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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ˜† i cldnt stop laughing at the last part.....i thot it had 2 b sumthin lyk dat......... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† armi blushin ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†

bt todays best part has 2 be d shashank-armi convo....it ws awesome....u portrayed d concern, d fear of a father so well... ๐Ÿ‘
nd u know i really wished dem back in stanford.....dnt kno y bt i feel dey do need 2 understand each other much more.... i'm so glad shash had put up his feelings to armi...

nd d chris-armi convo ws as usual fab....btw i had a doubt...did armi told ridzi d complete connvo of his n shash??or jus a part of it???

pls cont it soon....
Edited by pal_279 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyy!!! OMG the begining of this part really scared me..I that Shashank had opposed or something!!!Awww...our poor lovers have to wait for one more year!! Though I'm sure they'll want to marry each other no matter what ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved the flight scene....tooo cute...OMG Armaaaaan!!! Clouds the shape of lingerie!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†....Do continue soon n thanks for the pm...
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahhahhaa lingerie huh!! awesome...i wud hve never guessed tht!!tht was soooooooooooo cute!! OMG!!!!

shash-armaan scene..was i shd say..grt choice of words..nxt 2 perfect voiced emotionz..of bth..yeh armaan 2!!

glad..tey decided 2 wait n ridz didnt oppose on it..
lol..we shall be able to imagine n read more of ter luvvy duvvy fun momentz..
i lve everythin abt tem..dtz wat i love most abt young loverz...ter convoz..soooo adorable..dumb stuck sweet!ishh!!

i play d cloud gme 2 sumtimes...bt i dnt wait 2 get on a place for tht..lol!!

nehow..i luv yur work..its always a pleasure to read it!!

i read tis part bfr i got d PM lol..bt thx neway! ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey NJ..
continue soon...
cant wait 2 read more..plzzz ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago

really a nice one just call it an awwsome update please continue it soon and thanks for the pm

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Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
armi shaskank convo was superb!!!!!!! shaskank potrayed feelngs of a common father.... armi chris convo was superb!!!!!!.. d flight scene was icng on d cake.. i thought armi saw ridz der.. hhehe.. 4 a chng armi blushng
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aravi

yayyyyyyyyyyyy! ๐Ÿ˜‰ i m dab first one to comment! ๐Ÿ˜› neways such a cute one ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ actually NJ where do u get dese wonderful ideas frm??????????????????????? ๐Ÿ˜† neways da way u described da daughter-dad relationship it was sooooo TOUCHING ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ couldnt help reading dis part thrice back 2 back ๐Ÿ˜Š
armaan was so cute n understanding thrghout ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ n i cant believe he actually delayed da engagement himself!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ must ve been so tough just luv da way dese two tease each other !!!!!!!!!!!!
n da game on da flight gosh girl u had me in splits dis time!!! ๐Ÿคฃ i could actually picture da scene n armaan blushimg a unique site neways cont sooooooon




lolzzz glad u liked th epart aravi,,,,thanx for the wonderful comments!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

dat was cool!!a new turn again..but quite a pleasant one, considering the duo has more time to spend together now..loved the teasing bit..n the last bit was hilarious!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†armaan blushing???awww... the way u have sketched shashank n ridhima's relation is beautiful ,n very mature too.


hey nj, u r amazing! m sure there's plenty of good stuff in store for us ahead.. continue soon.. anu. ๐Ÿ˜Š





thnx glad u liked the part....upcoming parts...i com to know as i write!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

awwwww sweeet update

Love Kat




๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ thnx kat!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jia..


OMG Girl wat have u done??? How on earth do u even think of such stuff i dont understand. Its so very natural, spontaneous and trust me u hav the makings of a great writer really!! I mean just look at this part!! Left me completely speechless, dazed, just everything!!
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Ok was about to quote but realized that i feel like just cmmenting and praising u on every line so its better i drop the idea or else comment longer then two updates!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Nyways just loved Chris-Armaan relationship!! Its like u just seem to add so many more volumes and dimensions to it!! If u get wat i mean. ๐Ÿ˜†

Ofcourse i adored the way u made shanky accept everything. No melodrama and all. That was brilliant. and then........Armaan-shanky convo!! Seriously NJ i have no words left now!! i mean just reading the whole thing left me in ur awe!! Such a masterpicec. omg!!! anything more then outstanding??
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And then the plane scene!!! First was that lock scene and now this game?? Gosh girl how on earth do u just write such stuff so naturally and adorably???? thats wat they call true talent they say i guess!! The game, then the convo abt the diary. I can just go on!! And specially like wen he pulls her close and takes a promise never to say that he will dump her!! *sigh* feeling frustated at finding no other praise good enough or.
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So Armaan had taken time?? Loved the justification too!! Giving time to elders!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

really dunno wat more to say except that ur a genius woman.
๐Ÿ‘waiting for moree.
Jia





lolzzzz actually i wasnt planning on adding any plane scene but when i read the part it was so severely serious i was like ok i better make that lighter for the reraders it felt toooooooo severe....but glad u liked it.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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