'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 7

Oh Oh...I m loving it ....Vyom ke liye ab kuch kuch hona shuru hogaya mere dil mein..pata nahi Parikrama ko kuch mehsus hua ke nahi... Bhoomi, ur poetic lines r fab ...waiting for the next parts....

hey bhoomi,

Tusi te phatte chak dite:)...pata nahi jalandhar tak pahunchte pahunchte kya kya twists n turns aayenge story mein:-)

bhoomi an amazing concept loved the story

Bhoomi mindblowing dear 👏 all last 3 parts awesome 👏 👏 etansh apne dad ke sath masi wowowo sooo sweet 👏

As usual awesome,Vyom & Etansh enjoying themselves ..n vyom faking it as a police officer...this ff is just too gud yaar...i was away for the weekend ..came home tonight...n the first thing i got down to doing was reading the parts that i missed...

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Oh Oh...I m loving it ....Vyom ke liye ab kuch kuch hona shuru hogaya mere dil mein..pata nahi Parikrama ko kuch mehsus hua ke nahi... Bhoomi, ur poetic lines r fab ...waiting for the next parts....

Hi Sara,...u started to like Vyom .. itnersting... kuch kuch huaa... ab pata nahi Parikrama ko kuch hota hai bhi kya nahi... u loved the poetic line.. aww thank u so much.. and am pretty nervous abt my next parts... hope u dotn get disppointed....

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

hey bhoomi,

Tusi te phatte chak dite:)...pata nahi jalandhar tak pahunchte pahunchte kya kya twists n turns aayenge story mein:-)

HI Himani.....tussi tochakkedey phatte ho.. aur sone pe suhaga hoga jab tussi menu ek glass full lassi meethi haan doggi ... jalandhar se nikal key aagey kya kya hoga.. pata kya....

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

bhoomi an amazing concept loved the story

Hi jyothi gald u liked the concept.. ab to tehre r few more thigns..whcih i am pretty nervosu how u will like it to be part of thsi story..hope i dont disppoitn u...

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Bhoomi mindblowing dear 👏 all last 3 parts awesome 👏 👏 etansh apne dad ke sath masi wowowo sooo sweet 👏

Hi Monika,

am so very happy that u liek the parts... Etansh n Vyom i want to see such a scene yaar.. pata kya kab dkhun ontelly..

Originally posted by: binidoshi

As usual awesome,Vyom & Etansh enjoying themselves ..n vyom faking it as a police officer...this ff is just too gud yaar...i was away for the weekend ..came home tonight...n the first thing i got down to doing was reading the parts that i missed...

Hi Bini... jaanu so glad to get ur coment.. u know how much nervosu i have been posting this fanfic..and sara knows ho wmcuh mood swings played with me... so when i get so many comments.. and so happy tht u all loved readin git.. i really get happy.... u r so busy yet to catch up time fo rreadin this. i luv u yaar.. so sweet.. and hope i dont disppotin u ..with the next parts... luv u lots...

Episode: 12

It was evening and the train would reach Jalandhar. Parikrama was enjoying her time with Etansh and all were conversing. Jalandhar station arrived Vyom helped not only Etansh and Vani but also Parikrama in taking out the luggage and helping to get through the cab. As they were standing near the cab, and chatting, saying final bye to each other, Parikrama's mobile rang and as she was talking, a shock expression was seen on her face and she was speechless… as she uttered few words… 'Didi… lekin… main … kaise… plzz rooo matt… par…hun… aap..…" the person on the other end must have kept the phone and she stood there with a shocked face and tensed eyes, soon she couldn't control her self, she cried…

Vani immediately rushed towards her and tried to ask her… make her to relax… Parikrama was weeping and soon she realized she was at a public place and everyone was looking at her… She tried to wipe her tears… Vyom didn't understand what to speak, what to ask… Etansh went near Parikrama…

Etansh: Pariaunty aap ko kya hua… kyun itna roo rahi hain.

Parikrama: Kuch nahi Etansh .. ab main theek hun, bas woh(she looked at Vani and Vyom who were looking at her with concern eyes) my Didi, my sister isn't feeling well so… (She again got a little emotional) Plzz U can get into the cab.. It was really nice to get to know u all in this journey.. (she said this with mosit eyes)

Vani: Parikrama, Koi bhi baat ho bejeejak keh sakti ho, any help.. sachmey hum itney bhi ajnabee nahi … Parikrama: (she nodded her head though a bit confused and immensely tensed)

Vyom: Parikrama.. aa

I don't know what has happened that u broke down, something really hard to handle …. I can just tell u , we live in Jalandhar and whenever u need our help without hesitation u can call .. koi madat ki jaroorat ho to humey batana … (He gave her his card) Parikrama nodded her head and just went in the cab holding the card in hand, while Vyom, Vani and Etansh went and sat in their cab.

Kya yeh Safar Yehin khatm hua,

Kya yeh dard yehin dafna hua, Kya yeh milna sirf pal bhar ka tha, Kyun aisa lagaa inhe miloo ka safar karna tha…

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Kya horaha hai Boomi? what shock u r going to give us? Is she married? uff,i m so tensed now ....

dear, one think need to tell u i got so emotional reading the those 4 lines,
kya yeh Safar Yehin khatm hua, &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; Kya yeh dard yehin dafna hua, &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; Kya yeh milna sirf pal bhar ka tha,
Kyun aisa lagaa inhe miloo ka safar karna tha…

ek ajeeb sa ehsas hua... the fear as if i m going to loose something which i didnt even realised that actually i dont wnat to losse.... kuch aur hona tha, aur bhi bohot kuch pana tha... gosh, why i m explaining to u whn u r the writer ? story mey shayad yeh log mil bhi jaye but for real life these lines r so apt..

love u a lot my dearest ... u knw ive noticed so many times ..it's only u who can make me so emotional with ur writing..kab kaunsi cheex dil ko chu jaati hai pata hi nahin chalta ....pata nahi why it happns...

ok, no more senti baatein... waiting for the next part...post it jaldi ...

oh wow...a shocking chapter! I wonder what news Pari's sister just told her. Hope she'll allow Vyom and Vani to help her. Continue soon.