Mohabbat:(RP ff)-imp note on pg 81. - Page 10

Originally posted by: sweta2005

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priti.

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

too good.adi is superb.plz cont soon......

with love priti.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Kiran Adi aur Nihal ki college friend hai!!!! 😛 Great!!! 😊 Nihal toh lagta hai uspar fida hai aur Adi usse tease kar raha hai aur nudge kar raha hai!!!! 😉

Adi ki dream girl bhi hai!!!! 😳

Kiran ka uska baare mein baat karte hi Nihal ke aankhon ke saamne Niharika aa gayi!!!! 😳 Lagta hai Adi ko uski dream girl mil gayi!!!!! 😊

Niharika gaana ga rahi thi!!! 😊 The song was very nice!!!! 😛 Niharika sings damn well!!!!!! 👏

Adiya ke paas aate hi Niharika ki dhadkane badh jati hai!!!! 😳 Haaaaiiiiiiiiiiii!!! 😛 Kya baat hai!!! 😳 Lagta hai usse kuch kuch hota hai!!!!! 😳

Aditya usse sahi kehta hai!!!!! 😊 I loved his dialogue jo woh uske kaano mein Kehta hai!!!! 😛 Par Niharika kisse yaad karke dunkhi ho rahi thi?? 😕

Niharika neend mein bhi ussi ke baare mein soch rahi hai!!!! 😛 Thats interesting!!!!! 😳 Aur Adi ko dekhkar sochti hai ke woh abhi bhi sapna dekh rahi hai!!!!!! 😆

Waise abhi abhi toh mile hai aur sapno mein bhi aane laga!!!!! 😛

Adi is very naughty Niharika ke sapno mein aakar usse sata raha hai!!!!! 😳

Adi yeh sochta hai ke Niharika ko samajna muskil hai!!! 😊 Haan Adi tum samajne ki koshish karte raho!!!! 😉 Ab toh Niharika ko hi samajna hai tumhe zindagi bhar!!!!!! 😳

Niharika Pooja se jaa ke poochne lagi ke woh muskurati hai yaa nahi??? 😆

Waise this reminded me of Kal Ho Na Ho!!!!Shahrukh said to Preity ke woh hasna bhul chuki hai!!!!! 😛 😛 😛 Aur phir woh Saif se jake poochti hai!!!!!! 😆

This was very much lika that!!!!! 😊 😊

Pooja hai kya cheez yaar!!!! 😒 Sexy aur Sanskari!!!!!Dono ka combo!!!!! 😆

Par lease!!!!! 😒 😒 😒 She is going over the top!!! 👎🏼 Patni pati ke baad kaati hai!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 God!!!! 😡

Usse Rihal ke saath hi khana khana chahiye!!!!Yeh sab kya hai!!!!!! 😒

with love

priti.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz

with love priti.

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

i've just read ur fic today it's fabulous
plzzz ud soon

with love priti.

Originally posted by: pritib0

Hii vartika itne pyaare-pyaare comments bhejne ke liye thanks, mere ff ki tarah tumhare comments bhi bahut cute hain, aur haan tumhe niha ka song pasand aaya i am glad, aur haan kiran ka character gauri tejwani yani ki hiten ki real life partner hi play kar rahi hai, maine kiran ka intro de diya tha pehle hi jab uski entry hui thi, lagta hai ki tumne us part mein us par dhyan nahin diya tha, it's ok,aur haan tumhare baaki ke sawaalon ka jawaab tumhe aage ke parts mein pata chal jaayega ok, aur haan jald hi sagar ke liye bhi koi aayega so do't worry and be happy😊, and keep on reading& replying ok.

with love priti.

Ye bata ki tu ud kab karegi?

PART 8

SAG-Niha tum yahan par ho, aur main tumhe kabse dhoond raha hoon.

NIHA-Kisliye?

aur tabhie bus ruk jaati hai.

SAG-isliye.

NIHA-Jo tum kehna chahte ho woh mujhe pehle se pata hai.

SAG-Woh kaise?

NIHA-Woh aise ki tumse pehle hi con. ne mujhe bata diya tha, aur main bhi tum logo se yahi baat batane ke liye aayi hoon, magar achcha hua ki tumne bata diya.

SAG-that's cool, toh phir chalo intezaar kis baat ka hai.

POO&RS-Ya common let's go.

pooja aur rs bus se utar jaate hain, aur sagar bhi utarne hi wala hota hai ki tabhie use aditya ka dhyan aata hai, aur woh niha se kehta hai, jo ki uske piche hi chal rahi hai.

SAG-Are main toh bhul hi gaya, niha kya tum mere''AB'', i mean aditya bhaiya ko bula dogi plzzz.

NIHA-Aham..............ya sure.

itna kehke sagar bhi bus se niche utar jaata hai.Ab bus poori tarah se khali ho chuki hai, aur saare passangers bhi niche utar chuke hain.niha aditya ke paas use bulane ke liye jaati hai, wahan jaakar dekhti hai ki aditya novel padh raha hai.aur niha use awaaz deti hai.

NIHA-Excuse me zara suniye.

ADI-Aap ji kahiye.

NIHA-Ji woh sagar aapko bahar bula raha hai.

ADI-Ok.

NIHA-Lagta hai ki aapko love story kaafi pasand hai.

Aditya ki nazar apni kitab par padti hai, aur woh muskuraate hue niha se kehta hai.

ADI-Oh! ya ur absolutely right it's one of my fav. novels,aur mujhe hi kya love stories toh sabhi ko pasand hai, i am sure aapko bhi pasand hogi.

NIHA-Nahin.

itna kehkar niha wahan se chali jaati hai, aditya niha ko chaunk kar dekhta hai, aur apne mann mein sochta hai.

ADI-(to himself)-nahin magar kyun?pata lagana padega.

cut to the dhaba, jahan par kiran baithi hui hai aur nihal uske liye chaya lekar aata hai.

NIHAL-Yeh rahi tumhari garama-garam chaya.

KIRAN-Thanks.

NIHAL-Ur always welcome.

chaya dekar nihal kiran ke saamne waali bench par baith jaata hai.

KIRAN-Are tum wahan par kyun baithe ho? mere bagal me aakar baitho na.

NIHAL-Agar tumhare bagal mein aakar baithunga toh tumhe dekhunga kaise?

KIRAN-Kya?

NIHAL-Aham.....mera matlab hai ki aamne-saamne baithkar zyaada achche se baat-cheet hoti hai.

itna kehkar nihal ek gehri saans chodta hai.

KIRAN-Oh!

tabhie dhabe par rakhe radio par ek gaana bajta hai.

pehli nazar mein kaisa jaado kar diya, tera ban baitha hai mera jiya.

KIRAN-Wow yeh toh mera fav. song hai.

NIHAL-(in a slow voice)-mujhe pata hai.

aur kiran apni aankhen bandh karke song ko enjoy karne lagti hai, aur nihal use bade hi pyar bhari nazron se dekh raha hai, aur gaana chal raha hai.

pehli nazar mein kaisa jaado kar diya, tera ban baitha hai mera jiya, jaane kya hoga , kya hoga kya pata, is pal ki milke aa ji le zara, main hoon yahan, tu hai yahan, meri bahon mein aa aa bhi jaa, oh jaane jaan dono jahan, meri bahon mein aa bhul jaa........baby i love u, baby i love u, baby i love u, baby i love u sooo........oh i love u, i love u sooo........

har dua mein shaamil tera pyar hai, bin tere lamha bhi dushwaar hai, dhadkano ko tujhse hi darkaar hai, tujhse hain rahate, tujhse hain chahte, tu jo mili ek din mujhe, main kahin ho gaya lapata, oh jaane jaan dono jahan meri bahon mein aa bhul jaa........

NIHAL-(to himself)-kaash ki tum mere dil ka haal samajh paati, jaan paati ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon.

nihal yeh sochkar ek thandi ah bharta hai.

kar diya deewana darde khaas ne, chain cheena ishq ke ehsaas ne, bekhayali di hai teri pyas ne,chaaya suroor hai, kuch toh zaroor hai, yeh dooriya, jeenena de, haal mera tujhe na pataaaaa............oh jaane jaan dono jahan meri bahon mein aa bhul jaa............baby i love u, baby i love u, baby i love u, baby i love u sooo, oh i love u, i love u.

NIHAL-(to himself)-jab bhi tum mere saamne hoti ho, pata nahin mujhe kya ho jaata hai, main chahkar bhi tumse apne dil ki baat nahin keh pata hoon.

nihal yeh sab soch hi raha hota hai ki tabhie adi wahan par aa jaata hai, aur woh dekhta hai ki nihal ek tak kiran ko dekhe hi jaa raha hai, adi dheere se aakar uske bagal mein baith jaata hai, song finish hota hai, kiran apni aankhen kholti hai aur saamne adi ko dekhti hai.

KIRAN-Adi chalo achcha hua ki tum yahan par aa gaye, ab tum nihal ko company do, main thodi der mein aati hoon.

ADI-Ok.

aur itna kehkar kiran wahan se chali jaati hai, nihal jo ki kiran ko hi dekhe jaa raha hota hai, jab woh chali jaati hai toh nihal apni nazrein jhuka leta hai, aur halke se musku raakar adi ki taraf dekhta hai.

NIHAL-Aise kya dekh raha hai?

ADI-Kuch khaas nahin, bas yahi dekh raha tha ki pyar mein insaan kya se kya ho jaata hai.

NIHAL-ppppppp.........pyar.........main kiran se pyar nahin karta.

ADI-maine toh kiran ka naam bhi nahin liya.

NIHAL-Woh.......main........

ADI-na na tumhe toh ab kuch kehne ki zaroorat hi na hai, ab main kahunga aur tum sunoge ok.

NIHAL-Magar........

ADI-agar-magar kuch nahin main sirf tumhe dus minute ka samaya deta hoon, itne waqt mein tumhe apne dil ki baat kiran se kehni hi hogi, warna.......

NIHAL-Warna.......

ADI-Warna main jaakar keh doonga.

NIHAL-Kyaaa?........tum aisa nahin kar sakte.

ADI-main aisa hi karunga.

NIHAL-Kaisa dost hai yaar tu, meri love story ka the end karne par tula hua hai.

ADI-Aisa hi hoon main, aur rahi baat teri love story ki, toh, joh ab tak shuru hi nahin hui hai, uska the end main kya khaak karunga.

NIHAL-Yeh tu dost se dushman mein kyun transform ho raha hai.

ADI-Agar teri prem kahani ko manzil tak pahunchane ke liye, mujhe tera dushman bhi banna padega, toh woh bhi mujhe manzoor hai.

NIHAL-Lekin tu samajh nahin raha hai.

ADI-Is mein na samajhne waali kaunsi baat hai, tu kiran se pyar karta hai simple, tujhe use jaakar propose karna hai, yeh usse bhi simple.

NIH-Jitna simple tujhe lagta hai, utna hai nahin, jab tujhe kisi se pyar hoga tab tujhe pata chalega.

ADI-Woh sab mujhe nahin pata, kyunki filhaal mujhe nahin tujhe pyar hua hai, aur main kuch nahin janta, aaj tujhe kiran ko propose karna hi padega.

NIH-Aise kaise jaakar propose kar dun, pyar ka izhaar karne ke liye ek sahi waqt aur mauka chahiye.

ADI-(irritate hokar)-dekh ab mera para bahut upar chad raha hai.

NIH-Pyar mein pare ko upar nahin niche laana padta hai, garam nahin, thande dimag se kaam lena padta hai.

ADI-(gusse se)-BAS...............ab tu ya phir main, kyunki kiran idhar hi aa rahi hai.

NIH-Kyaaaaaaa?..............achcha-achcha thik hai main bol dunga tu ja.

ADI-Pakka.

NIH-Haan-haan pakka ab tu jaa na plzzzzz.

ADI-Ok main jaa raha hoon magar meri nazar tujh par hi rahegi.

jaise hi adi wahan se jaata hai, ki kiran nihal ke piche se aati hai, aur usse poochti hai.

KIRAN-Yeh adi kahan chala gaya?

NIH-Woh actually uska koi imp. call aa gaya tha.

KIR-Oh any ways chalo hum log bus mein jaakar baithte hain.

NIH-Aham.......kiran ek minute.

KIR-hmmm.......kya hua?

NIH-Aham! woh actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

KIR-Kaho.

NIH-Woh main yeh kehna chahta tah ki.........

KIR-Ki......

NIH-Aham.........ki main.......

KIR-Main se aage bhi bolo.

NIH-Actually main kisi se pyar karta hoon lekin izhaar karne se darta hoon.

KIR-(Thoda sa muh bana ke bolti hai)-achcha kya main us khush naseeb ladki ka naam jaan sakti hoon?

NIH-Uska naam main aise-kaise le sakta hoon.

KIR-Kyun kahin ki rajkumari hai kya?

NIH-Aisa kuch samajh lo, balki mere liye toh, woh rajkumari se badh ke hai.

KIR-Toh prob. kya hai? jaa kar apni rajkumari se, apne dil ki baat keh do.

NIH-Wahi toh kar raha hoon, lekin woh hai ki samajh kar bhi nahin samajh rahi hai.

Yeh sunkar kiran gehri soch mein doob jaati hai, aur nihal wahan se jaane lagta hai, tabhie kiran use awaaz deti hai.

KIR-Apni rajkumari ka jawaab toh sun lo.

kiran ki awaaz sunkar nihal turant turn karta hai, kiran dheere-dheere nihal ke paas aati hai, aur usse poochti hai.

KIR-Waise tumhe kya lagta hai ki tumhari rajkumari ka jawaab kya hoga?

NIH-'Haan', uska jawaab han hi hoga.

KIR-Kyun na bhi toh ho sakta hai.

NIH-Nahin ho sakta kyunki mujhe uspar aur apne pyar par poora bharosa hai.

KIR-hona bhi chahyiye kyunki tumhari raj kumari ka jawaab haan hai.

NIH-(Pyar se kiran ko dekhte hue)-sach.

KIR-(halke se muskuraakar sharmaate hue)-much.

aur phir dono ek doosre ko hug karte hain.

NIH-I love u kiran.

KIR-I love u too, itni si baat kehne mein itna waqt lagaya.

ADI-Magar keh toh diya na.

adi ki awaaz sunkar nihal aur kiran alag hote hain.

KIR-Adi tum kab aaye?

ADI-Bas tabhie jab tum dono ki love story poori ho rahi thi.Toh date kab fix karni hai?

NIH-Date kis cheez ki?

ADI-Tum dono ko shaadi ki.

KIR-(adi ko halke se hit karke kehti hai)-tum bhi na adi.

aur wahan se sharmakar chali jaati hai.

NIH-Are kiran suno toh.

Adi kiran ke sir par hit karke kehta hai.

ADI-Kya suno toh?

NIH-Are yaar usne jawaab toh diya hi nahin?

ADI-Are mere romeo ladki ke sharmaane ka matlab haan hota hai.

NIH-Achcha.......magar tujhe kaise pata?

ADI-Bas pata hai, aur waise bhi tujhe uski haan se matlab hona chahyiye.

NIH-Haan.

ADI-Toh thik hai jab miyan- biwi raazi, toh......

NIH-(Excitement mein)-toh jaldi se bulao kaazi.

ADI-Jab itna intezaar kiya hai toh, thoda sa intezaar aur karlo dulhe miyan, bas kashmir se aate hi tumhara yeh khubsoorat khwaab haqeeqat mein tabdil ho jaayega.

yeh sunkar nihal adi ko hug karke kehta hai.

NIH-Agar aaj tum mujhe force nahin karte, toh shaayad main aaj bhi kiran ko apne dil ki baat nahin keh pata.

ADI-Yeh sab meri wajah se nahin, balki tere sachche pyar ki wajah se hua hai, aur main bhagwaan se yahi dua karunga ki tum dono hamesha khush raho.

NIH-Thanks.

phir dono alag hote hain aur adi nihal se kehta hai.

ADI-Dekh dosti mein no sorry and no thanky ok.Ab jaa kiran tera wait kar rahi hai.

aur nihal wahan se chala jaata hai.Adi dheere se muskuraakar doosri taraf dekhne lagta hai, ki tabhie uski nazar niharika par padti hai, jo ki ek paas khadi hai.

cut to pooja&rs, RS khane ka order dene jaata hai, ki tabhie pooja use tok kar kehti hai.

POO-Suno.

RS-kya hai?

POO-Mere liye order mat karna main tumhare baad mein khaaongi.

RS-Mere baad kyun hum saath-saath hi khaenge aur waise bhi, bus mein toh tum keh rahi thi ki, tumhe bahut bhookh lagi hai, toh ab kya hua?

POO-Aham.......kuch nahin bas main baad mein khaongi.

RS-Ok as u wish, lekin bus chootne se pehle kha zaroor lena.

aur rs apne liye khana order karna chala jaata hai.

POO-(to herself)-rs ko meri kitni fikar hai.

cut to sagar jo ki bus ke andar hai, aur kisi ki tasveer dekh raha hai, uski aankhon mein aansoon bhare hue hain.

END OF PART 8. PLZZZ DO COMMENT.