FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 80

Originally posted by: lightening

um sooooooo totally trying out this cloud game for passtime nxt um on a
flight n hai agar armaan's wid me...oye hoye!!!!!!!!
luv ya for writing this amazing update.. it broke all records!!!

haha...yeh iv done it myself its pretty fun!!!glad u like th part

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

hey NJ...firstly a big apology 4 not commenting from last 2 pts...couldnt read them as the last week was damm bad...either i was at col, office or sleeping after a long day...gosh really sorry 4 late commenting...k enough of my stupid talks coming 2 ur part...i really dont think i need 2 say the way u had written last few pts n the way the story is progressing is really a WONDERFUL job done by u

i really liked ridz breaking the car gosh hats really a gr8 thing...i loved her idea n all...coming 2 armi-shashank scene man u rock...shashank's thoughts from his pt of view...coming 2 he flight scene gosh hat was gr8888888888...from where u get these gr8 ideas u must now share with us...it was brilliant...the best was armi blushing omg hehe that must be cute naa

really man ur updates were gr8...reading 3 pts 2gether was a royal treat 4 me...thanks 4 the wonderful treat

np sonia um glad u liked the parts!!!

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey NJ, part 28 was totally amazing!!

i loved the conversation between Shashank and Armaan, and the way he explained how he did not want his daughter to make a decision so hastily and then regret it afterwards - loved the way you portrayed that whole scene!

the scene between father and son - Armaan in his dilemma, and how deeply he was thinking about what Shashank said - just shows how much he cares for Ridz

aww they are on their way back - the cloud game was hilarious - and omg Armaan blushing lol that was so cute

looking forward to the next update whenever that will be

cheers for the PM, and thank you again for another mindblowing part NJ

Sania 😳

thnx san!!!glad u like the part!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

👏
wow!!
awesum part...
omg..im sooo happie ridz parents agreed.. 😳
wel..the plane journey was soooooo romantic n funni..
luved armaan...n de cloud game..lol
wel..continue soon...
cant wait 2 read wat happens wen dey r bak at uni... 😆
- sonal 😛

thnx sonal!!!

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

hey nj
ok, i have to say i LOVED tht part
the whole shashank-armaan scene was just perfect
i felt lie giving shashank a big hug (u knw, i was so scared tht he might turn out to be like his character in perfect imperfection, guess it just goes to shw i should have had more faith in u huh 😉 😆 )
in fact i lved the scene so much i wanted to give MY dad a big hug, impossible though him being on a diff. continent and all 😭
anyway, i loved how shashank expressed his feelings and wht he said was so true, the ones we love needn't always necessarily be the perfect life partners for us, sad but true

loved the cloud game, my sister and i used to play a version of it whn we were young and awww his lordship started blushing whn he had to talk about lingerie 😆

i loved the entire plane sequence actually, the way it brought out armaan's love for ridz is just amazing 👏

aawwww me too away from home n fam 😭 but glad u liked the part!!!!!

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Sighhh.. You leave me speechless after every part... I am unable to comment.. plus I have this huge smile plastered on my face.. and I look like a goofy clown 😕 😕 at least thats what THEY think 😡

Anyhow... This FF is getting quite long 😆 😆 😆 about to reach 30 parts!!! Looks like youll be starting a third thread soon 😉

Me loved this part... adorable... 😳 😳 Gosh.. Armaan is awfully naughty, seeing lingere in the CLOUDS!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Can't wait for moreee.. and thanks for the PMs for the last few parts 😳

um up with a goofy grin reading all ur updates missy so call tit for tat!!!!!!but glad u liked the update zuzu!!!!

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

hey NJ!!

what a part!!! seriously too good!!! so glad shanks n padma agreed to both the relationships! and what zuzu said abt the huge smile plastered on the face.. i'm in that same boat!

incredible part!! i think it was one of ur best ones! my fav in this whole part was the flight.. especially coz i have a flight in 20 min.. and i'm sitting here at the airport grinning like mad! it was such an adorable scene!! wayyy too cute!! naughty naughty armaan..!

i hope we get to see them married in ur ff..! i might not be able to comment for sometime on the parts.. coz i'm going to boston for 2 weeks.. but i'll get on as often as i can! but plz do keep sending the pms.. coz i'm pretty sure i won't be able to keep up regularly with all the ffs..!

wow u thot it was one of my best parts????i kinda agree....i wrote the armaan shanx convo rom my heart involving my head no where!!!

n yhe il keep sending pm's dont worry have fun in boston good weather for that spot i must say!!!

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

He saw what???? 😆
ohk I wont ask further.....lol...just luved that cloud game.......damn hillarious 🤣 I was rolling on the bed after reading it...

apart from that i really liked the Shashank-Armaan-Chris conversation.....u really knw how to portray these intense issues n feelings in a simple way.....a standing ovation for that naseem... 👏

cont soooooooooooooooooon....

luv,
shivani

lolzzz shivani to b honest he didnt tell me either wat he saw so u just have to let that remain a mystery....besides we cant talk ruf stuff here, too many kids on the block reading the fic!!!

glad u like the part!!!

oh so shanky's ( dats wat bheegi calls shashank ) is a nice guy in dis FF ..... am glad ya was actually grtting tired of evil fathers !!! n i luved da whole armaan - shashank conversation ... but now since armana has decided 2 take sum more time ( in getting 2 knw ridz ) do i c sum trouble in paradise ... am seriously wondering wats going on in ur mind ( n wat twist r u planning for us ) .... i guess will have 2 wait for ur next update !!! n OMG da cloud game sounds seriously cute ... must try out da next time am travelling ( but only if i have my armaan sitting next 2 me ) !!! neways as always waiting for ur next update ( did i tell u patience is not one of my virtues )

Originally posted by: hearme21

Hey, just got up with the last 3-4 parts which was an absolute treat in itself. Must say I didnt see Shashank's suggestion coming at all. Now that I think about it, it makes perfect sense from the parent's point of view. Afterall its hardly been a month since the two of them have known each other. Quite a twist 😊
But I am sure their love will pass the test of time easily. Coz its meant to be.
Loves the clouds game, very innovative I must say and the woman;s lingerie part was so cute 😆
Lovely update, am gad to have caught up!

thnx dear!!!