NJ

Sania 😳

👏
wow!!
awesum part...
omg..im sooo happie ridz parents agreed.. 😳
wel..the plane journey was soooooo romantic n funni..
luved armaan...n de cloud game..lol
wel..continue soon...
cant wait 2 read wat happens wen dey r bak at uni... 😆
- sonal 😛

hey nj
ok, i have to say i LOVED tht part
the whole shashank-armaan scene was just perfect
i felt lie giving shashank a big hug (u knw, i was so scared tht he might turn out to be like his character in perfect imperfection, guess it just goes to shw i should have had more faith in u huh 😉 😆 )
in fact i lved the scene so much i wanted to give MY dad a big hug, impossible though him being on a diff. continent and all 😭
anyway, i loved how shashank expressed his feelings and wht he said was so true, the ones we love needn't always necessarily be the perfect life partners for us, sad but true

loved the cloud game, my sister and i used to play a version of it whn we were young and awww his lordship started blushing whn he had to talk about lingerie 😆

i loved the entire plane sequence actually, the way it brought out armaan's love for ridz is just amazing 👏

Sighhh.. You leave me speechless after every part... I am unable to comment.. plus I have this huge smile plastered on my face.. and I look like a goofy clown 😕 😕 at least thats what THEY think 😡

Anyhow... This FF is getting quite long 😆 😆 😆 about to reach 30 parts!!! Looks like youll be starting a third thread soon 😉

Me loved this part... adorable... 😳 😳 Gosh.. Armaan is awfully naughty, seeing lingere in the CLOUDS!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Can't wait for moreee.. and thanks for the PMs for the last few parts 😳

hey NJ!!

what a part!!! seriously too good!!! so glad shanks n padma agreed to both the relationships! and what zuzu said abt the huge smile plastered on the face.. i'm in that same boat!

incredible part!! i think it was one of ur best ones! my fav in this whole part was the flight.. especially coz i have a flight in 20 min.. and i'm sitting here at the airport grinning like mad! it was such an adorable scene!! wayyy too cute!! naughty naughty armaan..!

i hope we get to see them married in ur ff..! i might not be able to comment for sometime on the parts.. coz i'm going to boston for 2 weeks.. but i'll get on as often as i can! but plz do keep sending the pms.. coz i'm pretty sure i won't be able to keep up regularly with all the ffs..!

He saw what???? 😆
ohk I wont ask further.....lol...just luved that cloud game.......damn hillarious 🤣 I was rolling on the bed after reading it...

apart from that i really liked the Shashank-Armaan-Chris conversation.....u really knw how to portray these intense issues n feelings in a simple way.....a standing ovation for that naseem... 👏

cont soooooooooooooooooon....

luv,
shivani

Hey, just got up with the last 3-4 parts which was an absolute treat in itself. Must say I didnt see Shashank's suggestion coming at all. Now that I think about it, it makes perfect sense from the parent's point of view. Afterall its hardly been a month since the two of them have known each other. Quite a twist 😊
But I am sure their love will pass the test of time easily. Coz its meant to be.
Loves the clouds game, very innovative I must say and the woman;s lingerie part was so cute 😆
Lovely update, am gad to have caught up!